The Dark Knight Rises My Batman/supes Plot It Good

[FaT_tONle]

I am one of the few people who think this movie works despite the obstacles everyone foresees and have been trying to think of a decent plot that is legit…. I decided to take a stab and made it as realistic and as plausible as possible… lemme know what you guys think

Worlds Finest Part 1

Lex is bankrupt after waging a war with Superman for so many years and now faces a new enemy… Bruce Wayne is buying out every stock left of Lex Corp and is pushing Luthor out of business… Lex decides to play hardball but he really doesn’t have the resources to compete with Wayne Enterprises any longer… however… Lex’s new technology “LexTech 5” will soon put Lex Corp back on the map… Lex is secretly building a special top secret new weapon using the same technology in one last ditch effort to rid the world of Superman. The special guns use advanced nanotechnology secretly armed with kryptonite… things go awry when two units are stolen by the League of Shadows… led by the one and only Talia Al Ghul

The League of Shadows moves on with their grand plan to serve true justice while getting a little revenge… Talia hires Rupert Thorne, one of the most feared gangsters in Gotham, and arms Rupert’s best hit man with a LexTech 5 gun with one mission in mind… assassinate Bruce Wayne… Talia however wants to get revenge personally and secretly warns Bruce of the gangs intended hit… Bruce manages to survive the onslaught unscathed in a spectacular gun battle… the gun is recovered and detectives discover it uses the same LexTech 5 technology presented earlier… Lex is pinned for the planned assassination of Bruce Wayne and prosecuted…

Bruce investigates the attempt on his life as Batman… Batman picks up some kryptonite samples used in the area of the assassination attempt. He manages to track down one of Thorne’s thugs shortly after the gang hit… Batman demands the gangster to give up the I.D of the woman involved in the transaction… the gangster says she was a personal informant to Lex Luthor but Batman knows this is obviously false… Suspecting his man was setup, Thorne and his men head over to Metropolis

Bruce arrives in Metropolis where he is greeted by none other than Clark Kent and Lois Lane… Bruce moves ahead with the take over of Lex Corp by holding a party for the merger/takeover of Lex Corp… he asks Lois for a dance right in front of Kent and offers Lois a chance be his personal reporter during his stay here in Metropolis… Wayne reveals he has big plans for Metropolis and wants Lois to cover him… Lois is thrilled and agrees and they setup a private dinner to discuss it…Bruce suspiciously eyes a mysterious young woman looking on as he dances with Lois but thinks none of it… the couple is interrupted by a sobbing Kitty Kowalski, who swears to Bruce that Lex is innocent… Bruce grows suspicious of this woman and plants a tracker bug in her vehicle during the party…

Kitty visits Lex at jail and Lex assures her everything will be okay… but he admits the police intend to move him to a high security prison… Kitty leaves the station accompanied by a few body guards but their vehicle is followed by Thorne and his thugs… Thorne tracks the vehicle down and kills Kitty’s body guards… Kitty swears she knows nothing about a setup but Thorne wants to whack her anyways… luckily Superman spots her and easily handles Thorne’s thugs… with his back turned… Thorne fires a LexTech 5 shell in his back and Superman falls to the ground… Thorne is about to finish him off until Batman shows up (after pin pointing the location of the vehicle) and saves Superman from Thorne… Kitty is freaked at the Bat and flees… Supes is shocked to learn Batman is Bruce Wayne vents out his anger at Batman for bringing Gotham’s thugs to Metropolis on top of taking over his city… Batman pulls out the Kryptonite samples and explains that Supes is vulnerable to the weapons b/c they contain the small green crystals… Supes is left to ponder and lick his wounds while the Bat flees before the police arrive…

Lex is moved by truck accompanied by several other police units to a maximum state penitentiary. Suddenly, the truck is hit by what are thought to be suspected terrorists… Luther is taken away by the unknown terrorists is a chopper. Luthor thinks he has been saved by several of his thugs working under him… “About time you guys did something to get me out of this mess…,” he says… “But who the hell are you… I never authorized this…” One of the terrorists removes her mask and just happens to be TALIA AL GHUL…

Lemme know what you guys think… I’ll finish it later I guess but I need some thoughts first

 

[NinjaTurtleFan]

I really don't want a "Batman vs. Superman" movie. They already did it in "World's Finest." Give me a "Justice League" movie instead.

I mean D.C. and WB need to start really hammering out the D.C. Comics movies because Marvel is ahead by ALOT.

 

[Two-Face]

Very good stuff but you spelt "Louis" wrong it's Lois.

 

[Buttman]

I think it's a little too hokey and "LOOK ! ANOTHER CHARACTER !" to be released as a movie in a Cinema, to people who don't know the world of Batman and Superman. I think it'd make a fairly decent feature-length animated movie aimed at pre-existing fans though.

 

[FaT_tONle]

Okay here is the entire script… I know it is long but read it when you have time… made a few revisions and changes to clarify some stuff… let me know what you think

Worlds Finest Part 1

Lex is bankrupt after waging a war with Superman for so many years and now faces a new enemy… Bruce Wayne is buying out every stock left of Lex Corp and is pushing Luthor out of business… Lex decides to play hardball but he really doesn’t have the resources to compete with Wayne Enterprises any longer… however… Lex’s new technology “LexTech 5” will soon put Lex Corp back on the map… Lex is secretly building a special top secret new weapon using the same technology in one last ditch effort to rid the world of Superman. The special guns use advanced nanotechnology secretly armed with kryptonite… things go awry when two units are stolen by the League of Shadows… led by the one and only Talia Al Ghul

The League of Shadows moves on with their grand plan to serve true justice while getting a little revenge… Talia hires Rupert Thorne, one of the most feared gangsters in Gotham, and arms Rupert’s best hit man with a LexTech 5 gun with one mission in mind… assassinate Bruce Wayne… Talia however wants to get revenge personally and secretly warns Bruce of the gangs intended hit… Bruce manages to survive the onslaught unscathed in a spectacular gun battle… the gun is recovered and detectives discover it uses the same LexTech 5 technology presented earlier… Lex is pinned for the planned assassination of Bruce Wayne and prosecuted…

Bruce investigates the attempt on his life as Batman… Batman picks up some kryptonite samples used in the area of the assassination attempt. He manages to track down one of Thorne’s thugs shortly after the gang hit… Batman demands the gangster to give up the I.D of the woman involved in the transaction… the gangster says she was a personal informant to Lex Luthor but Batman knows this is obviously false… Suspecting his man was setup, Thorne and his men head over to Metropolis

Bruce arrives in Metropolis where he is greeted by none other than Clark Kent and Lois Lane… Bruce moves ahead with the take over of Lex Corp by holding a party for the merger/takeover of Lex Corp… he asks Lois for a dance right in front of Kent and offers Lois a chance be his personal reporter during his stay here in Metropolis… Wayne reveals he has big plans for Metropolis and wants Lois to cover him… Lois is thrilled and agrees and they setup a private dinner to discuss it…Bruce suspiciously eyes a mysterious young woman looking on as he dances with Lois but thinks none of it… the couple is interrupted by a sobbing Kitty Kowalski, who swears to Bruce that Lex is innocent… Bruce grows suspicious of this woman and plants a tracker bug in her vehicle during the party…

Kitty visits Lex at jail and Lex assures her everything will be okay… but he admits the police intend to move him to a high security prison… Kitty leaves the station accompanied by a few body guards but their vehicle is followed by Thorne and his thugs… Thorne tracks the vehicle down and kills Kitty’s body guards… Kitty swears she knows nothing about a setup but Thorne wants to whack her anyways… luckily Superman spots her and easily handles Thorne’s thugs… with his back turned… Thorne fires a LexTech 5 shell in his back and Superman falls to the ground… Thorne is about to finish him off until Batman shows up (after pin pointing the location of the vehicle) and saves Superman from Thorne… Kitty is freaked at the Bat and flees… Supes is shocked to learn Batman is Bruce Wayne vents out his anger at Batman for bringing Gotham’s thugs to Metropolis on top of taking over his city… Batman pulls out the Kryptonite samples and explains that Supes is vulnerable to the weapons b/c they contain the small green crystals… Supes is left to ponder and lick his wounds while the Bat flees before the police arrive…

Lex is moved by truck accompanied by several other police units to a maximum state penitentiary. Suddenly, the truck is hit by what are thought to be suspected terrorists… Luther is taken away by the unknown terrorists is a chopper. Luthor thinks he has been saved by several of his thugs working under him… “About time you guys did something to get me out of this mess…,” he says… “But who the hell are you… I never authorized this…” One of the terrorists removes her mask and just happens to be TALIA AL GHUL… (Part 2 next post)

 

[FaT_tONle]

World’s Finest Part 2

Lex is brought to the secret hideout of the League of Shadows… Lex notices a green pit beneath his blind folds and thinks this is the end for him… the blind folds are removed and Lex stares in horror as something resembling a reaper out of Blade 2 and Bram Stoker’s Dracula emerges from the pit… Talia introduces her father… Ra’s Al Ghul… to Lex Luthor… yet he is too weak to speak or move very much… the pit has been sustaining his corpse but is losing its ability after every bath… Talia knows the LexTech nanotechnology has tremendous genetic capabilities… the plans is as follows… capture Superman… and incorporate his DNA in the reconstruction of Ras Al Ghul’s body using the nanotechnology (I know its over the top… but it is a movie)… Lex knows the procedure does not have much of a chance to work but he says his genetic engineers have what it takes. Lex’s only request is that the league turn over Superman to him after the operation… Lex reveals the location of the LexTech 5 guns and hands them over to the League… Lex also reveals who Superman’s secret crush is…

Alfred is sent to pick up Lois for the date with Bruce… the car is sabotaged by a League and Alfred is knocked out… but Lois manages to get a hold of Bruce revealing her whereabouts and requests him to call for help… Bruce gets the message and tracks down the abductors of Lois Lane himself… Superman, in the mean time, is occupied with a bomb that just went off at the Daily Planet (planted by the League) and therefore is unaware of Lois’s abduction… Batman finds the location of the cave but he knows he might need a little help…

Superman arrives at Lois’s house after saving the people at the Daily Planet… he arrives there only to be met by the Batman... who knows where Lois is… they think the trap is set for Superman… Bruce decides to go in and get Lois out himself while Superman stays on the look out… Kent is reluctant but believes it is probably their best bet to get Lois away safely… since he can see through the walls… he can be Batman’s eyes and ears… Batman proceeds in the building and maneuvers through some league members and finds Lois… Superman suddenly loses vision in through the walls due to the work of Lex’s nifty nanomachines, and Batman finds himself trapped… out appears Talia Al Ghul… “So we finally meet beloved… do you know who I am Bruce?” Lois looks at Batman and says… “Bruce Wayne?” (Part 3 next post)

 

[FaT_tONle]

World’s Finest Part 3

Lois Lane is released in order to avoid further conflict with Superman. Talia then reveals herself to be the daughter of Ras Al Ghul… Bruce can not believe it… soon it is revealed that she helped setup Thorne, Luthor, and now the Batman himself… Lex comes out of nowhere furious… the plan was to capture Superman but the League’s original plan was to capture Bruce Wayne… Talia already knew the operation to include Superman was too risky to use and the ultimate plan was to rebuild Ras using Wayne’s chromosomes… Lex has no choice to agree and the operation and the genetic engineers go to work… Ras’ body is turned into a clone of Bruce (since it uses the same chromosomes to rebuild the body)… Ras arises and Talia can not be happier… the two hug and kiss and Ras pledges to carry on the blood lineage by marrying Talia (he is pretty much a Bruce Wayne clone so it isn’t incest)… Ras orders the death of the good Bruce Wayne and Luthor…

Luthor jokes to Bruce that it is fitting that both men die together along with their companies… Lex says it’s only a matter of time before Lois releases the story to the press about Batman… the league is about to throw them over the edge of the cliff but Luthor stops them and looks at Ras… Lex explains that there was a glitch in the procedure… the engineers had also implanted anti-genetic nanomachines that carry out the reverse process… Lex explains that Ras has only 48 hours to live before the machines are activated… Lex makes an ultimatum to Ras and the league… bring him Superman alive or anti-machines will be activated after 48 hours… Ras is infuriated with Talia for putting his life in the hands of a mad man like Luthor and orders his men to kill both Wayne and Talia… everyone leaves while one league member stays behind to carry out the executions… Bruce breaks away from his chains just in time and kills the league member… both he and Talia escape…

Talia is devastated that her father would betray her but Bruce reminds that it is Ras character and nature… Bruce tells Talia to stay with Alfred and she agrees… Bruce proceeds to help Superman now that the league is after him… Talia secretly sneaks out before Alfred can bring dinner to her…

The league begins their massive man hunt for Superman… Ras terrorizes the streets of Metropolis with the LexTech 5 guns… Cameras catch Ras face and believe Bruce Wayne and some terrorists have gone ballistic… Superman arrives shortly and the battle wages… Superman can’t keep up with the heat and is eventually taken down… Ras and his men escape with a beaten Superman and manage to get him back to the hideout… Kitty Kowalski and the genetic engineers deliver the special serum that can disable the anti-nanomachines to Lex Luthor. Kitty and Luthor hugs in kiss in some comic relief and Luthor then turns his attention to Superman… Ras tells Luther Superman is all yours… Kitty begs Luthor not to hurt Superman but Luthor says he has waited all his life for this moment… Luthor starts beating Superman to death

The police and military track down the Leagues hideout but have no way of sending ground troops to the area… fighter planes are ready however…. The planes are ordered to hit the cave with three hundred pound bombs hoping Superman will somehow survive… the strike is ordered

Batman re-enters to the cave hoping to find Ras… Ras is undergoing the procedure to rid him of the anti-nanomachines… Ras sees Batman and orders his League members to delay him… the battle wages… just as the serum is about to be administered by the engineer… he is shot from the back by Talia who has returned to the cave… Talia picks up the serum and refuses to hand it over to Ras… Batman out muscles the last league member and proceeds to the operation area… Ras begs his daughter… “Talia hand me the serum now… there is no time…”… Talia says, “I will never save you again father…. But I won’t watch you die either…”... She turns to Bruce and says, "Goodbye beloved..." She injects the serum into her own body and jumps off the ledge before Bruce can even respond… Ras looks at Bruce as he slowly disintegrates as the machines carry out the reverse process… Suddenly the bomb strikes… Batman is pinned by falling rubble and trapped…

Lex is still killing Superman when the bomb strikes… Kitty is hit by the rubble and is hanging over the ledge for dear life and begs Luthor to help her… but Luthor still focuses on Superman… the bomb creates a small crack in the wall that allows sunlight to enter from the rising sun… Superman is reenergized and manages to fight back… Luthor is finally over powered and is beat… Superman grabs Kitty just as she falls and looks at a beaten Luthor for the final time. He turns his attention over to Batman, who remains pinned… Supes heaves the rock off of Batman and grabs him too… Supes picks him up and flies Kitty and Batman out of the collapsing cave… where Luthor meets his demise…

Supes and Bats shake hands and agree that they make a pretty decent team… but they agree they won’t be seeing each other any time soon… Kitty thanks Supes for saving her life for the second time and asks him for a kiss… but Lois Lane arrives and steals Superman away from her and plants a wet one on the Man of Steel… Batman looks on from a far and phones Alfred for a pick up… Alfred reminds Bruce that he is still the most wanted man in Metropolis… Bruce agrees that he has over stayed his welcome here in Metropolis and tells Alfred to have the jet prepared for take off to Gotham City.