Batman: Redeemption

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  1. The Demon's Head

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    I REALLY can't wait to see them.
     
  2. The Spider-Bat

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    They might be a little hard to see because I don't have a scaner.
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    More to come.
     
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    I like the Jim Gordon one best so far.
     
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    :up:
     
  6. The Spider-Bat

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    So you like them?
     
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    I like most of them, but
    The Joker design needs some work.
     
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    Yeah I didn't really like that one. Joker's always hard for me to draw because of the many ways the character has been portrayed. I always try to improve my drawings of him...
     
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    The first few pages of the story will be posted on Sunday.
     
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    stryker check your pms. nice drawings spider-bat. could use a little work but they are pretty cool.
     
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    BATMAN REDEMPTION

    PAGE 1

    PANEL ONE

    ARKHAM ASYLUM FOR THE CRIMINALLY INSANE.

    A figure, wearing all black swiftly sneaks into the Asylum.

    PANEL TWO
    We follow him as he walks through the halls, And notice Familiar faces through the cells. He finally stops in front of Jarvis Tetch's cell.

    PANEL THREE

    CAPTION BOX #1
    Jarvis Tetch. Delusional. Schizophrenic. Homicidal. The Mad Hatter.
    Wearing a Straightjacket, Tetch stares at the wall completely unaware of his being watched.
    TETCH
    Dialogue Balloon #1
    aND thICK aNd Fast TheY came aT last, aNd MorE anD MoRe. aLL HOPPing thrOUGH tHe FRothy wAVES AnD scraMBLING tO tHE sHORe!
    PANEL FOUR
    The figure enters the cell and looks at Tetch in disgust. Tetch glares at him, aware of his presence for the first time.
    TETCH
    Dialogue Balloon #1
    wOUld yOu likE Some moRe teA?
    The figure looks at him and pulls out a Gun.
    He aims it at Tetch's face.
    PANEL FIVE
    TETCH
    Dialogue Balloon #1
    yOu coUlD aLwaYs Have More!
    He fires. Blood splatters over the wall.
    PANEL SIX
    The figure is gone. Tetch's body lays on the floor, his eyes peering out as if he was looking directly at us.
    A message is written on the wall with blood:
    "None of them are safe..."
     
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    I'll get right on it.
     
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    Does anyone have any feedback?
     
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    It sounds very interesting. I'd like to see the finished product very much.
     
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    batmaluco Run, Batman! Run!

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    I second that. :up:
     
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    I have drawn page one and inked it! I am now coloring! Then I'll add text and post it here!
     
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    Sweet. :up:
     
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    The coloring is done, I'm sad to say it didn't come out so great :( because of my scaner sucking and my bones hurting. But, I'll see what you think of it once I finish lettering.
     
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    This isn't working out, sorry Stryker. I don't think I can finish drawing the whole book. My scaner isn't working well, I have many, many projects planed ahead and well, I can admit that I'm just not that good.

    I have included the first page, colored and about to be lettered.

    Sorry again
     

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    There's no need to apologize. I can understand the pressure of working on too many projects and the fact your scanner didn't work. it don't agree with you about your art, though.

    I guess that means I have to look for another artist.
     
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    If I find one, I'll lead him here
     
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    Thanks. :up:
     
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    like i said stryker, if you find an artist, i will color it. i am getting better as i type. (ive even got my own website!)
     
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    PAGE 2
    PANEL ONE
    Running water.Pull back to reveal Harvey Dent washing his hands.
    PANEL TWO
    Dent looks at the mirror. At his reflection. His face is normal.
    Caption Box #1
    It's been three years.
    Since I was given my life back.
    PANEL THREE
    Dent dries his hands with a towel.
    We see that we are in the same house he and Gilda once lived in.
    He walks towards his office.
    Caption Box #1
    I feel whole--- For the first time in fifteen years.
    PANEL FOUR
    We are inside Dent's office. His desk is filled with evidence from old cases, testimonies, Articles about the organized crime.
    A framed picture of Gilda Dent lies on one of the shelves.
    Dent looks at it. lovingly.
    PANEL FIVE
    We see a black leather jacket on the chair in front of Dent's desk.
    And a gun, that looks strangely familiar laying next to the articles on Dent's desk.
    Caption Box#1
    And I have finally found a purpose.
     

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