World My First Fan Trailer!!!

[Matt Murdock]

Sorry to be a pain butttttt

i spliced together portions of trailers from all 3 spider-man movies and i tried making a trailer:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zajJUN8OfTY

I hope that you'll all be willing to comment, as i am very proud of this first out of a hopefully many number of trailers.

I would like to give credit to asteroid man for his opposite theme, he did some good manips. Check his and mine out over in the fan art and manips section.

I'm only posting this vid. here because i did use footage from the new SM3 trailer and wouldnt want to post anything in the wrong forum!


Thanks, and

Excelsior!

 

[Matt Murdock]

also, i hope the link is working, and the Staring Me thing at the end is just something my iMovie application does.

 

[Matt Murdock]

please comment on the video page also by clicking the stars

 

[SBrooks1]

Well first off you have the wording......"Choice.....There lie within all of us"....which makes no sense. And then...."Choose......light......or darkness.......or both". Ugh...

 

[mister_web]

Well, where should i begin? First of all, it is too long, so it's boring, i hardly watched it until the end. Then the music is not well-chosen even though it's the main theme.

And i don't like the "choose..." moments, so bad, moreover you don't have time to read them.

My opinion: if you're bad at making fan trailers... don't make fan trailers!

 

[CherryRedSpider]

Too many "and"s. Didn't get the "Choose...light...darkness...or both"

 

[Shadow_Knight]

It was little too long there but other then that it was pretty good.

Oh yeah and the choose.......light........or darkness........or both was kind of drag to but still good.

 

[Matt Murdock]

thanks for all of your comments. it was only long because i would've had to have spliced up the score. im changing that though. thanks again

 

[blitz]

good but too long and dragging

 

[Menthol]

JJ: Crap
Peter: What?
JJ: It's crap... crap! I'll give you one fifty for it.
Peter: 300!
JJ: ...
Peter: ...
JJ: *Sigh* Here give this to the girl up front.

 

[Toxin]

Some of it was pretty nice, I liked how it ran together for the most part, and I love the music - but the music isn't appropriate for the footage. It's still impressive, but some of the writing is, to be nice, silly. "Choice.....There lie within all of us" would be right at home with such famous lines as "Someone set us up the bomb", if you catch my drift.

 

[Matt Murdock]

lol yeah... i just really wanted to re-enforce the decisicion aspect of sm3

 

[eXperiment]

I think it was good.

 

[Robotchicken]

no he says

peter:300!
JJ:Thats outrageous! DONE!

 

[Gotendbz-2]

The link isnt working for me.





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I am awesome!!

 

[Matt Murdock]

x-periment, you have an AMAZING avatar.

 

[Gotendbz-2]

I think it was too long, it seemed like 3 trailers.






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I am awesome!!

 

[Ongie]

***redacted***

 

[mizzaxer]

cool trailer....venom was fake lookin so was that glimps of the gg mask and hearing that music made me wanna cry cause i realize it wont be in sm3....god i loved that music...it just YELLS spiderman

 

[RMThompson]

Sorry to be a pain butttttt

i spliced together portions of trailers from all 3 spider-man movies and i tried making a trailer:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zajJUN8OfTY

I hope that you'll all be willing to comment, as i am very proud of this first out of a hopefully many number of trailers.

I would like to give credit to asteroid man for his opposite theme, he did some good manips. Check his and mine out over in the fan art and manips section.

I'm only posting this vid. here because i did use footage from the new SM3 trailer and wouldnt want to post anything in the wrong forum!


Thanks, and

Excelsior!

I wouldve done something showing more of the badguys choices between good and evil, and the Spider-Mans. Because each of the previous baddies have had their shot at being good, and now this is Spider-Man's SAME think!

 

[fireflyman]

Not to bash your work, but I agree on the weirdness of the text, duration of some texts, and the legth, its way too long.
Also some of the 'ittybitty length' people shots, if you blink slowely, you cant even see them, they're gone way too fast.

 

[Aren]

a little too long but it wasnt horrible

 

[Matt Murdock]

im already makin another one with all of your advice!! Thank you so much

 

[fireflyman]

im already makin another one with all of your advice!! Thank you so much

looking forward to it, drop a line when its done, so we can make you start all over again (just kidding)

 

[Matt Murdock]

hahaha, no i really have a good feelin about the new one, cause im trying to utilize all of the advice. Plus i like doing these, so starting over wouldnt be such a big deal DD