Ben Riley's Return, prompting Spidey to reexamine his hero status, copied form Spider Baords.
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Pete finds himself repeatedly confronted by a masked figure while out as Spidey. The character appears to know allot about Peter's history and current life, and seems angry about choices Peter has made. The character appears to have strength and agility comparable to Pete's, but no web shooters (just to maintain the mystery abit ). He confronts Peter about "losing his way" and "giving up what made him Spider-Man". While their confrontations are never physical they often involve Pete chasing Ben (for the character is he, and I don't wanna say "character" any more , assume until I say we still dont know who it is!). During one such chase Ben leads Peter back towards Queen's where Aunt May's house was. He asks Pete if he knows what happens to the crime rate in the area when Pete left, and how often Pete patrols this far out now he's in the "Big Leagues". It would then be shown that Ben has been looking after the area ever since Pete left. Ben and Pete would then team up to fight a fire/emergency etc (designed to show Ben isn't a bad guy). During the event Ben would escape.
Ben returns to his apartment where a blond girl asks "How it went". Ben says it went well, and "he'll know soon".
Pete begins to become more and more withdrawn from the Avengers, patrolling the city for hours on end at "street level", shaken by what Ben has demonstrated.
Pete meets Ben again, still wary but more willing to listen. Ben asks Peter why he thinks he was invited to the Avengers. Pete says it's was "chance". Ben counters it was chance, but "they" took the opportunity. Ben tells Pete that Pete's always seen himself as an outsider, a no-body. But in truth Spider-Man's the figure head of most of hero's. Everyone born/obtained powers looks up to him, follows his lead. While not everyone can identify with Iron Man/Cap America/Prof X, Spider-Man's "schmuck with power" image is an inspiration to ALOT of heroes. By bringing him to the Avengers, Cap/Tony/Illuminatti started to influence a whole generation of heroes. (This could tie into them trying to get people onto their side). Ben also says that Pete has been turned into an "Agent of Shield", indicating his new costume which is similar to Spider-Women's.
Just as Pete seems to be listening, the Avengers arrive to "help" Pete with his enemy. Fight ensues, and Ben again escapes, due to him only fighting to flee not won.
MJ is in Avenger's tower, and find's "Peter" in a darkish room. He says he needs her help, stepping out the shadows with his mask off, revealing him to be Ben.
Ben says he needs to find "the children and take them to their mother". Cut to Gwen, sitting in Ben's flat, holding a picture of 2 children, a boy and girl.
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- The Ben who died was another clone; Norman was fecking with Pete once more.
- Ben escaped captivity months later, and found the Heroes Returned, Pete as Spidey and seemingly living his dream life. Ben left for the road again, determined to search out the only other person who could understand - Gwen's Clone. They eventually met, and have been together ever since.
- When Ben realised that May was still alive, and knew Peter was Spidey, he went to her. Desperate to see his Aunt. May was unable to push her "nephew" away and has been seeing him on and off ever since. This explains how Ben knows so much that's been going on in Pete's life.
And how he learned about "Gwen's" children and got her the picture.
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Pete's running close to breaking point, still patrolling the city for all his waking hours. He loses his job at the school, makes no money from the Bugle and even seems to be making errors in his "rescues". During a rescue from a collapsing building, Pete's mistake almost costs someone their life, but Ben saves them at the last moment.
Pete's understandably shaken by his mistake, and sits on a roof talking it over with Ben. Ben asks Pete why he's doing this. Pete starts spouting how he's "better than before" with more powers and Spider-Totems behind him etc. Ben points out that Pete used to say "Great Power, Great Responsibility".
Ben also asks Pete if he really thinks it matters where his powers came from, Science or Magic, and if it makes him any less/more a hero. Ben then hands Pete and envelope saying "This is what made you a hero". He then WEBSLINGS off (first time Peter sees it could be Ben). Pete opens the envelope to find pictures of Uncle Ben, May, Gwen, MJ and his parents.
Ben sits with MJ as she explains she's been through everything Pete wrote/brought back for Paris, and she has enough infomation to at least point Gwen and Ben in the right direction (I'm sorry I can't remember "Sins Remembered"...MJ may know exactly where to send them )
MJ asks Ben why he's waited until know to return. Ben recounts the conversation he and Pete had before their fight with Guant WAYYYYYY back in Revelations. He and Pete agreed that with the heroes "dead", the world could need 2 Spiders, and idea they previously thought uneeded. When Ben excaped Osbourne he found the Hero's returned, Spidey in action and mutants EVERYWHRE. Pete had his shot at a "normal" life, Ben now wanted his, and Osbourn cost him everything he had in New York (remember Ben was seen by everyone by the Bugle to die). Spider-Man's recent "death" prompted his return to the city, and his meeting with May. (See above)
MJ confronts May about her keeping her meetings with Ben a secret. May replies she did what was best for her "nephew's". And that MJ should understand people keeping secrets from people.
Pete sits on the side of a building in the city, listening to a police scanner. There are reports of a hostage situation and a police unit underfire. His Avengers com link activates saying Hydra/Hand someone is attacking a SHEILD facility, and a call for help. Pete leaps of the building and swings off.
Osbourn's sitting in his new high security cell in the prison. Ben appears at the glass. Norman starts talking to pete, before Ben states he's "the clone".
Norman's genuinally phazed. But dimissively asks what Ben wants. Ben says that Norman took everything from him. Twice. Norman counters the it was "never his". Ben just smiles and says he's now taking something from Norman, and show's him a picture of Gabe and Sarah. Norman asks if Ben came here just to threaten him.
"No. I came to show you how easily I can get to you.... Leave us be."
And then he's gone.
MJ finds Pete sitting in their room. The pictures Ben left him are framed on the wall. Pete's reading the paper, about the police officers killed in last night's firefight. Cut: Spidey laying a flower at the officers grave
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The whole idea is to show Spidey's difficult transition into Avenger-hood with "greater" responsibilties, and while not to ret-con the mystic stuff, try and show it's not "character defining". It's only my first attempt at a story, be nice