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Old 07-06-2013, 03:06 AM   #15
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Default Re: 5 Things you see Necessary for a Good Sequel

Originally Posted by bluearth View Post
OK good point, Im just looking for ways to add humor to the story without it being overly distracting, such as him bumping into everything or being a total dork.
Humour can come in dialogue ya know, and I think an important thing is not to poke fun at your main character.

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