The 'WHAT IF? Marvel' RPG - SIgn up thread

[Feature]

No idea Cyrus. Expect new posts from me very soon.

[Matt Murdock]

I'm dropping punisher as he hasn't interacted at all!!! Any thoughts on who I should take instead?

Aw, man, dont ditch him just yet! I'll have ben reilly come find you.

[Cyrusbales]

Aw, man, dont ditch him just yet! I'll have ben reilly come find you.

I was thinking someone who could have a little more interaction with the characters that we have in the RPG already, like a spidey villain or something....

[Cyrusbales]

Loving Doc Ock by the way, and the vulture too, they're very different but you handle them both nicely!

Anyone be interested in a Lizard? :)

[Apprentice]

"Another guy whose @$$ I could kick? Sure!"

[Matt Murdock]

time for stark to meet up with captain america.
If anyone wants to take cap after this please do so, cause i'm setting them up as enemies.

[Matt Murdock]

App, since we're both on, shall we have spidey and scarlet spider meet
?

[Apprentice]

Go ahead! You can find Spidey on a rooftop above the alley where he killed Madame Webb...maybe that can be what starts the fight. Ben could start to try and redeem him, then see Webb's body, and all hell breaks loose!

[Matt Murdock]

heck yeah.

but it'll be surprise attack.

[Apprentice]

Looking forward to this!

[Matt Murdock]

Sorry that took me such a while, its up though.

[Apprentice]

No problem. A few things have come up, though...my post will be up by tomorrow morning. Sorry. :down :(

[Cyrusbales]

Ok, because the X-men storyline is held up by Braniac, (hope he's ok) I'm gonna get around him a little, and people, feel free to bunny him if needed to move it on, here we go.

[Apprentice]

So I have permission to have Magento reply to Havok?

[Cyrusbales]

yes, and also,check out new Xavier post, world gonna get F'ed in the A

[Apprentice]

Wow...Xavier is damn evil...and I like it :up: I'll also have Erik react to that, if ya want, in my next post.

[Cyrusbales]

coolio :)

[guitarsingerguy]

I'm missng all my fellow X-Men, so until they post, I don't have much to work with.

[Cyrusbales]

well magneto is bunnyable now, and NOON???? she'll post soon :)

Just run with it hombre!

[guitarsingerguy]

well magneto is bunnyable now, and NOON???? she'll post soon :)

Just run with it hombre!

What's up with Brainiac? Did he bow out?

[Cyrusbales]

I think he's prob got some personal stuff or comp troubles everyone can bunny him, as long as they don't do anything out of character that he'd be pissed with :)

[Apprentice]

Which I hope I did not do in my post...?

[Matt Murdock]

New Post up, app!

:D

[Apprentice]

We should sort out a time when we can both definitely be on, to do the fight fluidly...

[Matt Murdock]

ok, so I need help. I'm trying to post a reply, and I dont know what I did, but it disappeared. When I click back to this thread and then click back to the reply page, I see the reply as I had written it, but only for a second, then it disappears.

[Cyrusbales]

:( dunno, you might be writting it again :(

[Matt Murdock]

I cant even reply to the thread. When I click the link, it shows my text, but then the entire reply window disappears

I have an idea though, ill see if it works

[Matt Murdock]

yay!

i got it. I just hit submit reply. And it gave me all of the text!

[Cyrusbales]

Does someone wana do something with punisher now, or suggest another character I can directly take up and get involved to move this thing on a tad?

Also, hows the plan against Xavier coming? I'm thinking tony stark might be a little worried! Maybe SHIELD will end up getting involved....

[Cyrusbales]

Braniac is back:wow:

Hey, hows u been, everything okies?

[Brainiac 8]

Hello everyone, sorry I haven't been around or had the time to post onto the thread. Thanks for the patience, and hopefully things will slow down for me.

My father was diagnosed with Pancreatic cancer, and I have been dealing with that and running a family of my own. I have just been able to show up periodically and check up...but haven't had time to post much...hopefully I'm forgiven and I can post more.:yay:

[Brainiac 8]

Braniac is back:wow:

Hey, hows u been, everything okies?

Yup, thanks for asking...sorry to hold everyone up.

I don't want you to get rid of Punisher man, I was looking forward to a smackdown with him. :p

[Matt Murdock]

good to see that you're back Brainiac8. Sorry about your dad :(

[Cyrusbales]

don't worry about the posting, I hope you didn't mind about me letting people bunny Mags, they didn't do much anyways, I made sure it was all just to keep the flow, but with you back, all should be good!

Sorry to hear about your dad though, if there's anything we can do :)

[Brainiac 8]

Thanks guys....hopefully things slow down.

Don't worry Cyrus, I don't mind them bunnying if it keeps the story flowing, don't want to hold it up too much..as long as noone went and made him Psycho child killer or anything we should be good.:oldrazz:

[Cyrusbales]

psycho killer? that's my characters, lol

[Apprentice]

Dammit...Magneto can't be a psycho child killer? Sorry, Brainiac... ;)

Sorry to hear about your dad, though. :(

[Zoken]

What If... The Avengers Never Assembled?

The original team of Avengers never thought to form a permenant team, or even to make sure they kept in contact. barrage attacks by Hydra, Ultron, AIM, and other villains to powerful to be handled by a single hero, or even the Fantastic Four, ravage the country. New York is a war zone. fighting on the ground are the Champions, lead by Misty Knight, composed of Luke Cage, Ricochet, Tony Stark (now bankrupt and possessing only one failing suit of armor), and Jamie Madrox. Handling the high-powered threats are the Defenders, Lead by Dr. Strange and Prince Namor. their team holds Thor, sharing the body of the revived Captain America (the Donald Blake avatar was killed), also Dr. Sampson (who possess the power of the Hulk in addition to his own. he was forced to drain Hulk of all his gamma-energy), Mr. Fantastic (who, in an attempt to remove the powers from Ben Grimm, also removed the powers of Johnny and Sue as well, and they were placed into himself), and Captain Universe (Peter Parker gained the Uni-Force, but because of the shape of his world, his sense of conflict never ended, especially after the deaths of Aunt May and MJ).

The X-Men have moved off world and have built a shelter with the Inhumans and are now living side by side on the moon, fighting side by side with the Inhumans to defend earth from extra-terrestrial attacks including the Kree, Skrulls, Shi'ar, and Phoenix.

[Apprentice]

New Spidey post will be up soon...school's just overwhelming at the moment.

[Cyrusbales]

hey Zoken, where you been!!!

Also, isn't cyclops missing by the way?

[guitarsingerguy]

Hello everyone, sorry I haven't been around or had the time to post onto the thread. Thanks for the patience, and hopefully things will slow down for me.

My father was diagnosed with Pancreatic cancer, and I have been dealing with that and running a family of my own. I have just been able to show up periodically and check up...but haven't had time to post much...hopefully I'm forgiven and I can post more.:yay:

Wow buddy, I'm really sorry to hear that. If there's anything we can do, just say so.

[Brainiac 8]

hey Zoken, where you been!!!

Also, isn't cyclops missing by the way?


Yea, but I am figuring that the Brotherhood knows nothing of his dissapearing...so that's why they are talking as if he is still an X-Man.

[Feature]

Spideyssuperfan, just so you know, Ock is waiting for Tony to show up at the Triskelion. Whenever you're ready...

[Matt Murdock]

Booyeah

How long can you be on for, man?

[Feature]

Well, probably not too much longer. But that's alright. If you wanna get the ball rolling I might be able to get a reply up now. If not, tonight or tomorrow. I don't mind taking it so slow, so long as it doesn't drag on forever.

[Matt Murdock]

New post up.

[Apprentice]

Next posts will be up soon.

[Kaboom]

WHAT IF? MARVEL RPG SIGN-UP FORM

Screen Name: Kaboom

Character you would like to play: Namor, the Sub-Mariner

Powers and a brief description of the character in proper English: Half Human, Half Atlantean, and all bad @$$. He can breathe underwater, super strength, speed, etc.

Three reasons why you have chosen that character:

1. He's cool.

2. Hes the first mutant marvel ever made.

3. Because he is torn between worlds

What can you bring to this game?
Hopefully interesting ideas.


How many times do you intend on posting a DAY IN the RPG: once.

Do you know how to post pictures on the hype boards:
yes.


WHAT IF? PROPOSAL(and explain why if you can): What if Namor married Sue Storm, instead of Reed Richards.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a384/kaboom43/namor.jpg

[Brainiac 8]

Namor marrie Reed Richards?:huh: :p

[Brainiac 8]

WHAT IF? MARVEL RPG SIGN-UP FORM

Screen Name: Kaboom

Character you would like to play: Namor, the Sub-Mariner

Powers and a brief description of the character in proper English: Half Human, Half Atlantean, and all bad @$$. He can breathe underwater, super strength, speed, etc.

Three reasons why you have chosen that character:

1. He's cool.

2. Hes the first mutant marvel ever made.

3. Because he is torn between worlds

What can you bring to this game?
Hopefully interesting ideas.


How many times do you intend on posting a DAY IN the RPG: once.

Do you know how to post pictures on the hype boards:
yes.


WHAT IF? PROPOSAL(and explain why if you can): What if Namor married Sue Storm, instead of Reed Richards.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a384/kaboom43/namor.jpg

So Namor won her heart over and she is now Queen of Atlantis...interesting idea.

Namor is a cool character.

Approved Boomster. :up:

[Kaboom]

So Namor won her heart over and she is now Queen of Atlantis...interesting idea.

Namor is a cool character.

Approved Boomster. :up:
rockin, anything crazy going on with any members of the FF or doom that i need to know about, or do i have free reign at them?

[Brainiac 8]

WHAT IF'S:
-XAVIER and MAGNETO's roles are reversed, ie: XAVIER is against humanity, Magneto wishes to save it.
-PETER PARKER never rid himself of the symbiote, being consumed by it.
-DAREDEVIL killed the kingpin and took up his position as the crime lord.
-RICK JONES is the HULK, and has almost total control.
-WOLVERINE is stilll under the control of Weapon X.
-Only SANDMAN'S childish side remains from the split.
-BEAST never suffered his further mutation
-VULCAN grew up with his brothers, and is now on MAGNETO'S side.
-MR. IMMORTAL joined the avengers after growing up in New York.
-The Phoenix force inhabbited ROGUE instead, and she ended up joining MAGNETO'S brotherhood of mutants.
-GAMBIT never gained control of his powers and they corrputed him.
-NORMAN OSBORN never went insane, and became the HOBGOBLIN instead.
-BIG BERTHA was self centred until her rejection from society, where she was take in by the brotherhood.
-GHOST RIDER was saved from his deal with Zarathos and bonded with Yeshua and Azrael to become the spirit of redemption and execution.
-TONY STARK made ironmen for the government, whilst keeping the ultimate upgrades for himself.
-When FRANK CASTLE'S family was exectued, he was shot and suffered brain damage which fractured his psyche and distorted his memory and mind.
-ADRIAN TOOMES was a police officer, forced into retirement, upon BLACKI DRAGO'S death, he took his equipment to become the VULTURE and continue fighting crime.
-JEAN GREY was abducted by the Shi'ar as they thought she possesed the phoenix force. However learning she didn't, she was sent to earth to retrieve the one with the phoenix force.
-DOC OCK didn’t become a criminal and worked his way up in SHIELD until he gained control of it. Now he secretly uses SHIELD for his life of crime.
-HAVOC lost control of his powers after running away and killed several people. Atoning for his sins he joined the Brotherhood, although he still has a short temper and is prone to outbursts of anger.
-Namor won Sue Storm away from the Fantastic Four and married her.
ROSTER
Proffesor Xavier
CyrusbalesSpiderman(symbiote)
Apprentice
Daredevil
Braniac 8
Wolverine
Byrd Man
Vulcan
spartin2008
Mr Immotal
Zoken
Magneto
Braniac 8
Rogue
Noon
Gambit
Guitarsingerguy
Big Bertha
Zoken
Ironman
Spideyssuperfan
Punisher
Cyrusbales
Vulture(Adrian toomes)
Feature
Doc. Ock
Feature
Cyclops
SpeedballLives
Havoc
Apprentice
Scarlet Spider(Ben Reily)
spideyssuperfan
Namor the Sub-Mariner
Kaboom

[Brainiac 8]

List has been updated for anyone who wants to read it.

Kaboom, this will give you an idea of what we have done with this universe...for the most part, the FF have not been messed with.

[Cyrusbales]

Good to see you here Kaboom!

Anyone wanna chill with punisher? I'm thining of switching him for someone who can get involved against the whole shield doc ock thing!

[Matt Murdock]

Id chill with him! But I can't cause I'm in the middle of a battle with spidey.

[Cyrusbales]

tis okay, also, whats the Dock Ock massive plan coming too? I'm curious? :) Maybe get some origin of someone like Kaine in there in case I wanna switch :):):)

[Brainiac 8]

I need to get my new posts up for Daredevil...and Cyrus we need to have a Daredevil/Punisher smackdown.:yay:

[Cyrusbales]

booya!

[Kaboom]

i still gotta establish my characters...was my first post good?

[Cyrusbales]

Engaging, need to see some more though :)

Should put character names up at the begining of posts though ;) (like the cool banners in the ult marvel RPG :))

[Kaboom]

lol, yea i saw those, i'll work on them

[Feature]

tis okay, also, whats the Dock Ock massive plan coming too? I'm curious? :)

Well, Ock's plan is not too complex. He's going to try to use an army of clones to take over the planet basically. The clones are being made by the Jackal. He was also going to steal the schematics of the Iron Men armor so that he could have an army of them as well, but I think Mr. Stark is going to have something to say about that.

[Cyrusbales]

nice, Xavier might have something to say about your massive plan! Perhaps an epic battle, lol.

[Matt Murdock]

xavier has Iron Mans support

[Cyrusbales]

even though Xavier is killing off the world leader until mutants are given supreme right?


ROCK Ironman HARDPLACE


not a good place to be there, lol.

[Matt Murdock]

Iron Man killed the president.



top that, darkness!

[Matt Murdock]

yeah, that was a chappelle's show reference

[Cyrusbales]

Xavier killed the leader of France, Germany, Italy and lithuania in one go! lol

[Matt Murdock]

Blast! I call tony blair and prince charles.

anyways, it looks like iron man has made some buddies in Octavious and Daredevil

[Cyrusbales]

this will be a giant smackdown between like everyone involved in this RPG! Awesome man!

[Matt Murdock]

yeah, it'll be pretty awesome.

I think I want tony stark to be the leader for one side though and xavier for the other.

[Matt Murdock]

actually it'd probably make more sense for it to be magneto v. xavier.

[Cyrusbales]

it'll end up a four way fight i reckon, Xavier, mags, Ock, and stark, lol.

[Matt Murdock]

oh that'd be awesome
they should have their respective armies between them as well.

I think I'm going to equip stark with some guns once he's out of S.H.I.E.L.D, just to be on the safe side.

[Cyrusbales]

Xavier can kinda just select anyone with telepathy to be in his army, lol. Remember that all guns, planes, boats and tanks of the general armies etc are now destroyed.....

[Matt Murdock]

Yeah, but not those of the underground gun-dealers and such. ;)

[Cyrusbales]

Yeah, but not those of the underground gun-dealers and such. ;)


Well he's fully aware of them, and can stop them easy! But thought it would cause more havok if the crinimals had guns when the army didn't....:oldrazz:

[Matt Murdock]

Yeah, but the universe isn't as connected as it should be. I killed the president and nobody's come after me.

[Cyrusbales]

well the whole world is going to pot here, so there's a lot of issues that need dealing with, will be interesting to see what happens after this massive fight, how the what if universe will 'repair' itself!

[Matt Murdock]

yeah, the fight should be great.

[Cyrusbales]

now, can i be bothered to make some manips.....

(made a cool manip for ult marvel btw ;))

[Matt Murdock]

Really? Post it in the sign-up thread, dude.

[Cyrusbales]

should have the start of my ock/ironman manip attached top this, it's only a paint jobby, but kinda cool.....

[Brainiac 8]

That is pretty cool Cyrus! :up:

[Cyrusbales]

gonna add some clones and more ironmen to the pic......

[Cyrusbales]

what do the clones look like btw? Are they directly spidey clones? Diff costumes? or wha?

[Feature]

what do the clones look like btw? Are they directly spidey clones? Diff costumes? or wha?

There are no clones at this point, but they will be made using super-hero DNA SHIELD recovered from various battle sites. So, there will be many different cloned heroes. Maybe I'll have them all in some sort of SHIELD outfit.

[Noon]

I want to get started on bringing out the phoenix, hopefully in the upcoming battle

[Brainiac 8]

That'll be cool, Noon....we need to get the Brotherhood posts up and start getting the rescue mission underway. :D

[Apprentice]

Sorry, guys, those posts were way overdue.

Who plays Vulcan, here?

[Brainiac 8]

Spartin does...only I haven't seen him around here for a while. It saddens me, because he needs to be part of the fight since he is the field leader and all of the Brotherhood.:huh: :csad:

[Apprentice]

So there's no point PMing him? I haven't seen a post from him in a while...seems sad to just have everyone NPC him, though, especially in such an important battle. :(

[Brainiac 8]

Great posts Apprentice. :up:

I'll get one up as soon as I can.:yay:

[Brainiac 8]

I may try to PM him later...if you want you should try so we can give him the chance to be in the battle.

I hope Zoken gets a chance to come around more also...since Bertha should be part of the fight.

[Feature]

Hey Brain! The Vulture is going to want to have a talk with the Devil soon. What are your plans?

[Brainiac 8]

Hey Brain! The Vulture is going to want to have a talk with the Devil soon. What are your plans?


Yea, I got a post up for him earlier and I will be working toward investigating the thug of his you stopped.

I am hoping to have Daredevil get more involved with some of the other players soon, I really want him to face Vulture and Punisher at some point.

I think next will be where you left it off at. Good stuff.

Plus he needs to discover what is happening with the Xavier stuff too.

[Feature]

Well, PM me when you want to make some concrete plans.

Unfortunately for all of my die-hard fans out there (I assume that includes every one of you :oldrazz: ) I won't be able to post again until Sunday or Monday as I'm going to Montreal for the weekend.

[Brainiac 8]

I'll work on the Daredevil story a little while you're gone.

Have a safe trip man. :up:

[Matt Murdock]

new post up for scarlet spider

lemme know what y'all think

[Apprentice]

Bumpity-bump.

[Cyrusbales]

How's everyone doing? Need to move this on and get onto the violence and huge batttle :)

[Matt Murdock]

The lines in the sand are drawn.

Iron Man v. Otto Octavious
Scarlet Spider v. Spider-Man
Magneto v. Xavier

I don't know about you guys, but I think we're on the brink of a What-If: Civil War

[Feature]

Spideyssuperfan, sorry but I'm going to have to ask that you edit your last post for a few reasons.

1) Octavius has never fought Spider-Man. After the accident that fused his arms to his body, Otto joined up with SHIELD. He never became a criminal, he just slowly went insane and eventually drugged Nick Fury and took his job.

2) SHIELD knows about all the clones Miles Warren has made. The whole reason they took him out of suspended animation was so they could get him to make clones for them.

Also, try not to have your characters act as though they are invincible all the time. Tony Stark has just been battered to the point where his suit is malfunctioning. Four of his men have been murdered and he has just found out that he was cloned. On top of that, he was about to retreat a minute ago. It's very unlikely that he would storm back in the room and singlehandedly defeat everyone.

[guitarsingerguy]

I'm ready to infiltrate the X Mansion. I got a present for Xavier for ****ing around in my head.

[Apprentice]

SSF, just a little edit...could you just remove the bit about the "20th mugger"? I believe that Blackie was his first kill, and then maybe a few others, then Madame Webb...possibly something like seven or eight.

[Cyrusbales]

I'm ready to infiltrate the X Mansion. I got a present for Xavier for ****ing around in my head.

bring it on, once you undertake the mission, I have a surprise for you all!

We could do some some people playing some X-men here.... lol.

[Byrd Man]

Oh ****! Am I still apart of this RPG? Damn. I had the IC nad OOC threads unsbscribed. What the **** has been going on?

[Brainiac 8]

Magneto post is up....lets get to the fight and carnage guys.:cwink:

[Brainiac 8]

Oh ****! Am I still apart of this RPG? Damn. I had the IC nad OOC threads unsbscribed. What the **** has been going on?

Where you been? You are still a part of the game, even though the world has gone to hell in a handbasket since last you posted.:woot:

[Cyrusbales]

good to see you about Braniac, you and your family doing a little better now?

I have a nice twist for this little Xavier fight ;)

[Brainiac 8]

good to see you about Braniac, you and your family doing a little better now?

I have a nice twist for this little Xavier fight ;)

I'm doing ok....we are just waiting for the inevitable with my dad...sad to say.

Twist huh?:ninja:

[Cyrusbales]

I'm doing ok....we are just waiting for the inevitable with my dad...sad to say.

Twist huh?:ninja:

In a way, it's good have time to prepare and stuff.

And yeah, twist, a member of the X-men that has remained secret as of yet:cwink:

[Matt Murdock]

Spideyssuperfan, sorry but I'm going to have to ask that you edit your last post for a few reasons.

1) Octavius has never fought Spider-Man. After the accident that fused his arms to his body, Otto joined up with SHIELD. He never became a criminal, he just slowly went insane and eventually drugged Nick Fury and took his job.

2) SHIELD knows about all the clones Miles Warren has made. The whole reason they took him out of suspended animation was so they could get him to make clones for them.

Also, try not to have your characters act as though they are invincible all the time. Tony Stark has just been battered to the point where his suit is malfunctioning. Four of his men have been murdered and he has just found out that he was cloned. On top of that, he was about to retreat a minute ago. It's very unlikely that he would storm back in the room and singlehandedly defeat everyone.

Done

SSF, just a little edit...could you just remove the bit about the "20th mugger"? I believe that Blackie was his first kill, and then maybe a few others, then Madame Webb...possibly something like seven or eight.

also, done

[Feature]

Thanks for being a good sport SSF. It's nice that you are willing to oblige your fellow RPers and don't get bent out of shape when you are criticized. :up:

I'm going to wrap up the Ock/IM encounter in my next post.

[Cyrusbales]

how is the big brawl gonna go? I've got the whole mags/Xavier thing tied up, using just one mutant :)

BIG TWIST!

[Kaboom]

can somebody give me a rundown on the history of the rpg as it stands, its too much for me to go back and read.

[Matt Murdock]

Thanks for being a good sport SSF. It's nice that you are willing to oblige your fellow RPers and don't get bent out of shape when you are criticized. :up:

I'm going to wrap up the Ock/IM encounter in my next post.

Thanks, man. I'm new to this whole deal. Hope I'm doin' alright

[Apprentice]

You're doing great, SSF :up:

[Matt Murdock]

thanks man :)

[Apprentice]

can somebody give me a rundown on the history of the rpg as it stands, its too much for me to go back and read.

I think I'm about to hang myself. I spent the last two and a half hours working on a complete, comprehensive answer to this question and a timeline we could use for the front page, to keep everyone updated...and my computer froze and I lost it all. All of it. Two and a half hours' worth of work, gone. :csad:

[Cyrusbales]

well basically, Xavier has amassed the X-men, and kidnaped forge from Magneto's mansion. Using him to build cerebro, to be used as a weapon.

spider-man has become increasingly evil, and killed Blackie Drago, where Adrian Toomes, a retiring police officer, stole the vulture suit to become a vigilante crime fighter.

Daredevil, having become the new kingpin, has been confronted by ironman. Later on, ironman killed the president, then confronted Doc Ock who is runinng shield. Doc Ock is amassing an army of clones, whilst he also has the ability to control people using a serum, scorpion thus becoming his lackey.

Punisher has jus been executing criminals whilst his memory and sanity fails, slowly apporaching the kingpin.

Cyclops faked his own death in the attack on magneto, so he no longer worked for Xavier.

Scarlet spider is now scarlet carnage.

Anything else?

[Kaboom]

well basically, Xavier has amassed the X-men, and kidnaped forge from Magneto's mansion. Using him to build cerebro, to be used as a weapon.

spider-man has become increasingly evil, and killed Blackie Drago, where Adrian Toomes, a retiring police officer, stole the vulture suit to become a vigilante crime fighter.

Daredevil, having become the new kingpin, has been confronted by ironman. Later on, ironman killed the president, then confronted Doc Ock who is runinng shield. Doc Ock is amassing an army of clones, whilst he also has the ability to control people using a serum, scorpion thus becoming his lackey.

Punisher has jus been executing criminals whilst his memory and sanity fails, slowly apporaching the kingpin.

Cyclops faked his own death in the attack on magneto, so he no longer worked for Xavier.

Scarlet spider is now scarlet carnage.

Anything else?
yea someone said somehting about a battle about to start...for what reason and whos on what sides?

[Cyrusbales]

Well Xavier V Mags and Ironman V Doc Ock.

Spiderman and scarlet spider and throwing down also.

[Kaboom]

cyrus do you think xavier would have needed sue storm? she was just kidbnapped, and namor has gone to find john storm to help get her back.

[Cyrusbales]

well at the moment, Xavier is killing a world leader every hour, on the hour until his demands are met. He used forge to patch him into every channel worldwide, so Johnny would be pissed off, having some bald dude appearingn on his networks every hour....

as for sue, not sure. I have one mutant, and one mutant only, who will sort out the brotherhood! ;)

[Kaboom]

would you be opposed to namor finding Xavier to fight the X-men??

[Cyrusbales]

Go ahead, have you thought of a way for Namor to get close without Xavier sensing him and blowing his mind up?

[Kaboom]

sure

[Cyrusbales]

care to share?

(also the one mutant thing, is actually a MASSVIE twist, that will make everyone go 'WHA????')

[Byrd Man]

Dammit. Dammit. Dammit. I need a place for Wolverine to come in and try to kill the mutant scum all together.

[Cyrusbales]

anyone who has come into contact with Xavier, will be caught in the big tist ;)

[Kaboom]

check out my last two posts, let me know what you think...

[Cyrusbales]

good, just read 'em, I like the direction you are going!

I feel I should tell you the twist, but I don't wanna spoil it, I'll play it careful with my master plan here....;)

[Kaboom]

good, just read 'em, I like the direction you are going!

I feel I should tell you the twist, but I don't wanna spoil it, I'll play it careful with my master plan here....;)

theres a;ways pm,

[Cyrusbales]

i'll send u a PM if u start stepping on my plans toes ;)

[Apprentice]

*steps on toes* Can ya tell me now?

[Cyrusbales]

*steps on toes* Can ya tell me now?

perhaps the twist expands beyond the RPG and into our world....:ninja:

[Cyrusbales]

By the way, Punisher is waiting outside of Kingpin's building. When the fight is over, I'm prob gonna drop him, as my interaction level with him has become none, lol.

[Brainiac 8]

I'll get some posts up today....Boomster, I'm liking Namor. :up:

[Kaboom]

I'll get some posts up today....Boomster, I'm liking Namor. :up:
thanks dude....and im actually starting to get some ideas as to what to do with him.

[Feature]

Cyrus, I could see Vulture and Punisher interacting soon enough, if you're interested.

[Brainiac 8]

Cyrus, I could see Vulture and Punisher interacting soon enough, if you're interested.


Actually a Vulture/Punisher/Daredevil battle would rock.:wow:

[Apprentice]

You know what would rock more? A Vulture/Punisher/Daredevil/Spidey battle! :wow:

[Brainiac 8]

You know what would rock more? A Vulture/Punisher/Daredevil/Spidey battle! :wow:

:up:

[Kaboom]

You know what would rock more? A Vulture/Punisher/Daredevil/Spidey battle! :wow:you know what would rock more?

a vulture/punisher/daredevil/spidey/namor battle

[Brainiac 8]

This is turning into Civil War!:wow:


Actually, this universe we have created is quite a dark and foreboding universe is it not?:csad:

[Noon]

yes, it reflects our own inner natures :ghost:

[Brainiac 8]

yes, it reflects our own inner natures :ghost:


Noon, how much of being a pheonix does Rogue know?

[Noon]

Noon, how much of being a pheonix does Rogue know?

She's only had nightmares and such so far, so not much at all

[Brainiac 8]

She's only had nightmares and such so far, so not much at all

Are you going to have it come out during the fight at Xavier's?

[Noon]

Are you going to have it come out during the fight at Xavier's?

Yeah I think so

[Kaboom]

ooh sweet i instinctively knew to put namor at xaviers, and now i get to be part of the batttle!

[Brainiac 8]

ooh sweet i instinctively knew to put namor at xaviers, and now i get to be part of the batttle!


Which side do you choose? :huh: :cmad:

[Cyrusbales]

Noon, I don't want the phoenix to come out till after my twist, as it's probably the only way the brotherhood will be able to get out of it! ;)

Also, punisher, spidey, DD, Vulture....bring it! Punisher is at DD's pad right now! Just about to enter the front doors!

[Kaboom]

Which side do you choose? :huh: :cmad:

namor doesnt choose sides his only mission is to get rid of the satellite uplink...dont get in his way! ;)

[Cyrusbales]

A man of action, how sexy.....I mean.....cool.......

[Kaboom]

cyrus who are your current x-men? i may insert someone else in there for namor to rescue.

[Brainiac 8]

Ok, I'm busy here at the Credit Union, and I don't want to be here.... :(


How is everyone else's morning going....I was hoping to post my next part during work, but I'll have to wait till later.:cmad:

[Kaboom]

Ok, I'm busy here at the Credit Union, and I don't want to be here.... :(


How is everyone else's morning going....I was hoping to post my next part during work, but I'll have to wait till later.:cmad:
sucky as usualy brain

[Brainiac 8]

sucky as usualy brain


We need to quickly follow through with our plan to take over the world...then you or I won't have to work Boomster.

Are you pondering what I'm pondering?

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/eb/Pinky_and_the_Brain.jpg

[Apprentice]

My Spidey post will be up soon, as will Havok...can anyone gimme a quick update on the X-Men/Brotherhood situation?

[Brainiac 8]

My Spidey post will be up soon, as will Havok...can anyone gimme a quick update on the X-Men/Brotherhood situation?


Magneto just dismissed the meeting, and stayed to talk to Rogue. I am having everyone meet at the jet of theirs in two hours.

[Kaboom]

We need to quickly follow through with our plan to take over the world...then you or I won't have to work Boomster.

Are you pondering what I'm pondering?

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/eb/Pinky_and_the_Brain.jpg

i think so, but i thought giraffes necks were that long so they could eat off of trees.

[Brainiac 8]

i think so, but i thought giraffes necks were that long so they could eat off of trees.

lol :D :up:


You truly rock my friend. :hyper:

[Kaboom]

lol :D :up:


You truly rock my friend. :hyper:
i try.

[Feature]

New Octavius post up and a new Vulture is on the way...

[Cyrusbales]

X-men roster

Storm, Quicksilver, Mystique, Beast. I think that's all we've used so far.

Who were you thinking of adding Mr Kaboom? Feel free to post your entrance to the situation, then get to some hardcore interaction.

[Kaboom]

X-men roster

Storm, Quicksilver, Mystique, Beast. I think that's all we've used so far.

Who were you thinking of adding Mr Kaboom? Feel free to post your entrance to the situation, then get to some hardcore interaction.

Namor is going to try and resurrect the Fantastic Four....so I'm thinking either an incarcerated Sunspot could do nicely.

[Cyrusbales]

knock yourself out. obviously not litteraly!

[Cyrusbales]

New Octavius post up and a new Vulture is on the way...

Nice vulture post. How you gonna sort it out for the rumble? I was thinking that vulture would engage DD, then punisher just blows his way in :)


Hey Kaboom, get Namor in Xavier's base.

Also, Brotherhood, bring it on!

[Feature]

Nice vulture post. How you gonna sort it out for the rumble? I was thinking that vulture would engage DD, then punisher just blows his way in :)

Well, since Punisher and DD are going to rumble right now, I guess Vulch will sit this one out. Unless... I have an idea. I'll PM you. :yay:

[Kaboom]

Nice vulture post. How you gonna sort it out for the rumble? I was thinking that vulture would engage DD, then punisher just blows his way in :)


Hey Kaboom, get Namor in Xavier's base.

Also, Brotherhood, bring it on!
done

[guitarsingerguy]

So sorry everyone. I've been having comp. power supply issues, but they should be fixed now. I'll start posting again ASAP.

[Noon]

bumpity

Where is everyone?

[Matt Murdock]

here!

[Noon]

Yay!

Thats one, c'mon people lets not let this thing come to a halt.

POOOST!

[Matt Murdock]

woooooot

[Apprentice]

Sorry to bail on you like this, but I just don't have time for this RPG. I'm not playing the Spidey I know and love, and just can't connect with the dark side as much...so, as soon as our fight is over (or, if SSF wants, he can finish it up alone), I'm out.

Sorry guys. :(

[Brainiac 8]

What about Havok?

You still gonna use him?

[Apprentice]

Maybe...probably...I don't know...

[Matt Murdock]

Well...
alrighty then!

I s'pose I'll apply for my third character, then.

[Matt Murdock]

We can finish the fight if you want, though, app.

[Matt Murdock]

Sorry, Feature, but I had to!

I'll edit it if you'd like, I just thought that that was a majorly dramatic situation.

[Matt Murdock]

I'm callin' 5's on spidey!!

[Feature]

Sorry, Feature, but I had to!

I'll edit it if you'd like, I just thought that that was a majorly dramatic situation.

Well, I wish you would've asked me before shoving Stark in there, but I guess it's nothing that wasn't going to happen eventually anyways. We can work around it. I'm not interested in another big fight though. Maybe just a quick exchange.
Let's work this out via PMs before we take it any futher, okay? :cwink:

[Matt Murdock]

Whoops... silly me!

Want me to edit?

I have a second story already typed up.

[Feature]

It's up to you. I'd be fine either way I suppose.

[Matt Murdock]

I don't want to ruin your arc. So if you'd like me to change I will. :)

[Cyrusbales]

hey, I'm back from southampton now! To nights of massive drinking and suchlike! Brilliant! Anyhow, how's things, let's get some violence on dudes! Punisher is up for some hardcore lovin!

[Feature]

I don't want to ruin your arc. So if you'd like me to change I will. :)

Well, you might as well change it then, since you said you already have something else written.
I don't think I want the world to be doubting Octavius already.

[Cyrusbales]

Braniac, you ana post something about my punisher being at your door, and tooled up to kill!

[Apprentice]

Okay, so I've decided to come back. SSF, if you don't mind, I'd like to reclaim Spidey. I ahd a ton of ideas for him and Havok, and I think I can get back into the swing of things now.

[Noon]

muahahaha, you cannot escape the draw of rpg, no matter how much you struggle to escape, you only end up more entangled! :hyper:

[Cyrusbales]

like me and my quad vod's last night :)

(I was sick!, but not till after a whole bottle of wine as well! And someone spiking our drinks! SHAZAM!)

Noon, you wanna move on the brotherhood stuff?

Kaboom, your move big guy!

[Noon]

like me and my quad vod's last night :)

(I was sick!, but not till after a whole bottle of wine as well! And someone spiking our drinks! SHAZAM!)

Noon, you wanna move on the brotherhood stuff?

Kaboom, your move big guy!

Hell yeah, I'm itching to get the phoenix fired up, and not just cause I have awesome pics to use :p

But I want Brainiac to reply, I guess I could just time skip a bit...

[Cyrusbales]

Hell yeah, I'm itching to get the phoenix fired up, and not just cause I have awesome pics to use :p

But I want Brainiac to reply, I guess I could just time skip a bit...

well if you want that's fine. Don't release the phoenix until the twist! Seriously, I'm actually very excited about this, and I bet you money you can't guess it! :oldrazz:

should I deal with Namor first? Once I'm finishing that, then the brotherhood storm me!

[Noon]

well if you want that's fine. Don't release the phoenix until the twist! Seriously, I'm actually very excited about this, and I bet you money you can't guess it! :oldrazz:

should I deal with Namor first? Once I'm finishing that, then the brotherhood storm me!

Ok, you have to PM me this twist! As compensation for making me wait on the phoenix, lol.

Maybe if Namor gets captured the x-men can bail him out when they get there

[Cyrusbales]

twist is too big, I need the surprise to be there dollface!

[Noon]

Aw, well you better reveal it soon!

I think Ima go ahead and skip the brotherhood to the mansion, any conditions you need for this twist?

[Cyrusbales]

well i can twist anything here! make my day sugar!

[Kaboom]

all namor wants to do is shut down those satelites....I'll get him to the up link room, he can be ambushed by the the X-men and locked up with Sunspot...the brother hood can bust him out, hell destroy the uplink, be ready to leave until he finds the brotherhood getting their collective butts whooped on, hell feel the urge to be a hero, have Cyrus unleash the twist, phoenix will get fired up...and well let the chips fall where they may....how does that work for everyone?

[Cyrusbales]

Shazam! :)

[Noon]

Bingo Bango :cwink:

[Kaboom]

I think I have namor's fantastic Four square and I'm using characters most people dont claim so I shouldnt be stepping on anyones toes....

Namor
Sunspot
Doom
Nocturne

can i have downs on those characters?

[Kaboom]

hello? bueller...bueller...cyrus youre the moderator...answer me pleeeeeeeeeeeease!

[Matt Murdock]

ohI'm posting an app for spider-man in about half an hour

[Apprentice]

Okay, so I've decided to come back. SSF, if you don't mind, I'd like to reclaim Spidey. I ahd a ton of ideas for him and Havok, and I think I can get back into the swing of things now.

^^
I hope ya don't mind, SSF. If you still want him...well, then it's only fair that I should give him up for mucking you about.

[Brainiac 8]

^^
I hope ya don't mind, SSF. If you still want him...well, then it's only fair that I should give him up for mucking you about.


I'm glad you're willing to stay on Apprentice, We are getting ready to fight X-Men and I wanted you to be a part of it.:woot:

[Apprentice]

How could I abandon such a great band of RPers? :D

[Kaboom]

How could I abandon such a great band of RPers? :D
i hope im included in that group even if everyone is ignoring me =(

[Brainiac 8]

i hope im included in that group even if everyone is ignoring me =(

I never ignore you Boomster. :cmad:

Actually, I can't wait till we get to the big fight so you can be a part of it. :D

[Kaboom]

I never ignore you Boomster. :cmad:

Actually, I can't wait till we get to the big fight so you can be a part of it. :D
well, im trying to get the rights to npc susnpot, doom, and nocturne as Namor's fantastic four....but nobody is approwing me

[Cyrusbales]

sorry, not been on all day. Well I have no probs with you having the rights etc. Just post a little bit about their background in terms of this what if rpg :)

[Matt Murdock]

why not, app?

[Brainiac 8]

Long overdue Daredevil post up....it's your turn Cyrus. ;)


Mags is also up Noon, and Guitar and Apprentice.:yay:

[Noon]

Your mags post is one behind, I already skipped us ahead to landing near the mansion, sorry

[Brainiac 8]

Your mags post is one behind, I already skipped us ahead to landing near the mansion, sorry


Oops, I'll fix that and catch up. :O

[Brainiac 8]

Ok Noon, it's fixed..and we need to get the others involved here...where is Zoken also, so he can have Bertha be in the fight?

[Kaboom]

im just kinda lounging in a holding cell with sunspot waiting for you guys to show up.................

[Brainiac 8]

im just kinda lounging in a holding cell with sunspot waiting for you guys to show up.................


Yup, hopefully we'll have you out soon.

Apprentice should be the one to release you...hopefully.:oldrazz:

[Kaboom]

new Namor post up...check me out.

[Brainiac 8]

What's up man, why haven't you really posted over at the Smallville boards in the last few days....has the hiatus messed you up?:huh: :csad:

[Kaboom]

What's up man, why haven't you really posted over at the Smallville boards in the last few days....has the hiatus messed you up?:huh: :csad:
you know what it is....between the hiatus, and all the stupid threads about BW and WW, and all the merry-go rounding, i just kinda got tired. I scan it occasioanlyy, if theres anything worth commenting on, ill post, but ive been too crazy at work recently to get trapped in the same discussions over and over and over again. know what I mean?

[Brainiac 8]

you know what it is....between the hiatus, and all the stupid threads about BW and WW, and all the merry-go rounding, i just kinda got tired. I scan it occasioanlyy, if theres anything worth commenting on, ill post, but ive been too crazy at work recently to get trapped in the same discussions over and over and over again. know what I mean?

I know, but while I'm glad we still get to talk over here, I think the gals miss talking to you.

I haven't been posting as much over there during this hiatus either...for the same reasons...I still try to get a comment or two in so as not to disappear.:yay:

[Brainiac 8]

But I do agree with your thoughts on the current state of many of the threads though. :up:

[Apprentice]

Tomorrow night is my posting night, so Havok and Spidey are gonna be back on the block. Also just typed up the plans for my big Spidey arc...I'm hoping it's gonna be a shocker (no pun intended).

[Brainiac 8]

Awsome, since you're gonna be our jail breaker so that Namor can join in on the fight. :D

[Cyrusbales]

I'll post an Xavier post with Namor in like 10 mins or so, so you have something to do Kaboom, then I'll leave the convo when the brotherhood crash in....

[Brainiac 8]

Ok guys, start posting. :)

Feature, now would be prime time for Vulture to appear with the commotion at Daredevil's building.

C'mon Brotherhood, where are ya?

[Feature]

Feature, now would be prime time for Vulture to appear with the commotion at Daredevil's building.

Yes, that might be a good idea. Of course, I'll have to get him out of jail first.

[Maxinsc]

Sorry if it's too late to sign up

Screen Name:Maxinsc

Character you would like to play: Deadpool

Powers and a brief description of the character in proper English: Healing Factor, Superhuman strength, speed, endurance and agility, Expert marksman and swordsman, Teleportation, Psychic immunity, Master martial artist and tactician, and Instantaneous reflexes

Three reasons why you have chosen that character:

1. He's a bad @$$ mercenary

2. He's awesome with weapons

3. He's extremely funny

What can you bring to this game? I hope to bring some more comedey and story to it.



How many times do you intend on posting a DAY IN the RPG: As much as possible

Do you know how to post pictures on the hype boards: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/c/ca/Deadpool.png/200px-Deadpool.png

WHAT IF? PROPOSAL(and explain why if you can): When he was in the workshop, instead of falling in love with death, he came to not hate her, but not love her ethier, instead he wanted to try to save the innocence, who time it was not yet to die, and kill those that are guilty and desvere death. He also realizes that life is short and that you need to cherish it, so he attempts to cause a rebllion to escape, but he was sentenced to death, but just when it was about to happen his healing factor activates, but he was already dead or so it seemed, his body was thrown outside in to the trash, but he was still alive, and when he regain consinouse, he ran away to chicago where he Saves the innocence, and kill the guilty, news soon go out to the American Goverment, and they capture him. He is then given two choices ethier become an agent of the goverment, or be killed. He decides to become an agent, but not just an ordinary agent, but an specal agent, sent all over the world to take care of superhuman threats, soon his rank rises, and he joins S.H.I.E.L.D, and because he never got killed the first time because he is able to retain his good looks, because he never came across Copycat, because he never got hired by trovller. While on one mission in New York, while he was fighting rhino, he was thrown at a large speed, but during this time, he was able to knock out rhino with bullets, but his head hit a building hard, and he was unconsious. The next thing he knewn was that he was in a dark room, the lights turned on, and there he saw the Green Goblin, he was grining, he was goning to break his mind and turn him into a slave, he turned offed the lights ans had a gas going in the room, a gas that was destroying Wade's mind, but it didn't because there was a little blink of insanity in his head, one nethier good or evil, just a blink that told him to releash it all, and enjoy doing it. And with that, the gas had no effect, Deadpool started asking if anyone would untie him, a person opened the door it was Weasle, he untied Deadpool and asked him why he was in the Osbcorn feacility, Deadpool explained to him what happened, and with that Weasel decided he shouldn't have taken the wing under osborn, so he helps Deadpool escape, and they both use weasel's prototype Teleportaion belt, and manage to teleport to the helecarrier. There Deadpool learned there was nothing they could do about his insanisty, which was okay with, because ever since he was a child he always wanted to be, Deadpool: Mentaly Insane agent of Sheild.


Reason why I pick this story: I always liked Deadpool, and I thought it would be @$$ for him to be a Sheild Agent.

[Brainiac 8]

Yes, that might be a good idea. Of course, I'll have to get him out of jail first.


Then get to it! ;)

[Cyrusbales]

ok, to sum that up, Deadpool is not invincible anymore, and now works for shield and is insane.....

Could you do a sample post, as your new to RPG's etc......

[Maxinsc]

Deadpool
On the sheild helicarrier, Deadpool was chatting with his good freind weasil, who wish he wasn't there right now, but anyway he was laking about the new abilities of the teleportation Belt, which he thens hands over to deadpool, who puts it on, and asks "Does this make me look fat?", but then the intercom comes on, it's Sgt. Fury, who says, "Deadpool, get your lazy @$$ down here right now!", and with that Deadpool teleports down to the mission asimment room, and walks up to Sgt. Fury, and yells, "Sir, my @$$ is not lazy! Do you now pain it goes through on beans for lunch day? So not only is my butt not lazy, but it goes through a hell of pain!, Fury replies with, "Quit your yapping, you gotta to worry about your mission at hand.", Deadpool then says "Yes Sir!. I am willing to die for this country so that it may the right that it's fathers fought for!", Fury then finnaly says, "Quit the crap. We had heard reports about abunch of crazy things happening in New York, and we need you to investigate, and then terminate the threat, what ever it is. So now go do it!", Which deadpool replies with, "Yes Sir!", He then teleports to New York city.

[Matt Murdock]

Crud!!

I thought someone had deadpool.

Dang it.

[Matt Murdock]

oh..
wait nvm ill have carnage in a few posts.
yeah, nevermind.

And your post was a little confusing, but that might just be me.

[Kaboom]

i like being locked up and not having anything to do.

[Brainiac 8]

i like being locked up and not having anything to do.


We are working on it buddy.

I'm hoping Apprentice posts soon, since he was the one that I was gonna have save you.:hyper:

[Cyrusbales]

Deadpool
On the sheild helicarrier, Deadpool was chatting with his good freind weasil, who wish he wasn't there right now, but anyway he was laking about the new abilities of the teleportation Belt, which he thens hands over to deadpool, who puts it on, and asks "Does this make me look fat?", but then the intercom comes on, it's Sgt. Fury, who says, "Deadpool, get your lazy @$$ down here right now!", and with that Deadpool teleports down to the mission asimment room, and walks up to Sgt. Fury, and yells, "Sir, my @$$ is not lazy! Do you now pain it goes through on beans for lunch day? So not only is my butt not lazy, but it goes through a hell of pain!, Fury replies with, "Quit your yapping, you gotta to worry about your mission at hand.", Deadpool then says "Yes Sir!. I am willing to die for this country so that it may the right that it's fathers fought for!", Fury then finnaly says, "Quit the crap. We had heard reports about abunch of crazy things happening in New York, and we need you to investigate, and then terminate the threat, what ever it is. So now go do it!", Which deadpool replies with, "Yes Sir!", He then teleports to New York city.

OK, just use a spellchecker and space your speech away from your text like so:


Deadpool

On the sheild helicarrier, Deadpool was chatting with his good freind weasil, who wish he wasn't there right now, but anyway he was laking about the new abilities of the teleportation Belt, which he thens hands over to deadpool, who puts it on, and asks

"Does this make me look fat?",

but then the intercom comes on, it's Sgt. Fury, who says,

"Deadpool, get your lazy @$$ down here right now!",

and with that Deadpool teleports down to the mission asimment room, and walks up to Sgt. Fury, and yells,
"Sir, my @$$ is not lazy! Do you now pain it goes through on beans for lunch day? So not only is my butt not lazy, but it goes through a hell of pain!,
Fury replies with,
"Quit your yapping, you gotta to worry about your mission at hand."

, Deadpool then says

"Yes Sir!. I am willing to die for this country so that it may the right that it's fathers fought for!",

Fury then finnaly says,

"Quit the crap. We had heard reports about abunch of crazy things happening in New York, and we need you to investigate, and then terminate the threat, what ever it is. So now go do it!",

Which deadpool replies with,

"Yes Sir!",

He then teleports to New York city.


with the changes in text colour for both fury and deadpool, you can do away with all the replies etc... like so:



Deadpool

On the sheild helicarrier, Deadpool was chatting with his good freind weasil, who wish he wasn't there right now, but anyway he was laking about the new abilities of the teleportation Belt, which he thens hands over to deadpool, who puts it on.

"Does this make me look fat?",

but then the intercom comes on, it's Sgt. Fury,

"Deadpool, get your lazy @$$ down here right now!",

and with that Deadpool teleports down to the mission asimment room, and walks up to Sgt. Fury yeling.

"Sir, my @$$ is not lazy! Do you now pain it goes through on beans for lunch day? So not only is my butt not lazy, but it goes through a hell of pain!,

"Quit your yapping, you gotta to worry about your mission at hand."


"Yes Sir!. I am willing to die for this country so that it may the right that it's fathers fought for!",


"Quit the crap. We had heard reports about abunch of crazy things happening in New York, and we need you to investigate, and then terminate the threat, what ever it is. So now go do it!",


"Yes Sir!",

He then teleports to New York city.


it just makes things sound a little better. Sound alright? I don't mean to push you around or anything, I want you to be a part of this RPG, but we RP'ers are weird people wanting things pristine, lol. (I'm happy you put your character name at the begining of the post, wished everyone did that....:whatever: lol)

You cool with that?

[Matt Murdock]

I don't know what but the P.O.V and tense sounds a little off too.
I think it's because "then" is used a lot.

[Matt Murdock]

*why

[Foggy Nelson]

The over-use of then makes it sound like a list, possibly?

[Matt Murdock]

Exactly.:up:

[Matt Murdock]

And grammar is always a good thing...

[Brainiac 8]

Plus Doc Ock is head of shield here, not Fury.

[Brainiac 8]

Apprentice, the X-Men are the ones we are fighting...Havok's on the Brotherhood.

Or is Havok secretly an X-Man?:huh:

[Matt Murdock]

K I'm posting an app for war machine in a sec. I don't think this one will be in character. Any objections?

[Cyrusbales]

erm...two character rule.....

[Matt Murdock]

Aww, man. I thought we could have 3 on this thread.

[Matt Murdock]

Can I have a trial period where I can write as the three of them for a week and if I realize I can't really spread myself that thing then I'll drop him?

(prettttty pretty please) :D