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Death Becomes Her

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This started out as a Sabretooth fanfic, but evolved on it's own until it became almost a lesson. I haven't finished it because I seem to have forgotten the direction of the story, even though the original ending was written down on a scrap piece of paper. This short fiction was intended to be an off panel filler between Mary Shelly Overdrive, Weapon X, and Sabretooth's appearance in July as an X-Men. If anyone wants to pick up this story where I left off, please feel free to do so. I don't write sex and murder very well, but do enjoy the exercise of writting a characters personality. The story starts out with one of two of Victor Creed's victims, and revolves around a point in Sabretooth's life where he reaches an unconcious crossroads in his insanity. A cross roads which could lead to his mind finally stablizing, even though he would not be considered sane, it is the closes thing to sanity he will ever know, so close infact, that most would think he was sane. Saner than he had been before his capture and torture during WW2. So here below, enjoy ^.^

Death Becomes Her

It was now or never, she told herself. Either I leave now or I will never be able to be myself again. With those thoughts, she packed a backpack with several changes of clothes, threw in her identification, and slipped out the back door. Married with 2 kids, she was now running away like a small child, never to be seen again. Or so she thought… that was a week ago. Her trip was filled with memories of a by-gone childhood complete with tree shapes and cloud people and things.




His name was Tristram Silver, but everybody else called him Sabretooth or Victor Creed. A feline feral mutant who could pass himself off as a very tall flat scan, he was best known by those on the shady side of the law as one of the best assassins around. He was more known to the legal community as an insane serial killer. A sadist. One of those who were so insane, very few were able to reason with him and live. And tonight, he was back at one of his old haunts. It wasn’t often he took time off after a hit. Not since he nearly had his ticket punched by Bonnie. Occasionally, he thought he saw Birdy around, but after his time at Xavier’s Institute, along with his consequential divorce from Mystique, he no longer really cared about wanting a long-term companion. If anything, the ****es were company enough, at least until the next gold digging teenybopper of legal age came along. He snorted as he looked down at his cards. Four of a kind, Ace’s high. His blood lust rose, as a slow smile crossed his face.

“Bet’n it all boys.” He said to his playing companions as he pushed close to 100,000 in chips across the table to the pot.

As usual, Peepers was eyeballing the table. With stakes this big or even small, Satan’s Pub had a reputation for no violence of any kind. Still, it didn’t help, not when he was playing poker when the west was young and wild. He looked at his playing companions, even as he leaned back in his chair, old habits taking over, freeing his arms and body to move should someone get stupid and pull a weapon.

His companions grumbled as they alternately pushed their piles into the center.

“Call” said Scalphunter placing 3 of a kind with Jack high face up on the table. The others threw down their cards as well.

“You got me beat.” Was the chorus, then everyone was looking at him. With the same wicked smile, he placed his cards up.

“Read’m and weep girls, four of a kind, aces high.” The faintest hint of a genuine smile lit his face as the others all groaned, chairs scraping as they sat back Yes, they were good people, wouldn’t turn his back on them when the chips were down, but when it came to play, he could always count on them to be failures. The strains of Joe Cocker’s “Fun Time” played on the jukebox.

He looked at his watch, just enough time to troll, then catch Raw live at the local arena. “Cashing out peeps, gotta run. Places to kill, people to see, that sorta thing.” he said standing. He politely waved off their anticipated routine of begging for “just one more go” as he paid the tab and left.

Outside, the sky was just beginning to darken, storm clouds gathered on the horizon. His sense of smell picked up the heavy scent of rain, and as he walked to his car, his instincts began a vague nagging. They always nagged him whenever he went outside. He sighed as he surreptitiously glanced around. Nope, nothing. He never ignored his instincts, despite how annoyingly paranoid it made him feel, especially when he knew he was in a safe place. His instincts had saved his ass, and those of the people he had worked with on more than one occasion, even when it seemed as though he had completely lost what little reason he had left. As he climbed into his car, his mind wandered back to the time he had killed that female scientist, he, Logan and North had been sent to retrieve. His instincts had warned him then that it was a trap, hell, it had all the classic signs of a typical spook setup, but did anyone of his companions listen to him? No, instead, he had to blow up a bridge, force the others to turn around and run back the other way.

“No guts, no glory” he whispered.

Called him a coward, his superiors did, even when he proved the intell was wrong. Pissed them off something fierce. Especially when they couldn’t get the information he was able to provide. Wasn’t his fault she had turned and was deliberately working for the other side. He even produced proof that theirs wasn’t the only black op’s team sent in, just the one that got out. What did that get him…absolutely nothing. At least he hadn’t gotten demoted, or sent back to prison. The adjunct said it was fallout from Callisto, and what had happened then.

“Fallout my ass,” he whispered again, completely unaware he was talking to himself in an empty car, “You bastards forgot I wasn’t sane, that’s why you used me for that op.”

With a huge effort, he pulled his mind away from following the path of memories that name triggered. He had tried to deal with it, but how do you deal “With It” when the fallout cost him the only thing he ever cared about. Not just the fragile sense of sanity he had discovered, but something else just as equally important. His future. To this day, he still wondered what his daughter might have looked like if he had been allowed to have her. He didn’t even have a grave to leave a flower at. The body had been disposed of, and it wasn’t until several years later, when abortions were spoken about openly, did he realize what they had done to him when the doctors had found out it was his torturer’s… his friend’s rapist’s …offspring. A wave of homesickness washed over him at the thought of not having even a gravesite in some Podunk town he could fake calling home. He had been careful after that, acting like the typical male, not a mutant with a pouch. The ones who did find out, he simply killed, all but Birdy that is, she seemed to accept his revert mutation as though he were perfectly normal.
 
He was further down the road, stopped at a red light, when he became aware once again of his surroundings. He tried to look forward to seeing the Raw match. But even that triggered a bittersweet memory. The last time he had gone to see a wrestling match; he was drunk with two ****es and took on a killer sentinel prototype from the original Weapon X project. He smiled despite himself at the memory, he may not have been able to see the match of the century between Triple H and that other guy, but he did get to show them how “It was done”. His smile grew more genuine as he remembered tonight’s fight would be a four-way takedown match between Triple H, Batista, The Undertaker and Cena. Now all he needed was two prostitutes and some Champaign to get this party started. Only this time, there wouldn’t be anymore killer sentinels from Weapon X to mess things up. He laughed out loud as he thought of the fallout his stealing that disk had done to the Project. Served that hack-faced bastard right, especially after what he had done to Kyle and Marrow. He had put a lot of effort into tempering those kids, but they had done him proud. Especially when he saw that the metal he had smelted held true. Even though they weren’t technically his kids, he felt as though he had raised them right. At that thought, he realized the betrayal of his own son, Senator Creed, didn’t hurt so much anymore. It wasn’t his mutation that had made his son a killer; it was the people his son had surrounded himself with. Looking around, he realized he was close to prime hunting ground, and the rain was just starting to fall heavier.

He saw her at the same time he saw his target for the night. One was dressed for the work, which was her calling, the other looked like a half drowned rat. Both standing close enough together that if he got the attention of one, he could get the attention of the other. Now, all he had to do was reel them in without anyone being the wiser as to who he was.

Slowing the car to a stop, he powered down the front passenger window, putting on his best “playboy” attitude, he called out.

“Hey ladies, want a ride?” He hand signed money as he pointed to the back seat. The other turned to look in startlement at him, even as the prostitute darted forward to the back

“Yeah baby, ‘bout time you showed up! I was getting wet waiting for you!”

“Were you speaking to me?” she said pointing to herself. She couldn’t see his eyes behind the sunglasses; the strange slightly offset contours of his face seemed to add a pleasing charm to his face. She moved closer to the car, almost like a stray cat afraid of being hit.

“Yeah you! Hop in, I’ll give you a ride to where-ever you want to go.” He leaned over, opening the front door, even as the night’s entertainment climbed into the back. He smiled carefully, hiding his fangs, putting forward his best face.

She looked around, the half –formed protest dieing on her lips. What was she going to do, refuse a ride, claim she had someplace to be. Inhaling deeply, she took a chance and risked everything, going against the flow of her life since she was a small child. “Now or never” she whispered to herself as she moved forward, getting into the car.
Turning to him after closing the door, she smiled. “Thank you. Do you know where I can find a place to stay? I’m new in town.”

He couldn’t believe his luck! Not just something legal, but fresh meat that might not have anyone looking for her too.

“So, umm, you got someone you visiting here?” he said glancing at her from the corner of his eye.

“No baby! It’s just you and me tonight, no skanks!” came from the backseat.

“No, just passing through.” She said softly, the soft strains of Al Greene coming over the radio. She turned to look at him, even as he shot the hooker a dirty look in the rearview mirror. For a moment, she thought she saw something in his face, almost predatory, not exactly cruel, but hauntingly familiar. Comforting almost, safe.

“Shush up or I put you out on the sidewalk!” His voice pitched low, almost flat. “There’s enough o’old Vic to go around.”

The wave of sound washed over her mind, calming her, even as something uncoiled in the pit of her stomach, predatory, wanton, and violent. She couldn’t help a small snarl, and was glad she was facing forward, when she felt his hand on her thigh, near her knee, slowly sliding back and forth.

“I know a place you can stay, the owner doesn’t charge much.” He said, thinking that the backseat would need to be replaced if he just shot her right now. “I’m headed there now.”

She smiled at him, even as the dead meat in the backseat grumbled about her clothes being wet. “I don’t want to put you to any trouble,”

“No, no trouble,” he interrupted “So’s happen, I live there.”

“Thank you.”

“Hey baby! We gonna party at your place or what?!” dead meat interrupted.

“Or What!” he replied.

Unable to stop herself, she asked, “Going out tonight?”

“Yeah,” he answered, suddenly feeling as though he were caught between the proverbial hammer and anvil. “I was going to a wrestling match.”
 
“Oh? Who with?” she asked, her curiosity aroused.

“Umm, it’s a live Raw event.” He answered, his mind suddenly locking on the match as though it were an anchor in a coming storm. Strangely, his instincts stayed silent. “ It’s a four way takedown match.”

“Oh! I didn’t know that kind of wrestling was still being done! Buy me a ticket, I’ll be your date.” She said almost recklessly.

“Heh, sure. Why not.” Watch it Tristam! He tried to tell himself, she aint no gold-digging teenybopper wannabe.

“Seriously?! You’d buy us both tickets?!” piped a small hopeful voice from the backseat. “I’ve always wanted to see something like that.”

He looked at both of them, not sure who was in charge, him or them. He started to lie then, “Sure, seriously.” Yet even as he said it, he realized he would follow through, just to prolong the game he tried to tell himself.

“Yay! Thanks, you’re the greatest!”

“Thank you!”

“Yeah, well, we’re gonna be late if you two don’t hurry up and change into something dry.”

Even as he said it, he noticed the sudden sharp scent of remorse from the one in the front seat. “I think the landlord has some clothes he could let you borrow, I’ll ask while you get cleaned up.”

She couldn’t believe how it had suddenly hurt, not having something nice to wear, or how elated it made her feel to know she might not have to wear her old clothes on this date. “That would be most kind of him, again, thank you.” She smiled, her smile slipping into her eyes.

By now, he had reached the building he owned. The unobtrusiveness of the apartment building hiding the fact that this was one of his favorite bolt holes, or one of his favorite places to kill. He tried to remember if he had left anything that might cause difficulties since the last time he was here. His mind drew a blank. Parking the car, he hopped out, and as the prostitute climbed out the back, grabbed the front passenger door, pulling it open. Before she could react, he had grabbed her backpack and stepped away to allow her to exit. Once out, he hustled both girls up the stairs and inside.

“You two wait over there while I check for some towels,” he said pointing to a mat by the door while both girls glanced down at the puddle forming at their feet. With a smile like two errant kids, both darted over to the mat, giggling as each looked at the other.

“Hi, I’m Marcy.” Said the prostitute.

“Hi Marcy, I’m Sheila.” The warmth of meeting someone new filling her voice, her eyes suddenly as dead as her heart felt, her smile faint but deep within, as she shook Marcy’s outstretched hand.

Before each could speak further, Creed stepped out from a hall at the top of the stairs holding two towels.

“Found them!” he said looking down at the two he wanted to think of as victims, only to see each look up at him, their hands still clasp and smiles lit their faces.

“Hurray!” they said together.

“Our hero!” Sheila added even as Marcy called him a Knight in Shining Armor.

As old as he was, having been around the block and heard it all, for some reason the words and situation struck straight through him. “His” was the sudden thought, then he smiled, a sudden genuine laugh bubbled up. “Heh! You two are just saying that because I have towels.”

“Yeah, but at least we’re honest about it.” Marcy piped up, gratefully accepting the proffered towel.

“Thank you!” Sheila said, a small smile lit her face. The same deep glint Marcy had seen, hinted it’s presence as she accepted the proffered towel.

“Your welcome.” His voice deepened, spoken from the depths of his chest, even as a sudden wave of shyness swept over him. “Umm…I’ve found some clothes for both of you I think might fit.” He spoke, mentally kicking himself for sounding like an idiot.

Both girls looked at him expectantly and he swallowed, his mouth suddenly dry, his pupils flared slightly as he could only point up the stairs towards where he had been. “Umm, just follow me, I’ll show you which room.” He managed to get out, as turning, he practically had to remind himself not to run, as he showed the girls to a bedroom where he often had his victim’s change. “I’ll, uh…I’ll go change now.” Victor said, suddenly grateful for the excuse to change clothes.

The girls found outfits which would fit each of them, and with a little bit of mix and match, Sheila soon had both of them looking like ladies.
 
Inside his room, Victor mulled over what had just happened. His hands trembled slightly as he changed, his eyes crossed as he tried to calm himself. The picture in his mind of both girls as he had looked down from the stairs had struck him as if he had seen both a lady and a queen. Two different worlds, two different people, two sides of a coin, both human… not mutant. He looked at his reflection, catching a tear, which slid down, from the outside of his eye. He looked at it in sudden consternation. What was happening to him? He hadn’t cried since he had buried his mother’s body as a child. What sort of tears feel from the outside of the eye? His head ached, but not in pain. Something was happening tonight, and he didn’t understand why. His instincts, again, were silent, yet strangely, his mind felt clear. He glanced again at his reflection, straightened out his tie, and left to see how the girls were getting along.

As he paused outside the door, half expecting the usual backbiting, which normally should have occurred, his sensitive ears picked up the soft sounds of giggles coming from, of all places, back downstairs. Just when he thought this night couldn’t get any stranger, he half walked, half crept, back to the top of the stairs. Looking down, he suddenly felt like a small child peeking down upon the adults at Christmas.

Something…a sound…the whisper of shoes on carpet, whatever it was, Sheila suddenly looked up, turning towards the stairs, her movement caused Marcy to look, turning as well. Standing, Sheila moved towards the stairs her hands outstretched.

“Vic! We were just talking about you!” her world had suddenly taken on a surrealty she couldn’t understand. She watched this strange man descend the stairs, taking her hands, kissing the inside of her wrist. She looked into his amber gaze, seeing not an animal, but a man. A sharp pain in her breast drew her attention back, the surrealty fading, her reality taking on a sharp contrast, harsh and foreboding. Something about what was happening, something in the air, reminded her of childhood stories. The boogieman who wasn’t really the boogieman, a child who wanted to be a cowboy, green and white stripes on walls and clothing. She suddenly inhaled, her throat tight as if she were about to cry. Sadly she smiled, releasing his hand, turning as though it were she, and not he who was the escort at the foot of the stairs.

“Vic, please allow me to introduce Ms. Marcy, Marcy, this is Vic.” She said pointing with her hand to Marcy.

“Hello” Marcy said, suddenly mindful of her manners, the ones she had seen on TV and in old movies. Something about Sheila’s behavior reminded her of rumors, stories told by the madam’s when they wanted the girls to either behave or be afraid. She couldn’t quite put her finger on it, but every instinct screamed beware.

Victor nodded towards Marcy, “It’s really Victor, but Vic is okay.”

Marcy smiled, “That’s Sheila” she said pointing to Sheila, suddenly feeling as though she were a small child despite her years of running on the streets.

Victor caught the sudden shifts in each woman’s scent. From strong and worldly to childlike and embarrassed, from unsure and shy, to deep and strong, almost satisfied. He needed to walk carefully. The last thing he wanted was for this night, this strange event, to be ruined. Almost without a thought, he had dismissed Marcy as a threat. One of those, who out of their element became prey. Sheila on the other, was an enigma. She appeared weak, probably was emotionally, but at the same time, strong intellectually, almost insanely so. As though if she were not directly involved, she could walk where angels feared to tread, or maybe, even then, involved, her reactions might be slow, but powerful. Unstoppable….almost…survivable by both if she didn’t have to compensate for someone or something else.

“It’s time,” His voice rumbled from deep within, as he walked towards Marcy, still holding Sheila’s hand.

Both girls smiled, falling in step behind as he opened the door. First, Sheila, then Marcy stepped out, speaking their thanks before lining up. Victor swallowed hard, almost wishing he were high or drunk, then he could wake-up from this dream to his own solitary insanity.

For Marcy, the crisp night air was almost refreshing, yet the air in the apartment had not been cloying or heavy from drugs either. Uncertain, she clasped Sheila’s hand, childlike in her sudden fear…she should be stronger than this, his scent filled her senses, she suddenly relaxed. Smiling, both waited as he opened each door.

Climbing in, Marcy looked at him, and Victor saw a child. Her death could satisfy his jaded lusts, her body spilling his seed as she had spilled the seed of countless others, but it would not satisfy him. He smiled at her in a paternal way. “Not yet.” He thought, it’s not time, maybe he would let both live, while bringing them to the depths of hell, which had become his mind over the years. Maybe…he wasn’t sure. Something quietly clicked in his mind, and even as he drove away, he felt as if he had just been dowsed with a bucket of cold water. No longer focused on both women, he actually began to look forward to tonight’s match once again.

“So, Marcy, you’ve never been to a wrestling match before, huh?” he said, glancing at her in the mirror.

“No sir, I haven’t” she answered, wondering momentarily where the sire had some from. She still felt like a child, out of her element. If this was real, she wasn’t ready. She decided to just get this night over with.

Victor caught the change of her scent. A sudden sharp acrid tint swept over him, and he wanted to rip her face off. “Fine,” he thought, “I can kill you after the match.”

Marcy felt her old self begin to assert itself once again, while Sheila felt herself fall further down a bottomless pit.

 
The ride to the arena was filled with chitchat and sociable silence. After parking the car, Victor led the girls inside to the front row seats he had ordered. He couldn’t get seats to either side of where he had sat the last time. The girls draped like dream dates on his arms, engaging him in small talk behind their programs. It was getting harder for him to concentrate; the bloodlust of the crowd was beginning to fill his senses. Sheila felt his leg muscles quiver beneath her hand, as Marcy felt the faintest hint of arousal under hers. Each girl looked at the other, then looked at Victor, who suddenly found himself featured on the big screen as both girls sat on his lap and kissed him. He did the only thing he could do in such an awkward circumstance, he put an arm around each of them and smiled for the camera, as the audience cheered. The second the camera turned it’s fickle eye away, he slumped in relief. Both girls were rocked forward against him. Smiling, they regained their seats. The impromptu play was interrupted when Raw began its ringside introductions.

“Ladies and Gentlemen, the scheduled program for tonight has been changed to reflect a loss at the WWE community. In case some of you hadn’t heard, Eddie Guerra has passed away suddenly. He is survived by his loving wife and children. We here at Raw wish to extend our condolences to the family, and take some time tonight to reflect on the life of this great athlete who through trials and hardships always brought a smile to those he worked with.” The announcer stated before the large screen began to feature short clips and interviews with the wrestlers who had worked with Eddie Guerrero.

Victor sat a little straighter. He had never smelled such an emotional outpouring of grief before. It was almost enough to send him spiraling downward towards the pit that always seemed to just hover at the edges of his mind. Yet at the same time, he felt as though someone or something had caught him, holding him in place as though he were caught in one of Peter Parker’s webs. He looked around at the crowd across from his seat, seeing shock, tears and placards with “Latino Heat” being held up by members of the crowd.

“Wasn’t he one of the wrestlers featured in the 4 way fight tonight?” Marcy asked.

“Huh, oh yes, he was. I was looking forward to seeing him wrestle tonight.” Victor replied vaguely. He almost wished for the red haze of rage to well up, shutting out everything but his own internal demons, yet his rage refused to respond.

“Have you watched him often?” Sheila asked?

“Not really, but he did do this little lesson in the ring once with Batista.” He answered.

“Oh?! What lesson was that?” Sheila replied.

“Please tell us!” Marcy said as she turned to face Victor. “Please?”

“Alright, but I don’t know if anyone else saw it, or if it was just a repeat performance.” Victor said placing an arm around each girl’s shoulder. “I’ll tell you a little tale about broken trust. Once upon a time, there were two warriors. Each warrior was the other’s equal in all things. Strength, weaknesses, and in mind. Despite being equals, both were also different, for one warrior saw the world from the right side of his mind, the other from his left. Now being warriors, occasionally each was called upon to fight the other, each defeated the other, yet over time, their defeats and gains began to build respect for the other’s skill, both inside the ring, and the heart outside of the ring. Soon each man began to realize that they were the same man, and in that sameness, a strange friendship began to emerge. In the ring, each was a consummate professional in his own way, yet outside the ring, each man left his differences in the ring, and vice versus. Soon it came to pass, that those whom the warriors entertained, needed to see that each could get along with the other, so both men decided to set aside their professional differences and team up. Now this is where the story gets a little dark. Being the same man, in different bodies, each had to learn to trust the other with the strength that was his weakness, for without that trust, an accident in the ring could become fatal indeed.”
 
“Like in the story, “Who Killed Benny Paret?” by Norman Cousins?” Sheila interrupted.

“Almost,” Victor replied, “in that story, the writer wrote about what the boxers would do just to entertain the crowd, and how he couldn’t understand why someone died, yet no-one seemed to be effected by it. This story is different. Now where was I?”

“You were at the part where each man had to learn to trust the other.” Marcy replied.

“Oh yes, thank you Marcy.” Victor cleared his throat before picking up where he had left off. “In the ring, especially in sports where each warrior must have close contact or strike the other, if a certain trust is not built, then something as simple as picking up your opponent and tossing him over your shoulders or onto the mat can become deadly. So in time, with practice, the two warriors began to trust the other to come to their rescue if something untoward should happen. Now that trust is a step or link in a chain, that if broken, depending on how badly it is broken, must either be replaced as if it didn’t exist or be repaired to be stronger than before. You see, once a man learns to depend on the other with his life, if that trust, which can exceed even the boundaries of mortal love and will last the test of time, were to ever be broken, it is as if the man himself has begun to doubt his own abilities to protect either himself or his other self in combat. Usually, it is the one who has broken trust, whether by design or accident, must be the one to repair or replace that broken chain. And so it came to pass, that one night, in front of hundreds of spectators, that chain became sorely tested.” Victor paused here, looking to see if each girl had followed the lesson so far.

Since each was silent, he began to speak again, the grief of the crowd, once overwhelming, had become easier to bare as he spoke. “It was in a tag team fight, that the chain became tested, for once tools are brought into the ring, the trust each has with the other is the safety net for all in the ring. One of the two warriors opponents brought such a tool into the ring. Now most people wouldn’t normally call a folding chair a tool, but if used improperly, that chair can become deadly indeed. Now Eddie, he managed to get the chair away from his opponent, and when he went to swing at the other, he missed. Whether it was by design to teach the lesson, or an accident, he hit his other self, Batista, completely unprepared. Now in the ring, each warrior will fight with a skill that allows each man to strike the other without fear, some warriors can kill or seriously hurt another just by strength alone. So Eddie hit his other self, causing not only pain, but the drawing of blood from his other self. Since this could be taken as an attack, he did what most would not understand to be an honorable act. He lay down. Just the simple act of laying himself at the mercy in the hands of his other self, he spoke without words, but from the heart that he wished for forgiveness. Now what a lot of others may not know, is that if forgiveness does not come from the heart, the chain cannot be repaired, the link will always be broken, the chain always weak. The only way to regain the trust each once had in the others abilities, was to face himself in the ring. This is always deadly. For if the injured party cannot accept the other’s helplessness, then two halves of a whole are torn asunder and each man becomes a danger not only to himself, but to those he would have around him.

“Did Eddie meet Batista openly?” Marcy asked.

“Yes, and without guile, he faced himself with open heart and open mind. Ready to accept whatever judgment his other self had deemed just. In doing so, Batista saw that Eddie ’s intentions were true, and that he had not meant to hurt his other self. Batista faced Eddie with open mind and open heart, and in front of the audience, forgave his friend for his transgression. Their trust, built upon the respect of the other, proved to be the building block to repair the chain stronger than before. Each man could trust the other, but it would also take some time, like healing from a bad injury, the link, now known, had to be trusted to hold as true as the original link and be stronger than the original link.”

“Do you think the new link was just as strong?” Sheila asked?

“I don’t know,” Victor replied. “For Eddie has passed away, in just a short time after the link was so recently made.”

Sheila wisely kept silent. It wouldn’t do to let him know she knew the lesson as well, or remembered bits and pieces of other lessons, all taught by her family, even as she was supposed to remain silent, unseen, hidden and helpless even to protect herself from a world gone insane with power to commit unjust acts. Even the act of self-protection being declared a crime by society, a society in denial of accepting the consequences for it’s own unjust behavior. She glanced over at the others; both were intent of his or her own thoughts as the ringmaster requested a moment of silence.

The trio remained silent as they continued to watch the big screen. Soon, the wrestlers began to enter the ring, some had a few words to say, others, no words could express what they felt. Yet each fought his opponent, not for the entertainment of the crowd, but for his own open heart. Grieving in a manner, only a warrior, who has lost a comrade in arms, could grieve, by continuing onward into the fray.

Just when Victor thought he couldn’t take anymore, the cast of wrestlers from Smackdown suddenly burst onto the scene, jumping into the ring, attacking the Raw wrestlers. Then more wrestlers entered the ring, and soon it became, not exactly a street brawl, but an uncensored free for all. Victor and the girls cheered and booed along with the rest of the crowd.
 
Howdy. I'm at work and only had to time to read the first section of this today, but it's quite good. I will have to make time to read the rest tomorrow. :)
 
Thank you Squeekness ^.^ I also have the translation to comic fanfiction of Shakespear's Rape of Lucreace that I want to post, but not sure if it's board safe. Nowhere near as good as your Kimble series though.
 
Yeah, you gotta watch it here. PG13 and all that. I don't know how much I'm going to be able to post of Kimble here without some serious editing. I push the boundaries on FF as it is. I've had one mod here tell me they have at least glanced at my stuff so I won't be able to get away with too much. Be careful what you post. :)
 
squeekness said:
Yeah, you gotta watch it here. PG13 and all that. I don't know how much I'm going to be able to post of Kimble here without some serious editing. I push the boundaries on FF as it is. I've had one mod here tell me they have at least glanced at my stuff so I won't be able to get away with too much. Be careful what you post. :)
You made a fantastic four fan fic....pm me the link.

Great work ningi :up: Ive read the first part so far, Im reading the rest now

Funny thing is I always imagine Triple H as sabertooth...so the wrestling match thing is....awkward,lol
 
Sentinel X said:
You made a fantastic four fan fic....pm me the link.
Howdy, Sent. LOL. No, I meant I push the M rating on the FanFic.net site. :) I don't know the Fantastic Four well enough to write them.
 
Well, I finally got to read through this. I like it, and got a free lesson in WWF wrestling as well. I don't watch wrestling at all and actually for a moment, when Sabes is describing the two warriors as two parts of one whole, I almost thought he was talking about himself and Wolverine. I hope you post more of this, it really was quite good. I am rather fond of Sabretooth as you may have gathered from my Kimble series. Ilike it when he is caught in between good and evil as I refuse to think he is entirely bad. :)
 
squeekness said:
Howdy, Sent. LOL. No, I meant I push the M rating on the FanFic.net site. :) I don't know the Fantastic Four well enough to write them.
Oh whoops :O

I just got an account on Fan Fiction.net like about 2 weeks ago, Ill add you on my favorites

Sorry for the quick off-topicness ningi...
I cant wait to see how it ends, for some reason Im just hoping its brutal :up:
 
Thanks squeekness and sentinel, i'll post more when I can find out what i did with the ending. The lesson, believe it or not, was one an uncle of mine told me when i was younger and we were talking about vietnam. It just sort of fit with the story's direction, before I lost the ending.
 
Looking forward to it. If you are looking for a second place to post this you could join my second favorite messageboard -- www.thexverse.com. I have my story posted there as well.
 
Thank you squeekness, not sure if I want to post it a second time. I usually don't post anything I write.
 
Then who is going to see it? I find that posting stuff keeps me working. There is always someone who wants more and I think it keeps me smart, all this writing. :)
 
LOL, noone I guess, even though I do enjoy character writing creatively, it isn't something I can do all the time. Which is good for those who are better talented at writing than I am ^.^
 
The more you do it the better you get, My first drafts were too horrible to even contemplate. :D
 
^.^ I've lost most of mine over the years, used to do descriptive writing and poetry when I wasn't learning algebra and geometry. Stuff was so horrible, not even penthouse or hustler would want it ^.^
 
Eh, I don't care much for poetry. I really struggle reading it and don't read it as far a fan poems go. :(
 
^.^ good thing I cann't write fan poetry. Most of my poetry was a self lesson in composing hiaku and inanimate object description in prose. Much like descriptive writing, but instead of creating an image with words, you create the image using words in prose, something along the lines of the following:

I cast my gaze upon the world,
this small wonder of technology,
broadening horizons, the world,
itself, no longer a large and lonely space,
instead this void, once empty,
now filled with shining light.

This would be a prose translation of the information highway ^.^ Not my best work on the fly, but then again, it has been almost 20 years since I tried to write a descriptive prose :)
 

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