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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction & Films' started by Swordmaster, Sep 24, 2005.

  1. DBella Seducente/Mortale

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    When will the next chapter be up?
     
  2. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    Sometime this week. It's almost time for bed here, so...
     
  3. DBella Seducente/Mortale

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    I look forward to it very much. It's almost time for me to go too. Enjoy your week, Dante. :)
     
  4. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    You too, Bell
     
  5. gregtestagent humblevaudvillianveteran

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    Born for the role :o :up:
     
  6. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    I know my parts well
     
  7. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    BTW, Storm has now been replaced with Valmar, or Lord Valumart
     
  8. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    Chapter 3: Reinforcements

    As the mechanism slowly lowered, Edge closed his eyes.

    I knew this line of work was dangerous, but I never thought I'd go out like this. Like a punk.

    All of a sudden, it stopped. Edge stopped lowering. He heard a rough male voice, like some half-assed Clint Eastwood expression.

    Voice: Now!

    Smoke fills the room. Edge wonders what the hell's going on as he is suddenly falling from his restraints.

    *What the f**k?*

    <I was wondering the same thing.>

    As he is but mere inches from the acid, he is grabbed from mid-air and dropped on the ground, alive.

    Edge: The hell?

    Edge looks up and sees a woman, roughly around 21, standing above him. She has shoulder-length black hair. Her eyes are concealed by a mask that shows only the eyes, which were a vivid gold, with slits. Catlike,. Edge thought. She wore a skintight black leather jumpsuit, with a black leather trenchcoat with holes in its bottom. She wore black shoes that looked to be not fit for fighting. To complete the outfit was a choker with a cats head centered in it.

    Edge: And...you are...who?

    Woman: Darkcat. I'm here to save your ass.

    Her voice is soft, but dark.

    Edge gives a small, mocking chuckle.

    Edge: I was fine on my own, thanks.

    Darkcat smirks.

    Darkcat: Sure you were. Don't mind the fact that if we hadn't shown up, you'd be nothing more than a skeleton, if it suits you.

    Edge also smirks.

    Edge: We've got no time for this, babe-

    Darkcat puts her heel to his throat.

    Darkcat: Don't call me babe.

    Edge shoves her off, still smirking

    Edge: Whatever you say. We've got work...to do.

    Edge just notices the bodies laying around the warehouse.

    Edge: Are they...?

    Voice: They'll live.

    Edge and Darkcat turn to see a man garbed in all black walk towards them. His head covered by a mask with horns coming out of the side, exposing only the mouth. His torso is armored, with a bat-symbol a darker shade of black than the rest of the outfit. His legs are also armored. He wears a rust-gold belt with mechanical pouches. Over this he wears a black trenchcoat with ridges at the end, giving the impression of bat-wings. On his arms are gauntlets, with three scallops coming out from them in an angular form.

    Another voice, female this time, light and cheery, shows up:

    Voice: Nice work Batsy. I only had to cover your back HALF the time this time.

    The man shows no sign of emotion, only slightly blushes.

    Edge: Who the hell are you guys?


    Darkcat speaks up.

    Darkcat: As you already know, unless you have a poor memory, I'm Darkcat. This is-

    Male: KnightBat.

    Edge ***** his head.

    Edge: Batman or Man-Bat already taken

    KnightBat just stares.

    Woman: And I'm Amazonia.

    She weras a white and gold leather jogging suit with an eagle covering the chest area and silver bracelets.

    She puts out her hand, which Edge takes.

    Edge: What are you guys here for?

    KnightBat speaks.

    KnightBat: You.
     
  9. SapphirePrima Registered

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    That was really good I hope you don't stop like you did with the Devil May Cry prequel.
     
  10. Master Chief ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)

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    Haha... I'm Darkcat, this is Knightbat.

    Strangely hilarious.
     
  11. DBella Seducente/Mortale

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    White and gold leather jogging suit? JOGGING SUIT?!?! Hahahaha!! OMG, where is the fashion police when you need one!! :p

    Other than that, good work, Dante! ;) :up:
     
  12. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    I saw a design for it and it looked cool :o
     
  13. Edd Extraordinaire Registered

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    I request the Edd be mentioned in this.
     
  14. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    But of course
     
  15. Edd Extraordinaire Registered

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    ...............
     
  17. GammaMike Registered

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    Nothing says Amazon badass like jogging suit Bella!
     
  18. DBella Seducente/Mortale

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    Can I see it?
    I dunno... jogging suit... makes me think of... RUN DMC. :o What kind of shoes to go with the jogging suit? *I'm a typical shoe-obessed girl. :D:p*
     
  19. DBella Seducente/Mortale

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    You think so, GM?
    I'd still like to get a visual of the suit though but for now... I'll take your word for it.
     
  20. Batman Dramatic Example

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    I can't imagine an Amazonian Goddess,such as yourself,looking bad in anything.;) :o

    ...Although I am quite curious to the design myself.

    I don't believe I've ever seen anything like that...:confused:
     
  21. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    It was in the DC Redesign Thread. Can't find it :(
     
  22. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    This is gonna be short, so:

    Chapter 4: The Lair

    Edge: ...Me?

    KnightBat: Yes you. I just said that. What are you dense? Are you ******ed or something?

    Darkcat: Down boy.

    KnightBat looks away.

    DarkCat: We should explain this in private. Do you know where we can go?

    Edge smirks.

    Edge: I know just the place. It'll take a while to get there, though. Do you guys have a means to get there?

    Amazonia chuckles.

    Amazonia: I can fly, hon.

    DarkCat: I've got my own motorcycle. It's in the alley next to yours.

    Edge: Next to mine, eh? *he winks*

    DarkCat: Don't get any ideas.

    Edge: Whatever babe. *Turning to KnightBat* And what about you?

    KnightBat takes out an octagonal cylindar and presses a button it. Lights fill the warehouse. It's a black...tank.

    Edge:...Whoa.


    Cut to: THE LAIR

    The quartet arrives at an abandoned movie theater, park their vehicles in a garage, and walk in.

    KnightBat: You live in a MOVIE THEATER!?

    Edge: Of course not.

    Edge presses the numbers "1120" on the cash register. A door opens up behind him.

    DarkCat: Impressive.

    KnightBat *begrudgingly*: Indeed.

    The group walks in. The sight is a marvel to behold. There are walls filled with differant gadgets, 5 or so impressive-looking motorcycles, a science lab with a supercomputer and forensic equipment.

    KnightBat: Damn.

    Edge takes off his glasses and mask, then sighs. His hair becomes red, his physigue less toned. Bruises, scars, and cuts appear all over his body. His striking gray/silver eyes turn into a deep blue. Edge disappears. In his place is Kyle Enders.
     
  23. Alexia Dark Warrior Princess

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    Ooo... it seems you've learned the art of suspense, Dante... well done :up:.
     
  24. Swordmaster Big Damn Hero

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    Nice work lil brotha
     

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