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Old 09-22-2006, 09:32 AM   #21
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Default Re: My S-M4 (Man-Spider & Vulture/Shocker Story)

i really think you have some talent with script writing. it's good mix of different issues...

just one thing... the middle seamed to be missing action... it seemed like their was only like 1 big battle...

also, Vulture and Shocker, even though their cool, aren't really BIG enough to be a main villain.. when someone thinks of a main villain, usually it's: Green Goblin, Doctor Octopus, Sandman, Venom, Carnage, Electro... someone like that... but not... Shocker, Rhino, Tombstone, or Vulture...

though the script was good, i don't think it would sell as much as one with Doc Ock or Venom, etc...

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