Re: Would you do anything differently in MoS?
I'd start him out as a child and build from there instead of having the flashbacks. I'd also give Clark a lot more dialogue.
"But if you make yourself more than just an avatar, if you devote yourself to an ideal, and if they can't stop you, then you become something else entirely... A legend Mr. Kane52630."
"You see, madness, as you know... Is like gravity. All you need is a little push!"