Re: Would you do anything differently in MoS?
I'd start him out as a child and build from there instead of having the flashbacks. I'd also give Clark a lot more dialogue.
"You see... Madness, as you know, is like gravity. All you need is a little push!"
"If you make yourself more than just an avatar, if you devote yourself to an ideal, you become something else entirely... A legend, Mr. SpideyK"