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Aren
06-30-2006, 06:29 AM
Some poem I've written a while ago :$



"Just One"

With my last breath...
I would scream
make sure the heavens hear
all the pain that lay deep within

With my last breath...
I'd tell you all those things
I dared not say, and why?
Hoping to finally see you cry

With my last breath...
I'd ask you if you enjoyed it,
seeing my fall on my knees all those times,
asking for that reliable empty forgiveness

With my last breath...
I'd wish you to burn in hell.
Suffer everyday in complete belief
that tomorrow it will all be well

With my last breath,
I would tell you i still loved you...


ps : Couldnt find another place to post it so heh... sorry if this is the wrong place

DOG LIPS
06-30-2006, 06:30 AM
*Sniff*

That was... beautiful. :O

FunBobPants
06-30-2006, 06:41 AM
Fan Fiction. poetry go there.

Decay
06-30-2006, 06:58 AM
Wow! You've surely got the gift to write pomes! That was good!

Aren
07-02-2006, 02:41 AM
Thanks, wrote that a long time ago though, not sure I could write something like that again