editJohnny DC said:Let's see the entire FF.
IRON_Lad said:Well I already have the Human Torch redesigned and ready to scan for tomorrow, so sure I'll try the entire FF.
starwars22097 said:are ya gonna put it in my contest
Nice.IRON_Lad said:Usagi Yojimbo inked
IRON_Lad said:Usagi Yojimbo inked
EdRyder said:I dig the last one .Very ghost in the shellish
And Plastic Man has a good Bebop feel on him
But dude -drop the lined paper and get you a sketch book already
I saw a good one for 7 bones at borders the other day...cmon already.
Theres no excuse for all that
You got all this fine detail in the cyborgs dress -and its ruined by the paper
My second lil crit is.Look at the Usagi piece and the Torch piece-You should attempt to draw bigger(larger)
Mrh7448 said:Some nice stuff. I like the redesign on Johnny Storm, though your perspective needs some work. I think you need to work on your flames a little, they just kind of look like a bunch of tendrils drifting off of him.
Not a big fan of your version of the Thing. Thing is supposed to be made of rocks, by reducing the size of him it's takes away from the sense of bulk, weight and strength of that. He just kind of comes across now as a guy with a skin condition, IMO.
Virtual Suicide is a nice idea. The text could use some work. You need to look at drapery as well the way it folds and bunches over different shapes. Overall just some work on your proportions and maybe a closer look at some anatomy...but not bad.
IRON_Lad said:here's a redesigned Human Torch. I know I messed up on the perspective but it was like 8 or 9 in the morning during 1st and 2nd hour.
Johnny DC said:Not bad; the fire looks a little... tree-branchish, but it's a cool design. Will you be coloring any of your pics? This one might look better colored.