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Old 06-20-2010, 03:05 PM   #16
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Default Re: Batman: City of Scars

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Originally Posted by Bathead View Post
The writing - Generally good, but occasionally wordy, especially the ending speech which went on a little too long.
I thought the writing was consistently bad, probably the worst part of the film. All the dialogue was stiff and expository, especially Batman's inner monologue (which was the most important). The ADR was also very poor which made matters worse. But again, it's hard to be disappointed when you consider this is only a fan film.

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