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Hi all! I just finished writing and doing TEMP drawings for my first comic. Bar: The Bouncer. I literally just uploaded the last page 5 min ago. I did all 22 pages. My plan was to make it...get feedback on it...change it...then redraw it. Then submit to publishers.
So....the key thing I need is feedback on writing. Is it clear? If it isn't good...how can I make it better. Or if you just plain like it! I wanna hear. Thanks!
http://www.markscomics.com/Images/Bar/barbouncer1.html
Bar: The Bouncer
Thanks in advance and I hope you enjoy it!
Nick
So....the key thing I need is feedback on writing. Is it clear? If it isn't good...how can I make it better. Or if you just plain like it! I wanna hear. Thanks!
http://www.markscomics.com/Images/Bar/barbouncer1.html
Bar: The Bouncer
Thanks in advance and I hope you enjoy it!
Nick