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Dark Sentinel 03-12-2007 09:02 AM

Superboy in the SR continuity (*read before bashing please!*)
 
Before the bashing begins, just hear me out. I've liked the character of the modern age Superboy for two reasons: a) He's more conflicted than Superman and b) Superboy's a bit of a smart-mouth when it comes to his "superhero" work.

For a while now I've been thinking about how Superboy (not Jason White!) would work in the SR continuity. Well, if you remember from SR when Superman lifts his hand after unknowingly touching the kryptonite ore in Lex's landmass his fingers are bleeding. Now this would involve a bit more retconning but le's theorize that Lex was able to obtain a bit of Superman's blood (or hair or whatever, some piece of Superman's genetic material) and after being foiled in SR came up with another plan: using Superman's DNA and the money he swindled from Gertrude, he begins Project Cadmus with the help of Dr. Paul Westfield.

Now i'm more than aware that Superboy was created by Project Cadmus after Superman's death, so Superboy's origin would change somewhat to conform to the SR continuity. Instead of being created with the purpose of replacing Superman after his death, Superboy would be created as a weapon to destroy Superman. So the movie would follow Superboy's journey from Superman's intended assassin to Superman's ally, eventually leading to him being christened Kon-El at the end and possibly allowing for a spinoff movie series (if this isn't one already lol)

If anyone's interested I'd be more than happy to post more details, as this is only a very rough sketch of the background and plot.

Eros 03-12-2007 09:29 AM

Re: Superboy
 
They already have Jason, for the "super boy" department. Anything else is uneccassary and redundant.

Showtime 03-12-2007 10:45 AM

Re: Superboy in the SR continuity (*read before bashing please!*)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by dark_sentinel (Post 11357955)
Before the bashing begins, just hear me out. I've liked the character of the modern age Superboy for two reasons: a) He's more conflicted than Superman and b) Superboy's a bit of a smart-mouth when it comes to his "superhero" work.

For a while now I've been thinking about how Superboy (not Jason White!) would work in the SR continuity. Well, if you remember from SR when Superman lifts his hand after unknowingly touching the kryptonite ore in Lex's landmass his fingers are bleeding. Now this would involve a bit more retconning but le's theorize that Lex was able to obtain a bit of Superman's blood (or hair or whatever, some piece of Superman's genetic material) and after being foiled in SR came up with another plan: using Superman's DNA and the money he swindled from Gertrude, he begins Project Cadmus with the help of Dr. Paul Westfield.

Now i'm more than aware that Superboy was created by Project Cadmus after Superman's death, so Superboy's origin would change somewhat to conform to the SR continuity. Instead of being created with the purpose of replacing Superman after his death, Superboy would be created as a weapon to destroy Superman. So the movie would follow Superboy's journey from Superman's intended assassin to Superman's ally, eventually leading to him being christened Kon-El at the end and possibly allowing for a spinoff movie series (if this isn't one already lol)

If anyone's interested I'd be more than happy to post more details, as this is only a very rough sketch of the background and plot.

Your idea is solid in its own right, but wouldn't work in the realm of Returns. The DNA would most likely be used to create Bizzaro.

Dark Sentinel 03-12-2007 11:22 AM

Re: Superboy
 
you're quite right showtime, but Superman's DNA was used to create Superboy as well. Bizzaro is a degenerate clone of Superman while Superboy is a partial clone. this could be explained easily: the DNA that Lex obtained was highly contaminated by the kryptonite shard that Lex used to stab Superman with, thereby creating Bizzaro (i know thats not how it happened in the comics but i'm just thinking in terms of the film universe for now) but Kryptonian DNA is similar enough to human DNA that human DNA could be grafted onto it in order to stabilize it and neutralize its degenerative nature, thereby creating Superboy.

the above situation would actually function as a separate Superboy spinoff movie now that i think about it (albeit the plot will have to be more developed but it could work). one of Superboy's "titles" in the comics was Project 13, so i guess Bizzaro could be the failed Project 12. i'm really just freewriting at this point lol but i'll stop now

Showtime 03-12-2007 12:16 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by dark_sentinel (Post 11358275)
you're quite right showtime, but Superman's DNA was used to create Superboy as well. Bizzaro is a degenerate clone of Superman while Superboy is a partial clone. this could be explained easily: the DNA that Lex obtained was highly contaminated by the kryptonite shard that Lex used to stab Superman with, thereby creating Bizzaro (i know thats not how it happened in the comics but i'm just thinking in terms of the film universe for now) but Kryptonian DNA is similar enough to human DNA that human DNA could be grafted onto it in order to stabilize it and neutralize its degenerative nature, thereby creating Superboy.

the above situation would actually function as a separate Superboy spinoff movie now that i think about it (albeit the plot will have to be more developed but it could work). one of Superboy's "titles" in the comics was Project 13, so i guess Bizzaro could be the failed Project 12. i'm really just freewriting at this point lol but i'll stop now

You know your stuff, and it certainly could work. Do I think they will do something like that? Probably not, but it' has merit.

Dark Sentinel 03-12-2007 01:45 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Showtime029 (Post 11358484)
You know your stuff, and it certainly could work. Do I think they will do something like that? Probably not, but it' has merit.

thats actually surprising to hear, since i havent read one Superboy comic. i just know everything from reading up on it. i think Conner (as Superboy) is a much more interesting character than Clark (as Superman)personally; he's able to be more relaxed and a little cocky at times as opposed to Superman's almost over-exaggerated nobility.

and yeah, it most likely wouldnt happen, but it'd be a fun movie to see IMO. i should start on the screenplay :woot:

daywalker2007 03-12-2007 02:17 PM

Re: Superboy
 
great ideas but unfortunately singer and his hack team of idiot morons called "dougherty and harris" do not have the mental capacity to think of such stories or use these

expect a sequel with 1 single villian, and some crappy scenes

dont expect any action with fight scenes etc

singer and his team dont have the balls or courage to make a good film

i mean, coming from a background of "urban legend", dougherty and harris have as much writing talent as 2 dollar hookers

daywalker2007 03-12-2007 02:19 PM

Re: Superboy
 
unfortunately WB or singer or his team dont have any courage or balls like true film makers like James Cameron or Steven Spielberg.

Even Albert Pyun is a better director than Bryan Singer and his Captain America movie is better than Superman Returns,

might as well hire him to do a sequel and cause some "Max havoc" , lol

Billy Batson 03-12-2007 03:20 PM

Re: Superboy
 
First SR ruined my Superman movie dream, now you guys all taking Superboy aka
(SV) from me. :cwink:

dark_sentinel, your idea is very imaginative :up:

I would love to see little Jason become Bizzaro.
The Human part of Jason's DNA is causing an chromosome abnormality within his Kryptonian DNA, resulting in a genetic disorder.
As Jason age, his DNA mutation transform him into Bizzaro. :woot:

Venom'sDad 03-12-2007 03:47 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by dark_sentinel (Post 11358275)
you're quite right showtime, but Superman's DNA was used to create Superboy as well. Bizzaro is a degenerate clone of Superman while Superboy is a partial clone. this could be explained easily: the DNA that Lex obtained was highly contaminated by the kryptonite shard that Lex used to stab Superman with, thereby creating Bizzaro (i know thats not how it happened in the comics but i'm just thinking in terms of the film universe for now) but Kryptonian DNA is similar enough to human DNA that human DNA could be grafted onto it in order to stabilize it and neutralize its degenerative nature, thereby creating Superboy.

the above situation would actually function as a separate Superboy spinoff movie now that i think about it (albeit the plot will have to be more developed but it could work). one of Superboy's "titles" in the comics was Project 13, so i guess Bizzaro could be the failed Project 12. i'm really just freewriting at this point lol but i'll stop now

I agree.

Like Showtime, the DNA will most likely be used to create Bizarro, like someone else said ia another thread.

Dark Sentinel 03-12-2007 04:23 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Billy Batson (Post 11359229)
First SR ruined my Superman movie dream, now you guys all taking Superboy aka
(SV) from me. :cwink:

dark_sentinel, your idea is very imaginative :up:

I would love to see little Jason become Bizzaro.
The Human part of Jason's DNA is causing an chromosome abnormality within his Kryptonian DNA, resulting in a genetic disorder.
As Jason age, his DNA mutation transform him into Bizzaro. :woot:

actually thats a pretty interesting idea that could work...maybe Lois was smoking while she was pregnant with him? :oldrazz:

TheBat812 03-12-2007 04:31 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Superboy sucks. Leave him out of Sr and it's sequels.

VenomsMom 03-12-2007 05:37 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom'sDad (Post 11359320)
I agree.

Like Showtime, the DNA will most likely be used to create Bizarro, like someone else said ia another thread.

Just great, thats all we need is Lex Luther and Superman's retarded clone for villains. You all are trying to bury this francise.

redcaped 03-12-2007 06:41 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Jason will never wear the same costume unless his father dies permanently but still won't fit because there are things meant for only one person and he's not suppose to be like Bat-Man or Flash.

Billy Batson 03-12-2007 10:24 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by VenomsMom (Post 11359873)
Just great, thats all we need is Lex Luther and Superman's retarded clone for villains. You all are trying to bury this francise.

That has already been accomplished.

C. Lee 03-12-2007 10:53 PM

Re: Superboy
 
The Superboy from the new comics could be introduced by cloning as dark sentinel proposed.......Jason is sticky point....but he can be worked around.

wellsy 03-13-2007 03:54 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Technically, isn't Jason pretty much already equivalent to Conner?

Albeit with Lois' DNA.

But you see my point... I hope.

Aside from that though, I don't think its all that bad a concept - very clever of you.

I_Hate_U_All 03-13-2007 03:57 AM

Re: Superboy
 
ready for another trip through the Superman movie twilight zone on the hype, Mr. Lee? :cwink:

Not me. The Suit wars, cast wars, comic vs film wars, attack of the killer piano, etc... I'm not getting involved with that again...

I predict there'll be a "The Kid War" once the hype starts rolling on superman again.

Me, I consider the kid to be the new gus gorman. While watching superman III, it confuses me why Richard Pryor's in it so much, but ah well... At least there's some good parts with reeve to watch.

Now supposedly if Jason doesn't become Superboy, then maybe he can become supergirl through a sex change... yes, kidding.

I must say though, that wouldn't this whole plot be a rehash of superman IV in some aspects?

R_Hythlodeus 03-13-2007 06:44 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by daywalker2007 (Post 11358937)
unfortunately WB or singer or his team dont have any courage or balls like true film makers like James Cameron or Steven Spielberg.

Even Albert Pyun is a better director than Bryan Singer and his Captain America movie is better than Superman Returns,

might as well hire him to do a sequel and cause some "Max havoc" , lol

http://faeren.fa.funpic.de/Board/ima...on_bruhaha.gif

Dark Sentinel 03-13-2007 08:10 AM

Re: Superboy
 
here's an idea (and one that might save my project): if Doomsday is in the sequel, what if one of Superman's motiviating factors (besides his commitment to protecting the world) is that Doomsday kills the kid during one of his rampages?

think about it:

a. It'd make the fight more personal (and therefore exciting)
b. Singer would (partially) redeem himself and keep the series open for more stories

plus that allows for me to write a really kick-*** Superboy script!:woot:

EDIT: yes, my Superboy script would be based on the Modern Age Superboy

P.S. VenomsMom: Bizzaro is Superman's degenerative clone, not retarted...ah who am I kidding?:oldrazz:

Dark Sentinel 03-13-2007 08:15 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by wellsy (Post 11362897)
Technically, isn't Jason pretty much already equivalent to Conner?

Albeit with Lois' DNA.

But you see my point... I hope.

Aside from that though, I don't think its all that bad a concept - very clever of you.

actually no. i might not be a hardcore fan of Superboy's but i know enough of his backstory to know that the human part of Conner's DNA is actually thanks to a generous donation from Lex Luthor. Originally Conner's DNA was claimed to have been given to him by Paul Westfield (the head of Project Cadmus) but this got retconned i think either last year or in '05

Venom'sDad 03-13-2007 11:13 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by VenomsMom (Post 11359873)
Just great, thats all we need is Lex Luther and Superman's retarded clone for villains. You all are trying to bury this francise.

No... if anything, Singer is burying the franchise, unless he come out of this Donner induced coma.

I really think h doesn't have a clue of the essence of Superman, that's why he's coping from Donner.... he really don't know the character.

VenomsMom 03-13-2007 01:35 PM

Re: Superboy
 
These movies should solely focus on the story that is Superman. Why on earth are we trying to set up Superboy? Superman has just been reintroduced to the big screen after almost a 20 year absence and we are talking about Superboy. They are taking the attention away from Superman with this kid. His inception is still an enigma to me. Get back to basics and establish Supes as he should be and give us some entertaining villains.

VenomsMom 03-13-2007 01:39 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom'sDad (Post 11363858)
No... if anything, Singer is burying the franchise, unless he come out of this Donner induced coma.

I really think h doesn't have a clue of the essence of Superman, that's why he's coping from Donner.... he really don't know the character.

This francise was already buried, it was Singer's job to dig it up and revive it to its glory. Instead he dug a deeper hole.

Billy Batson 03-13-2007 02:16 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by VenomsMom (Post 11364241)
This francise was already buried, it was Singer's job to dig it up and revive it to its glory. Instead he dug a deeper hole.

Nah! The francise was just on the shelf, a little tv show revived the man of steel and a movie based on that show "would've/should've/could've" brought old BIG BLUE back to glory.

On the bright side, in SR II Doomsday will deep sick superman and little "J" will hold down the fork, until Kara, Kara Zor'EL, Linda or Cir'EL restore the Mighty :super:
Hey! is to late for Jason to have a sister? "Cir'EL"
or maybe Smallville's Clark & Lois can have a baby in the very last episode of the show.

Justice Bringer 03-13-2007 06:18 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Theres a better chance of them using this DNA cloning mishap for a character like Bizarro instead of Kon-El.

Makes me wonder if ten years from now if we will get to see Jason White, Dick Grayson, Barbera Gordon (who was a child in Batman Begins) etc as teenagers. The character would be around 16.

I prefer the idea of the character being the teenage son of Superman and Lois instead of a weird clone of Superman and Lex.

redcaped 03-13-2007 06:58 PM

Re: Superboy
 
This Bizarro idea is been used many times in comics, movies and animated series mostly as an imposter.

C. Lee 03-13-2007 10:13 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by I_Hate_U_All (Post 11362906)
ready for another trip through the Superman movie twilight zone on the hype, Mr. Lee? :cwink:

I think the real question is.....are these guys ready for me?

Quote:

Originally Posted by I_Hate_U_All (Post 11362906)
Not me. The Suit wars, cast wars, comic vs film wars, attack of the killer piano, etc... I'm not getting involved with that again...

I don't want that lunacy again either....so this time, fewer warnings, more probations.

Quote:

Originally Posted by I_Hate_U_All (Post 11362906)
I predict there'll be a "The Kid War" once the hype starts rolling on superman again.

I thought there was already a "Kid War".....but we'll definately have an escalation of hostilities.

Quote:

Originally Posted by I_Hate_U_All (Post 11362906)
Me, I consider the kid to be the new gus gorman. While watching superman III, it confuses me why Richard Pryor's in it so much, but ah well... At least there's some good parts with reeve to watch.

Pryor is in it so much becasue....he was one of the biggest names in show business at that time, and said he wanted to do a Superman movie.....so there is no comparison between his character and the kid.

Quote:

Originally Posted by I_Hate_U_All (Post 11362906)
Now supposedly if Jason doesn't become Superboy, then maybe he can become supergirl through a sex change... yes, kidding.

But your kidding generaly has a ring of truth to it.....are you working with Singer on the sequel?

Quote:

Originally Posted by I_Hate_U_All (Post 11362906)
I must say though, that wouldn't this whole plot be a rehash of superman IV in some aspects?

All plots of all stories are a rehash of what has gone before in some aspects....:hyper:

Spiderine 03-14-2007 12:22 AM

Re: Superboy
 
I think certain aspects of Bizarro can be done, actually I think they are setting Bizarro up.

I_Hate_U_All 03-14-2007 12:50 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by C. Lee (Post 11367050)
I think the real question is.....are these guys ready for me?

In my humble opinion. No. I've gone toe to toe with you under a different name and still have the scars from it to this very day. :dry: :cwink:


Quote:

I don't want that lunacy again either....so this time, fewer warnings, more probations.
:word: Good plan. Though I have to admit the drama outside the film itself was more entertaining than all of what I paid to see last year in the cinemas.

Quote:

I thought there was already a "Kid War".....but we'll definately have an escalation of hostilities.
Ah, you speak of that reaction to the initial kid revelation... Yes that was but a scuffle compared to what I can foresee. The way I'm thinking is if the superman curl can spark heated debate, something as drastic as adding superboy will bring down nuclear warfare upon us.


Quote:

Pryor is in it so much becasue....he was one of the biggest names in show business at that time, and said he wanted to do a Superman movie.....so there is no comparison between his character and the kid.
True. I only compare them because I think at this point I'll generally despise the kid's pressence as much as I do Pryor's if or when this sequel is released and includes super Jason.

Quote:

But your kidding generaly has a ring of truth to it.....are you working with Singer on the sequel?
Ha ha ha, no but I don't doubt they'd benefit from my input. :cwink:


Quote:

All plots of all stories are a rehash of what has gone before in some aspects....:hyper:
:hyper: Never thought about it like that...

Nokio 03-14-2007 01:35 AM

Re: Superboy in the SR continuity (*read before bashing please!*)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by dark_sentinel (Post 11357955)
Before the bashing begins, just hear me out. I've liked the character of the modern age Superboy for two reasons: a) He's more conflicted than Superman and b) Superboy's a bit of a smart-mouth when it comes to his "superhero" work.

For a while now I've been thinking about how Superboy (not Jason White!) would work in the SR continuity. Well, if you remember from SR when Superman lifts his hand after unknowingly touching the kryptonite ore in Lex's landmass his fingers are bleeding. Now this would involve a bit more retconning but le's theorize that Lex was able to obtain a bit of Superman's blood (or hair or whatever, some piece of Superman's genetic material) and after being foiled in SR came up with another plan: using Superman's DNA and the money he swindled from Gertrude, he begins Project Cadmus with the help of Dr. Paul Westfield.

Now i'm more than aware that Superboy was created by Project Cadmus after Superman's death, so Superboy's origin would change somewhat to conform to the SR continuity. Instead of being created with the purpose of replacing Superman after his death, Superboy would be created as a weapon to destroy Superman. So the movie would follow Superboy's journey from Superman's intended assassin to Superman's ally, eventually leading to him being christened Kon-El at the end and possibly allowing for a spinoff movie series (if this isn't one already lol)

If anyone's interested I'd be more than happy to post more details, as this is only a very rough sketch of the background and plot.

For a Superboy (if one is ever done)movie i say leave Jason White. All that Cadmus/Clone mess is to convoluted. I've always liked the cloned Superboy from Cadmus, but theirs no reason why Jason White can't grow to a teen and have that same attitide. He won't be living is Smallville Kansas, but a huge metropolitian city where teens are more hip and exposed to much more then kids in rural town America. He's also half human so having slighty different powers from his dad wouldn't be far fetched.

wellsy 03-14-2007 02:10 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by dark_sentinel (Post 11363292)
actually no. i might not be a hardcore fan of Superboy's but i know enough of his backstory to know that the human part of Conner's DNA is actually thanks to a generous donation from Lex Luthor. Originally Conner's DNA was claimed to have been given to him by Paul Westfield (the head of Project Cadmus) but this got retconned i think either last year or in '05

What I meant was that the basic idea of a human-Kryptonian DNA mix was the same.

The people can be different, but if the same kind of thing happened (only, in SR it was natural, whereas in the comics it was artificial), then doesn't that constitute a similarity? Even an outright parallel?

Billy Batson 03-14-2007 01:45 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Jason White as Bizarro

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/157/4...74412958_b.jpg
Cast a Routh lookalike,to play Jason all grown up.

VenomsMom 03-14-2007 01:58 PM

Re: Superboy
 
No superboy please. More Superman.

Dark Sentinel 03-15-2007 08:13 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by wellsy (Post 11368284)
What I meant was that the basic idea of a human-Kryptonian DNA mix was the same.

The people can be different, but if the same kind of thing happened (only, in SR it was natural, whereas in the comics it was artificial), then doesn't that constitute a similarity? Even an outright parallel?

maybe the basic idea of cloning Superman, but I always thought that Bizzaro had "pure" Kryptonian DNA. like i said before (in the words of Christopher Nolan :woot:) i've always been a big fan of the character, but i am by no means any kind of comic book expert, so i could be wrong

FlawlessVictory 03-15-2007 09:22 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by C. Lee (Post 11367050)
I thought there was already a "Kid War".....but we'll definately have an escalation of hostilities.

Escalation?

http://photos.imageevent.com/batmano...an_signal1.jpg


:woot:

Venom'sDad 03-15-2007 02:44 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Billy Batson (Post 11370522)
Jason White as Bizarro

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/157/4...74412958_b.jpg
Cast a Routh lookalike,to play Jason all grown up.

That's a nice drawing

VenomsMom 03-15-2007 02:47 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Singer will probably play it safe and go with Bizarro and Lex. Perhaps a Brainiac appearance.

Nokio 03-18-2007 06:18 AM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom'sDad (Post 11376706)
That's a nice drawing

well he's certainly more muscular and ripped then his dad, LOL.

Dark Sentinel 03-18-2007 04:32 PM

Re: Superboy
 
i havent read Death of Superman yet but can anyone tell me if there was a single motivating incident that prompted Superman and the JL to confront Doomsday? i know it sounds like a dumb ? but i'm just thinking that maybe (in the film version) it'll be Jason's death (most likely incidental) that spurs Superman into action. would it work?

Dark Sentinel 03-29-2007 07:44 PM

Re: Superboy
 
alright i know i'm flogging a dead horse here but i'm going to go ahead and write Superboy: Experiment 13 anyway as a fanscript. so for fun i also made a "teaser poster" for it as well. its a crappy poster, i made it in MS Paint but anyway here you go

http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i401751_poster.JPG

daywalker2007 03-29-2007 08:27 PM

Re: Superboy
 
singer doesnt have the courage to think of such ideas

his mental state is equivalent to a 5 year old

he needs help

El Payaso 03-29-2007 08:30 PM

Re: Superboy
 
You need money.

Dark Sentinel 03-29-2007 08:32 PM

Re: Superboy
 
yeah cash would help haha

Dark Sentinel 04-02-2007 04:58 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Alright so here's a scene i've written for my fanscript of Superboy: Experiment 13... actually i'm thinking of renaming it Superboy: Red Hour but i'm not so sure. Anyway, here you go.


Int. FIRST NATIONAL BANK


Two BURGLARS drop down from an air vent into an empty bank. They wear black sweaters and cargo pants, the getup finished off with black skullcaps and boots, as well as a pair of gloves each. As they creep through, silvery moonlight washes through the high windows, creating long narrow shadows along the floor. At the opposite end of their point of entry is the door of a large steel safe. Burglar 2 pulls out a hotgun and begins to break the heavy lock on the safe. Suddenly, a WHOOSH breaks the silence. BURGLAR 1 turns and looks hesitantly around the bank.


BURGLAR 2
What is it?


BURGLAR 1
(nervous)
I-I dunno...must be an open window or somethin'.


BURGLAR 2
Well then lets move it, huh?


Burglar 2 looks at the glowing face of a digital watch. He returns to his work but he feels Burglar 1 tapping his shoulder fervently. Burglar 2 looks, and standing behind them is CONNER, arms crossed, dressed in a black T-shirt with the RED SUPERMAN SYMBOL outlined on it. A pair of jeans and black and red sneakers complete his ensemble. He smirks confidently and raises one eyebrow. Burglar 2 starts laughing.


BURGLAR 2
(laughing)
What's this? Some kinda joke, right? Alright then, Superboy, you've had your fun, so beat it and let us finish our--


Conner moves with BLINDING SPEED, and is now standing directly in front of Burglar 2. Using his superhuman strength, he lifts Burglar 2 off his feet. Conner's eyebrows are furrowed, and his grin has become a scowl. Burglar 1 backs up, a frightened expression splayed across his face.


CONNER
(annoyed)
Dont ever call me Superboy--


With the slightest push, Burglar 2 is hurled back into Burglar 1. Their momentum causes them to fly back and slam against the safe's door. They slump to the floor in an unconscious heap.


CONNER (Cont'd)
Got it?

project13 06-13-2007 08:00 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by dark_sentinel (Post 11474103)
Alright so here's a scene i've written for my fanscript of Superboy: Experiment 13... actually i'm thinking of renaming it Superboy: Red Hour but i'm not so sure. Anyway, here you go.


Int. FIRST NATIONAL BANK


Two BURGLARS drop down from an air vent into an empty bank. They wear black sweaters and cargo pants, the getup finished off with black skullcaps and boots, as well as a pair of gloves each. As they creep through, silvery moonlight washes through the high windows, creating long narrow shadows along the floor. At the opposite end of their point of entry is the door of a large steel safe. Burglar 2 pulls out a hotgun and begins to break the heavy lock on the safe. Suddenly, a WHOOSH breaks the silence. BURGLAR 1 turns and looks hesitantly around the bank.


BURGLAR 2
What is it?


BURGLAR 1
(nervous)
I-I dunno...must be an open window or somethin'.


BURGLAR 2
Well then lets move it, huh?


Burglar 2 looks at the glowing face of a digital watch. He returns to his work but he feels Burglar 1 tapping his shoulder fervently. Burglar 2 looks, and standing behind them is CONNER, arms crossed, dressed in a black T-shirt with the RED SUPERMAN SYMBOL outlined on it. A pair of jeans and black and red sneakers complete his ensemble. He smirks confidently and raises one eyebrow. Burglar 2 starts laughing.


BURGLAR 2
(laughing)
What's this? Some kinda joke, right? Alright then, Superboy, you've had your fun, so beat it and let us finish our--


Conner moves with BLINDING SPEED, and is now standing directly in front of Burglar 2. Using his superhuman strength, he lifts Burglar 2 off his feet. Conner's eyebrows are furrowed, and his grin has become a scowl. Burglar 1 backs up, a frightened expression splayed across his face.


CONNER
(annoyed)
Dont ever call me Superboy--


With the slightest push, Burglar 2 is hurled back into Burglar 1. Their momentum causes them to fly back and slam against the safe's door. They slump to the floor in an unconscious heap.


CONNER (Cont'd)
Got it?

Whoa, this scene would make a great teaser. Where can I your fanscript?

chamber-music 01-23-2013 01:40 PM

Re: Superboy
 
Aaron Johnson would make a good Superboy.

http://s1.postimage.org/iw9hzw72n/no...943585cl_8.jpg

http://s9.postimage.org/cjfkcrerj/aa...owhere_boy.jpg

BH/HHH 01-23-2013 02:53 PM

Re: Superboy
 
I wouldn't mind if we get a Man of Steel trilogy aka the Dark Knight if they did the All Star Superman ending and a bit clone of Superman is in some sort of tube thing.

godisawesome 01-23-2013 03:43 PM

Re: Superboy
 
I'd save Superboy for a post-Lex as the big bad movie, where they can use Lex's creation of Conner as a reveal of just how far he's willing to go for persoanl and petty revenge.

Picture a Conner who's introduced as a government-created back-up for Superman that get's released by Clark when he finds out about him. Conner developes a personality and a close bond with Superman, only for the returning Lex to reveal he helped create Conner and implanted a Manchurian Canidate who then targets everyone Clark holds dear and we get to see Clark trying to keep a Superboy, who is at war with himself under the surface, from killing their friends and family.

Llama_Shepherd 01-23-2013 04:05 PM

Re: Superboy
 
I wouldn't bother with Superboy at all. He's not as important to who Superman is as a character as Robin is to Batman, for example.

Maybe some of his storyline (a clone of Superman manufactured by Lex) could be used in a sequel in perhaps the creation of Bizarro.


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