Green Arrow Fan Film

[giggs11uk]

im making a fan film on the green arrow for a couple of film contests. we are shooting at the same location as the punisher (hunny moon beach florida). the only problem is i only have half a script and considering that u guys are all comic fans i was wondering if u could give some input.

i start the story off with a young green arrow who is about to get married in the bahamas. so him, his wife and their families board one of ollies private jets to get to the wedding.the plan crashes and everyone dies except ollie who survives on an uncharted island. a bow and arrow wash up in the wreakage and he use them to hunt. drugrunners come and he steals there boat gets off the island and back to civilaization. The depression from loosing his family and from being in complete exile from the world for a year drives him to becoming the arrow.

what happens when he is the arrow. who does he fight . why. i thought there could be a rival arrow killing people and have ollie take the blame but i want to keep as year one as possible.

any suggestions?