DarkSentinel
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Well its about this guy who has a crush on his brother's girlfriend and he thinks that the girl should be with him...I honestly am working out the details...but I just wrote a scene where the girl and the guy take a bath together...anyway, I kinda started the story in the middle somehow. I think. lol. Anyhow, um... the guy is sick with a flu so after a fight with her boyfriend, she comes home and sort of takes care of Nathan...who is the good guy but has sorts of problems.
K...the brother, Ethan, is a bit of a prick who hates but loves his brother sometimes...and doesn't think much of a way to help his little brother because of his problems. While Ethan has an alcoholic problem, he doesn't give a rats ass about his brother because while Nathan is trying to cope and get back on his feet, Ethan once said that he'd rather see Nathan live on the streets. so he's a bit of prick.
and the girl well...I should say woman....cause boy...she is a woman to kill for. She's nice...takes care of Nathan when she insists that she takes him in to help him get back on his feet. then their relationship grows into something...and it creates all kinds of problems.
Interesting
I actually just opened up a story I've been working on as my first "sellable" work. It's a hard scifi spy-thriller with a sort of Ludlum-esque layered storytelling. The main antagonists are a "terrorist conglomerate", theoretical technology. It's called KINETIC. I have high hopes for it

Good luck with your writing, Darkness.










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