IRON MAN MEETS BATMAN!!Fan Fiction!

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

IRON MAN MEETS BATMAN PART 1:Alleyway confrontation

Gotham City:6:08 PM.
A man slowly makes his way down a dark alleyway.As the man gets nearer to his destination,we see that this man,this one man,is holding the most destructive item a man could posesse:a bomb.He comes to the end of the alley and turns down the street.Suddenly,he stops short,for standing in front of him is:THE BATMAN!!!As quickly as he appeared,Batman is gone.The man looks in all directions,but Batman is nowhere in sight.The man hears a voice.The voice says "Here i am."


:batman: END PART 1

Hope you like it!!!!!! Its not my best work but it'll get better as the story progresses!!!

[JLBats]

Uh...

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

"Uh"?What do you mean "Uh"???:eek:

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

If no one likes it i'll take it down...................

[Harlekin]

Uh...
Seconded.

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

:mad: :mad:I'm putting BOTH of you on my Ignore List.:mad: :mad:

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

...............................

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

............anyone?

[Harlekin]

Uhm, it's short?

[JLBats]

It's not even four lines, how would we judge?:confused:

[Fledermaus]

Yeah, no offense, but maybe you should have come up with more than one paragraph before you posted it.

[JTIZZLEVILLE]

Well, to be an IronMan/Batman fan fic, there sure isn't any Iron Man in it. Oh wait, its only like 2 lines long and there are atleast 10 grammer mistakes in those two lines.

If you want us to care about your writing then you have to show that YOU care about your writing.

[Symbiote Hulk]

IRON MAN MEETS BATMAN PART 1:Alleyway confrontation

Gotham City:6:08 PM.
A man slowly makes his way down a dark alleyway.As the man gets nearer to his destination,we see that this man,this one man,is holding the most destructive item a man could posesse:a bomb.He comes to the end of the alley and turns down the street.Suddenly,he stops short,for standing in front of him is:THE BATMAN!!!As quickly as he appeared,Batman is gone.The man looks in all directions,but Batman is nowhere in sight.The man hears a voice.The voice says "Here i am."


:batman: END PART 1

Hope you like it!!!!!! Its not my best work but it'll get better as the story progresses!!!

How the **** did they end up in the same universe?:confused:

[Symbiote Hulk]

Yeah, no offense, but maybe you should have come up with more than one paragraph before you posted it.
Indeed

[pinkfloydstarr]

WTF! im sorry but i don't get it at all

[JLBats]

IRON MAN MEETS BATMAN PART 1:Alleyway confrontation

Gotham City:6:08 PM.
A man slowly makes his way down a dark alleyway.As the man gets nearer to his destination,we see that this man,this one man,is holding the most destructive item a man could posesse:a bomb.He comes to the end of the alley and turns down the street.Suddenly,he stops short,for standing in front of him is:THE BATMAN!!!As quickly as he appeared,Batman is gone.The man looks in all directions,but Batman is nowhere in sight.The man hears a voice.The voice says "Here i am."


:batman: END PART 1

Hope you like it!!!!!! Its not my best work but it'll get better as the story progresses!!!

It's even shorter if you take out all the unnecessary ****.

A man slowly makes his way down a dark alleyway.As the man gets nearer to his destination,we see that this man is holding a bomb for some reason.He comes to the end of the alley and turns.Suddenly,he stops short,for standing in front of him is THE BATMAN! Now Batman is gone, for some ****ing reason.The man looks in all directions,but Batman is still ****ing gone. A voice says "Here i am."

Why the hell was the man carrying a bomb? WTF?

[Symbiote Hulk]

IRON MAN MEETS BATMAN PART 1:Alleyway confrontation

Gotham City:6:08 PM.
A man slowly makes his way down a dark alleyway.As the man gets nearer to his destination,we see that this man,this one man,is holding the most destructive item a man could posesse:a bomb.He comes to the end of the alley and turns down the street.Suddenly,he stops short,for standing in front of him is:THE BATMAN!!!As quickly as he appeared,Batman is gone.The man looks in all directions,but Batman is nowhere in sight.The man hears a voice.The voice says "Here i am."


:batman: END PART 1

Hope you like it!!!!!! Its not my best work but it'll get better as the story progresses!!!

It should be "As the man gets nearer to his destination,we see that this man,this one man,is holding one of the most destructive item a man could posesse:a bomb."

A man can posesse something much more destructive then a bomb. Don't get me started....

[JLBats]

"Oh, sorry Batman, just out for a stroll with this bomb for some reason. Not looking for any trouble."

[The Rocketeer]

Dude he's new here. And what's up with the cussing, I thought it was prohibited on this site. So, if you don't like it, don't make big deal out it.
He is a newbie we all were at some point.

[JLBats]

Dude he's new here. And what's up with the cussing, I thought it was prohibited on this site. So, if you don't like it, don't make big deal out it.
He is a newbie we all were at some point.

You can swear all you want, it just gets censored out.

I just think he should've posted more than a paragraph.

[Sarge 2.0]

:mad: :mad:I'm putting BOTH of you on my Ignore List.:mad: :mad:It's not like they insulted you or anything.

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

Sorry about being a jerk......I shouldn't have added you to my ignore list for virtuly no reason.........and it WAS wayyyyyyyyy too short.I came up with a story right off hand,and didn't really plan it out or pay attention to my grammer.I think i'll stick to regular posts.

[NYR94]

Sorry about being a jerk......I shouldn't have added you to my ignore list for virtuly no reason.........and it WAS wayyyyyyyyy too short.I came up with a story right off hand,and didn't really plan it out or pay attention to my grammer.I think i'll stick to regular posts.

Thank god for that! Stick to what you know, kid.

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

Hey!!!!

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

Thank god for that! Stick to what you know, kid.
Now THAT was an insult!!!:mad:

[NYR94]

Now THAT was an insult!!!:mad:

:spidey: Your Spidey senses are accurate!

[wolfsfang]

The premise has promise tho

How I see it is they are both billionaire industrialists so you should work from that angle, not that they are superheros. True the fact they are superheros is important to the characters but bare with me for a second.

What if the government, or an affiliation are planning to implement a hostile take over of both companies to get limitless acess to all their technology, including the Iron Man armor. Now say that this government organisation is run by two partners named Justin Hammer and Lex Luthor.

Now the two normally lone heroes must learn to work together to save their family businesses and the entire world.

[pinkfloydstarr]

i realize you've given up on the writing thing but are you ever gunna post part 2? it was so short im almost in suspence.

[IRON-MAN-FAN]

I'll be rewriting part 1 and post part 2 within the month.I can't believe I'm actully getting people who want to see part 2!!!The villians I plan to have team-up are..............MANDERIN AND RA'S AL GHUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Note:It takes place before the death of Manderin.)I'm gonna take some time to plan out the plot more and to make each chapter a lot longer.Thanks for the idea,Wolfsfang!!!!:)