Jonah Hex Script Review - Neveldine/Taylor

I'll be honest, as a script review, that was terrible. It pretty much boiled down to "We're going to show you the cliches inherent in the script, but don't worry, they're not SO cliche in the actual story.

A Jonah Hex film could be cool, but I wouldn't expect anything groundbreaking.
 
My suggestion for a cast of Jonah Hex is Viggo Mortensen as Jonah. ...

Bye
 
I don't know what you guys are reading, i think this is going to be a kick ass movie, Hex is pretty badass and this movie seems like it is trying to really show him as he should be, a kickass bounty hunter with sweet one linners.
 
Since the script is out there, anyone that's read it want to add something to this thread?
 
Dude I have the script... I think I even PM'ed it to you...
 
Sure, but I haven't had a chance to read it yet. And I'm always interested in others reactions.
 
I read changelings script (thanks btw) and the lack of bat lash as a supporting character was depressing.
 
Oh no problem. And is it any good? I have yet to read it..
 
Just started reading it. A couple of things spring to mind right away. 1) It's Jonah Hex. 2) It's going to be a hard R.
 
Having skimmed through the script some initial impressions.

The script does a great job of capturing the character of Jonah Hex. The way he speaks, his sense of humor, his sense of justice, everything. It's spot on. You can tell Neveldine and Taylor just love Jonah Hex.

It's very violent and profanity abounds.There's really no sustained lulls in the screenplay.

The script has no more overtly supernatural elements than are regularly seen in Jonah Hex. The rumored zombies appear, all two of them, but there's a perfectly mundane and twisted explanation for them.

It's very funny at times.

They cover more of Hex's back story than I thought they would, but everything they include is relevant to the story at hand. There's a change or two, most notably in how Hex gets his scar, but everything they change is at least consistent with the character of Hex. They handle most of this information as short flashbacks and space out the revelations for maximum effectiveness.

The main villain, Quentin Turnbull, is an actual character with the same backstory from the comics.

On the negative, it's a bit cartoonish at times and nobody else is remotely as fleshed out as Jonah Hex. The main villain has a perfectly justified reason for hating Hex, but it's undercut by making him almost one dimensionally evil. Sure, depraved s.o.b.s are a staple of Hex, but it's really amped up here with the various villains being of the ****e disfiguring, dog killing, and mother and baby killing variety.

Still, as an adaptation, it's one of the strongest initial drafts I've read lately and I can picture exactly the movie they have in mind. Not the deepest, but definitely a fun one with a memorable protagonist.
 
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Sounds good i still havent had the time to get to this script and other yet.
 
Nice. It sounds good. And lol half the people I've sent out scripts to have read more than i have
 
Never really read scripts but I gloss over them to get a vague idea. Need to leave some of it for the screen
 
This sounds like it's gonna be good. I'm looking forward to this. I've been meaning to get into "Jonah Hex" for months and months now. Perhaps this is the time to finally bite the bullet and do it?
 
I was right about it being nothing groundbreaking. But JONAH HEX what it should be. It knows what you want to see. It's got some cliche, but it's in all the right places, and it's going to be fantastic if they get the right director/actors, etc. They've nailed Jonah Hex. Nailed him to a T. Nailed him to the point that I don't believe I've ever seen a character nailed to before.

The script is incredibly violent. And it's wonderfully funny throughout most of it. There's a very twisted, and yet very "honest" sense of humor to this character.

The story has a few supernatural elements, that sometimes feel out of place, but once you realize what kind of a world Jonah lives in, it just doesn't feel like that big a deal. The supernatural isn't really "supernatural", if that makes any sense.

I would disagree that Turnbull is a great character, though he is a good one, to be sure. He's relatively thin in terms of depth, but he's also no less the villain for it. He does some truly horrible, horrible things, just because he can. The way his story is weaved into Hex's secret shame is fantastic. The storyline itself is the weakest point, as it's a bit rambling, and ultimately, the main "threat" sort of just goes away on it's own, no thanks to the hero. But it's still a good read.

I can't wait for this.
 
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I have to read this when I get back home. Thor first, Jonah, and then Supermax.

But I like what I'm hearing
 
Geez, where do people find these scripts that nobody is suppose to see?
 
This sounds like it's gonna be good. I'm looking forward to this. I've been meaning to get into "Jonah Hex" for months and months now. Perhaps this is the time to finally bite the bullet and do it?

The latest issue is drawn by J. H. Williams III, which should be reason enough to seek it out. Nothing wrong with recent issues by Darwyn Cooke or Jordi Bernet either.
 

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