If you could create a Superman movie. Which actors,villains and storylines whould you choose. How would your ideal Superman movie be done?
How would I make a Superman movie story?
This is just a rough treatment, not a full drawn out script. More details, smaller scenes etc
could be filled in later. I like to make things in more of the bigger overall picture, and add details as needed to move the story forward.
For starts it would be roughly based on the feel of the Comics combined with the Animated Series (STAS). The movies mood would NOT be dark and gritty. The desire to make it so for most movie producers is based on the myth that "dark heroes" are the only successful kind at the box office. This is not true, take Iron man for example. Much of the movie is bright and shiny, and still did well in theatres. The idea is better to take the subject seriously as you can with a hero that can fly, and at the same time make the mood fitting for the character. In the case of superman, bright and optimistic is the way to go. I would still take the subject matter seriously, as in trying to avoid camp and I would stay away from too many "
in-jokes". The villains would seem as dark and scary as possible, but superman would remain a generally friendly classic good guy.
Basic story: (keep in mind this is merely an overview, a lot of other details, side stories and scenes could be added, parts scrapped and such as need be)
I would suggest making a reboot entirely, starting with the destruction of Krypton, Kal-El being sent to earth.
In these scenes on Krypton are sort of a mixture of Courosant and Naboo from Star Wars. It looks technologically advanced but somehow in harmony with nature. We have an event that looks more like the events of STAS, but condensed to about 15-20 minutes.
Lara and Jor-El are portrayed in their 20s, or early 30s. They are a younger couple, not old like the Donner films. It should look like a real tragedy that this young family with all their life ahead of them is cut short.
In the scene where Kal is being sent to earth, we have some explosions and earthquakes already happening, Kryton is in its final minutes. Jor-El prepares the ship. The ship looks advances but not crystal, I am avoiding the whole crystal look for Krypton. As he prepares the ship with his computer (which looks like holograms, very advanced etc
) the young Kal, only a year old is hysterical, crying because of the loud noises, and Lara seems in Despair trying to sooth during the Apocalypse of their world.
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Earth is the only place to send him. We have found an artifact from their world, and it showed us that although primitive, they are much like we are. They look like, and speak similar to us. Although Kal will look like them, he will not be one of them. Their young Yellow Sun will make him the most powerful being their world has ever known. Their rules of physics will not apply to him. Should he make it there, the last son of our world may live forever for us all. This has only been attempted twice in the past, both times failed, contact lost with both ships. Now, it may be our last chance to save Kal. His chances are one in a thousand to make his Journey, but that is better than none"-Jor El
We see the opening of the ceiling to the stars. Lara kisses Kal one last time, as she set him into the ship. As she harnesses the breathing mask over the terrified Kal, he reaches for her one last time to be held by his mother. But there is no time.
Everything is now on autopilot, the ships shell closes over Kal who still seems terrified. Lara can hardly stand and as she is falling to her knees Jor-El pulls her to him and holds her up. Both are in tears giving up their only son to his chances in the universe, uncertrain if he will even live to be the last survivor of their world.
We see the space around the ship bend into circles that make the sky look warped, it is a wormhole in space, and the ship is Launched through it jump starting his Journey by bending the physics of the Universe itself as Kal is jettisoned into space.
Jor-El kisses Lara, one last time before their world goes Nova. We see the ship traveling at an impossible pace with some green fragments of Kryptons core as it hurtles toward the earth.
Kents finding Kal. They look around mid 30s Couple, on their way home from Marthas Aunts funeral, while Martha is crying to her husband that her Aunt had so many children there for her, and that at hers will be none because they have not been able to have a child. Jonathan ties to console her with "
Well Martha, maybe its just not in our plan, we have friends, nephews Nieces, maybe we just are not meant to have kids. If the Lord wants us to, he would make sure we have them, but we wont be lonely".
At that moment the Meteor lands and the car swerves off the road to avoid getting rolled over when the object lands in the field, carving a path of charred destruction in its wake. As Martha asks Jonathan if he is ok, she hears the sound of an terribly upset baby screaming from the direction of the wreckage.
Then a few scenes of him growing up, and perhaps some traveling of the world as a young man, and finding out the truth about why he could help humanity, but also about why he cannot change human nature. We see him in collage getting his degree in journalism.
Soon Clarks first day in Metropolis, meeting Lois, getting hired at the planet. We see a Lois that finds find Clark a bit comical, as she comments "
how a big farm kid from smaaallville seems kind of out of place in the big city. But you are kind of cute. Here let me show you around, but dont slow me down. you have to learn to keep up....Smallville".
Then we have his first day as Superman, he fouls some terrorist activity, when a building blown up partially and no one can get out, and it is about to fall to one side. Superman holds up the ousted support beam, while flying, and stabilizes the building long enough for the people to get out. Then he flies off with the empty building half to safe place to set it down.
Later we find out that Luthor was behind this, just to capitalize on some opportunity that lends itself for him to look like a hero, and at the same time label is meager competition as unreliable.
Even though superman fouled the plan by saving the day instead.
This easily leads to a feud between Superman and Lex later on when Superman confronts Luthor about what he knows, and that "
Lex you're not going to get away with this sort of thing anymore."
Lex is NOT the main villain of the movie however. We just want to introduce him and show that he is a constant thorn in supermans side, but not a villain that can be taken care of in one movie. You get the felling superman is always going to have to deal with this guy.
We fast-forward into this world by about 6 months after superman gets to Metropolis for Brainiac's arrival.
Brainiac would be our main villain here. He would come to earth, seeming friendly not much different than STAS. Brainiac would try to look like a benevolent force, that only has the best interests in humanity at heart.
Luthor gets involved and promotes Brainiac as a cosmic savior of humanities ills. He is the perfect mouthpiece for Brainiac. Luthor would refer to Brainiac in a public display as a being who is "
more benevolent than the Alien boy-scout could ever be. After all Superman will only save you if you fall off a rooftop, or maybe lift something heavy before it falls on you".
Luthor continues with "
Brainiac here will bring humanity into the next age. He will bestow us with Technology that can rid the human race of disease, starvation, poverty and war. All we need to do is trust him, for he is giving us real hope, and real change. Unlike that other one, who saves a few people now and then, but never wants to get involved in humanities real destiny. Dare I say, compared to Brainiac, Superman is Selfish-man!"
Once Brainiac is established on earth, he starts to download all known information and data from earth. Again we are going with similar the STAS version of him here. It only takes moments for him to accomplish this. Then he gives Luthor plans for building a new type of zero waste energy plant. In fact the plant is actually a bomb that would annihilate the earth, and thus delete any chances of new information coming about that would force Brainiac to have to continue to update his saved version of our world.
When the plant is almost finished being built, Lois, while investigating finds out what the plant really is and puts it in print.
Superman visits Lex at his tower, to confront him about why he is helping Brainiac. Luthor responds with the basic "
you are just jellous that another Alien is showing up to do more good for us than you ever did. It is also I who was able to recognize the Alien, you, that would only stand in my way of helping humanity, and that Brainiac was truly here to give us a better tomorrow. You on the other hand will not be allowed to interfere in our plans anymore!"
Lex opens what looks like an engagement ring box, made of Lead, exposing a Kryptonite ring. Superman stagers back recoiling from the poisonous rock. Lex then pushes a button on his desk and immediately the windows of his office close with mechanical shades that turn the Sunlight beaming in to red. "
What is the matter Superman"? Lex boasts. "
Is it the Kryptonite? Or the fact that with red Solar energy your powers just dont work?" Lex punches Superman several times, and looks like he is going to keep on beating him.
Superman then throws Lex off of himself, by several feet. "
Lex you never know when you are ahead do you?" Superman punches Lex in face knocking him down to the ground and we see Lex looks dizzy, his eyes glazed and see he is missing a few teeth.
"
You did not consider the way Red Solar energy not only temporarily removes my Powers, but is also removes my weakness to Kryptonite". Superman pulls the Kryptonite ring off of Lex hand, puts it back in the lead case, and with his other hand pushes the button that opens the windows again, pouring in yellow sunlight. Superman turns to Lex "
In your arrogance you forgot Lex, even without my Powers, Im still 66", still 255 pounds of muscle, and still strong enough to handle you!"
Superman flies away with Lex ring still in the box. We purposefully do not show the audience what he does with it, that is left for other writers.
When the public reads about what Brainiac has been up to, the US Air force leads and air strike on the power-plant/bomb. The air strike is futile as Brainiacs defenses shoot down the Jets.
Brainiac responds by immediately starting to create havoc to distract earths authorities and superman by taking over every automated piece of machinery in the city that is in close proximity to him. He quickly builds mechanical death squads, terminator (similar to the T-800 as you can go without getting sued) like machines, which hunt down all and any human life in the area as they are now trying to interfere with his plan. Along with these are giant "
devastation walkers" which look like the 3 legged machines from War of the Worlds, or as close as we can go without getting sued.
Now superman goes to the almost fully constructed power-plant/bomb, to confront Brainiac, whos physical form is also just as powerful as Superman is, and they begin to fight it out.
During the fight, Superman is being portrayed as the slight underdog. Brainiac tells superman that the most annoying part of his mere existence, is constantly having to update the information regarding the fate of Krypton, as it and all of its data are part of Brainiac now, but because one Kryptonian still lives, the data will always be incomplete.
The truth that his home world was destroyed by Brainiac puts Superman over the edge. Superman fights harder and more violently, so Brainiac changes tactics at this time to
"now absorb all of the energy you expend in this futile effort to stop the inevitable".
Brainiac seems to have the upper hand again, as he is starting to absorb Supermans stored up solar energy, and even the ambient energy around himself as well.
As a last effort superman responds with "
then absorb THIS" as he hits Brainiac with planet shaking force, and sends Brainiac flying into the almost finished energy-bomb-plant reactor. Brainiac not only causes the core to go critical mass, but absorbs most of the explosion, destroying himself, and the resulting EMP wave scrambles all known traces of his program from any technology in the area he may have downloaded himself onto.
The Day Saved.
Superman lands in a desert, under a full blaring sun, and sprawls out on the sand like an exhausted boxer falling down and taking in air after winning a hard match. This is the moment where the audience gets that "
let the air out, and relief feeling".
Then later we wind things up with Clark and Lois at the Planet, and after finishing their story, Clark asks Lois if she wants to go out for coffee, to which Lois responds smiling, "
a big farm kid like you doesnt drink beer?" Or just something slightly comical and light that sort of shows the seeds of a relationship with Lois and Clark being sown.
More can be put into an Epilogue, such as Luthor speaking with a scientist in a massive lab owned by Lex-corp; "
Could we salvage anything from the EMP blast?"
Scientist: "
all known traces of the alien intelligence are fried, nothing left".
Luthor: "
can we salvage anything at all, or is this entire situation going to be a loss for us?"
Scientist: "
all I have left are some hard copy notes, incomplete at that, on how to clone the complex kryptonian DNA, but with how incomplete the information is we could just end up with some Bizarre result if we even tried"
Luthor: "
I have complete confidence in you". coldly in a way that implies he has to try anyway and has no choice.
The end