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Mr. Superhero
09-07-2006, 02:38 PM
[OPENING CREDITS]

[CUT TO MAN TIED TO CHAIR IN DARK ROOM]

Narrator / Calas : I'm a good guy - was once a proud father... once had an adorable wife... everything was once so perfect. What happened to me was a symbol of pain... and pain alone. To have everything, and then nothing, in a matter of moments... well, what does that do to a guy? In my case, I gave up. That was the answer. Nothing to live for, nothing to love. The events which took place, ended my life. Ended everything I ever lived for - Everything had been dissolved...

[CUT TO MAN UNTIEING HANDS FROM CHAIR WITH KNIFE. ROOMS LIGHTS UP. HUGE MAN ENTERS]

Narrator / Calas : Only the strong minds admit defeat, that's exactly what I told myself when I was being dragged into this.. place. I will sorrow through the pain. I will live in this place until I die... my life ended along with my family... this corpse is just going to suffer the pain...

[CUT TO CALAS STANDING UP. HUGE MAN PUNCHES CALAS IN THE FACE. CALAS FALLS TO GROUND]

Narrator / Calas : What is this place? Pain. Suffering. Every bad word you can think of. It's a prison... a prison where only the bad people go...

[HUGE MAN PICKS CALAS UP BY HAIR. HUGE MAN KICKS CALAS INTO STOMACH]

Narrator / Calas : I've chosen this path. I will forever live in here, recieving these beatings like a desperate dog... My dieing day, cannot come soon enough...

[CUT TO CALAS LOOKING UP TO HUGE MAN. HUGE MAN KICKS CALAS IN FACE. CAMERA IMMEDIATELY CUTS]

Narrator / Calas : ...I don't know how much my body can take... but if I am to die with any pride what so ever, I'll carry on chipping away... as always...

Mr. Superhero
09-09-2006, 02:39 PM
[CUT TO CALAS BEING ESCORTED TO HIS CELL. HIS FACE IS BATTERED AND BRUISED]

[CALAS GETS THROWN INTO CELL]

Rafter : [LAUGHS] Still alive, I see...

[CALAS PICKS HIMSELF UP]

Calas : [SIGHS] Unfortunately...

[CALAS SITS ON BED NURSING HIS CUTS & BRUISES]

Rafter : You're a tough man, I'll give you that.

Calas : Thanks for the compliment. But save it for something worth it.

Rafter : You are worth it, Calas. How you got into a place like this...

[RAFTER LOOKS AROUND CELL]

Rafter : ... I'll never know.

Calas : And that will remain so. I'm only here for one reason - And that's to die in this place.

Rafter : We're all gonna' die in this place, Calas... We don't serve a sentance...

Calas : Then, I'm sorry for you.

Rafter : [SMILES] Just hang in there, Calas... Hang in there...

[BUZZER SOUNDS]

Calas : ... Looks like you're up.

[RAFTER STANDS UP. AN OFFICER APPEARS AT THE CELL GATE]

Rafter : Wish me luck. You never know when it's your last beating...

[CELL GATE OPENS. RAFTER EXITS. CALAS LAYS DOWN]