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This is the half of the first scene in my script.
Its called Punisher:War journal.
Please tell me what you think.(there may be spelling errors,punctuation errors,etc.Sorry!)
Punisher:War journal.
By Neal Lambert
EXT-Hells kitchen-Night.-A Car Drives down an Empty City Street,Two wise Guys and a Hostage Are Inside.
Sammy Holds a .38 to the hostages head-Do You realize who the **** I am,Huh?!
Hostage-Sammy,I'm sorry I didn't mean to.......
Sammy-Well Its Way to Late For sorry,You ****in ****,You ****in ****.
Hostage-Please sammy,I Got a Family,Please!
Sammy-(Laughs.To Driver.)-do ya Believe This Guy Bobby?
Bobby-(laughs) I say we just finish this **** right Now.
Suddenly the car is T-boned and does a barrell roll into a near by graveyard.
The drivers Head is smashed in like a water melon and the hostage escapes,injured but not dead.
Sammy Crawls out of the backseat,his leg broken,the bone popping out of the flesh.
A massive sillhouete steps out of the car,the only visible detail is the skull on his shirt.
Sammy Pulls out his .38 and shoots at the sillhouette as he crawls away but it's no use.
Sammy-WHO THE **** ARE YOU??!!
Sammy Makes an attempt to keep crawling but a headstone has blocked his path.
Frank-Remember me sammy?Central park a few years ago?
Sammy-No....****....Not you please,PLEASE!!!
Its called Punisher:War journal.
Please tell me what you think.(there may be spelling errors,punctuation errors,etc.Sorry!)
Punisher:War journal.
By Neal Lambert
EXT-Hells kitchen-Night.-A Car Drives down an Empty City Street,Two wise Guys and a Hostage Are Inside.
Sammy Holds a .38 to the hostages head-Do You realize who the **** I am,Huh?!
Hostage-Sammy,I'm sorry I didn't mean to.......
Sammy-Well Its Way to Late For sorry,You ****in ****,You ****in ****.
Hostage-Please sammy,I Got a Family,Please!
Sammy-(Laughs.To Driver.)-do ya Believe This Guy Bobby?
Bobby-(laughs) I say we just finish this **** right Now.
Suddenly the car is T-boned and does a barrell roll into a near by graveyard.
The drivers Head is smashed in like a water melon and the hostage escapes,injured but not dead.
Sammy Crawls out of the backseat,his leg broken,the bone popping out of the flesh.
A massive sillhouete steps out of the car,the only visible detail is the skull on his shirt.
Sammy Pulls out his .38 and shoots at the sillhouette as he crawls away but it's no use.
Sammy-WHO THE **** ARE YOU??!!
Sammy Makes an attempt to keep crawling but a headstone has blocked his path.
Frank-Remember me sammy?Central park a few years ago?
Sammy-No....****....Not you please,PLEASE!!!
