Another Hero i made But unsure about it

[donaldthe3rd]

Heres another one i created but also unsure about him. His name is "Blacksting"
So heres his Bio for you then tell me what you think or what i should do to make him better.

Real Name--Brandon Barnes
Aliases--none
Identity--known to few
Occupation--none
Citizenship--Canadian
Place of Birth--Saint John, New Brunswick
Known Relatives--unknown
Group Affiliation--none
Education--high school

Height--5'9''
Weight--140 lbs.
Eyes--Blue
Hair--Black


Powers-- Able to scale or walk on any surface. Can generate a web-like substance which he can shoot from his hand. Able to mentally comunicate with insects of any kind.

 

[spdrknight]

Sounds like Spiderman, power-wise that is.

 

[hippie_hunter]

I say scrap it, there's no originality in it at all.

I'm telling you this because trust me, you don't want to end up like Ghostrider87.

 

[Machx72]

you don't want to end up like Ghostrider87.

Fer shizzle on that, my brutha!

 

[Harlekin]

Please keep it in the same thread. Otherwise, the guys are spot-on. This is just a Canadian Spider-Man.

 

[Majik1387]

Sounds like a mix of Aquaman and Spiderman

 

[hippie_hunter]

More like Humbug and Spider-Man

 

[roach]

yeah too much like Spidey...there are literally thousands of other bugs to base a character on

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Well gosh thats sucks, but i guess if thats what ya think then thats what ya think ok then but i think ill just drop the whole spider thing and do it over on another insect of some sort and besides I've made another superhero that I know isn't like anyone one else.

 

[Colossus24]

tell us about that hero....so far you given us two carbon copies of marvel's iconic characters.

 

[Mr Sparkle]

Heres another one i created but also unsure about him. His name is "Blacksting"
So heres his Bio for you then tell me what you think or what i should do to make him better.

Real Name--Brandon Barnes
Aliases--none
Identity--known to few
Occupation--none
Citizenship--Canadian
Place of Birth--Saint John, New Brunswick
Known Relatives--unknown
Group Affiliation--none
Education--high school

Height--5'9''
Weight--140 lbs.
Eyes--Blue
Hair--Black


Powers-- Able to scale or walk on any surface. Can generate a web-like substance which he can shoot from his hand. Able to mentally comunicate with insects of any kind.

ahahahahahaha, your character sounds like a man.....but with the powers of a spider.
a spider-man if you will.

 

[Mr Sparkle]

hey guys I just made up a hero myself.
he is also from canada, and can heal really quick....one might say his healing is a real "factor" to the story.
he worked for musician Adam Ant in the eighties , they developed an alloy which they christened adam-antium.
and this guy fights crime with wolverine-like tenacity.

what do you think?

 

[hippie_hunter]

hey guys I just made up a hero myself.
he is also from canada, and can heal really quick....one might say his healing is a real "factor" to the story.
he worked for musician Adam Ant in the eighties , they developed an alloy which they christened adam-antium.
and this guy fights crime with wolverine-like tenacity.

what do you think?

http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showpost.php?p=10538556&postcount=5

 

[Duende Verde]

I made a superhero too!

A man named Mark Matthews was blinded during his youth when he took accidental x-rays of his eyes, his other senses super-developed to compensate, and he obtained a radar-like ability to perceive objects.

Since he considers himself a man that fears nothing, he decided to fight crime under the name of Temerarious, you might say he's a real "dare-devil".

 

[hippie_hunter]

I made a superhero too!

A man named Mark Matthews was blinded during his youth when he took accidental x-rays of his eyes, his other senses super-developed to compensate, and he obtained a radar-like ability to perceive objects.

Since he considers himself a man that fears nothing, he decided to fight crime under the name of Temerarious, you might say he's a real "dare-devil".

I got nothin' on that one

 

[WeaponZ2]

Now this HAS to be a joke....and if not. I weep for the next generation of comic books...

 

[maxwell's demon]

hey guys I just made up a hero myself.
he is also from canada, and can heal really quick....one might say his healing is a real "factor" to the story.
he worked for musician Adam Ant in the eighties , they developed an alloy which they christened adam-antium.
and this guy fights crime with wolverine-like tenacity.

what do you think?

its a winner.

 

[Duende Verde]

its a winner.

I think so too, he added a lot of realism, specially since Adam Ant is a real person and he did a lot of research regarding metallic alloys besides his prolific musical career.

 

[maxwell's demon]

that's what i decided too. I looked him up on wikipedia.

 

[Ronny Shade]

I made a superhero too!

A man named Mark Matthews was blinded during his youth when he took accidental x-rays of his eyes, his other senses super-developed to compensate, and he obtained a radar-like ability to perceive objects.

Since he considers himself a man that fears nothing, he decided to fight crime under the name of Temerarious, you might say he's a real "dare-devil".

can he communicate with bats?

 

[maxwell's demon]

can he communicate with bats?

that's just stupid!

 

[Duende Verde]

can he communicate with bats?

I already stated Temerarious powers, that's all.
I'll probably add a walking cane that transforms into some sort of weapon.