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SuperDaniel
07-13-2006, 03:27 AM
About villains, i`d say no to Brainiac in the sequel. Why? Because this story has been told in the cartoon. Also, his plan is almost the same as Luthor in Superman Returns. Make Krypton on Earth, whatever.

I think that the worst thing of SR is that it is anticlimatic. Whenever there are disasters, we know Superman is going to save it and solve everything. We all knew Superman was going to save Lois , Richard and the kid in the movie. Thats why in my opinion, STM is better. `Cause he fails in the end. There`s a climax! Lois dies. What does he do? The impossible to save his love. In this movie? Its too predictable.

So, i`d start the sequel with a plane accident. A plane piloted by Richard. To make a parallel between the scene in Superman Returns and the sequel. In the end, Superman is late. Richard White dies. But Luthor is the savior. He saves him. He puts bionic parts, powered by Kryptonite.

People will question Superman. Lois will. Did he wanted to save Richard or not because of his relationship with her? THe audience will have doubts.

Meanwhile, Luthor wants to control Richard. His initial plan was to make Richard destroy Superman. Thats why he saved him. Because of his previous thing with Lois. A great enemy for Superman. But Richard disobeys him. He still is a good guy.

Now comes the good part:

Richard thinks he can have Lois back. BUT he doesn`t have the sense of touch anymore. He cant feel anything. A touch, a kiss from his loved ones. Like what happened in the Animated Series. He discovers Lois loves Superman, that Jason is in fact Superman`s kid. He gets furious, wants to kill everybody, kill Superman for making him become what he is now, kill Luthor, kill Lois for dumping him. NOW thats a real story. With emotional moments. In the end, Lois find out Superman is Clark, we have a proposal from Clark and thats it. Wedding in the third movie. But things don`t look good. Darkseid is planning an invasion. Will Superman survive this? Can he have a future with Lois and raise a family?

In the third movie, make it like Hell on Earth. Parallels with WW II, Apokolips being like a huge concentration camp, ruled by a dictator: Darkseid. He wants to make the same thing with Earth. Darkseid finds out Clark is Supes. Superman in the end kills Darkseid in the greatest battle ever put on screen. Gives up of his powers because he violated his most precious vow. Just like what happened in "Whatever happened to the man of tomorrow". Superman is now human, raises a family with Lois, the people from Apokolyps are free. End of a great Trilogy.

A dream? Yeah....my dream...

hutch007
07-17-2006, 02:41 AM
i like the idea of the third movie alot. i would love to see anyone supes could duke it out on screen!!

thorstone
07-17-2006, 02:52 AM
I really doubt Singer is lurking the Superherohype forums. lol.

house of f
07-17-2006, 02:57 PM
the sequel should be supes and jason getting to know jason

dr venture
07-18-2006, 03:29 PM
Not bad SpiderDaniel

hk_spyke
07-18-2006, 03:52 PM
About villains, i`d say no to Brainiac in the sequel. Why? Because this story has been told in the cartoon. Also, his plan is almost the same as Luthor in Superman Returns. Make Krypton on Earth, whatever.

I think that the worst thing of SR is that it is anticlimatic. Whenever there are disasters, we know Superman is going to save it and solve everything. We all knew Superman was going to save Lois , Richard and the kid in the movie. Thats why in my opinion, STM is better. `Cause he fails in the end. There`s a climax! Lois dies. What does he do? The impossible to save his love. In this movie? Its too predictable.

So, i`d start the sequel with a plane accident. A plane piloted by Richard. To make a parallel between the scene in Superman Returns and the sequel. In the end, Superman is late. Richard White dies. But Luthor is the savior. He saves him. He puts bionic parts, powered by Kryptonite.

People will question Superman. Lois will. Did he wanted to save Richard or not because of his relationship with her? THe audience will have doubts.

Meanwhile, Luthor wants to control Richard. His initial plan was to make Richard destroy Superman. Thats why he saved him. Because of his previous thing with Lois. A great enemy for Superman. But Richard disobeys him. He still is a good guy.

Now comes the good part:

Richard thinks he can have Lois back. BUT he doesn`t have the sense of touch anymore. He cant feel anything. A touch, a kiss from his loved ones. Like what happened in the Animated Series. He discovers Lois loves Superman, that Jason is in fact Superman`s kid. He gets furious, wants to kill everybody, kill Superman for making him become what he is now, kill Luthor, kill Lois for dumping him. NOW thats a real story. With emotional moments. In the end, Lois find out Superman is Clark, we have a proposal from Clark and thats it. Wedding in the third movie. But things don`t look good. Darkseid is planning an invasion. Will Superman survive this? Can he have a future with Lois and raise a family?

In the third movie, make it like Hell on Earth. Parallels with WW II, Apokolips being like a huge concentration camp, ruled by a dictator: Darkseid. He wants to make the same thing with Earth. Darkseid finds out Clark is Supes. Superman in the end kills Darkseid in the greatest battle ever put on screen. Gives up of his powers because he violated his most precious vow. Just like what happened in "Whatever happened to the man of tomorrow". Superman is now human, raises a family with Lois, the people from Apokolyps are free. End of a great Trilogy.

A dream? Yeah....my dream...

i think it but i would have Brainiac in there somewhere. he wants to collect all the info and destroy the souce making it worth more not make kryton on earth. in smallville brainiac works for Zod so maybe have him work for darkseid and helps lex make metello to try and get rid of superman before darkseid comes to earth then in the last moive superman abd kill both of them.

xii22_loop
07-19-2006, 02:32 PM
i wonder if singer does read this stuff on message boards/forums

Spider - Man
07-19-2006, 05:59 PM
I really doubt Singer is lurking the Superherohype forums. lol.

You'd probably be surprised at who "lurks" here!;)

WhatsHisFace
07-19-2006, 06:43 PM
It's a little too X-men 3 for me, and the mass audience. Too comic-booky.

3 Dev Adam
07-20-2006, 11:25 AM
I really doubt Singer is lurking the Superherohype forums. lol.

He does. He was surprised when someone here was the first one to reveal the entire plot of the original X-Men.

Trooper
07-21-2006, 04:03 PM
why cant ppl see that richard white is a nice guy??? :confused: and he always wil be :up:

GL1
07-21-2006, 04:37 PM
Nah. I think you're going all the wrong direction. You're killing the subplot with the kid instead of using it to make Superman better. You fail at plotting.

And you also should read up on Brainiac from the comics. Not only is Brainiac quick to give up on making earth into Krypton (that's Zod's territory), he usually just wants to destroy it, take all it's info and bounce. Now THAT's a problem for Superman. If Brainiac has control of the world's computers, he can use Earth's own weapons to attack it, including some highly experimental stuff, perhaps the military has a Metallo project somewhere? And those NK crystaline formations and some leftover human DNA from Lex's crew are great ingredients for a Doomsday-like killing machine.

And Brainiac came from somewhere... He destroyed Krypton, hid in Jor-El's crystals and now is awake to destroy Earth... who sent this malicous software to destroy these two planets? Darkseid and Apokolips... who else? That's how you set up for a third movie... not by forcing deaths, butchering Metallo and turning a character study into WWII-inspired chaos.

I understand it's your dream, but it kills everything good about the SR franchise...