Batman: Redeemption

[The Demon's Head]

It's the name of the graphic novel I'm working on. I'll post the first few pages Soon. Here is a tease: "He was once called Gotham's Apollo. But he eventually Became one of its worst nightmares".

[JLBats]

What's it about? Dent?

[The Demon's Head]

What's it about? Dent? It does focuse on Dent, But he's not the main character.

[The Demon's Head]

Bump.

[The Spider-Bat]

Sounds intresting.

[The Demon's Head]

Artists are needed. If anyone is interested, post your designs of the following Characters:
Harvey Dent
Jim Gordon
Mr. Zsasz
The Joker
Catwoman/Selina Kyle
Scarecrow
Bruce Wayne/Batman
The Mad Hatter
The Riddler

[The Spider-Bat]

Artist are needed. If anyone is interested, post your designs of the following Characters:
Harvey Dent
Jim Gordon
Mr. Zsasz
The Joker
Catwoman/Selina Kyle
Scarecrow
Bruce Wayne/Batman
The Mad Hatter
The Riddler

I'll get right on it!

[The Demon's Head]

I'll get right on it! :up:

[The Demon's Head]

http://members.tripod.com/~ajeewa/rogues/zsasz.jpg

http://members.tripod.com/~ajeewa/rogues/joker.jpg
http://members.tripod.com/~ajeewa/rogues/hatter.jpg

http://members.tripod.com/~ajeewa/rogues/scarecrow.jpg
http://members.tripod.com/~ajeewa/rogues/riddler.jpg
"None of them Are safe...."

[The Spider-Bat]

Ok. I have done
Harvey Dent
Jim Gordon
Mr. Zsasz
The Joker

[The Demon's Head]

Ok. I have done
Harvey Dent
Jim Gordon
Mr. Zsasz
The Joker
Can you post it?

[The Spider-Bat]

Can you post it?

I want to finish the rest.

[The Demon's Head]

I want to finish the rest. Oh. What do you think about the tagline?

[The Spider-Bat]

Oh. What do you think about the tagline?

Cool. But shouldn't it be "None of them are safe".

PS
I should be done in about 30 min.

[The Demon's Head]

Cool. But shouldn't it be "None of them are safe".
Typo. :o

PS I should be done in about 30 min Sweet. :up:

[The Spider-Bat]

You'll be suprised how helpful the Begins soundtrack is!

[The Demon's Head]

You'll be suprised how helpful the Begins soundtrack is! Not really surprised. the soundtrack inspired me to start this project. :o

[The Spider-Bat]

Not really surprised. the soundtrack inspired me to start this project. :o

Cool!

Also I'm drawing Selina with musles (she has to be strong) so don't be suprised by them. And I'm drawing her as a street tough lady!

[The Demon's Head]

Cool!

Also I'm drawing Selina with musles (she has to be strong) so don't be suprised by them. And I'm drawing her as a street tough lady!
Can't wait to see the design. :up:

[The Spider-Bat]

Just starting to draw Batman!

[The Demon's Head]

Just starting to draw Batman! :batman:

[The Spider-Bat]

Mad Hatter's turn

[The Spider-Bat]

Last Drawing!!!

[The Demon's Head]

Last Drawing!!! Riddler.

[The Spider-Bat]

DONE! Now I have to photograph them and then send them to imageshack. 5-10 more minutes and they will be up!

[The Demon's Head]

DONE! Now I have to photograph them and then send them to imageshack. 5-10 more minutes and they will be up!
I REALLY can't wait to see them.

[The Spider-Bat]

They might be a little hard to see because I don't have a scaner.
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/6342/batman3dx.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/5926/joker7fq.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/5999/catwoman2sp.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/7473/dent6hr.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/4651/gordon1ua.jpg

More to come.

[The Demon's Head]

I like the Jim Gordon one best so far.

[The Spider-Bat]

http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/4664/madhatter5qw.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/4286/riddler3um.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/8738/scarecrow2gf.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/4867/zsaz7tp.jpg

[The Demon's Head]

http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/4664/madhatter5qw.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/4286/riddler3um.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/8738/scarecrow2gf.jpg
http://img1.imageshack.us/img1/4867/zsaz7tp.jpg :up:

[The Spider-Bat]

So you like them?

[The Demon's Head]

So you like them? I like most of them, but
The Joker design needs some work.

[The Spider-Bat]

I like most of them, but
The Joker design needs some work.

Yeah I didn't really like that one. Joker's always hard for me to draw because of the many ways the character has been portrayed. I always try to improve my drawings of him...

[The Demon's Head]

The first few pages of the story will be posted on Sunday.

[The Spider-Bat]

Can't wait!

[spiderfan08]

stryker check your pms. nice drawings spider-bat. could use a little work but they are pretty cool.

[The Demon's Head]

BATMAN REDEMPTION

PAGE 1

PANEL ONE

ARKHAM ASYLUM FOR THE CRIMINALLY INSANE.

A figure, wearing all black swiftly sneaks into the Asylum.

PANEL TWO
We follow him as he walks through the halls, And notice Familiar faces through the cells. He finally stops in front of Jarvis Tetch's cell.

PANEL THREE

CAPTION BOX #1
Jarvis Tetch. Delusional. Schizophrenic. Homicidal. The Mad Hatter.
Wearing a Straightjacket, Tetch stares at the wall completely unaware of his being watched.
TETCH
Dialogue Balloon #1
aND thICK aNd Fast TheY came aT last, aNd MorE anD MoRe. aLL HOPPing thrOUGH tHe FRothy wAVES AnD scraMBLING tO tHE sHORe!
PANEL FOUR
The figure enters the cell and looks at Tetch in disgust. Tetch glares at him, aware of his presence for the first time.
TETCH
Dialogue Balloon #1
wOUld yOu likE Some moRe teA?
The figure looks at him and pulls out a Gun.
He aims it at Tetch's face.
PANEL FIVE
TETCH
Dialogue Balloon #1
yOu coUlD aLwaYs Have More!
He fires. Blood splatters over the wall.
PANEL SIX
The figure is gone. Tetch's body lays on the floor, his eyes peering out as if he was looking directly at us.
A message is written on the wall with blood:
"None of them are safe..."

[The Spider-Bat]

I'll get right on it.

[The Demon's Head]

Does anyone have any feedback?

[Hitan]

Does anyone have any feedback?

It sounds very interesting. I'd like to see the finished product very much.

[batmaluco]

It sounds very interesting. I'd like to see the finished product very much.
I second that. :up:

[The Spider-Bat]

I have drawn page one and inked it! I am now coloring! Then I'll add text and post it here!

[The Demon's Head]

I have drawn page one and inked it! I am now coloring! Then I'll add text and post it here! Sweet. :up:

[The Spider-Bat]

The coloring is done, I'm sad to say it didn't come out so great :( because of my scaner sucking and my bones hurting. But, I'll see what you think of it once I finish lettering.

[The Spider-Bat]

This isn't working out, sorry Stryker. I don't think I can finish drawing the whole book. My scaner isn't working well, I have many, many projects planed ahead and well, I can admit that I'm just not that good.

I have included the first page, colored and about to be lettered.

Sorry again

[The Demon's Head]

This isn't working out, sorry Stryker. I don't think I can finish drawing the whole book. My scaner isn't working well, I have many, many projects planed ahead and well, I can admit that I'm just not that good.

I have included the first page, colored and about to be lettered.

Sorry again There's no need to apologize. I can understand the pressure of working on too many projects and the fact your scanner didn't work. it don't agree with you about your art, though.

I guess that means I have to look for another artist.

[The Spider-Bat]

If I find one, I'll lead him here

[The Demon's Head]

If I find one, I'll lead him here Thanks. :up:

[spiderfan08]

like i said stryker, if you find an artist, i will color it. i am getting better as i type. (ive even got my own website!)

[The Demon's Head]

PAGE 2
PANEL ONE
Running water.Pull back to reveal Harvey Dent washing his hands.
PANEL TWO
Dent looks at the mirror. At his reflection. His face is normal.
Caption Box #1
It's been three years.
Since I was given my life back.
PANEL THREE
Dent dries his hands with a towel.
We see that we are in the same house he and Gilda once lived in.
He walks towards his office.
Caption Box #1
I feel whole--- For the first time in fifteen years.
PANEL FOUR
We are inside Dent's office. His desk is filled with evidence from old cases, testimonies, Articles about the organized crime.
A framed picture of Gilda Dent lies on one of the shelves.
Dent looks at it. lovingly.
PANEL FIVE
We see a black leather jacket on the chair in front of Dent's desk.
And a gun, that looks strangely familiar laying next to the articles on Dent's desk.
Caption Box#1
And I have finally found a purpose.

[The Spider-Bat]

Cool!

[The Demon's Head]

Cool! Thanks. :marv:

[Ultimate Movie-Man]

Have you considered trying to sell it to DC? it's a really cool story! Or working for DC even?

[The Demon's Head]

Have you considered trying to sell it to DC? it's a really cool story! Or working for DC even? First of all, thanks for the Compliments. Working for DC is my dream, but I'm not sure they'd take me seriously since I'm a minor.

[Ultimate Movie-Man]

First of all, thanks for the Compliments. Working for DC is my dream, but I'm not sure they'd take me seriously since I'm a minor.

Oh, you never know! You never know if you don't try, that's for sure. Build up a confidence shield as if you were the Invisible Woman, go to the big guys at DC and just talk with 'em about your idea...they may or may not like it...it's really up to you...but I think you definelty (sp?!) think you've go a chance.

[The Demon's Head]

Bump. :batman:
The next page will be posted on friday.

[The Demon's Head]

EDIT.

[The Demon's Head]

I apologise for the delay. the next part will be posted soon.

[bdsproductions]

this is all awesome.can't wait.