Nicole City

[Karem-Knight]

Hey guys these are my stories about a place called Nicole City, Here's the first chapter of the first story which will (hopefully) become a film someday.


Also see:
http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showthread.php?t=227603 "The Body collector" By WeaponZ2

http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showthread.php?t=226817

"Vintage" Another fan fic by Karem-Knight/Tom Ebbs/ ME!




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CORRUPTION

By

Tom Ebbs/ Karem-Knight











































Prologue

Welcome to Niecole the city
where’s it’s hard to be a bad person.


Private Detective Claude Downing was possibly the best detective in Nicole city. He had defeated a few of Nicole city’s worst criminals, Now he was on his biggest case yet Don Franco Zano of the Zano family.

Claude had been troubled investigating Zano’s drug trafficking with who he had a partner more powerful then him (Zano), Until a snitch from Zano’s family told Claude which Harbour and where.

Nicole City 11.00pm December 2005.
Claude arrived at Portland Harbour, “Pier 23” the scrawny man said in a weasel like voice,
He walked in the sewer like smell of the area. Homeless people and corpses of their friends were at the place. Claude held tightly to his revolver, until he reached the pier, slowly making the door do a screech heard around the area, This place is the centre or Predator’s blood. Claude thought to himself, He had his flashlight looking for anything new, taking a few pictures with his camera.

Claude then accidentally knocked over a crate on the label with the word “Charon”, Claude took a photo then put his camera down thrusting to open the crate.
“There’s nothing there.” said a through Italian accent Claude put his flash light to wear he heard it from, he saw none other then Don Zano

“You…..” Claude said gritting his teeth, “You wouldn’t expect that I would find out of your preaching to my job, my good will, MY LIVILY HOOOD!” Zano said with a angered face turning into a grin, Two built men stand next to Zano “Boys I think our friend would like to see a closer look of our nice package, show him a fresh one.” The one man grabs Claude the other Opens the crate. “THEY’LL FIND ME ZANO” Claude shouted in desperation “SOMEONE WILL GET YOU FOR THIS ONE DAY!” The man stuffs Claude’s head into the charon. The bodyguard screamed as he saw his hand burnt, the other takes out Claude’s head to reveal a burnt skull with red eyes and dissolved tounge and hair which once was gelled back scruffier, The Bodyguard let go and let Claude’s body lay down with a huge thump.

“Let’s go,” Zano said

“But Boss” said the bodyguard holding on to his burnt arm, Zano took out a revolver and shot the bodyguards chest twice. "Let’s go".

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter One

A man named Mark
Wade


Nicole City, Bracken road (The Dragon‘s nest), November 2005

A man is seen wearing black shirt and black leather jacket in a dark alley , Cold as hell in this place, Still I’ve seen worse epically here I’ve been living here for 2 years now and it feels double like that, This ghetto makes me want to throw up just by looking at it. It’s not as bad, could be one of the safest places in this town, The man spots a thug taking a purse from an old lady, The Thug runs for another few seconds then collapses in the dark alley.

“Give the purse back” said the man

“F*(&% off Mother%&)&” The thug takes out his gun

“Or I’ll blow your brains out.” The Man punch’s the thug in the stomach then in the nose breaking it. “AAWWW SH*@!” People hear his screams, he deserves it, but the cops won’t fight him, won’t even try.

The man hands the purse back to the old lady

“Hear you go mham.”

“Oh Thank, you” she said Smiling with no teeth "Whats your name?"

“Mark” the man said, and then walked off.

I enter my building and walk up the stairs till I reach flat 6H,Enter it, the breeze leaves my skin.
“Sandy?” Mark said, until he sits on the couch taking off his jacket and puts it on a coat hanger. He turns on the TV “POLICE FUTHER INVESTIGATIONS ON THE DISAPRANCE OF PRIVATE DECTECTIVE CLAUDE DOWNING…..

Bulls@*^(, the cops never care if a good person died they know who killed them, They only care about beating and money. I used to be a cop once, Not much but a rookie I was 25 when I joined and two days before my year anniversary got kicked off the force because I didn’t kill a under welling of Sony Corleo’s, What happened? They blamed me for the killing but the chief wanted me to suffer instead of death row, so I can’t get a job in the city. Being a cop was hard epically being a good one, Nothing good out of it except two people my best friend Johnny who was a nark for the nitro’s, and the love of my life Sandy, and they both lost their jobs because of me. Sandy, the only good thing to come out of my life, words cannot describe her beauty, or her kindness. I’ll never know why she moved in with me. I live because of her,
The phone rings, Mark picks it up,

“Hello?” “Yo Mark want to get a few beers at Rafael’s? said Johnny

“Yeah sure, I’ll be there 10 minutes.”

Nicole City Rafael’s November

Rafael’s is the bar people always go to because their friends are there. I’m just a regular because people never believe me that I didn’t kill anyone. Faces stair at me I’m not surprised.

Mark sits next to Johnny

“Hey man how are ya doing?” “Good you?” “Meh can’t complain, Want anything?” “Water please.” Johnny “Hear ya go man” “Thanks” a silence between the two occurs till Johnny breaks it “So How’s Sandy? “She’s fine, what about Mycelia? “Ummmm rather not say” Johnny gives a sad look to the bar desk, “What happened?” “She…..she left me.” Johnny sinks his head even more to the bar desk, “Oh right sorry ” “Awwww it’s ok man she’s just another girl.”

An hour passes things go by as usual the ex-nark and the ex-cop talk, Not unusual as people would think, another hour passes I tell Johnny I’ll see him later and walk to my place.

“Sandy?” I yell it and this time she answers my heart pounds and a smile come to my face. “Hi sweetie” Mark sits in the couch and caresses her, “After all I’ve done you lost your job in journalism, your apartment because of me and you still stay with me, why…..” “Because” she interrupts, “No matter what happens you’ll be there for me forever, You’re my guarding angel, my lover, my soul mate.” “Did you make that up yourself?” “Of course”

Her body fills my arms with excitement, I feel it coming I’m gonna giver her night she’ll never forget…………never…………

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Two

Bad things happen to good
And bad people



Nicole city, Delfino Mansion, November 2005


Tony Delfino was a small time drug holder for many crime rings, The Dark hawks, The Zano family, but the major one was from the new owner of Nicole, who is good friends with Don Zano, and ships drugs to the Nitro’s and Renegades, Tony Delfino was just one in a hundred for him.

But him and Tony weren’t on good terms, Tony used some of the money the man needed his ingrates for his drug called Charon. But the man knew about this and he wanted to talk to Tony at his mansion,

Tony was sitting down near his fire place in the couch with a small revolver in his pocket waiting for them,

Delfino’s maid went to him

“Senhore Delfino treze hommens e aqua uma ou nome du o “The Maker”

“Elese poss vai entra, Gracias.” The maker came into the room, he was a man in his 30’s with lots of scars in his faces and long curtain hear wearing a roll neck, trench coat and jeans

“Tony my dear friend” The Maker’s Body guards entered the room, their names “Zacko and Longo” one was a tall Russian with blond spiked hair, a checker shirt and jeans, the other a short Japanese samurai wearing a casual samurai out fit.

The Maker let out his hand to Tony, Tony shook but was acting like a volcano about to erupt.


“Siiit down” Tony said with a fake smile hiding his fears. The Maker sit’s down but his bodyguards don’t

“They can sit down to” Tony said

“No they stand” The Maker said in a demanding voice

“Ok..” Tony said
“Anything to drink?”

“What wines do you have?”

“I’ll get you my best, Rose vai ou melohore vito nossa tem.”

“Anyway, Ray…I me-me-mean Ssiirr” “You can call me Ray.”
“Ok then Ray, I just want you to know, I-I-I I’m sorry for what I did but I thought…..”

“You thought that some how you would oh I don’t know get some of my Charon and make deals with other gangs so you could rise above me, Didn‘t cha?”

“Yeah well….”

“Well, what you’re sorry sorry that I gave you some money to do something for me and you blow it all trying to destroy me, ha ha, Believe me Tony people have tried to kill me, destroy me you name it, and I have owned Nicole city for only 2 years and all ready everyone fears me. Some have failed me and you what happened to them?”

“Wh-wh-whattt!”

“Let’s just say they went through hell to get to hell.”

“B-B-But come on, I-I-I…….
Tony turns on the TV, The news is on “POLICE HAVE JUST FOUND THE BODY OF MICKEY DELFINO…..

“Well?” Tony said , “You did do me a favour Tony but that was small…..

“But The Cops will know it was me THEY KNOW IT THEY HATE ME, EVERYTHING I EARNED WILL BE GONE THIS, MY MONEY MY WIFE AND…..”

“And?…..” Ray said with smirk, Tony in a fit of rage aimed his revolver at Ray.

“OH YEAH RAY, OH YEAH YOU WANT THIS NOW YOU WANT THAT BULLET IN YOUR SKULL HUH YOU PIECE OF S*(@!” Ray sighed, and clicked his fingers “Zacko” The short samurai got out his swoard and cuts deep into Tony’s back, “ARRRRGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!” “Longo” The Russian hit Tony in the face. Tony laid on his desk in pain with blood around his face and back and staining his suit and carpet

“Next time you will be will hurt more, and by that I mean it’ will be loud and nasty especially for you last experience with life” Ray left the room and entered his limo.his limo.

[WeaponZ2]

Not bad keep it up.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Three

Home-coming,







Nicole City, Mark Wades apartment November 30th 2005, 9:00pm


Late night, want to get a early night tonight so I can figure out what to do when I wake up and have time to do it. I just get my self a glass of water White t-shirt and I’m off.

Mark gets the water, Ahh Nice and cold sooths my thought, even on a cold winter night, Mark takes off his cloths just keeping his vest and underwear and falls to the bed, The pillow feels so soft after all what I’ve done today just go to the gym eat something watch a bit of TV, And persuade my landlord to give me the month’s rent off,

2 Hours later………

I hear banging on the door, my eyes are blurry my mouth is dry. I can hear voices but can’t make out what their saying. Seem important. I put on a pair of Jeans and socks and I reach for my short knife. Just in case it’s a bunch pf stupid gang bangers, I put on my leather jacket if the weathers worse.

“Right that’s it boys blow off the door” says a man with a dark toned but jive voice,

WAIT, I know that voice…

The door is blown open and kicked down, four cops three with Shot guns the other with a suit and tie and a revolver, The middle one says

“MARCUS WADE YOU ARE UNDER ARREST FOR THE MURDER OF MICKEY DELFINO! Anything you say blah blah you used to be a cop so you know, And you know how real cops deal with things SO MOVE YOU AND YOUR SMALL DICK OVER HEAR!”

Detective Blunt the son of the bicth, He’s one of the worst Cops, the one who set up all that sh*** to put me in hell. He sure as hell wants me dead, This flat is small but I’m to far away from the fire escape, One guys coming over with a shot gun. He could be Sgt. “Jello” or Sgt. Jameson, I just have to wait, I get one last thing named “Julia” and with that I get behind the door, waiting in the shadows, my knife in my hand ready for the kill.






Sgt. “Jell-O”, walks into the room, I was ready to slit someone’s thought, but he’s so fat and short all I got to do is just drop the knife on his egg shaped head. “Hey Marcy guess who’s here”

“Hi Jell-O!” Mark says stabbing Jello in the head, taking his gun.

That was a close one, Blunt and Jameson are looking in the kitchen and bath room, the other guy’s in the hall, The fire escape, right next to Blunt,

Mark shoots out all the main lights,

“WHAT THE F***!” Blunt yells out, I run towards him, hit him with the handle, and spit on him, a slight smirk reaches my face. I jump out the fire escape, and check for more cops, none in the area, Just their car. Walk slowly on the fire escape, I look up to see Jameson starring me right in the eye and aims for me, I run, the wind burns my face in an iceey way, the Shot gun bullets get even worse, I dive into a street and hit my own brick wall and the grovel creates needles in my back.


I hear a scream of pain from Jameson. I get up and run with the shotgun. I can’t check what kind it is, I just run. And hear footsteps, no one that can judge me on the street with a shotgun while there are hookers and perverts around the place. I run for another minute or two until I collapse, I look at a local bar, I must be two blocks away from my flat I get in there, It just opened at 5:00, I go in, check the time to it’s 5:30 no one hear just the bartender and me, I put my gun on the table and collapse on the wooden chair. “Can I get you anything” He says, I say just if I can use the pay phone,

“Sure” I point to the shotgun, I don’t mean it but still.

“Oh sorry” He gives a fake smile and puts enough change for an hour call, I just need 2 minutes, The change is in and put the number on the keypad, praying the god he picks up.

Nicole City, Johnny’s apartment 1st December 2005

Johnny is in his bed, sleeping with the angels, untill the phone rings, “Aw hell man” he walks to the phone like a zombie,

“Hey this is Johnny, and if you have the wrong number I’ll hunt you dow….”

“Johnny it’s Mark”, Mark interrupted, “Why the hell are you phoning me no..” “The police are trying to arrest me for killing Mickey Delfino!” “WHAT THE HELL” Johnny said his voice rising, “MICKEY DELFINO WHY THE F*(@ DID YOU KILL HIM YOU KNOW THE GUY IS A MADE MA……” “Johnny SHUT UP!” I say making it clear he needs to pay attention, “I didn’t really kill him, the person who did it obviously is trying to blame someone else, And that son of a bicth is goanna pay, I need you to come here,”

“Where?” “Ummm let me check!”, I put the phone to rest and ask the bartender what the place is called and what street it’s on,
“ The Revolver’s bullet, Harwood road.” He says I repeat it to Johnny, hang up the phone, sit down and wait.





End of Part One.

[Keyser Soze]

Promising start. You've created some interesting characters, and clearly have a solid idea of the mythology of Nicole City in your head.

All that's needed now is depth. More description of locations. Make us really care about these characters. Also, break up your sentences and paragraphs more - make your chapters easier to read.

Keep up the good work!

[Karem-Knight]

Thanks guys, I'm working on the next chapter (Another short story) and then on to Part two of "The main event"

[SpideyLad]

Not bad so far, but try to keep speech from different characters on seperate lines. That way its easier to read.

Keep it up

[Karem-Knight]

“Traffic”


Nicole city 8:00pm, Main road, November 30th 2005,


Max Baker was a simple Taxi Driver, Flunked school ended up in the car for a job. The man only had him, his dog, his home and one big temper that only gave him bad things. He was driving on the main road done his last fair going back to the “Dragon’s nest” in which he lived, feed his dog and cry to sleep.


But traffic was stopping him, People kept asking for fairs and he was on his fourth cigarette and the car hadn’t moved a mile on this road, “COME ON MOVE YOU STUPID IDIOT YOUR BLOCKING THE ROAD!” Max yelled to a person three cars away from him, He didn’t like doing things like that but he couldn’t help it. He made money by diving around the places Nicole city has to offer, which isn’t very much.


What felt like an hour 10 minutes later the traffic started to move freely, Max was relived and so he got a cigarette and put it in his mouth, All he had do now was just send the car back allow one of his friends to drive him home and then another day would be gone. Max was taking a free lane until a big stretch Limo cut him off, “What the ****!?” Max yelled honking, the limo didn’t respond, Max put his head out “HEY YOU COCK SUCKER WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!!!!!!”, The limo didn’t respond. Max drove his taxi another few lanes, made him and a lot of other people dizzy. Until finally he managed to cut off the limo, He gave his middle finger to the people he could barley see.

Then when Max put his head back noticed more traffic, he stopped the car in anger and got jumped by it. Max took one long smoke of his cigarette, As he was enjoying it something hit the back of the cab and made Max’s jaw hit the steering wheel. Max yelled in pain as his mouth lost nearly four teeth, cursing, yelling all he did but this time for a reason.

In the limo

“Excuse me a minute” said a man in a suit and red tie clearly bald but his head hidden from the shadows got out the limo. As he walked over to Max’s cab he got out a silenced 9mm Beretta and was right in front of Max, “Ya might want to listen to me!” he said in a dark grizzly voice, “In your next life learn to keep your mouth shut,” And with that he shot Max twice in the head, the blood filled the wind screen, And the man just walked back to the limo,

“Sorry about that,”

[SapphirePrima]

It's a pretty cool story. I love the name Nicole City btw

[user123456789]

It's a pretty cool story. I love the name Nicole City btw

ditto, thats why i clicked on this thread in the first place

can't wait for more chapters/parts.

[Karem-Knight]

Thanks guys, Part Two is neraly done!

[Karem-Knight]

Part Two

Chapter Five

The Beginning


Nicole City, Harwood, The Revolver’s Bullet, 5:31 A.M

I’m nearly sleeping, the shot gun has my sweat all over it, I want to get something but I have no money. Johnny will be here any minute, I ask the bartender to turn the TV so I can get my mind off things he says sure and I watch the 24 hour news,

“Police have just found the body of Nicole city taxi driver Max baker, shot twice in the head in his own cab, As they are also trying to find the serial rapist Bobby Sure……”

Police this, police that, most of these murders are always deemed unsolved as well as over a hundred every month, 20 people are either killed, raped or tortured everyday, The police can’t do anything about this. Not even the good ones and threes a minority. I check the time Johnny must be in his car driving like a maniac. I take my hand away from the shotgun and wipe it on my shirt

“Can I get you anything else to drink?” “Nah I’m ok.” All of a sudden the door opens and I hear Johnny’s voice. “OK MARK YOU IDIOT LETS GO!” He’s frustrated, I don’t blame him. I go out carrying the shotgun in one hand and straight into Johnny’s car he’s on the wheel and I’m on the passenger seat I put the shotgun in the back. Johnny drives like hell and I just sit back and relax,
“Where are we going?” I ask “A place the Nitro’s use to lay low, they only give it to good friends and I got the guy who owns it out of trouble one time so he owes me a favour.” “ You helped the Nitro’s?” “Well yeah, I mean…I was there you guys told me to blend in with them and…” “YOU WERE A NARK!” “Look do you want me to help or not,” “Take me to my old house,” “ But that’s in the slums now…” “I don’t care, the cops won’t know I’m there they’ll think I’m to “nice” to survive down there.”


“Ok, then” Johnny turns the car around,

Nicole City, “the slums”, 6:00 am December 1st 2005,

Johnny stops the car, I tell him to come by tomorrow he says fine and drives off. I turn around to see the old place, used to look like the average American home. Now looks like the average American Garbage can, the place barley has a door, I walk over there, Thank god the door, is locked. I check under the stairs for the key and blow the dust off it and open the door, a loud creek echoes across the house, Threes no furniture, no TV just a matrices then I notice something, I walk over to see it, I notice my old Berretta, my first gun. I named it “Julia” after my mother, Then I see the pack of gold bullets my dad gave to me before he went to Miami. I open them up, I named each one after my brother and my friends, I take them out and put them in to Julia, First one’s me, then Joey, Matt, Joe, James, Sam, Sandy and Johnny. I close Julia the click brings something to me, and now I remember,

Nicole City, Cumberland Walk, November 1987,


Mark Wade age twelve, Mark was shooting a 9mm Berretta, seen with his Father helping him aim it, “Whoa There we go son, now just lower it and fire!”, Mark and his Dad hit a bulls eye. “Ah right did you see that!” Mark said smiling taking away the hair from his eyes, “Yeah ya did, son ya really did.” Mark’s father said smiling, “You’ll need it for a town like this.” he said sighing, “What do you mean Dad?”, “Well, it’s just that I…I picked the wrong town, to raise a family in. But HEY we can move any time RIGHT.” Mark’s father said with a fake smile, “Yeah” Marks said nodding,


Mark’s father bent down, “Listen I want you to have something,” He reached out for his pocket. “My Uncle gave this to me back when he was in Vietnam, he said he wanted a family are loom for the Wades, and since were all good with guns he thought that bullets would be good idea .” He said with a chuckle, Mark laughed as well.

“Now if you ever use the gun and the bullets, only use it for me, your friends and innocent people, only for the scum that walks the earth. I know you want to be a cop, and just encase someone does stuff like they do in the movies to you kill use one of these bullets, pure gold they are.”

“Thanks Dad,”, “Ok then, Lets get something to eat.


The next day Jonathan Wade died in a plane crash,


I never forgot that day, Rage burns my blood, what my father said, is right. There aren’t enough good people to make this city right, If you need something done right do it yourself.


I stand up, Gun in my hand I raise my hand, no one in here but me. But the redemption of Nicole begins today, December 1st 2005! I fire the gun, in mid air, to many people right now it’s just another bullet. But for everyone else who’s willing to do something, it’s a calling.

For me, for my father, for my family, for my friends, for Nicole……


And for Sandy.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Six


Nicole City, The Malibu Club, 12:00pm, December 1st 2005,


Tony Delfino was sitting on a table drinking a glass of Scotch with messed up hair and an Amrita suit drinking away in a club he co owned, A waitress came over “Anything else Mr. Delfino?” “No I’m ok, When Carl coming?” “Oh he just entered the building,” “Ah ok Thanks.” Tony got off his table and looked for Carl as the waitress wearing playboy bunny cloths, and flashing lights every where people dancing until finally He noticed his African American colleague, Carl More wearing 80’s like cloths, Tony ran to him

“Hey Tony man what’s u..” Tony pushed Carl to a seat and sat down with him. “What the hell ma..!” “SHUT UP!” Tony said. “I’m in some bad blood with the maker, And he’s out for me UNLESS. I give him 5 Million to him by Friday, so that’s in four days from now. Now I need all the earnings from the past six months and your weapon deals,” “Whoa what the hell man, we need to go up stairs.” “ok”

Tony and Carl went up the stairs to the main office, Carl sat down on the computer like chair and Tony on the leather one.

“Anyway Tony if I could I would help you but, most of my weapon deals I earned got smuggled and most of the earnings go to the Zano family.” “Yeah I know, But you’ve all ways had six million some where.?” “well” “HAVEN’T YOU!” “Yes but.”

“Tell me where it is!” Tony said in a threatening way. “I can’t tell…” “WHERE!” “I can’t tell you whe…” Tony got out a Semi automatic hand gun. “Tell me where it is!” Carl breathed heavily, “Please man, I’ve..I’ve sa.. saved your life man!” Carl said with tears filling his eyes, “WHERE IS IT!” “I can’t tell yo….” Tony shot Carl in the chest, Carl screamed in agony, Tony shot again, Carl still standing, Tony shot him a third time and he finally fell down.

“If you were in trouble your all ready dead!” Carl tried to tell Tony something, “Itttttttttttttttttt’ss in……” Tony shot Carl twice in the head.

“OH ****!!!!!!!” Tony fell down on the ground “OH **** **** ****!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
“Ok ok don’t panic you can think of a way out.” Tony thought to him self and he rushed out of the club with a blood stained suit.

He shat down on the steps pulling back the hair on his face. He needed a way out, he couldn’t run from the maker, not even out of the country, Ray would get the Russian Mafia on Tony’s ass, The South American drug lords to chop him up the Yakuza to hunt him down. He had connections every where, As someone went out he heard the TV briefly for a moment..

“A mentally unstable Charon addict as escaped his local Mental intuition.” “Charon” Tony said to himself, Ray said his Charon supply was having troubles with of another crime figure called “The Wale” smuggling the crates. Tony knew one of The Wale’s close allies, he memorized his number. Walked over to the nearest phone booth and told himself the number,

“Hello” Tony said on the “Yeah” Hey Sikes it’s Tony, “Oh hey what do ya need?” “You know that Charon crate you have?” “Yeah” “I’ll buy 1 million’s worth of it. “Liquid or the powder kind,” “err Both.” “Ok then when and where should I send it?” “Tomorrow After noon, Portland Harbour 3pm Be there.” “Ok then see ya”


The following day, Nicole City, Portland Harbour, 3:00pm:

Tony Delfino and some of his men armed with AK 47’s were in front
of Pier 23, They noticed a 4x4 pull over Sikes in the passnger seat, two men armed with shot guns in the back sitting on the crates, and the driver. The Driver and one of the men at the back got out and Sikes went over to Tony,

“Hey long time no see,” he said. “Ditto” said Tony, “Hey I really appreciate this.” “hey no prop, I give you some lethal drug that melt your ass and dick you give me some money whats the harm?” “Yeah oh here the money.” Tony picked up a brief case, one of his men came up next to him. Sikes walked, back “Hey see ya next time huh Tony?” “There won’t be a next time, VAI!” Tony yelled out taking out his hand gun, the two of his men n the pier killed Sike’s men and The man next to Tony shot Sikes.

The man in the 4x4 shot the man next to Tony, as he (Tony) dashed away with his hand gun,
“MATOR ELLE, MORE!” Tony said and his two other men shot the guy at the back from his head to his torso.

“Tambein vai o e carsa em o Pier,” Tony picked up the brief case. And went into his car and drove off.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Seven

Answers





December 2nd, Mark Wade’s apartment 1:50 pm,


Early afternoon, Johnny’s just arrived. I’ve been preparing for the entire day, went to the local gun dealer and bought a few rounds for the shotgun I stole. I load up the gun lots of clicks echo in my ears and finally stops, the gun is fully loaded. Johnny’s out of his car
“Hey what the hell man?” He says, “I’m goanna get the guy who killed Mickey Delfino, And send a message to **** that walks on Nicole City that redemption is coming, No Mob Boss, No Drug dealer, No THUG will be safe from my wrath.” “What? I mean yeah Mark it’s a nice thought but we’ll be killed.” “We won’t,” “How do you know?” “I don’t,”

I’m in the car putting the shot gun in the back, relaxing thinking how I’m going to pull this off. Then Johnny asks the same question, I know one place Mickey owned with his best friend and his brother. I ask Johnny to take us there, Mickey had problems there two weeks ago, I know I hear he gave his brother a black eye and kicked him repeatedly, then went running. Sand told me. SANDY! Oh god. I’ll ring her at the club. After I find my answers.

An hour passes and where there, Johnny stops complain and I go to the fire exit, Noticing the club’s closed, because of some problems,“Wait here” I say to Johnny, I go to the back alley climbing on the fire exit, it’s about to rain, I continue noticing an open window.


I don’t hesitate, I check if anyone’s there. I hold Julia in my hand, Knowing I won’t use her so I grab for some metal object, this place is dark and smells terrible, I hear foot steps , I hind behind the door way the metal object in one hand Julia in the other, a fat bald guy comes in. Looks like he’s in his 20’s walking slowly, I shut the door, click Julia, she’s on his head and I get to the point.

“Who killed Mickey Delfino!” His head becomes his heart as it pounds, “I….I don’t know.”
I can’ t tell if he’s lying or not, I ask again

“Who killed Mickey Delfino!?” he hears me, “I’m telling you I don’t know…….” I still don’t know I click the gun. NOW one wrong move and he THINKS I’m goanna kill him.
“Don’t hesitate tell the truth, when I asked the first time the safety was on.


Now tell me who killed MICKEY DELFINO!” “ALL RIGHT ALL RIGHT!’ he says “Two guys had a part in it, Carl Hutchings and Mickey’s brother Tony.” “Where are they?” I ask “Carl was killed by Tony last night but Tony is with my friend Rodrigo said something about a deal he had to go to.” “Today ’s Friday, millions of deals would go on today.” he’s trying to say something but I interrupt him

“How about you call this Rodrigo right now?” he goes Ok, reaches his cell phone. “oh hey Rodrigo, um listen…no of course my voice hasn’t changed listen um.” he puts his hand over the phone to tell me something. “What do you want me to ask him?”


“When will the deal start?” he asks his friend, puts his hand over the phone. “There are two one in five miniutes and one at night.” “what time is the night one?”

I ask, he asks his friend. “8:00 at Portland Harbour Pier 23” “Thanks” I say reach for the metal pole and hit him on the head, I check his pulse, he’s unconscious, I leave the pole here and get back down on the fire escape, Run down it. Landing on my feet hurting my ass a little run back to Johnny.


“Give me one minute ok?” Johnny nod, I notice a phone box. Run towards it, I don’t even notice the lights green, I check what change I have enough left for a dollar, I enter it all in. And dial Sandy’s number. I pray to God she picks up, While I stare at the numbers, I hear her voice finally. “Sandy it’s me” “Oh god Mark,” I hear that despair “SANDY WAIT, Listen to me!” “What?” “You know I wouldn’t kill anyone, Don’t you?” “Mark” “Please, I promise meet me hear behind the Malibu 9:00pm. It’ll all be over then. Please….”

A Silence beckons, she says something that I never thought she would, “Ok, I’ll see you there.” “I love you.” I know that isn’t natural it’s what I feel and she knows it. “I love you too.” I hang up the phone, a tear hits my eye but I let it go. I nod to Johnny he gets in the car. I follow him and I get straight into the car.
“What was that about?” Johnny asks, I say

“Nothing”. “We’ve got 5 hours to get to Portland Harbour.” I tell Johnny, “How come?” he says I tell him why, he clears his thought and says ok in a mousy voice. I take out Julia, and check the bullets and turn the safety on, 8 bullets to use, A thousand crooks and thugs to kill.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Eight

Pier 23



Nicole City, Portland Harbour, 7:30pm,


I’ve just finished having a lunch, breakfast and Dinner with Johnny in 3 different restaurants, Encase the cops were there. I check the back seat I have my shotgun, Bullets, Dagger, and Julia.

“Only half a mile now.” Johnny says, I make sure the shotguns ready, I put the spare bullets in my pocket. I get out an Uzi, and throw it to Johnny, “What’s this?” he asks “Protection.” I say. He stops the car “Here you are man, I’ll make sure No one ya know.” “Thanks I say grabbing the shotgun And walking out side the car.
Inside the Pier,

Tony Delfino was preparing the stash, sitting down on a wooden chair drinking a little Martini, “Are you ok Mr. Delfino?” Said one of his men, “Yeah I’m ok” he said, Mean while one man at the top looking over the mirror noticed something. “Hey Boss some guy with shot guns here.? Do you want me to take the sucker out?” “What does he look like?”. “Brown hair leather Jacket. “OH ****!” Tony said picking up his M16.


“KILL THE PIECE OF **** NOW, EVERYBODY NOW!” Ton said in rage and horror, he knew who it was. It Mark Wade, Tony thought he would be dead but he thought wrong.

“Boss he doesn’t looks so tough.” said the man at the top

Mean while….

I know they know that I’m here, I don’t hesitate, The guns in my hands aiming at the top guard distracted.

Mark shoots the guard at the top, Perfect I shoot the doors open ,
Tony’s men fire “TAKE THAT YOU PIECE OF ****!” as the waste there bullets. “What?” Tony said to himself as he heard another gun shot heard, as one of his men was shot in the head.

I got another clean shot. They’re watching, looking around. One guy comes with an AK 47 to the right of me. I put the shot gun to his head. “Don’t move” I say and thrust the shot gun hitting his head. Falling to the floor.
“OH ****!” I can hear Tony and his big mouth, I walk slowly so I can take out the other guards. One bald guys near something called “Liquid Charon” I distract them shoot the shot gun near the floor, They all look around, I shoot the box, some fluid comes out, I don’t have time to look, I fire at another guy just to the left of me shot him right in the leg, I look around only me a guard and Tony.
I look at the guy with the box, OH god, He’s burnt his legs. I look away refusing to accept it, I go down the stairs without making a sound, The one guard concretes, I hit him in the back with the gun, Fire the guns last shot and point it at Tony, “Out side you son of a ***** and run!” Tony drops the gun and runs for it, I drop my gun and grab Julia, Walking outside, the breeze feels my skin I aim Julia,
“FREEZE!” Tony’s near the end of the pier, I’m in the middle, “Please Mark, please This other guy that I’m about to meet he.” “SHUT UP!” I yell aiming Julia for Tony head slowly, slowly. All of a sudden metal hit’s the back of my head. I miss fire Julia she falls to the ground.
I notice who it is, that last guard of Tony’s picking up the shotgun, wanting to hit me a second time, I kick him where it hurts, I get up crouching as I punch him in the chest, then standing up finally in the jaw, he’s trembling, and he’s near the edge of the right of the pier, I stamp on it and he falls over, I don’t want to know what I’ve done, I tremble.

Sandy……… thought enters my mind. Oh god what am I doing. I have to no, I pick up Julia, put her in my jacket pocket. And walk over to Tony, I shot his hear clean off, I hear his screams in his agony, I know threes only one thing to do, Threes a boat lower used by chains I go to the switch lower the chains until there above Tony’s head,

I tie Tony to the chains, cover up the bleeding with his tie, and go back to the switch putting him high up, “TONY!” I yell, He regains conscious with a fright, notching how high he is.
“LET ME DOWM PLEASE, I CAN EXPLAIN IT WAS THIS GUY CALLED, THE MAKER. HE’S A PSYCO!” “SHUT UP!” I yell, “You do me a favor when the NCPD come you did the flowing, killed your brother, your business partner, your body guards and burnt down a pier.”

“Why?” he says “Or my face will be the last thing you see!” I walk away, Tony cries for help but I walk back into the pier, Picking up gasoline and spearing it all around the place, finally I get my lighter lighting it up, and throwing it up on my art it starts a blaze, I walk back to Johnny.

“It’s over man we can go.” I tell him, he gives a smile as the car starts. It’s finally over,

Finally……………

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Nine

Tragedy


Nicole City, Portland Harbour, Pier 23, 11:55.


Ray the Maker, Some call him “the psycho with friends”, Some call him the unofficial Mayor of Nicole City. He was a complicated man, a powerful man and especially a athletic man. And right now he was going to give an under dwelling another chance, the under dwelling’s name was Tony Delfino.

Ray, his body guards Zacko and Longo and the chauffer were in the limo,


“Stop” Ray said to his chaffer, who had a hat and bandaged ear,


“Wait here, and don’t move anything or Zacko might have to play with your ears again.” Chaffer cleared his thought and nodded.

Ray and his body guards got out the limo to notice a blaze at the last pier, Pier 23. Ray and his emotionless body guards calmly walked to the ware house with his trench coat on

Ray sighed, “I liked this ware house.” Ray walked to the side of the pier as it wasn’t caught a light yet.


As Tony dangled on the chains nearly dead waiting for someone to show up, The only person he didn’t want to show up walked to his length,

“TONY!” he said “IT’S FRIDAY AND I STILL HAVEN’T GOT MY MONEY!” Ray said.

“Oh come on,” Tony said nearly dieing. “I had a million’s worth of Charon in thereeeeeee……”, “Oh yeah it’s brilliant when it’s all gone and caught fire huh Ton boy?”

Tony struggled. “come on Ray, I tried really. Please. I…….” Ray checked his watch.

“Nearly the end of the day Tony only 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3” just when Ray said 3 a pocket knife appeared in his hand. “2” another knife “1” the final knife appeared.

“It’s Saturday Tony, whereas my money?” ,

“Ray please…..” Ray threw one knife at the left chain, another on the right and a final on the thin rope that held it all together and with that Tony fells to the water and all the weight made him fall to the ground. Ray gave a smirk as Tony drowned to his death.

“Lets go.”



Nicole City, Behind the Malibu Club, 8:30pm

Sandy Hunt was a bright, indelicate and especially beautiful young woman, She could have any rich man she wanted. But she had another good quality, Kindness and was only loyal to the man she loved, Mark Wade,

It was quite a warm night Sandy wore a blue shirt, Jeans and a belt, all she wanted to do was to see Mark, she wanted to say sorry to him. And just see him again, she would kill for him, steal for him, DIE for him.

As Sandy leaned on a wall, a skinny hand held her by the shoulder,


“Don’t scream” said a disturbing, strained voice, Sandy panicked for a moment, she was about to elbow him,

but saw in the shadows something so horrific, up close Sandy wanted to scream. But as she looked down she saw a blade to her stomach and it took the blade away from the right cutting most of it off. Sandy collapsed blood filling her eyes, she saw a light, but held back as she saw the gritty back alley and a homeless person.


8:30, it’s all over, I get out the cab. Give the driver some of the money I found a long the way, and walk to other side of the night club. Warm night for tonight, But one thing on my mind tonight, One thing. I reach the Malibu look to my right and don’t see my angel.

I walk to the left I notice a black alley walk over there and oh god. Oh god now SANDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I bend down hoping she see’s me with those blood filled eyes. “Sandy” I say, holding her head, “Sandy it’s me Mark.”, she looks at me and smiles “Mmmmm” she tries to tell me something, I don’t hear it. “Mmarrkkk, I llllllloveeeeeeeeee yoooouuuuuuuuu…………” Silence beckons her, I see her pulse go dead, Sandy the only thing that I cared about, tears fill my eyes,

I want to scream but I can’t. I hold Julia, My hand fills with rage, I swear I’ll find who killed you Sandy, with every last bullet I have, Every last bit of Crime and Corruption that surrounds me I’ll do it, for you…


For you.













End of part two.

[Karem-Knight]

Epilogue


Nicole City The Slums, December 1st 9:24pm:

The Dark hawks are a powerful gang, punk Mohawk psychos, who wouldn’t care how badly they cut you up, They always stayed in dark alleyways, very rarely came out at day time,

In this Dark alley which few people entered, a man who looked busy and obviously if you looked in his eyes was a very mysterious and focused man, he was Hispanic, had long hair, wore a leather trench coat, jeans and a black shirt. As he walked along he noticed two Dark hawks, walking fastly towards him, when they were face to face with him one with a red Mohawk stopped him in his tracks.


“Excuse me, Do you have any money?” the dark hawk asked, the Hispanic man didn’t reply, “Maybe you didn’t hear me,” the dark hawked nodded to his fellow

gang member who was behind the Hispanic man, they both drew out knifes

“Now we wouldn’t give two ****s about cutting your little dinky and…..” a

ll of a sudden they heard a gun shot, the dark hawk in front of the Hispanic man noticed his college had a bullet that went through his skull, “Oh ****!” He screamed, the man drew out his gun, “No sorry I don’t” said he said, and with that he shot the teenaged dark hawk 5 times in the chest and twice in the head.

The man reloaded his gun and calmly walked away

[Silverstein]

I like your story because you really get a feel of the city. Like it doesn't just seem like the reader is supposed to follow the characters, it feels like you're there and the characters are just people in this city. And things go on....mysterious things. Detective things.

I like it.

[Karem-Knight]

I like your story because you really get a feel of the city. Like it doesn't just seem like the reader is supposed to follow the characters, it feels like you're there and the characters are just people in this city. And things go on....mysterious things. Detective things.

I like it.

Thank you, :)

And if you liked "Corruption" part two of Mark Wade's story is coming up called "Life of Death"

[Karem-Knight]

LIFE OF DEATH


By Tom Ebbs/ Karem-Knight

























Prologue,

Kansan Industries


Jin Kansan was a bright investor who owned one of the biggest machine works in America, it devolved software for Microsoft, AOL, Apple and soon rise to a software empire, Television, Computers everything that people take for gradated Kansan industries had big part in every aspect. But these weren’t how President Jin Kansan made his empire, and certainly not why he chose Nicole City to work in, oh no.

Kansan Industries secretly owned “Grand kill” a weapon dealership, they had some of the most advanced weapons in the world, they transported a few to the government, but one of their major investments were from The Zano family, the Nicole City Yakuza, Boss Wale’s crime ring and of course Ray the Maker’s crime ring.

They each found out their enemies had investments in Grand kill, but they were to vital to their plans, but one crime lord knew he would rather not have anything then to share,


Nicole City, Downtown ,December 23rd 2005 , 11:00pm:

Jin Kansan had just came back from one of the biggest balls of the year he was with Jean Bien possibly one of the biggest supermodels in the world, when the party finished they both went to Jin’s limo, he was short and skinny Japanese man but with his money he could have any woman he wanted.

In the limo

Jin and Jean were both drinking wine as Jin wore a black silk suit and roll neck, and Jean wore a red dress,

“So Jean,” Jin said “wei” June said, “I understand that you have a shoot tomorrow?”

“Yes why do you ask?” , “Well” Jin said, “I could come to da shoot tomorrow and you know what?” Jin said, as the both chuckled


Mean while:

A man in a black suit and tie wearing a green mask had a M16 with him, with a wakie talkie, “Yo this, Eagle come in Walrus,”

In the truck in front of limo:

“Yeah” said a fat truck driver in his truck, “Stop the truck,” said “Eagle”
, “Roger that”, the man stepped on the reverse exlserator, and Kansan’s limo hit the truck head first.

In the limo:

“<DOO HO! WHAT THE ****>” Yelled Jim as the limo trusted forward, “DOO HO!” Jin went to the font of the limo to see his chaffer bloody head wounded on the steering wheel.

On the hill side near the road:

The man in the black suit and mask was now crouching with his Automatic M16. He fired his gun all the way across the limo, as Jin and Jean screamed in agony as life left them, the hit man got his walkie talki,

“Get out of the truck now! Make sure no one sees you.” he said, “Roger” said his college as he carefully got out the truck,

The hit man got out a mini rocket launcher and aimed for the limo, as the blood filled bullet holed limo exploded, the hit man dropped the bazooka. And ran. From the hills.

[Karem-Knight]

Nicole City cemetery, 2:00pm December 25th 2005:

A man is standing in a long coat, as it snows he’s seen smoking a cigarette, I shouldn’t be here it should’ve been me, oh god I’m sorry. I drop the roses the second my hand makes a fist, I swear whoever put her here, I hold the steal in my pocket knowing when I find who did it my anger will release. Someone comes behind me and notice my best friend

“Come on Mark we have to go before the cops come.” I nod and we walk to his car,

The funeral was last week, but the cops would’ve found me, My plan would’ve been ruined.


We finally reach Johnny’s car and we drive to my old house, an hour passes and were there, It’s snowing and cold as hell in this place, I enter the building walk to my old room and sit down on the bed, I reach for my photo album, just to see her face, I flip the pages. A part of me dies a little,


I fall to the wood built floors my eyes go dead, my body follows






Sandy………………………….

[WeaponZ2]

Im enjoying the story so far. I liked all the stuff with Mark investigating.
Keep it up.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Two

Johnny

Johnny Slater was Mark Wades best friend, He was an average guy just wanted to go to parties, have fun get a job. But this was of course AFTER he vandalized public property and was caught doing so with his fellow homies of a gang called the “Nitro’s”.

It was then that Johnny was assigned to work with Mark Wade, Johnny would give Mark leads. Soon enough the Nitros lost influence through a team of 3 good cops, Officer Mark Wade, Detective Claude Downing, Officer Shan Salamanca, One died, one got fired and one became a normal cop, aka Bad. But Mark and Johnny stayed good friends.

Raphael’s Brackon road (The Dragons nest), Nicole City, 7:30 pm

Johnny Slater, was sitting on his stool in the bar with a bottle of beer drinking and thinking what to do in life, Life. That was a waste of time for him, Sometimes at night he would reach out for a revolver and end it. Sometimes a ******** would call him a ****** and Johnny would beat the crap out of them, Sometimes, Johnny would go to the Malibu hoping to meet a girl. Sometimes Johnny wished for happiness.

But most of the time he would be wondering the streets, smelling the sewage hearing the sirens seeing the dirt.

Tonight was one of those nights, where Johnny drank away.

Johnny’s apartment, Nicole City 7:40pm

Johnny entered his apartment. Bored and depressed as hell, Not evening checking his mail went to the fridge got out some food and fell down his couch watching the TV. He fell asleep watching.

2:00am

Johnny woke up, with his eyes wide shut, noticing his mail (Finally), he grabbed them and went to the table,

“Bills, Bills Bil……..” Johnny paused for a moment noticing an envelope saying “Give this to your friend.”

Johnny opened the envelope his eyes intense, to find it hand written.

“Give this to your friend Mark Wade, we know who killed his little bicth,

Tell him to go to the payphone in Glaring Park, 8:15pm,

He better be there



Ricardo Zano”

Johnny dropped the letter, “Wow” Johnny got a letter from the son of possibly the biggest mob boss in Nicole. But Johnny had to tell Mark tomorrow, Knowing Mark as well as he did Mark would march to the Zano mansion and get himself killed. Johnny put the letter down and went to his bed.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Three

A deal


Mark Wade’s house, 7:30pm December 27th


I wish I was dead, I’m lying on the bed, Holding Julia with it’s cold steel. I’m watching the news, Telling me there’s another one of those Serial Killer’s victim.

“The victim was said to have his eyes cut off and bleed to death. Authorities are trying to find any tracks to the murderer”

I hear knocking on the door, I finally get out the bed. My legs feel like crouches. I walk to the door like a robot, finally reaching and opening it. It’s Johnny,

“Hey what’s up?” I say,

“Mark” he says meaning it’s important, “I know someone who knows who killed Sandy,” I grab Johnny by the collar.

“WHO!”I yell in desperation “TELL ME!, NOW!”

“OK OK!” He says rising his voice with mine. “We need to go to Bellville Park, and go to the pay phone there.”

“Why?” I ask “They sent me a letter, I don’t know if we can trust…”

I rush into Johnny’s car trying to opening the door notching it’s locked, he runs over unlocking it and getting in.

“I need one thing.” I say, Johnny nods saying ok, I run back to the house pick up Julia and leave.


Nicole City, Glaring Park, 8:14pm


We arrive at the park, “I’m goanna take the phone call, Stay in the car.” I tell him “Ok” I get out the car, calmly walking to the pay phones, Watching my back. This place is dangerous, Things happen here, People die……..the wrong way. I notice one of the pay phones ringing. I run to it picking it up

“Hello?” I say it naturally, “Mark Wade?” Says a dark greasily voice almost Italian, “This is Don Franco Zano……” “WHAT!?” I say to him, with rage, I know who he is, everyone does but no one does a thing, Which is good for him.

“Calm down, my boy. I understand if you hang up,” “Ok then” I say, About to hang up but something holds me back.

“Ok then, but we can’t let that awful psycho who killed your girlfriend go around non guilty now can we?” I sigh knowing he’s right, right now he’s the only one who can help me “What do you want me to do?” I ask

“There’s a drug deal, they have Cocaine, Charon, Marianna, Dope, the works, It’s between a group of Colombians and Boss Wale’s men. I need you to steal all the drugs, They’ll be a vehicle in the garage on The Callahan bridge, The deal will be taking place on Portland Harbour Midday, get the car to my mansion in the river of June, Get all the help you need, Just get those drugs!”

I know what I’m going to say and I’m regretting it all ready, “Ok then”

“Good Have a nice day.” He hangs, up I walk away back the way I came from, I reach Johnny’s car.

“Well?” he says “Ok, listen……..” I’m telling him everything. And I hope he excepts.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Four

Friend of a friend
who becomes a friend.?

I finish telling Johnny everything, he’s in a state of shock, he would’ve done this 2 or 3 years ago but now he’s changed a whole new man…….I think.

“Seems like you’re goanna need some fire power, huh?”

I nod, Johnny’s thought clears,


“I know a guy who might be able to help.” “Who?” I ask


“Well he’s a good friend of mine.” “WHO!?”

“Guy named Carlos, Carlos Mercado,” “How will he be able to help us?”

Johnny is silent for a moment but breaks it himself.

“He’s mercenary.” I’m in a small state of disbelief

“How do you know him?”, “Back when I was a full time member of the Nitros, I worked a lot with him, he wanted the money I wanted my respect. But I haven’t seen him like over a year.”

I think to myself for a moment, I can’t necessarily blame Johnny, I killed 10 men in cold blood on that pier. I can’t talk, I look out the window, I know I can’t let Sandy’s death go without justice, Johnny, Zano, The Nitro’s there my only way out.

“Where does he live?” I ask

“Near the industrial estate, In a tailor.” Ok, let’s go.


1 Hour later, Nicole City, Industrial estate Carlos’ tailor 8:15:

I walk up to the door of the tailor knocking on it, “Just a minute” says a Latin like voice I hear his foot steps picking up something, he finally opens the door. A sawn-off pointing to my face

“Who are you?” He says, I notice he has scars on his chest and long hair wearing glasses Hiding a few scars,

“I’m Mark Wade, I want to talk to you about a job proposal and..” he interrupts me and says,

“Look Gringo, I don’t care about your ****ing dick just tell me who you’re working for right now and……..” He stairs at something, It’s Johnny.

“HEYYYYY!!!!!!!!” A massive gesture as he runs over there.

“AI meu amigo, how are you man, long time no see.”, “Yeah ditto man, how’s it going for you.”,

“Ah nothing’s changed, Is this your friend here?” he says pointing to me.

“Yeah, We came here for a job to be done and you’re the best guy I know.”

“Whats the job” he says, I walk over to him, “Well……” I tell him everything he needs to know,
5 Minutes later,

I tell him he seems pretty enthusiastic about it, I finally finish and he replies,

“So we’re working for Zano, That’s cool, he gives you what you want. However mush you deserve, he doubles it,”

As he said that I knew he was one of them. But I need him to pull it off,

“He’ll give us some money, we’ll split ok?” I tell him something

“No, You and Johnny can have the money, I’m not taking any of that money……for personal reasons.”

“Ah ok, you’re probably goanna need a good storage car, huh?”

“Yeah,, we already have one”,“ And some weapons?” I nod,

“Follow me” , Me Johnny and Carlos walk out of his tailor while he puts on a black shirt, and we walk past a few building till we reach a shop called “Guns and Roses”, I give a sigh cause the name is so unoriginal, We enter the building and Carlos yells,

“Hey Nick, can you show these guys some good weapons, Don’t worry I’m buying” I look at him with a smirk, the fat guy in the store says go ahead,

I look around and finally pick a good Shotgun, M26, I tell Carlos I’m buying two rounds, Johnny buys an Uzi, We bring it to the counter and Carlos puts down $10000 on the table and we leave,

“ Ok, Me and Johnny we’ll meet you here tomorrow at 5 o’clock be here,” Carlos nods, me and Johnny walk to the car,

It’s goanna be a long day.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Five


The Deal,
Nicole City, Portland Harbour, Pier 18,



I’m in Pier 18, I get a good look over Pier 24 where the drug deal is supposed to happen, I’m in the back of the car, with Carlos“Yo Mark, they’re here,” Johnny says


“Put your masks on.” I say we all do it, I can barley see through it. I ask Carlos and Johnny if they’re ready they both say yes.

“Drive!” I yell

Pier 24,

A few South American sailors waited for a big deal, both from Cuba. Their bosses thought they only had a few E-bay items, exports from New York, Micro soft, which they did only they had Mariana, Cocaine and the new drug Charon, they both took some of the dope but not the charon, That thing would kill them and burn them. Simply because it was the most lethal Military torture weapon, If the Military had it.


A car came by and stopped at the pier, three men came out, one was Michael Puerto, Boss Wale’s right hand man, who represented the boss for every meeting, every drug dealer. EVERYTHING.

“Hey, the drugs are right here, said one of the Cubans patting on the box,

“Thank you.” Said Johnny,

“BOSS LOOK!” said one of the guards pointing to a car speeding, Michael and his men got their hand guns out and the Cubans got their Uzi’s out,

They fire a warning, I look at the front holding my gun as Johnny aims for one of the Wale’s men gives him 4 shots to the chest, my heart beats like the speed of light.

“NOW!” I yell to Johnny he stops the car, me and Carlos get out, I fire a warning shot in the air, Carlos puts the two Cubans at gun point with both his sawn offs and I hold the Boss’s men,

“Give me the drug dick head!” says Carlos, “DROP THE GUN!” I say to the others,

Michael slowly puts his down, The other try’s to be smart, I fire a shot above his head and he drops the gun and puts his hands up.
“Open your car’s doors!” I say to Michael, He goes over and opens them,

I point to the other one, “GET IN!”

He walks over there and does what I say, “Throw your keys over to me!” Michael throws them. And they hit my feet.

“Get in your car, lock the doors!” He does so, I run to the car keys, grab them. I walk over to the Cubans, and point my gun at one of them, Carlos puts his gun in his holster. The Cubans put the Crates in our car and walk away.

“LET’S GO!” I yell, me and Johnny at the front and Carlos in the back.

One of the Cubans runs for his Uzi, “DRIVE” I say to Johnny as he presses on the gas. I hear Uzi fire, then a shotgun blast with a scream, I look over to Carlos,

“Nice shot.” I say, “Thanks.”

“Where do we go now?” Johnny says with his hands a little shaky,

“River of June, Zano Mansion,”

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Six
The Family


Nicole City, River of June, Zano Mansion


We reach Zano’s mansion, he has guards, swimming pools, Furniture’s, butlers, He should be one of the guards, one of the pool cleaners, one of the butlers. What he deserves to be, Johnny stops the car.

“I’m goanna talk to Zano wait here.” I tell to Johnny getting out of the car.

I walk out one of the guards goes behind me wearing a suit and shades, “HEY HEY. Who are you, I know I’m not Italian,”

“Mark Wade” I say not caring.

“Oh ok, Wait there. The Don’s orders,” He goes for Julia, CRAP. I needed that.

“What’s this?” he asks holding it like he’s goanna fire it.

“My Mother.” I say, he looks puzzled.

“Go right through.” he opens the gates I walk on the pavement along the front garden that’s bigger then a play ground. And I see a butler opening the door for me.

“Go right in, sir” he says, he sounds British.

“The Don will see you right away.” I wait for a minute seeing maids cleaning up. And the capo of the family Tony Puerto passing by. Walking over to an office,

He comes out of it.

“Hey you!” He says pointing to me.

“The Don wants to see ya!” I nod and walk up to the office, I see the back of a chair

“Sit down.” he says, I do so on a commutable leather seat.

“Where are the drugs?”, He asks. “In front of the mansion.” I reply, as he turns the chair over, I see him. He looks around 70 wearing Sun Glasses smoking a cigar.

“Good,” He says with a smirk. “Now who killed Sandy?” He starts with a chuckle. “Wait, you think ……..” he begins a continues the cold chuckle

“You think you do ONE, I repeat ONE Small job, you think you’ll get information like that? Not even the police know, But they don‘t want to know..” My fist angers.

“But I do have something for you and your friends.” He gets out some money, Must be a bunch of 100’s in there.

“No.” I say, He shrugs. And takes the money back.

“I knew you wouldn’t take it. But that’s good, I like that Mark you want something and you strive to take, that’s what I used to do.”

“I’m not like you.” I say, “I know because you’re ugly.”

“Anyway, one of my friends told me about you, Told me you would go SUPER HERO on them.” he starts laughing, “You think you can “end all Corruption in Nicole” Think about it for a sake. Mark……..Redemption, Nicole? Nicole is a strong hold for me. I love the city, for the fact that I own it. But then a guy like you shows up and somehow people like me feel bad for killing you when you do good, But this if I were in New York. We’re on Nicole here ay one Try’s that **** here. The won’t live the next day.”


He looks at me for a minute. And gives a smirk.

“I like you Mark, you hate me but do a job for me just to get what you want, So you know what. I’m goanna use you, If you want to end Crime in Nicole this is a good chance. If you want to find who killed your bicth, this is a good lead.”

“What?” I ask grunting my teeth

“Go to the Wale’s mansion. And kill him, I’ll give you one week, just one week. If his brains aren’t scatted yours will.” He says,

“You may leave, but remember one week.” I get out the chair and leave walking back down the stairs to the guard who took Julia,

“Can I have my gun back please?” I ask,

“No sorry compulsory.” I grab his tie, Punch him in the nose, kick him in the balls and throw him to the ground getting Julia. And putting her in my jacket.

“Open the gates,” I say to the guard, He does so.

Mean while in the mansion:

Tony Puerto, and Lecanto Zano, were in the office. Tony kissed Zano’s ring and so did his son,

The Don looked out the window,

“Do you think he has a chance?”

“We’ll see.”

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Seven



Nicole City, “Danny’s Diner” 5:07pm

Me, Johnny and Carlos walked over to this dine. Carlos keeps asking for his money, Johnny keep asking me who killed Sandy and I’m asking my self why did I become a cop.

“EH GRINGO!” Carlos yells, “WHERE THE **** IS MY MONEY FOR THE LOVE OF DEUES!” I finally snap.

“WE CAN’T GET ANY MONEY TO WE PULL OFF ONE MORE JOB!” I yell, “What?” Carlos asks.

“We kill the wale” I tell them, they both go silent.

“You mean Boss Wale?” Johnny asks, I nod, “The second largest crime empire…….” “Third” Carlos says.

“Third?” I ask, The Wale and Zano have been in a turf war with Nicole since both their families started, newspapers, the public and epically the cops know that. Who’s more powerful then Wale or Zano.

“Yeah some guy, no one knows about him, he gets all his jobs done from other people, The Renegades, Nitro’s, Dark hawks and the Yakuza. They say he killed Sony Carlo. Put a bullet right through his eyes. Took all of Carlo’s territory, killed his family, his friends, his high school friends. Everything, they call him “The psycho with friends.” He even makes Charon, Biggest Charon dealer in the world.”

I’m stunned for a moment, theirs this man, who controls everything but no one knows.

“How do you know about him?” I ask,
“Because he gave me these scars.” Carlos points to his eyes. “a year ago, I tried to kill him, one of his bodyguards used a sword to stick me to a wall, and he threw Charon in my eyes, it was powder so it didn’t kill me”

I wonder for a minute about this, then I focus, I need to stay focused

“OK look when we attack the Wale here’s what we do……………..”

End of Part One

[Karem-Knight]

Street Fighter,


Nicole City, December 28th 2005, “The Arena”


The Arena as the scum who can’t afford a real job is a place where one guy loses a tooth and the other his life. It’s a deserted car park. It had 5 floors, 1st floor was beginners, If you didn’t get out of the 1st floor within a week you would get your finger cut off and banned from the arena .

2nd floor, was the veteran arena . If you didn’t move up from that in a month you would be crippled and banned from the arena, 3rd floor was the normal arena. If you didn’t show improvement in 6 months , you would be thrown off the building in the 5th floor. 4th floor was the “hard” floor, you would have to kill your opponent, If you didn’t both would get run over by a car. To advance you would have to fight for an entire day non stop.

The 5th floor was where the best fighters were at, and once they reached the 5th floor. They were known as “Gods” The “Friday” guy was to end his last battle with a god and kill them to take their place. There were only room for 5 “Gods”.

Nicole City, December 28th 2005, “The Arena, 11:55pm

Marcus Johnson was near becoming a god in the arena, he was a profanely trained boxer, after this he would get a fraction of the money that the Boss Wale crime ring funded the group.

Marcus did a judo throw on a Nitro member who managed to get to Floor 4. As the gang member hit the floor, the crowd cheered “KILL HIM!, KILL HIM!”. Marcus put his foot aghast the Nitro’s neck and pressed on it until he heard a giant CRACK!

The crowd hooted and began giving Marcus high fives as he collapsed to the ground.

“Zeus” The leader of the arena entered. He was a middle aged man, but still in good shape.

“Well done Marcus, 23 hours and 57 minutes, and only 4 litres of water, 2 packets of Steroids and your lucky red shirt to keep you going. Now you must face a God.”

A Japanese man came in, he was nicknamed “Blade” cause his hand were as sharp as hell.

“SILENCE” Zeus said, pulling at a small revolver, “I will fire this gun right next to both these men, until the one bullet it has comes out, the person is lands next to must take a hit. Ready?”

“yes” Marcus said exhausted with Blade nodding, Zeus shot at Marcus nothing happened, then at Blade nothing happened. But the second time he shot it at Marcus the bullet came out.

“BLADE!” Zeus said, Blade ran to Marcus doing a leaping kick to his face, Marcus got up. He punched Blade in the face quite hard, Marcus tried a left to the rips but Blade blocked it and kicked Marcus to the floor, Blade crouched down and put his hand like a knife and quickly stabbed him in the thought. He raised his blood filled hand in triumph.

“Bye we’ll see you tomorrow.” Zeus said as the scum left the arena.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Eight
The Wale’s death




Nicole City, “Paradise Island”,
The Wale’s mansion, 8:00pm December 29th:

I’m right next to the mansion, I have a 9mm that I got in the gun shop near Rafael’s. Miracle I got out there alive. I look at the gate, security’s tight, even on a Tuesday. I look back at Carlos and Johnny they know what to do,

“Ok,” I say driving the car to the next mansion.

“Let’s do this.”

We all go to the trunk, I get the shotgun, Carlos gets his sawn-off and an Uzi as Johnny gets two Uzi’s. I get the last gun The Sniper.

“You know what to do.”



I say, The run to the mansion, I out the sniper on the back on my back. I walk to a tree, I see Carlos crouching on one bush as Johnny hides his Uzi’s in his pocket. And walks by.

I reach the top of the tree They can’t see me hiding un the leaves I use the scope, I count There’s about 12 of them, I’ll get 8 of them they’ll get the other 4.

I scope and work out a pattern. All I have to do is a bug square. My hand on that trigger. Closing on that guy’s head.

Boss Wale’s mansion, 8:05 pm.

Outside there were 12 security guards, all enjoying another night of boredom. The 2 on the balcony chatted at opposite ends.

“If the Boss die’s who’s dick do we have to piss for after that?”

“I bet ya it’s Johnny. The Boss’s trust’s hi…….” BANG! The guard on the left shot dead and fell to the ground.

“****!” The security guard said picking up his rifle, but was shot dead as well.

I shoot two dead, made a mess out of it to. I aim for the other two guys, I shoot one in the shoulder and get the other one in the heart. The other two disappear, I can’t find them, I notice the two near the gates, I shoot one of them, the other needs to open them.

Carlos leaps out so does Johnny.

“Open the gates!” Johnny yells with two Uzi’s threatening guard Carlos jumps out with his guns.

The other two guards Jump out, Johnny and Carlos jump out the way, I wait to the other one to open the gates, the other two run as the gates slowly open, I shoot one of them in the chest, to see the other one check on him and I shoot him in the head.

“NOW!” Johnny rolls over and fires like a maniac to kill the other guard. Carlos runs over firing at the windows. I jump down with my Shot gun, and my Silenced 9mm.


Boss Wale’s mansion, Hall way.

Johnny and Carlos got in through the broken windows, “You ok Meu Amigo?” “Yeah” Johnny said, Johnny leaded aghast the wall as Carlos pointed his gun around the area, He did a hand gesture.

Three men with hand guns came down the stairs.

“DON’T MESS WITH THE WALE!” The said firing, Johnny run firing killing one of them and wounding another. Carlos used his saw off to fire at one of the guys and blow his chest up.

“Go and check the back entrance I’ll take care off up stairs.” Johnny said, Carlos nodded. Johnny run up. They had to make sure Mark got out safely.

I run with the shotgun, in my hands. I notice a guard with nothing more than a baseball bat.

“COME ON YA MOTHER ****ER’S!”

He yells I run and use the back of the shot gun to hit him in the jaw breaking it. I run up, in the kitchen. The door’s open, some one close’s it I notice it’s Carlos as he nods. I climb from the window up to the top one, I see the wale,

He’s bald EXTREMLY fat, and lying on a bed, I thought that was a Joke, I drop the shotgun, As I notice Michael Puerto with an M16, I look at the wale again neither notice I’m inside, I aim with my gun for Michael’s head,


I pull the trigger, the bullet goes passed the window into Michael’s skull. His blood spatters as he falls down. I kick the window open,


“ZANO SAYS HI!”

The Wale looks at me having a heart attack he can’t suffer as I shoot him twice in the head. I leave the gun here. Opening the door. Notching Johnny.


“QUICKLY PASS ME AN UZI!” he throws on and I catch it.

“Let’s go!”

We run down, I yell Carlos as he runs out. It’s been 2 minutes, 1 more wasted and we’ll send our last moments in the electric chair. The front door’s open and I notice so is the gates,

“FASTER,!”

I run with my face ready to come off, and my feet about fall off, We reach the car, Zano lent it to us, I open the door and on the wheel Johnny and Carlos come rushing and the collapse on there seats.

I put start the car and hit the gas.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Nine





Nicole City, Zano’s mansion, 8:25:


Me, Johnny and Carlos get out the car. Carlos holds his sawn-off. Johnny an Uzi and me another Uzi. The gates open. The guard who annoyed me the last time walks over.

“Well look who it is!” He has bruises on his face, I aim my Uzi at him and he walks back.

“Ok man, take it easy…..b-buddy!” I hit him across the head with it. The Butler opens the door.

“Nice to see you again Mr. Wade, Mr. Zano is here but Master Buenos would like to speak to your two friends.” I nod

“Where do they go?” I ask, “Just down the hall!” Thanks.

“See ya later man” Johnny says, Lending his hand, our hand shake, a normal high five then hit the fists and I give a down low. I walk up to the door knocking on it. Zano opens the door. I open it hearing opera music.

“There’s my boy!” Zano says. “Take a seat.” I sit down, feeling the leather, “Who killed her!” I say with my fist holding down waiting to know when he’ll say.

“Mark, listen you did a tremendous favour to me. BUT I must be honest.” He says like a business man. “I don’t know.”

“WHAT!” I say when I think it and slam my fist on the desk “ Calm down……..”

“DON’T YOU TELL ME TO CALM DOWN I KLLED THE WHALE I CAN KILL YOU!” I say reaching for the Uzi.

“I know someone who does.”, “Who?” I ask “ I can’t say, come by tomorrow. You’ve done your job.”

“When should I come.” I ask. “Any time, let’s say Nine-ish.”

I nod and walk out. “Tony’s not done with your friends.” I look over, “What’s he doing?”

“Raping them” Zano says with a smirk I pull out the gun, “WHAT’S HE DOING”

He starts chuckling. “He’s talking to them for ****’s sake.” Zano gets up and walks to the fridge and gets out some wine,

“You know this bottle Mark?, This is what my good friend in Sicily made for me. Purely crafted from his own feet. Just for good ol’ Franco.” He says pouring it to a glass, and offering it to me.

“Take some.” I drink, all wine tastes the same to me. I’ll just be polite. “It’s good.”

The phone rings, Zano picks it up.

“Hello?, oh hey ….. Yeah don’t worry they’ll be dealt with. Oh yea that “matter” you wanted to be dealt with? Don’t worry I cleaned it up. See ya later.” he hangs up.

I hear Carlos screaming his head off,

“Bye”, I say to Zano. Walking down.

“FILHA DA PUTA, BONNE DITA!”, “What’s wrong?” I ask Carlos

“Oh that dick head wanted us to chop off a head. While asking where we’ll be tomorrow. Wanted us to do a job.” Carlos says,

“Even Johnny.”, “Yep.” Johnny comes out. “

Let’s go, I’ve had enough” I say.

“Did you find out who……” Johnny asked

“No.”,

“Oh”

We leave I need some wrest. Tomorrow, Tomorrow that son of a ***** will die


Tomorrow.





Mean while:

Zano was sitting down on his chair snorting a bit of cocaine, When Tony walked in.
“Did they say no?” Zano asked snorting a bit more.

“Yep,”, “Good” Zano said. Putting the dope away.

“See ya tomorrow!” Zano patted Tony on the back turning off the light.

[Darthphere]

Finally got a chance to read this. Good stuff. I really like it. I really like the Mark character and you do detective stories very well. Keep me informed.:up:

[SpideyLad]

Not bad at all.I like this alot. Keep up the good work!

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Nine

New Year‘s Eve ,Nicole City, The main Highway,8:30 pm




Johnny was in his car, The night before him and his two friends killed a major crime figure called “The Wale” to help the more powerful Zano Family. None of them wanted to do it but they had to. Or they would be killed.

But he had to fight Nicole City traffic, Ironic on New Year’s eve you would think some people would walk. But not in this town, A Renegade, A Dark Hawk, Hobo Nitro any one could shoot you and no one would no, or care.

Johnny, bored as hell thought of his family down in L.A., They would be parting, But Johnny couldn’t afford a flight and no way could he drive to California. All he wanted was to be with his Mom, Brother, Sister and Step Dad, His father worked down in Nicole. He was transferred there when Johnny was Six, But He died when Johnny was 15.


The family needed money so Johnny went down to Nicole to find a job, And found the Nitros, made money stealing, he never killed any one. There he got caught but found help with his friend Mark.

Now him and Mark made a pack that either Mark (Alone) would bring redemption to a city with no hope or Mark and Johnny would do it.

An hour later:

Johnny arrived at his shabby apartment and went up the stairs, opened the door,

There he heard a voice, “Late on the rent”

“WAIT!…..” Jonny said to himself, Then the door hit him on the head and he was quickly grabbed by a man wearing a uniform, and thrown to his own ground

“Freeze!” Johnny heard pulling out an Uzi, Then noticed Chief Blunt

“How are you doing boy?” Johnny spat out his blood

“YOU!” Johnny Fired his Uzi missing Brunt’s lackey and Blunt got out his rifle and shot Johnny on the shoulder.

He then got Johnny’s arms and handcuffed them,

“Jonathan Slater, You are arrested for the murders of The Wale, Tony Delfino, several guards. And Smuggling……..”

“W-w-whaaaaaaaaa…..whaaaaaaaatttt” Johnny said,

“Oh yeah your Latin friend told us, he’s going home free.”
“W-w-w-whaat about MarkKKKKKKK?????????”

“He’s dead”

Johnny heart beated as fast as it could,

“Y-Y-YOU BAASSSSSSSSTTARRRRRDDDDDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS…….

Johnny said going unconscious.

“Get him out, he’ll enjoy his last 3 years.”

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Ten

One giant Punch
in the face


Nicole City, New Year’s eve, 7:30pm


I arrive at Zano’s mansion, I drove with a old Harley, A dark Hawk threatened me, with it so I got out a crowbar and hit him in the face breaking his nose, I told him to stop being a Dark Hawk or I’ll take the Harley, He said the “Take the Harley” so I did.

The gates open, I look around as I park the Harley, that guard gives a smirk I give him the finger, I see Zano waiting outside, and I notice a tall Blond guy, looks like a lumber jack. A bit like That Russian guy from Rocky IV.

I walk over there

“MARK!” I hear Zano yell, telling me to come here, I do walking up the stairs,

“Mark, You’ve been such a good boy!” He says, with a giant smirk. Something’s up.

“What’s’ going on?”

“NOTHING! How can you think that my boy?”

He says I reach for Julia, But then something that feels like a concrete block hits my back. I scream, the pain oh god……..it’s unreal.

I fall to the floor, I see the Russian guy. I try and get up but he starts crushing my hand, OH MOTHER OF GOD! MY BONE FEELS LIKE IT’S BEEN DESTORYED!





Zano smirks getting a titanium baseball bat. And hits across my face……………

Zano’s garage, AKA Torture room:





I’m in total darkness………..



…………………..Nothing but darkness……………………




“You think he’s awake?” I hear the voices I can only recognise Zano’s

“If he is, then I would be breaking him” Says a normal voice, dark voice but has an essence of someone who knows a lot, been though a lot but still in his prime.

I wake up


……..ughhh……..

I see a blur, Zano’s out line appears he isn’t wearing a blaze just a shirt and tie, I see The Russian guy as well as a short guy dressed like a samurai, and in the middle someone sitting on a chair wearing a black shirt and jeans, has really long hair.
He comes closer

“Wake up Marky.” He says hitting me with a karate chop oh god that hurts, I see him more clearer he has scars on his face and brown eyes

“Good!” He says and does a skilled kick to my face……….****!………

“I’m goanna exercise for a bit, hit him with my full power.” He says, he looks familiar

“Sure.” Zano says picking up the baseball bat, I look I’m tied to the chair looking up



“W-w-w-hy?” I say to Zano mumbling.

“Why? Well that man over there is The Maker. The most powerful man in Nicole a young man of many talents he says he has a beef with you from 5 years ago. You suffered but he thinks you haven’t suffered enough.”

Zano hit’s me with the baseball bat. To the nuts then to the chest, then to the knee and the shoulder, doing it reputably, for about a minute

There very bruised but nothing to bad.

“Wh------aat do you want?” I say with the blood coming out of my mouth, I notice the maker doing press ups and sit ups,

“I don’t want any information, dope, Charon I just want you to suffer…….. Then die.” He says I spit blood on Zano shirt. He laughs

“Piece of ****” he says Hiting me with the end of the bat.

“Hey Zack, come on ya know ya want to.” He says, That Japenish guy walks over getting out his sword and starts cutting my chest.



OH GOOOOOOOODDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN’T TAKE MUCH MORE. Arms, legs, oh god he cuts me in the face

“Hey, not to much I want him to BURN!” The Maker says, “Zacko” puts his blade in the handle.


“Longo!” Ray says doing push ups, The Russian guy comes, punches me once in the rips, probably breaks all of them

The Maker get’s up getting out two knifes, and starts juggling them up in the air.

He throws one on the chair left leg of the chair, right next to my leg then throws the right one in the center of my leg,

OH GOD! Only now I notice that my jacket and shirt have been burnt in an incense lava what ever.

“Wh---wherrrrrree’’’’’’’sss the gunnnnnnnn????” I say.

“Oh You mean this one?” The Maker shows me and then throwing it to the right making sure I’ll never get it.

“Over there.” He walks up to me

“I’m pretty sure you remember this, but Six years ago hell nearly seven You and a bunch of other cops busted a drug deal, Blunt and the other guy shot my friends, but you didn’t shoot your “Hostage”. Why?”

“Becaussssssssseeeee……it’s thee llllllaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww……wwwwww”

I say remembering hell. The Maker chuckles

“THAT WAS ME!” he says slapping me, then punching me knocking the chair off the ground

****! That hurt

“2 years in Prison.” He says walking over to a the place that burning scent is comeing from and getting The horse shoe maker

“THIS IS FOR TWO ****ING YEARS! BECAUSE I WAS POWERFUL EVEN BACK THEN! BUT THEN SONNY CARLO TOOK IT OVER AND I HAD TO START FROM SCRATH!”
He get’s it and burns it on my chest




FFFFUUUUU********************!!!!!!!!!

“Oh yeah, and you know who killed your little blond who probabley sucked another guys dinky, and might’ve faked her organisms in bed?”

“w---hooooo!!!!!!!???”

“He’s in the Nicole City wood, on the left corner. Proably Cutting up some other people.!”

Zano, and the bodyguards start putting oil all over the place and the Maker, puts a thin line halfway near the chair from the wall.

“By the way, My name’s Ray.” Ray the maker, says and walks over

“BURN BABY BURN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Ray says walking off and closing the door and throwing a light match into the fuel


I look at Julia.



I’m sorry Dad, Mum, Johnny, Carlos, God, and Sandy





I failed you………

I wait till the fire reaches……….

It’s only a matter of time.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Eleven




Nicole City, Zano’s garage AKA Torture room 10:55pm


Nearly 4 hours, nothing’s happened, I fell asleep for a bit, the fires all around the place, but something stops the fire from reaching my battered body but it get’s closer every minute


Oh god, eh atleast I’ll live till the end of 2005 at this rate, I would like to move. But my hands are tied and useless probably broken A knife in my leg that I can’t get out. Bleeding everywhere…………………………..





………………………


2 Minutes later, I hear Shot gun fire as well as Uzi fire but the shotgun makes the last sound., Someone shoots the door open it was locked. And opens the door, I can bareley make it out but it looks like Carlos.

“MARK!”

He yells out running towards me pulling out my knife ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

“Sorry”

He says cutting the ropes out, he cuts all four and offers his hand,

“Let’s go.”

“w---wa..itttt..” I crawl over to Julia my left arm’s useless but I manage.
I stand up OH GOD, Think of Sandy THINK OF SANDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Ok Co--ommme onnnnnnn”

I mumble limping my body tries and so does my mind. But the pain is to great, I collapse halfway from the exit and the chair.

“Aui, Amricanos.” Carlos says,

Picking me up with two hands and running, It’s a bit of a windy night, not good for my wounds. We get up near a 1950’s Mustang. One of Zano’s, I notice closing my eyes that a few Guards are looking around the side

“D-rrrivvvve.”

I say to Carlos, Starting the engine. And driving like a maniac past the gates. I hear a few gun shots but nothing major.

“Where do you wanna hide out?”

Carlos says in his Brazilian accent

“Go the wood I haveeeee to finish somethingggggggggggg.” I say spitting out blood,

“Ok, bte I have some cloths for you on that bag, might keep you warm.”

I look in the bag there’s a white T-Shirt and blue checked shirt. I look at the beck of the car. They have a first aid kit, I take it, I cover up my leg first, then my arm. All over my chest, the pain feels better but I’m not ready to take on even 12 year old.

I put a band aid over my eye. Then I put those cloths on. I grab Julia and put her in my pocket.

“Where’s Johnny?” I ask Carlos

“He’s got arrested.”

"WHAT!"

“Yeah the cops tried to arrest me as well and said that he squealed , but I put holes in them the size of the tank and told me who REALLY squealed. Apparently Zano, The Maker and the cops made a truce to kill you. And your friends.”

“You need to hide, Make friends and Hide”

“I already have, Mark.”


Nicole City, Belvile Wood, 11:50pm


About an hour passes it’s 11:49, I have to kill this guy in 2005 or 2006, it doesn’t matter.

“Wait here, I have to take him on by my self”

I
say to Carlos, he understands taking out his sawn off and pointing it around., Julia is in my pocket ready to kill the moron, This place is creepy, something out of a horror movie.

I walk around ready to punch the guy and brake every bone in his face I see a made with a green shirt and shades, I walk up to him

“Are you Ok?” I say still mumbling a bit

He shades all off, oh god some one cut his eyes off, I look around, a guy with his hands cut off another who was decapitated another gang member with no legs OH ****!

I hear foot steps, a guy with really bad breath smells like a rotten tomato only exhumed, I turn and kick him in the stomach

OH MOTHER OF GOD! His face it looks burnt his scream sounds like a squeal, He stands up right,

“Do you know what this is?”

He says, oh god, he has black teeth, a purple tounge and only a jagged hexagon represents human skin and an eye ball.

“Charon, AN over dose of Charon”

His thought is half burnt I notice butcher knife

“It didn’t just make me lose my looks oh no. It MADE ME LOSE SANITY!”

He firmly tries and stab me with the blade I dodge it but barley and grab his face, feels like a football and punch him with my good hand. He drops the knife and tries strangle me I kick him in the balls, And put my foot on his neck.

“Did you kill Sandy Hunt?”

“I kiiklllll lot’s of people IT’S FUN!!!!!!!”

“DID YOU KILL SANDY HUNT!”

“Was she a Blond?”

His answer has to be yes, I kick his face but does a swift cut across my bad leg OH CRAP!

He does another cut to my chest, not he’s strangling me

“Oh yeah I l
oved to stab her stomach, oh god IT WAS BETTER THAN SEX!”

He strangles me tighter trying to make a smile, I kick him as hard as I can he gets up. I pick up Julia and point at him. He’s stunned

“Stand still.” I shoot him in the thought, he tries to get some air, I give him a smirk and shoot him in the white eye.

That felt good.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Twelve



I walk past the forest. I did lot’s of people favours, friends families all his victims have been given justice. I hear fire works. He was killed on the 1st second of 2006 emph

I walk to Carlos.

“I’m done”

He nods and gets in,

“Where do we go?”

“Drop me off in the station.”

“How much money have you got?” I check, only 5 dollars

“Can I borrow about $200?”

Carlos gets his wallet and gives me four 50’s

“You owe me.” He drives off








Nicole City, Nicole Station, New Year’s day 00:27am.

We arrive at the station

“See ya, I’ll pay you back I promise.”

Carlos nods as I walk to the, A middle aged woman is there

“Hi what do you want?”

“The next train or bus or what ever to New Jersey.”

“Let me see, We have a train coming in right now it’s a four hour trip, would you like coach or…….”

“Coach”

“Ok That’ll be $54.89”

I give her the money. I sit down, the train doesn’t come for another 10 minutes. I do nothing for those 10 Minutes, I look around only a few people, I’m not surprised. I get in it.

Sandy’s dead, Johnny’s in jail, Some of the most powerful crime lords in the country want me dead. The cops hate me. I think about all watching the train go by. I look at my scars, I can’t get to a Doctor until I reach Jersey. I don’t know what I’m going to do



The radio comes on, they put “I shot the sheriff” on from Bob Mareley.

I only have to wait only to wait ad pray that I can win.To people, this was a begining of a new year, to me it was just another day.

Somewhere there are people wh are happy, people who are dead, people who are suffering, People who are fighting. But there are days when something big happens.

One day something big will happen in Nicole.

Where people will be safe and no Corruption will be to strong…….

One day Nicole City will be known for something else in school’s, TV, Media and everywhere else.

One day……………………..







End of Life of Death

[Karem-Knight]

Epilogue:
Nitro’s

The Nitro’s, They were a huge gang across Nicole, But they were split in two, “The Blue’s” who were more of a vigilante group. And “The Purples” Who were the gang type of gang The blue’s normally fought with.

But both were in war with the Renegades, But The purple made a pact with the Dark Hawks and the blues lay on the bottom of the food chain even thou most of the Nitro’s got dragged into the blue’s.


Ganton was the base of all The Nitro’s. But was normally filled with blood being so close to the slums that it is. But Ganton had the most Gang violence with The Renegades having more influence and the Dark Hawks in the other side of the City.

But the purples had there normal meet up down in Bellville while, the majority of the Blue’s met up at Ganton.

Today all The Blue’s had a meeting.


Nicole City, January 2nd , Midday, Ganton, 2006

John Wood, One of the main leaders of the Blue Nitro’s stood at the back alley of Ganton He was a tall lean blond man. Talking to both African Americans and White men, wearing Blue ****s or Sweaters

“Hello my fellow men, We’ve been known to long for a typical gang and the Renegades have been making ties with The Zano family and some other guy from the top, nick named “The psycho with friends.” he said like a patriot

“Guy’s I think it’s time we made some allies out side Nicole. Our “Operations” are unsuccessful and we are getting our asses kicked by the minute……..”

“Could that be because you don’t have any money?” said a man in a normal cloths

“Who the f*** said that.” A Ntiro said getting his Uzi out and a few following.

A man gout out his hand gun and yelled out

“La-li-lay-la-loo” Just then a car pulled by. A renegade car and several police officers nearly a 2 dozen came. Out numbering the Nitro’s in the alley

“You are all under arrest.” said the cop

Then the Renegades got out their guns and fired at the Nitro’s killing 3 of them

“Come now or we will fire!” Said the detective, All the Nitro’s gout out there guns but they all faced about 100 bullets in them, within 3 minutes all 20 of those Nitros had been killed. Even John Wood.

“Let’s get out of here.” The detective said.

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Thanks guy's but I'm doing another fan fic, but keep this thread alive because I want to write the third and final story knowing that people are waiting.

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Overall, the story is decent. There's still improvement on grammar/spelling to be made, but this is a fan fic, not a published novel, so don't worry too much. Just keep that in mind for whatever you do next.

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Stop peddling your filth to us!

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I was bored...........

Pier 23


Nicole City, Portland Harbour, Pier 23, June 19th 2002


Pier 23,

The place of business with two warehouses, One belonging to “The Truce” and the other to the Whale, this afternoon, Henry DeVito would do a cocaine deal with The Whale’s men and would be his break away from the Delfino brothers.

He was sitting down in his chair waiting as Michael Puerto, The Wale’s right hand man walked into the room.

“Hello Henry good to see ya!” He said shaking hands.

“Hey, You’re goanna love this straight from Bolivia!” He said walking to the crate showing the dope.

“Pretty good.” Mike said nodding his head, and doing a hand gesture, a Henry noticed a Van nearby and 3 guys with shot guns coming in.


“HEY Mike what’s happening?”

“Don’t you think I know what’s happening dumb ass?” Mike hit Henry in the face

“I KNOW YOU’RE WITH ZANO AND THE TRUCE!” He kicked Henry making him fall to the ground

“ANY I KNOW ABOUT “THE MAKER!” He kicked him again.

Two other guys came in, the other 3 waiting for the order.

“Take it in.” Mike said pointing to the cocaine.

“Sure!” they did so.

“When you’re done, Put his body in the van!” He yelled, They picked Henry up

“THE MAKER, ZANO AND THE YAKUZA WILL GET YOU MOTHER ****Errr!!!!!!” Henry was shot at the same time by all the guards and again and again and again, Till they were pleased.

No one waned to know about it.

[Karem-Knight]

Corruption: Part III
BLOODSHED


By
Tom Ebbs/Karem-Knight



























Since New Years Day 2006:

“The Truce” all huge crime ring leaders negotiate every 6 months, Arranged a meeting, Ray the Maker, Don Zano, Kenji Kasen, Jizzy B, Spike and several under boss’s agreed that attack one will be an attack on them all.

Johnny Slater receives bail from prison from an un known sender, Carlos receives news that Mark Wade was killed in Los Angles.

Ray the Maker finds out about his dead cousin who was the serial killer known simply as Charon which Mark Wade killed.

The Zano family have lost most of their territory in Chigago which only leaves Las Vegas and Nicole City as their strong point as well as small places in New York.

Ray the maker increases drug deals around most of Portland Harbour.


Johnny Slater receives a later telling him to rejoin the Nitros, signed by Mark Wade.





































Prologue












Nicole City, May 7th 2006, Pike Creek




Pike Creek was a small neighborhood in Nicole City, though not very safe and recommended like all of the city, in there was Bill Ward a small time crook, do anything for cash waiting in his car reading the newspaper, Crime had gone up by 5% in Nicole City in the last 5 months the city was in a verge of a huge riot worse then the ones in LA 14 years ago.


Bill read the article, as he left it on the floor, and went into the store he got it in, He calmly looked by, Only one person besides him and the man in the counter he waited till they left and held tight to the revolver

“Hello Sir may I help you?” said the Indian man, Bill got the gun out

“GIVE ME ALL THE ****ING CASH!”

He said looking out the window some one saw them and ran to the phone, The Indian man tried to get the cash machine open, Bill fired the gun in the air near the man panicking even more, causing the man to drop the cash.


“HURRY UP!” Bill yelled as he saw flash of Blue and red, The Indian man gave it to him $300 Bill took the money and ran like hell as he saw two squad cars.

“FREEZE!” The cop yelled out, Bill put his hand up, 4 cops against one Bill had no choice, he thought he knew what was going to happen, but the next thing he knew a cop shot him in the head.

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Chapter One


Nicole City May 7th 2006, Ray the Maker’s Mansion 7:00pm

Ray sat on his couch drinking some scotch throwing knifes at a darts board, watching TV, he wore his jeans and shirt with his he was focusing on something recently his drug trades have been sabotaged which was half his income the other half was extortion from other business around the city.

But the drugs were more dominant of the two he kept looking at the TV, his business were heavily in danger, Just then his phone rang. He answered it.

“Hello, Um Sir we have some bad news.”

“OH LET ME GUESS IT WAS SABOTAGED!” Ray said yelling

“Sir please calm down…….”

“YOU THINK THAT I’M GONNA ****ING CALM DOWN, MY MONEY RODRIGO MY MONEY!” Ray gulped his scotch

“We managed to get one of the men.”

“Alive?” Ray said calmly

“No we had to…….” Ray threw the scotch

“FOR GOD’S SAKE YOU MORON WE COULD’VE HAD A LEAD, THAT’S IT I’VE HAD IT, I SEND 10 MEN AND THEY CAN’T TAKE 5, 20 CAN’T TAKE 5 30! CAN’T TAKE 5, I’VE HAD IT ROD!”

Ray hung up the phone.

“ZACK!” He yelled out his body guard came in.

“I want you to get our friends in Chicago to kill Rodrigo, I trusted him with imports in Jersey, LA Philly and now Chicago, he better be a corpse by tomorrow you hear me?” Zacko nodded.

Ray sat down, His butler came in and started to clean up the mess

“You know in my country that’d bad luck to break glass.” Ray got out his revolver and fired it out the window.

“Shut up and get out!” The Butler walked quickly as he almost fainted.


He checked the news paper and saw a new headline about Chief Blunt moving up to Commisner, Ray gave a smirk, He could use another powerful friend, Of course if he wants the threat eliminated he would need the Truce, The highest ranking crime rings of Nicole City, He was at the top but he needs the help of quiet a few higher ups, The Zanos, The Yakuza deal with business them selves, Ray gets his money from the Renegades, Dark Hawks and many other under wellings.

He checked his time table The Truce were having another meeting in four days, He put it on the table and knew that no more shipments for another 3 months, He let this one go, He’d worry about it some other time.

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Chapter Two:



Johnny Slater, sat in his apartment once a month he would get a letter from Carlos Marcahdo, it would say a fake name with a fake address, he rested drinking his beer, The police would check up on him daily determined to make sure Mark Wade was alive, because they know if he is the first person he will contact his Johnny.

He was watching TV all the major bad stuff was on the news, never mind of the girl who got raped by the delli, or the man who got shot in the grocery store. They constrained on the tragedies not the mindlessness of some.

Johnny saw male on the floor, 2 of them one American bank of Nicole but there was one that was interesting,

“John Doe” on the letter, Johnny picked it up and tore up the envelope imminently.

Johnny,

this is Mark, I know you wouldn’t join the Nitros, and that’s ok, I just want to let you
That I’m the one sabotaging all of Ray’s drug deals and that something big will happen, And I’ll need your help, Tear this letter up once you’ve read it.


Mark


Johnny tore it up and it put it in the trash, He got jacket on and walked fast using the fire escape to get to the car park, He opened the door and thirsted in starting the engine and drove


An hour later:
Nicole city, Industrial estate.

Johnny got out the car, Carlos was still in the same place was a week ago. He parked his near his RV and knocked on the door.

Carlos opened it,


“Johnny?“ he looked surprised, without his shades on, Johnny saw his scars

“Carlos, listen I got a letter from Mark”

“Shut up and get in.”


Carlos grabbed Johnny and pulled him into the RV, Johnny stayed and Carlos made sure no one else was there before he opened the door, and put his shades on.

“Anyway, What happened?” Carlos said

“I got a letter from Mark, apparently some thing “big will happen.”

Johnny said rushing, Carlos sat down and got out his Sawn-off,

“I’m goanna need this I know it, By the way did you hear?”

“About what?”

“Blunt’s getting promoted to Chief.”

“I thought he was already a chief.”

“That was his nick name, Anyway, he’s goanna come looking for us, And Nicoles goanna become more of a **** hole.”

Johnny punched the wall

“****!”

“Relax man, We’ll get out of this.”

Carlos pat Johnny on the back, Johnny looked at the Sawn off., And picked it up, it wasn’t loaded.

“Do you think he’s coming back?” Carlos said


“Defiantly” Johnny said

“He not stopping those drug deals if he has something else up his sleeve.”

Johnny got out the RV.



“I think you better move.” Johnny said getting in his car and driving, Carlos waved and shut the door of the RV.

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Chapter Three


Nicole City, Johnson Bridge, 9:00pm May 8th:


In the traffic of the biggest bridge in Nicole City, Which connected it to another state was a mysterious man riding Motorcycle, He had his helmet on, He wore a black leather jacket and blue jeans he always looked around as soon as traffic stopped. He was constrained on the road fully, As soon as traffic started up he drove.


This man was obviously up to something, but not on the bridge but at it’s location, Something on his mind, he obviously carried a gun, especially in Nicole, As soon as he reached Harwood he became more paranoid, Harwood the place where The River opf June was located, Where The Zanos keep an eye on things, He continued his drive becoming more and more focused on that one thing on his mind.


An hour later, Driving through Nicole he reached a place called The Slums, He stopped there and went out, Opened the door and went in,


He didn’t panic but he kept his helmet on and got his bag out and put a shotgun of his in his bag with some ammo, In that bag was money, he zipped it out, in this neighborhood if anyone saw green they would ran and get it.


The man went back to his bike and continued after passing the Slums he reached Linking West the district had lots of flats in it, there he stopped in a certain building looking over his shoulder, No cops around, besides in this city They would be busy getting money, He took off his helmet.


Home sweet home.

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Chapter Four

Nicole City, Linking West, Johnny Slater’s Apartment 8:30 pm


I look around me No one hear I leave my I keep hold of my bag and Helmet, I got to be careful in this city before someone tries to steal it. I walk up the stairs to the Buzzer
“Hello?” Johnny says, I answer it.

“It’s me” I whisper

“M….” Johnny nearly blurts out my name but doesn’t

“Come on up!”


He buzzes I open the door still looking around, No one’s suspicious I walk up slowly I see Johnny out of his room telling me to hurry up I do willingly, I reach the floor and he grabs me into the room.

“**** man!” Johnny says with his Berretta in his hands

“You got tired of the revolver?”

“Look, I had Blunt a bunch of Dark hawks, Cops, The Zano family keeping tabs on me, The Maker sending men to beat the **** out of me, And you expect me to be over the moon!?”

I sit down,

“Johnny, Don’t worry about a thing.”


“Look I don’t even know if you’re really you, Hell Carlos told me you were found dead in LA!”

I get a cigarette and light up, the smoke fills my mouth, I take it out to speak.

“There was no body in Zano’s garage, the guy who Ray said killed Sandy is found dead, I’m throwing his drugs into the ocean, If he knew I was alive the feds or the cop would hunt me down.”

Johnny still stands I know his next question.

“And who ere these guy who helped you out?”


“They were mercenaries, If they were the same people they would be here right now, I gave them ¾ of the money, The other quarter is being used for a “Plan””


“What is this “plan”?”

“You’ll find out soon.”

I get up and take out another puff out of the cig.

“Mark tell me!” Johnny yells I turn around

“If I told you, you would go berserk, Trust me.”


I walk around for a bit, This place doesn’t even look different

“Thanks for getting me out of jail by the way” Johnny says, I turn over

“You would’ve done it for me right?” I take another puff of my cigarette and look out the window to see what’s going on, Bike’s still there, but I got to be careful, I turn around,

“Meet me at Belvile Park, Downtown, Bring Carlos over the Industrial estate is right next to there” Saying to Johnny he nods,

“Don’t drag me into deeper **** though.”

I turn around.

“Don’t worry.” I walk out the building and head down stairs, I get out, A bit warm, but not saying much in this city, I get on the bike, Helmet on.

I start the engine, hand on the handle, I go past I look at this city nothings change.

But it will.

[Karem-Knight]

Chapter Five

Nicole City, Midland police department 6:10pm




Ray the maker entered a building, the worst cops imaginable in a building, A crime lord allowed to walk there with his two body guards beside him, Some even recognized him, But he was looking for one person in particular, The Chief of Nicole City police Detective Jonathan Blunt.


Ray walked the offices with his casual cloths on and went to the desk,

“Excuse me miss, Is John Blunt in today?”

“Err yeah He’s in.”

“I know the office”

Ray said walking in to the elevator. Pressing on the top floor, He checked the time, This time tomorrow The Truce will be talking things out, Ray still thought about where Mark Wade was, Ray was strangely scared, Mark was angry, focused, determined and worst of all ready.


Ray reached the floor and walked out, Zack and Luke right next to him. He saw Blunt drinking a cup of coffee looking at a piece of paper,

“Wait here” He said to his body guards


He walked into the office

“Jonathan how are you?” Ray said smiling, Blunt looked up angrily

“Oh god you!” Ray was surprised

“What are you doing here?”

“I’m sorry what?”

“You heard me,”

Ray chuckled

“John, I’ can’t belive this, having a bad day. But how can you, you get money from every pimp in town, get laid by some hookers, get some of that white stuff with a little of this!” Ray got out a blue powder and looked away.

“What do you want?”

“My shipments are getting sabotaged, And now sine you’re……..”

“WOAH WOAH!” Blunt said, Ray was getting angry.

“You now that I’m chief that I have TIME to do all that for you.” Blunt said standing up


“Let me remind you who…….”


“No let me remind YOU who YOU’RE dealing with!” Ray looked around

“A dirty cop who would still be wearing uniform if it wasn’t for me!”

“Yeah you and people LIKE you are the reason that cop like me were there.”

“It’s Nicole here, crime is like our Statue of Liberty.”


“BUT IT WON’T WHEN I’m IN CHARGE!” Ray started to chuckle

“Yeah right, you sniff cocaine in front of murder victims for god’s sake, Don’t do this Johnny boy, No one likes to get on Ray’s bad side.”

“Well, since hardly anyone knows about you, But wouldn’t the feds like to know about you and Zano?”

Ray paused standing up

“Is that a THREAT!”

Blunt raised his posture

“You tell me you do it a lot.”

Ray smirked and went back

“If you come here again the FBI will be on your house like that.”

Ray gave a thumbs up sign and walked out.





An hour later:

Detective Blunt finished another day of hard work now, he was on his way home, he left his car so decided to take a cab, It was a rainy day, even for May, but Blunt called for a cab, surprisingly one pulled over immanently.

“Hello sir.” The cab driver said in a dark voice

“HI!” Blunt said,

“Could you take me to 9th street, On Midland heights”

“Of course” They drove off, Blunt was suspicious, Something was up, They drove but Blunt seemed paranoid

“Are you ok sir?” The cab driver said.

“Yeah it’s just something on my mind.”

Just then the cab driver pulled over,

“Why are we stopping?”

Then someone familiar came into the cab closing and opening the door.

“Hello Johnny!”

“YOU!”

Blunt got his gun out but Ray stabbed his hand with his knife

“DRIVE! PORTLAND HARBOUR! IT’LL TAKE 2 MINIUTES!”

The Cab driver speeded away,

“So Blunty, How are you? YA PRICK!”

Ray hit him with his elbow and smacked his head on the opposite seat.

“To bad you’re not going to be chief huh!?”

Ray said again getting his silenced Berretta out and shooting it at him.


“Stop here.” Ray said, The cab driver did so, Ray got out and gave him $200

“Throw him in the river, don’t worry he’ll be in Chicago by the time they find out.”

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Chapter Six

Nicole City, May 8th, Tombridge Nicole Subway line 6:00pm


I walk out the subway looking over my shoulder keeping my head down, it’s crowded and I have to make sure no cop sees me, In this part of Tombridge Ray owns the whole place he owns places everywhere in Midland, Trinity, Tombridge, and Harwood.


The people I’m looking for are all over the place but I have this is their main place I just need to get out of here, I walk in a fast pace a woman comes up to me

“Would you like………” By the time she finishes I’m halfway to the door, I make sure no one can see me they can be suspicious that it’s me but they can’t be sure.

I’m out the door Taxi’s all over the place I get in one that say’s Kauffman’s Cabs, Ray doesn’t own a share of that but he does of the Nicole line. Some of his “Soldiers” even work in some so I have to be careful.

Kauffman’s is owned by the Nicole Yakuza so I’m safe,


“Where to?” He asks

“Memor Drive please.”

“Sure thing”


I sit down and relax I’ll only be going threw Renegade and Nitro territory and The Nitro’s are who I’m looking for.

A few minutes later he reaches it, I pay him about 20.

“Thanks!”

I say and walk off.

This street is pretty poor, I light up my cigarette and walk around, Not many hookers the Nitros probably ran em out of the place, But I don’t see enough back up for them, If they wanted The Renegades or some of Zano’s workers could force em out without lifting a finger, I notice the place, It’s got a lot of Blue decorations the Nitro’s trade mark, I walk in.



A guard goes up to me

“What are you doing here?” He says stopping me

“Can I go inside please?”

He looks at me, this is rare when some one ASKS to go in there

“Get out of here” He says pushing me I walk up to him.

“Look can I go in speak to the guy in charge,”

He’s getting ready to get his gun out from the back, I grab his arm pull it out elbow his chin and grab the gun, I point it at him.

“I’m Mark Wade, can I please go in.”

The guy stands up and knocks on the door, I give his gun back.

“Hey can I let this guy in?”

“Who is it?”

“He says he’s Mark Wade.”

They open the door, and tell me to come in, It’s a bit dark in here, look’s like a big room for people who can’t afford a lot of stuff, But a few members of the Nitros they all have their guns out one even has a shotgun.

The leader goes up to me

“Who did you just say you are?”

“Mark Wade.”

The guy chuckles

“What you resurrected yourself from that shoot out in LA?”

I sigh

“If the Maker was out for me and I was busting his deals wouldn’t you think I would pretend I was dead?”

The guy pushes me“

Prove it”

“Remember when they found The Maker’s cousin with a gold bullet threw his head?”

I get out Julia and show them my four bullets left I pull one out.

“This is the same type of bullet that was used.”

I put it back in the gun and put Julia back in my pocket.

“That still doesn’t prove it.”

I sigh, I think for a second

“Look why would I pretend to be Mark Wade in front of Nicole’s most wanted vigilantes when The Maker and Zano want me as a corpse?”

He looks at me, He’s convinced

“Was it you who pulled all those……….?”

I know what he’s goanna say and I answer it.

“Yes”

I look over, They all crowd round.

“Look I came here because I need your help.”


“For what?”


I look over again

“You joined this gang because you were tired of our city being butchered, Being America’s disgrace, Well now I want to help you bring down The big leagues.”


“What are you intending?”

“You know about The Truce?”

“I know of it not about it.”

“It’s the leaders of the biggest crime rings in Nicole, The Maker is the most powerful of them, And it consists of The Mafia, The Yakuza, Dark Hawks, Renegades all their leaders and other captains all meet up, They all discuss issues now, Their next meeting his in 2 days, I have a bag full of weapons for some and two vans are coming to my house full of em.”


“You’re goanna go to one of most protected places in Nicole and shoot your way in?”


“Yes.”


“Do what you want you nut case I’m not goanna follow you and get killed!”

He turns around and walks, I know what’ll get him back.

“Ok, But The Nitro’s will be finished, The Maker and The Zano family are closing on your territory and you know they have enough fire power to wipe you out of the city.”

He turns around,


“How many of us would it take?”

“About 30, I’ll tell you the plan you just have to make a deal with me.”

“What?”

“If this doesn’t fail you change the name from Nitro’s to The Redemption and I control the gang."

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Chapter Seven

Nicole City, Midland, Upper road, May 9th Ray The Maker’s mansion 8:00pm


Ray the Maker, sat down relaxed on his chair watching the TV listening to The Rolling Stones song Sympathy for the Devil, He loved the song reminded him of him, His Butler came passing by

“Personally I prefer the Guns N Roses version.” Ray got out his revolver and puller the hammer

“SHUT UP!” He grunted, the butler walked as quickly as he could.


He relaxed and checked the time his shipment was about to come in at 6:30 and that was down south in Midland, He got up.

“Zack, Luke come on we’re going to Portland.”

They got out and prepared the car, Ray got his jacket on and headed down, Zack opened the door of the limo, Ray got in, Ray was one end of the car, Longo the other, Zacko was driving, Ray got out some Charon and injected it in himself

“Agh I needed that. Something about my own creation that fills me with relaxation you know Luke?”

Luke nodded.

Ray got out his cell phone and rung up various traffickers he’s hired in the past to meet him there.

After phoning them he finished by closing his phone. He looked out the window of his limo He was passing the Johnson bridge, He could already see the ship heading for the harbor, Ray didn’t care for Harwood he preferred Midland, He opened the wine box, It had some cocaine and heroin in.

Ray picked the heroin,


“Why the hell is this in the limo?” He said opening the window and throwing it out.

He got the cocaine and kept it on the table he could sell that.


A few minutes later they arrived in the harbor.


Zack parked the limo right next to Pier 23 and Luke opened the door for Ray to get out, He saw some of the vans parked there Zack and Luke stuck close to Ray as they went in and to the dock. A ship was right there, Ray could send an under boss here but he wanted to make sure.


A Columbian came from the boat


“Ola Senhore Ray como esta?”

He put his hand out to shake Ray’s Ray shook the Columbians.

“Good you Matthew?”

He nodded,

Ray told him for them to open the two crates they did so. And soon they put most of the stuff in the trucks, Ray and the lead Colombian talked while they did,


“eh Listen Ray.”

“Yeah?” Ray said lighting a cigarette, The guy looked nervous

“I’ve got some guys who did some **** in South America and they’re in deep **** in their countries hell even in Columbia I was wondering if they could come here and do some stuff for you?”

Ray smiled.

“When they coming?”

“Next week about 20 of them.” Ray chuckled, He has double that just for his house, But these guys could help out in Nicole.

“Sure thing.”


Ray looked around the drug deal went perfectly without a hitch he gave a smirk, He shook the leader’s hand.

“Thank you Matthew I’ll see you next time!”

Ray went to the van drivers

“OK! Which one of you has the biggest truck?”

“Me!” One of them said raising his hand

“I want you to sell them in Midland a guy called Josh will help you, 2nd biggest?”

Another guy put his hand up.

“My friend Tony wait he’s dead I mean errrr Will, He’ll meet you at The Malibu!”

“And you two!” Ray pointed to both of them

“One of you go to Ton bridge and the other to Trinity, I’ll see you guys later.”

Ray went back to his limo Luke opened the door while Zack went into the driver’s seat.

All of a sudden Ray got a phone call from Tony Puerto.

“Hi Tony what happened?”

“This isn’t Tony this is another made guy who ran here when I heard gun shots. Something in the meeting with The Truce.”


“What happened?”

A few seconds passed as the wise guy told Ray,

“WHAT!” Ray said before he hung the phone.


“Mother ****er!” Ray whispered to himself

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Chapter Eight

Nicole City Johnson Bridge May 9th 7:00pm



I’m in a van two others right behind me I have my Ben Bag 8 shots in it, The rest have SMG’s and a few have AK’s but only a few in each van 5 of us in each. Carlos has his Sawn off and another Nitro next to him, We all know what we’re doing we’re all very crazy for doing this. But it’s to late to go back now.


I go over to Carlos with a silenced pistol


“Use this when we get in.” I tell him He nods, He gets what we’re doing, I’m in the first van Johnny in the third and The Nitro’s leader in the middle. I look out the front window, The turning to river of June is right next to us,

“Ok everyone load up.” They all do I nod to the van behind us and can vaguely see someone telling them to load and some one to nod to Johnny.


“Ok duck we don’t want them yelling out straight away.” They all crouch I get behind the seat. 2 minutes later we reach the Zano mansion. Carlos stops on the desk with the guard asking him what the hell he’s doing here.


“Hey buddy what the hell do you want The owner doesn’t want 3 vans here!” The guard says

“This is a gun delivery.”

“What the hell are you an idiot or something? When some one says for the Zano family you don’t take to Zano’s house epically when The Truce is here!”

“Oh I’m sorry I’ll remember that next time!” Carlos picks up the pistol and shots the guard in the head opening the door by grabbing at it. The door opens it’s time.

Mean while:

Don Franco Zano sat down in the meeting, with Ricardo Zano and Tony Puerto his right hand man and son sitting next to him.

With him was Kenji Kasen, a short but dangerous looking Japenish man with sun glasses and his two right hand men Doo Ho Cho and Kyung Tam leaders of The Nicole City Yakuza, Jizzy B official gang leader of the renegades a young African American leader quite intelligent with Renegades right next to him, and Spike The Dark hawk leader he came alone didn’t talk much due to the fact his gang was the weakest here.


They talked about business and how the attacks on Ray’s shipments have affected several other arraignments for the other gangs.


The butler was serving various appetizers, While The Don thinking of switching to a boat fare with security and bribing some of the guards.

In the middle of the sentence a guard with a rifle came in

“Don Franco something’s happened!”

“What!” Zano asked

“Three vans are near the entrance and they just shot the guy on the desk with a silenced pistol.”

“WELL WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR GET THEM YOU ****!” Zano said getting his berretta out

“ZANO!” Kenji said with his thundering voice.

“What is going on!?” Zano pointed his gun at him

“You talk to me again I’ll start a war with you here RIGHT HERE AND THE YAKUZA WILL BE FINISHED SO YOU JUST SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!” Zano said with the gun at Kenji’s face he knew that this will cause problems but the Zano family could crush the Yakuza alone not mention with the help of Ray and the police.




I wait for the guards to come Carlos faced it so when they charge will be ready all 15 of us. I hear the guards coming and the first shot at the other van,

“NOW!” I say kicking the door open, They all fire their SMG’S at the guards, The guards are on the steps with guns and rifles we have the upper hand there are only six of them, Some die straight away some run for the door but we get them in time.

“Let’s go!” I yell firing the shot gun we all run into the mansion, a few more guards come they start fireing but we kill them in time I see where the Truce is,

“NOW THAT WAY!” I say pointing to the next floor we all run 3 body guards come one is with The Yakuza, I kill all of them with the Ben bag.

We rush to the hall, we’re ready, 5 of us charging the rest on the look out,

We rush in there, Nicole’s most powerful crime lords see us fireing their hand guns at use, Kenji Kasen tries to shoot me but I blow him away, the rest completely wipe out Jizzy, Spike and the renegades in here Carlos fires at Tony Pureta I only realize he’s with me, Tony’s fat stomach blows up and he’s still breathing, I see Ricardo Zano being stopped by the other three obliterating him with their SMG’s. T hey also fire at The Yakuza guy hiding.


I go to Pureta, and put the Ben bag on his for head.

“WHER’S ZANO!”

He doesn’t say anything[/I

]“WHERE!”

“I’m not telling you ****.”

[I]I take the ben bag out of his mouth, Another Nitro puts a SMG in his mouth I rush to where Ricardo’s body is.
Zano’s Office:


Don Franco Zano one of Nicole’s most feared men, Was looking for an M4, His house was getting slathered he was rushing, He needed to get out of here, He could kill a bunch of those idiots and get in his boat or use his car which would be risky. He could just kill em all. He did it before in the 70’s but that just proved how old he was he grabbed the M4 and rushed out of his office, firing at 3 nitro’s killing them


I see Zano, shooting like a maniac, I keep the ben bag handy, Julia won’t be useful right now.

“YOU THINK THIS’LL KILL ME MOUTHER ****ERS!!!!!!! He fires but quickly loses ammo, I grab Julia here’s my chance I run down the stairs to where he is, He notices me and throws the M4 at me I dodge and lunge at him I get Julia and fire her into his stomach

“Hey Frank long time no see!”

“MARKKKK YOU SOONNN OFFFFF A BICTH!” He spits blood at me

“I’m going to give you what’s been coming for you for a long time!” I get the ben bag and start hitting him across his face, blood goes everywhere, I hit him in the legs maybe breaking them, I hit him as hard as I can in the eye. I check his pulse, He’s dead.

I look at my watch we’ve been here for 5 minutes

“EVERYBODY LET’S GET OUT NOW!” I say, The police won’t be happy when they see Zano’s corpse, Well the good ones will be.

They all rush down, 11 of us 4 of us were killed, less than I was expecting.

Everybody rushes out side. They all go into different vans I talk to Johnny

“Well done man.” I say shaking his hand

“Thanks.” He says dropping his AK

“Look I’ll meet you guys back in the hide out, everyone go into that van me and Carlos will take the other one.”

“Ok then.” Johnny says nodding Carlos rushes to the van and so do I, we start the engine we have to get out of the River of June I can hear the sirens and one’s all ready coming. We both head for the bridge, one of us heads for Harwood the other to Ton bridge.

I head for Harwood, Carlos looks out the window and laughs manically


“WE DID IT MARK MAN WE DID IT!!!” he says cheering I smile.


Nicole City, I’ve nearly killed the crime in this city, their just one more


Ray the Maker.

But for now Nicole City is one step closer to redemption


End of Part One

[Karem-Knight]

Lose ends



It has been 10 days since Nicole witnessed the biggest vigilante act in the city in recorded history. The heads of The Zano family, The Yakuza’s main leader and right hand man, The Dark Hawk’s leader and the renegades lead pimp had just been murdered in Franco Zano’s mansion.

3 days after the attack Shiaou Kasen was given leadership of the Yakuza but two days later all their territory was brutally taken by Ray the Maker’s men around the city at exactly 8:15. Shiaou Kasen was also murdered by Ray’s body guard “Zacko”

The Dark Hawks and renegades were nothing to Ray just mindless gangstas but Ray had a very close alley, Don Zano. But Ray saw him as a nuisance he knew that when Franco died he could easily take the territory. When his son Lenardi was whacked orders from the Don himself, Ray saw the chances of that becoming higher.

Then the attack came, Ray instantly saw it as a lose but then saw a bigger opportunity, Now that the Don was dead and his other son Ricardo and his right hand man Tony slathered in the mansion, Ray knew that the current heir would be weak and stupid.



Nicole City Harwood, Johnson way May 19th 8:10pm

Four men waited in a car loading their guns looking at a near by Italian restraint the sign said closed but men were there. The five guys in the car knew that this was Zano property and they had been sent on by Ray the Maker to slaughter the people inside.


Ray knew that a group of made guys would meet around that time in a certain place and he would get his men to do his dirty work, For this he sent Jack, Will, Ben, and Matt

These men were like many other low lives, But they were getting good money. In Nicole that’s all you need.

“How many are in there?” The driver asked

“Bout six.” the one looking at them said

“What do we have?”
“The stuff we have in our hands and a shotgun in the back.”

“Ok how many heads have you blown off with that thing?”

“One.”

“Two.”

“Nine no no Five”

“Bull****! Jack ” Matt said

“Ok none!”

“Four, Ok let’s.”


“Wait there are eight now two of them just came out” said the guy watching them

“We have a shell for each of em!” Matt said

The men went out the car, Matt got the shot gun and walked in the middle Ben at the front walked in.


“HEY ****O WE’RE CLOSED!” said an Italian man

“Oh we’re sorry, RAY THE MAKER SAID IT WAS OPEN!” The men got their guns, the two mafaiso who just walked in took cover, Ben shot the Italian right in the forehead as Matt blew up the table and one of their stomachs. He shot them all twice with his shells.

Will went over to wear he saw one of the men and saw one hiding and shot him five times, Only to look behind and see the other one shoot Matt right in the head, Will went over to waste the guy diving to shoot at him but the gangster grabbed his arm and pointed his gun in Will’s face.


“OK **** HEADS DON’T ****ING THINK OF IT ANYTHING AND YOUR FRIEND HERE GET’S IT!”

Ben picked up the Shotgun

“BEN DO WHAT HE SAYS!”

“**** no!” Ben said blowing both their heads off and running with the shot gun while Will followed him back in the car.


Ray’s plan worked without one **** up. And like that the Zano’s were out of Nicole, and back to Vegas.

[Karem-Knight]

Sorry guys It might take a while to finish this.