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Wrote some new stuff for WF, inspired by the recent football game shoots. Enjoy!
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#127 |
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I want a scene where Batman grudgingly asks Superman for a lift.
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I like that Lone. Or perhaps he could ask for some help lifting something, and Superman does it with one hand while looking bored.
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I want a scene where Bruce and Clark talk about how their parents died.
Bruce tells his story, Clark gets sad and puts his hand on Bruce's shoulder to comfort him. Clark tells his story, Bruce lols. |
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Yes, something like that.
And I want Clark to demonstrate to Bruce Pa Kent's facial expression and hand gesture that made Clark think "no, im not gonna save that dude". |
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I'd like there to be a couple of scenes were they show how Batman cant fight Superman on an 'even' battlefield but then if they can have a scene (maybe via red lamps) where Clark is de-powered and they show how when Clark and Bruce are both at a human power level, Clark is just as helpless as Batman was when he is at his 'God-like' power level.
I think a scene like that would help them both develop respect for each other. Clark about what it is to be human and how much of a threat they could be to him potentially and It would show Bruce how much restraint it takes Clark not to abuse his power (a common question about Batman is if he goes too far or abuses his own power).
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-EXT. AFGHANISTAN DESERT
AERIAL SHOT of a US MILITARY BASE with a helicopter approaching. ANGLE ON HELICOPTER LANDING. GENERAL SWANWICK is on the helicopter, a WOMAN beside him, exotic and dangerous looking. This is TALIA HEAD, LEXCORP's 2nd in command. -CUT TO: A shot of a RADIATION METER going berserk. Camera PANS OUT. We are UNDERGROUND. This is no ordinary military base. Its a dig site with a mobile lab; it is sealed and SWANWICK'S commitive watches from behind a glass. The equipment bears LEXCORP and WAYNE ENTEPRISES' logos, with scientists in nuclear protection gear testing the radiation levels on a mysterious GREEN AND RED ROCK. The levels are off the charts. SWANWICK and TALIA look to each other in disbelief.
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Oh, I was still thinking of Conroy's delivery and tone in Batman. I was just thinking of Bruce Wayne sounding vastly different.
Basically, my idea was that Bruce Wayne is the type of persona that people mock for being incredibly stupid as opposed to Bale's hedonistic portrayal. And then Batman is this stoic, somewhat sarcastic but always super serious and intimidating many man in his manner and tone.
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Not to hijack the speculation thread as my post is something I wouldn't mind seeing as the plot of the film, and this was the most applicable thread (I think)..
Open the film with Wayne and Luthor in talks of co-funding a program to developed means of neutralising beings like Superman. Wayne understands the need but is cautious of Luthor. As a sign of goodwill, Luthor shows him another Kryptonian ship and a possible lifeform he has discovered. They have synthesised an element that should react to the alien Superman as well. Batman investigates Superman and meets him. He's highly suspicious of him and goads him to test him, to which Superman is wise to and says he only has to prove himself to the public, not some crazy vigilante. Wayne discovers that Luthor is dirty after finding out about the robotising of humans in the Metallo program and pulls his funding. Luthor turns to the Govt, but because of Swannick they don't jump on board like Luthor needs. He creates a scenario that results in a soldier's 'death' (Corben) who he has turned into Metallo. Govt backs Luthor who unleashes Metallo on Superman 'in the public interest, but by now Batman who has thoroughly investigated Luthor backs Superman and assists in taking Metallo down. It's still obvious Batman doesn't trust Superman but facts point to him being innocent so he helps. While the public is unsure or plain terrified of them, Wayne gives Kent some information that backs up his story he's been working on about Lexcorp who is convinced by Perry to take to the govt (Swannick) rather than the press because at this point getting the govt on their side is more important for Superman (he knows he is Kent). Swannick convinces his superiors to halt funding Lexcorp pending a full investigation. Luthor releases the lifeform he found who rampages and in a short brutal fight dies while 'killing' Superman. Both public and world leaders acknowledge Superman is the real hero deal and have a public funeral. Luthor smirks that the govt doesn't like him now, but money and power always buys rich and influential friends. End the film in the Batcave where Superman is lying unconscious in a room with concentrated uv/infrared. Ends with Batman saying to Robin, "Luthor was right about one thing, we do need protection from beings like him.... And he's It."
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This is downright amazing.
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I want to see a fight scene with Batman going on an all out offense while Superman just sticks to defense. I want to watch Superman go into "this ends NOW" mode and end the fight immediately when he's had enough of Batman's bull-****.
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This is really really great.
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^Yeah, I really enjoyed it as well.
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It was really good, but I want Lucius to stay far away from this movie. Everything Fox told Bruce in that scene should've been discovered by Bruce. He's the world's greatest detective.
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I think I'll just start writing the major scenes for the plot points I envision happening in the story.
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Nice job, Dark Sentinel.
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The Joker: "Have you ever danced with the Devil in the pale moon light?"
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New (and some improved) stuff!! Enjoy!
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Yes, that is the exact way I want Batman to find out Superman's identity. I loved the ending
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Imjenn, are you an Andalite spy perchance?
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So anybody got any Wonder Woman ideas?
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