Originally Posted by BH/HHH
If he was a bad journalist he'd get fired, he should be a damn good journalist.
OK good point, Im just looking for ways to add humor to the story without it being overly distracting, such as him bumping into everything or being a total dork.
Im going to request a mod to change the thread title to just "Things you see necessary for a good sequel" so we arent tied down to just 5 points
To satisfy all those who complained, acknowledge the damage done to the city, and perhaps have the villain be a product of the destruction. Maybe Metallo lost a limb or two in the carnage and Luthor rebuilt him with Krypton technology, so Metallo has a motive to kill Superman