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Reload this Page Hold it in...a short film/love story about a guy that needs a wee

urgh, the reload this page bit shouldn't be in the thread title...mods please get rid of it.
 
Camera breaking...the car we used originally was involved in a crash and then got sold...

actors and people being free etc.
 
I didn't mean to not critique the film by the way, still watching it now...was curious as to how long it took to make, but you had answered that.
 
My two cents...
  • Maybe film with a different frame rate...not sure what your tech specs are though...this was after watching it in HD...could just be me; probably is.
  • The fact that there was no discussion after the lead character got punched at the end kinda bothered me; but his focus on needing to pee right afterwards made up for that a bit.
  • Soundtrack felt pretty legit and on point; fit what was going on.
  • Pretty good array of comical characters impeding his progress.
  • Homeless guy....was that dubbed? Pretty good either way.
  • Bike thing was funny.
  • I'd probably do different transitions between scenes
  • Pissing of the pants sequence was good.
Next time you make something post it.
 
"Old bean"....speaking of which you guys are PAL...forget my frame rate comment.
 
Yeeeeah, the Green screen stuff wasn't too bad actually he he, considering we shot in Dv and HD-Dv.
 

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