The Sage
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Honestly, when it comes to Pa Kent's death scene, if I could have reworked that scene in a different way, I would have gone about it where Clark and Jonathan get trapped under a pile of rubble, trucks perhaps, from the force of the tornado approaching and that it was shown that Jonathan was starting to have a heart attack.
The only way to break out of there and get his dad to the hospital in time for them to do some good would be by using his strength to lift up the cars. However, Jonathan is able to see that a group of people are standing across the street from them and knows that if Clark uses his strength now, they'll see him, so Pa Kent holds onto Clark tightly and begs him not to lift up the rubble over them and to wait for the emergency crew to arrive (but Jonathan knows that he's going to die beforehand), and Clark regretfully does so while being held by his dad and Jonathan dies right when the emergency crew arrive to help them get out of the rubble.
I could see that working, emphasizing more that it was risky for Clark to use his abilities while out in the open.
My main issue with the tornado scene is that it needed the danger factor to be stronger. Or maybe even have Martha even telling Clark he can't go because there are people around, followed by Clark making a gesture towards Jonathan, only for Jonathan to put his hand up and shake his head. Maybe that would've been unnecessary.



