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Excel
04-05-2006, 09:33 PM
writing a horror story bout afather who realizes his girl is the devil. but upon realzing it, how can i end it? have him die and she lives? both die, both live? shes saved somehow?HELP ME.

guitarsingerguy
04-06-2006, 12:02 AM
Well, she's the devil. You GOTTA have the devil win.

spdrknight
04-06-2006, 12:07 AM
You should try just writing it to the end and having the end reveal itself. A form of free-writing. just go in not having the idea and as events unfold it will be become clear to you where the story should go. No one can tell you how to draw out the plot or write the ending to a story, it just has to come out from your own imagination and the plot itself.

owen_2006_294
04-06-2006, 06:02 AM
i agree with spdrknight let the story tell u what's going to happen.

Antonello Blueberry
04-06-2006, 06:06 AM
She becomes the first female Pope.

Ronny Shade
04-06-2006, 03:08 PM
writing a horror story bout afather who realizes his girl is the devil. but upon realzing it, how can i end it? have him die and she lives? both die, both live? shes saved somehow?HELP ME.

In a dramatic exorcism, the father is forced to kill his daughter when she cannot be cured, and we find out later that the devil has jumped from her body into his.

Excel
04-06-2006, 08:37 PM
oh i like that one

Asteroid-Man
04-10-2006, 09:20 PM
girl/devil kills father

Master Chief
04-10-2006, 09:29 PM
It'd be awesome if she kills him.

But isn't this like The Omen or something?

Man-Thing
04-11-2006, 02:18 AM
It'd be awesome if she kills him.

But isn't this like The Omen or something?
with a dash of Rosemary's Baby.

Excel
04-16-2006, 09:56 AM
what happens in rosemarys baby??

eXperiment
04-16-2006, 01:22 PM
You should try just writing it to the end and having the end reveal itself. A form of free-writing. just go in not having the idea and as events unfold it will be become clear to you where the story should go. No one can tell you how to draw out the plot or write the ending to a story, it just has to come out from your own imagination and the plot itself.

^ agree

FunBobPants
04-21-2006, 09:22 PM
wasnt this a show on Fox? its also pretty similar to The Omen trilogy