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04-05-2006, 08:33 PM
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O-bama-ama-ama-ay-ay
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need IMMEADIATE help
writing a horror story bout afather who realizes his girl is the devil. but upon realzing it, how can i end it? have him die and she lives? both die, both live? shes saved somehow?HELP ME.
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04-05-2006, 11:02 PM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
Well, she's the devil. You GOTTA have the devil win.
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04-05-2006, 11:07 PM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
You should try just writing it to the end and having the end reveal itself. A form of free-writing. just go in not having the idea and as events unfold it will be become clear to you where the story should go. No one can tell you how to draw out the plot or write the ending to a story, it just has to come out from your own imagination and the plot itself.
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04-06-2006, 05:02 AM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
i agree with spdrknight let the story tell u what's going to happen.
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04-06-2006, 05:06 AM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
She becomes the first female Pope.
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04-06-2006, 02:08 PM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
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04-06-2006, 07:37 PM
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O-bama-ama-ama-ay-ay
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
oh i like that one
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04-10-2006, 08:20 PM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
girl/devil kills father
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04-10-2006, 08:29 PM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
It'd be awesome if she kills him.
But isn't this like The Omen or something?
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04-11-2006, 01:18 AM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
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04-16-2006, 08:56 AM
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O-bama-ama-ama-ay-ay
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
what happens in rosemarys baby??
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04-16-2006, 12:22 PM
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04-21-2006, 08:22 PM
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Re: need IMMEADIATE help
wasnt this a show on Fox? its also pretty similar to The Omen trilogy
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