Punisher:War journal. My script

[juggalo5050]

This is Half of the first Scene In my script Called Punisher:War journal.
Please Tell Me What you Think.(there my be some spelling errors,And stuff,SORRY!)

Punisher:War Journal.
By Neal Lambert.

EXT-Hells kitchen-Night.-A Car Drives down an Empty City Street,Two wise Guys and a Hostage Are Inside.

Sammy Holds a .38 to the hostages head-Do You realize who the **** I am,Huh?!

Hostage-Sammy,I'm sorry I didn't mean to.......

Sammy-Well Its Way to Late For sorry,You ****in ****,You ****in ****.

Hostage-Please sammy,I Got a Family,Please!

Sammy-(Laughs.To Driver.)-do ya Believe This Guy Bobby?

Bobby-(laughs) I say we just finish this **** right Now

Suddenly the car is T-boned and does a barrell roll into a near by graveyard.

The drivers Head is smashed in like a water mellon and the hostage escapes,injured but not dead.

Sammy Crawls out of the backseat,his leg broken,the bone popping out of the flesh.

A massive sillhouete steps out of the car,the only visible detail is the skull on his shirt.

Sammy Pulls out his .38 and shoots at the sillhouette as he crawls away but it's no use.

Sammy-WHO THE **** ARE YOU??!!

Sammy Makes an attempt to keep crawling but a headstone has blocked his path.

Frank-Remember me sammy? Central park a few years ago?

Sammy-No....****....Not you please,PLEASE!!!

 

[Brendan]

You should put it in proper screenplay format.

 

[juggalo5050]

this was just the early Draft,I'll probably post a little bit more of the script in "proper format" later.Thanx.

 

[Brendan]

If you don't own any products like Finaldraft, there's one online that's free called scripped.com. It'll also save it as a pdf file which most free screenwriting softwares don't allow you to do.

 

[juggalo5050]

Thanx man.
I'll put it in proper format and post a little more of the screenplay.