As far as Rise of Skywalker goes, to make it a better film I would completely rewrite it and how I would do it:
ACT 1
This act will basically show where each character is mentally and emotionally by setting up their arcs for the movie and setting up the main conflicts of the movie. The first scene will be Finn, Poe, C-3PO, Chewie, Rose and BB-8 all going on a mission to retrieve information about a map which will lead to a powerful Sith weapon. This scene will be like the movie itself but with a few differences but we will see them infiltrate a First Order base rather than get info from a traitor. There’s a chase scene and the heroes manage to survive and return to the Resistance base where they meet Rey and Leia. From there then you can establish the character arcs. Rey with her Force powers is starting to evolve more in her training, Poe is trying to live up to Leia and Finn is uncomfortable with fighting First Order Stormtroopers since they are clearly brainwashed and can be converted to the good side.
We catch up with Kylo Ren on the First Order ship. He is Supreme Leader Ren now but he is being haunted by the ghost of his Uncle Luke. He also gets notified about this Sith weapon and decides to track it down. We cut to Captain Phasma who is still alive as she somehow survived and General Hux as the 2 of them are talking about Kylo. They feel that Kylo is wasting the First Order’s time and resources on finding ancient Sith artifacts rather than trying to conquer the galaxy. Hux says that he is unfit to be their Supreme Leader and the first step to achieving domination over the galaxy is to overthrow Kylo Ren pretty much setting up the First Order to turn on Kylo/Ben.
ACT 2
Just like the movie, the heroes travel to the desert planet of Pasanna to find a map to the planet of the Sith weapon. Along with them are also a lot of Resistance members in case a conflict with the First Order ensues. The heroes find the man with the map, Han Solo's old friend Lando Calrissian who hands them the map. The heroes find out just where the planet is, where the weapon is located. We then get the Force communication between Kylo and Rey and he finds out where the heroes are. We get the chase scene with the Stormtroopers as well as an action sequence where The Knights Of Ren slaughter Resistance fighters which showcases their abilities.
The scene with Kylo and Rey goes the same and Chewbacca is captured in the struggle. However in this scene, Rey uses Force lightning to destroy two other First Order ships none of which Chewie is on. Her newfound Force abilities leaves her and Kylo especially in shock as Chewbacca is captured. Kylo returns to the First Order base and we get a scene with him and Chewbacca especially since Chewie was his father Han Solo's best friend. After defeating Chewie with ease, Kylo reads his mind to find out where the weapon is.
Outside the room, Kylo is then ambushed by his own First Order. Hux, Phasma and his soldiers have basically turned on him. We finally see Kylo at his best as he slaughters Stormtrooper after Stormtrooper with his lightsaber but also he uses Force lightning as well but they keep on coming. Hux reveals that his entire army is against him and once they kill him, they’ll execute the Final Order. He realizes that his entire army has turned against him and leaves the base in his ship to retrieve the Sith weapon on Exogol. Hux sends a broadcast to the entire galaxy to surrender or die in the Final Order. Rey also decides to travel to Exogol to stop Kylo from getting the weapon while the rest of the heroes decide to rescue Chewie.
ACT 3
Finn, Poe, Rose and C-3PO infiltrate the First Order base similar to the movie. They manage to free Chewie but Poe becomes impulsive and decides to take out Hux to make Leia’s job easier. However,they are caught. This moment will be very emotional as C-3PO sacrifices himself to save the heroes dying an honorable death. They manage to escape at a big cost. Poe is scolded by Leia for being reckless while Rose and Finn mourn C-3PO. Rose thinks that his sacrifice was worthless as all it does is reduce the Resistance’s man power but Finn explains to her that they are in a war and that to save the people that you love, you sometimes have to sacrifice yourself. This sticks with Rose.
Meanwhile at Exogol,both Kylo and Rey arrive at the entrance to a cave where the weapon is kept. They decide to go in together rather than fight each other as they don’t know what’s inside the cave. This scene will play out like the beginning of the original movie with the horror tone. Inside the cave,they find none other than Emperor Palpatine who is still alive. Yeah deciding to keep Palpatine but his role in this will of course be small. He explains that he managed to survive his fall in Return of the Jedi which in Star Wars lore was decades ago but his body isn’t strong enough to use the Force and conquer the galaxy once again. He says that the only way the Sith can take over the galaxy once again is through a new heir to the Sith empire. Kylo steps forward as he is finally about to fulfill his birthright but Palpatine stops him and says that he isn’t the Sith heir, Rey is. Palpatine then explains how Rey came to be through her parentage. She is still The Emperor's granddaughter. I would keep that plot twist.
ACT 4
After finding out that she is the Sith heir and Palpatine's granddaughter which is so shocking for her, we then see Palpatine transfer his essence into Rey as he dies right then and there. Kylo is enraged and engages in a lightsaber duel with Rey. However, she is now much aggressive especially with Palpatine's power on top of her own abilities that she has acquired, she literally hands Kylo Ren a severe beating. She shoots him with Force lightning and then throws him across the caves with relative ease. She then comes upon him and is standing over him as she then stabs him with her lightsaber. Leia then senses a disturbance in the Force and just like the movie, she uses the last of her Force energy to heal her son and dies. Rey senses this and stops herself from killing Kylo as he is not dead but just wounded but is on the brink of death as she leaves.
Kylo is now left alone at Exogol. He is broken. He got betrayed by his entire army, couldn’t fulfill his birthright and got destroyed in a duel against Rey. He mourns his mother as the memory of his father Han Solo appears. Han in ghost form of course. I would still keep Han here as he appears to his son because that was just so emotional for me as a Star Wars fan but also it brings up father/son dynamic. Han explains that Kylo can still turn to the light. Kylo says that he is too far gone but Han explains that it’s never too late to change and that Kylo gets to decide his own destiny. Kylo is motivated by this and throws away his red lightsaber and leaves to stop Hux from executing the Final Order.
On Ahch-To, Rey also prepares to throw Anakin’s lightsaber away after the insane revelation especially now that she is related to Palpatine being his granddaughter and all. Just like the movie, Force ghost Luke appears to her as he tells her that Palpatine doesn’t get to decide if she is a Sith or a Jedi. Rey gets to decide her own destiny. He gives her Leia’s lightsaber which flips a switch in her to cause her to turn away from the dark and back to the light as she also departs to fight Hux after learning about his plans. At the Resistance base, Leia’s funeral is held. Poe is completely frustrated at himself for letting Leia and C-3PO die but Lando gives him a pep talk. Poe understands that Leia was so successful in her rebellion due to inspiring others and sends a broadcast to the entire galaxy to come join the Resistance against the First Order and save their homes. The Resistance departs for the final battle.
ACT 5
Finn and Rose infiltrate the First Order base to try and eliminate Hux and Phasma while Poe and other pilots decide to attack the Star Destroyers from the outside. Finn and Rose are captured again by Phasma and are about to be executed but Finn says he has a few final words. He looks to all the Stormtroopers and says that they were taken away from their families and brainwashed by the First Order to be soldiers but they could be so much more. Their purpose in life is more than to serve the First Order and each and every one of them should get to choose their own destiny. At first no trooper reacts but just as Finn is about to be shot, one trooper rebels against the execution. One by one all the Stormtroopers rebel and remove their masks until it’s a mutiny and there’s a civil war in the First Order. Finn and Rose escape but Phasma chases them to finally kill them.
Kylo and Rey both arrive at the base and battle the Knights Of Ren as they both use Luke’s and Leia’s lightsabers. It’s a long fight but they manage to defeat all the Knights through teamwork. In space, all the people from across the galaxy arrive to help Poe defeat the Star Destroyers like the movie. Meanwhile, Phasma and Finn duel on top of one of the Star Destroyers. Just as Finn is about to be sliced by Phasma’s swords, he uses the Force to summon a lightsaber confirming he is Force sensitive just like how Rey was in Episode 7. Finn basically with no Force training whatsoever is holding his own with Phasma. After a lengthy duel, Finn finally beats Phasma as she falls off the Star Destroyer into space.
Poe reveals that despite so many fighters,the Resistance still can’t beat the Star Destroyers in a dog fight and the only way to win is to set a bomb manually on one of the Star destroyers which is strong enough to destroy all other Star destroyers in the area. However,they need one person to sacrifice themselves so all other Resistance pilots can escape. Rose volunteers as she remembers what Finn told her. You sometimes have to make sacrifices to help others. She sets off the bomb and she and Finn have a tearful goodbye as they share a kiss as the Resistance pilots along with Rey and Kylo leave. The bomb explodes as Hux watches his entire fleet turn into ashes and he also burns away.
ENDING
The galaxy is saved. There are celebrations all across the galaxy on every planet including Coruscant, Naboo, Endor, Tatooine, Jakku, Pasanna, etc. Rey, Finn and Poe celebrate together while Chewie finally gets his own medal. Kylo however is still unsure if he deserves to celebrate after breaking apart the galaxy. Kylo of course tries to leave when from behind, the ghost of his grandfather Anakin Skywalker appears in the form of Hayden Christensen as he tells Kylo that he can always fix the galaxy he broke apart.
We cut to a few months later where Finn and other former stormtroopers are fighting remaining First Order soldiers and Rey has set up a Jedi academy with her teaching younglings/Padawans. We cut to Tatooine in a First Order base where several families are saved by a man as he defeats the First Order soldiers. One kid looks up to him and asks him “Aren’t you Kylo Ren?”. The man looks to the side where he sees Han,Luke and Leia smiling at him all in Force ghost form as the man replies “No,I am Ben Solo” as he looks at the binary sunset similar to Luke in 1977's A New Hope. Film fades to credits.
Movie completely rewritten!!!!
ACT 1
This act will basically show where each character is mentally and emotionally by setting up their arcs for the movie and setting up the main conflicts of the movie. The first scene will be Finn, Poe, C-3PO, Chewie, Rose and BB-8 all going on a mission to retrieve information about a map which will lead to a powerful Sith weapon. This scene will be like the movie itself but with a few differences but we will see them infiltrate a First Order base rather than get info from a traitor. There’s a chase scene and the heroes manage to survive and return to the Resistance base where they meet Rey and Leia. From there then you can establish the character arcs. Rey with her Force powers is starting to evolve more in her training, Poe is trying to live up to Leia and Finn is uncomfortable with fighting First Order Stormtroopers since they are clearly brainwashed and can be converted to the good side.
We catch up with Kylo Ren on the First Order ship. He is Supreme Leader Ren now but he is being haunted by the ghost of his Uncle Luke. He also gets notified about this Sith weapon and decides to track it down. We cut to Captain Phasma who is still alive as she somehow survived and General Hux as the 2 of them are talking about Kylo. They feel that Kylo is wasting the First Order’s time and resources on finding ancient Sith artifacts rather than trying to conquer the galaxy. Hux says that he is unfit to be their Supreme Leader and the first step to achieving domination over the galaxy is to overthrow Kylo Ren pretty much setting up the First Order to turn on Kylo/Ben.
ACT 2
Just like the movie, the heroes travel to the desert planet of Pasanna to find a map to the planet of the Sith weapon. Along with them are also a lot of Resistance members in case a conflict with the First Order ensues. The heroes find the man with the map, Han Solo's old friend Lando Calrissian who hands them the map. The heroes find out just where the planet is, where the weapon is located. We then get the Force communication between Kylo and Rey and he finds out where the heroes are. We get the chase scene with the Stormtroopers as well as an action sequence where The Knights Of Ren slaughter Resistance fighters which showcases their abilities.
The scene with Kylo and Rey goes the same and Chewbacca is captured in the struggle. However in this scene, Rey uses Force lightning to destroy two other First Order ships none of which Chewie is on. Her newfound Force abilities leaves her and Kylo especially in shock as Chewbacca is captured. Kylo returns to the First Order base and we get a scene with him and Chewbacca especially since Chewie was his father Han Solo's best friend. After defeating Chewie with ease, Kylo reads his mind to find out where the weapon is.
Outside the room, Kylo is then ambushed by his own First Order. Hux, Phasma and his soldiers have basically turned on him. We finally see Kylo at his best as he slaughters Stormtrooper after Stormtrooper with his lightsaber but also he uses Force lightning as well but they keep on coming. Hux reveals that his entire army is against him and once they kill him, they’ll execute the Final Order. He realizes that his entire army has turned against him and leaves the base in his ship to retrieve the Sith weapon on Exogol. Hux sends a broadcast to the entire galaxy to surrender or die in the Final Order. Rey also decides to travel to Exogol to stop Kylo from getting the weapon while the rest of the heroes decide to rescue Chewie.
ACT 3
Finn, Poe, Rose and C-3PO infiltrate the First Order base similar to the movie. They manage to free Chewie but Poe becomes impulsive and decides to take out Hux to make Leia’s job easier. However,they are caught. This moment will be very emotional as C-3PO sacrifices himself to save the heroes dying an honorable death. They manage to escape at a big cost. Poe is scolded by Leia for being reckless while Rose and Finn mourn C-3PO. Rose thinks that his sacrifice was worthless as all it does is reduce the Resistance’s man power but Finn explains to her that they are in a war and that to save the people that you love, you sometimes have to sacrifice yourself. This sticks with Rose.
Meanwhile at Exogol,both Kylo and Rey arrive at the entrance to a cave where the weapon is kept. They decide to go in together rather than fight each other as they don’t know what’s inside the cave. This scene will play out like the beginning of the original movie with the horror tone. Inside the cave,they find none other than Emperor Palpatine who is still alive. Yeah deciding to keep Palpatine but his role in this will of course be small. He explains that he managed to survive his fall in Return of the Jedi which in Star Wars lore was decades ago but his body isn’t strong enough to use the Force and conquer the galaxy once again. He says that the only way the Sith can take over the galaxy once again is through a new heir to the Sith empire. Kylo steps forward as he is finally about to fulfill his birthright but Palpatine stops him and says that he isn’t the Sith heir, Rey is. Palpatine then explains how Rey came to be through her parentage. She is still The Emperor's granddaughter. I would keep that plot twist.
ACT 4
After finding out that she is the Sith heir and Palpatine's granddaughter which is so shocking for her, we then see Palpatine transfer his essence into Rey as he dies right then and there. Kylo is enraged and engages in a lightsaber duel with Rey. However, she is now much aggressive especially with Palpatine's power on top of her own abilities that she has acquired, she literally hands Kylo Ren a severe beating. She shoots him with Force lightning and then throws him across the caves with relative ease. She then comes upon him and is standing over him as she then stabs him with her lightsaber. Leia then senses a disturbance in the Force and just like the movie, she uses the last of her Force energy to heal her son and dies. Rey senses this and stops herself from killing Kylo as he is not dead but just wounded but is on the brink of death as she leaves.
Kylo is now left alone at Exogol. He is broken. He got betrayed by his entire army, couldn’t fulfill his birthright and got destroyed in a duel against Rey. He mourns his mother as the memory of his father Han Solo appears. Han in ghost form of course. I would still keep Han here as he appears to his son because that was just so emotional for me as a Star Wars fan but also it brings up father/son dynamic. Han explains that Kylo can still turn to the light. Kylo says that he is too far gone but Han explains that it’s never too late to change and that Kylo gets to decide his own destiny. Kylo is motivated by this and throws away his red lightsaber and leaves to stop Hux from executing the Final Order.
On Ahch-To, Rey also prepares to throw Anakin’s lightsaber away after the insane revelation especially now that she is related to Palpatine being his granddaughter and all. Just like the movie, Force ghost Luke appears to her as he tells her that Palpatine doesn’t get to decide if she is a Sith or a Jedi. Rey gets to decide her own destiny. He gives her Leia’s lightsaber which flips a switch in her to cause her to turn away from the dark and back to the light as she also departs to fight Hux after learning about his plans. At the Resistance base, Leia’s funeral is held. Poe is completely frustrated at himself for letting Leia and C-3PO die but Lando gives him a pep talk. Poe understands that Leia was so successful in her rebellion due to inspiring others and sends a broadcast to the entire galaxy to come join the Resistance against the First Order and save their homes. The Resistance departs for the final battle.
ACT 5
Finn and Rose infiltrate the First Order base to try and eliminate Hux and Phasma while Poe and other pilots decide to attack the Star Destroyers from the outside. Finn and Rose are captured again by Phasma and are about to be executed but Finn says he has a few final words. He looks to all the Stormtroopers and says that they were taken away from their families and brainwashed by the First Order to be soldiers but they could be so much more. Their purpose in life is more than to serve the First Order and each and every one of them should get to choose their own destiny. At first no trooper reacts but just as Finn is about to be shot, one trooper rebels against the execution. One by one all the Stormtroopers rebel and remove their masks until it’s a mutiny and there’s a civil war in the First Order. Finn and Rose escape but Phasma chases them to finally kill them.
Kylo and Rey both arrive at the base and battle the Knights Of Ren as they both use Luke’s and Leia’s lightsabers. It’s a long fight but they manage to defeat all the Knights through teamwork. In space, all the people from across the galaxy arrive to help Poe defeat the Star Destroyers like the movie. Meanwhile, Phasma and Finn duel on top of one of the Star Destroyers. Just as Finn is about to be sliced by Phasma’s swords, he uses the Force to summon a lightsaber confirming he is Force sensitive just like how Rey was in Episode 7. Finn basically with no Force training whatsoever is holding his own with Phasma. After a lengthy duel, Finn finally beats Phasma as she falls off the Star Destroyer into space.
Poe reveals that despite so many fighters,the Resistance still can’t beat the Star Destroyers in a dog fight and the only way to win is to set a bomb manually on one of the Star destroyers which is strong enough to destroy all other Star destroyers in the area. However,they need one person to sacrifice themselves so all other Resistance pilots can escape. Rose volunteers as she remembers what Finn told her. You sometimes have to make sacrifices to help others. She sets off the bomb and she and Finn have a tearful goodbye as they share a kiss as the Resistance pilots along with Rey and Kylo leave. The bomb explodes as Hux watches his entire fleet turn into ashes and he also burns away.
ENDING
The galaxy is saved. There are celebrations all across the galaxy on every planet including Coruscant, Naboo, Endor, Tatooine, Jakku, Pasanna, etc. Rey, Finn and Poe celebrate together while Chewie finally gets his own medal. Kylo however is still unsure if he deserves to celebrate after breaking apart the galaxy. Kylo of course tries to leave when from behind, the ghost of his grandfather Anakin Skywalker appears in the form of Hayden Christensen as he tells Kylo that he can always fix the galaxy he broke apart.
We cut to a few months later where Finn and other former stormtroopers are fighting remaining First Order soldiers and Rey has set up a Jedi academy with her teaching younglings/Padawans. We cut to Tatooine in a First Order base where several families are saved by a man as he defeats the First Order soldiers. One kid looks up to him and asks him “Aren’t you Kylo Ren?”. The man looks to the side where he sees Han,Luke and Leia smiling at him all in Force ghost form as the man replies “No,I am Ben Solo” as he looks at the binary sunset similar to Luke in 1977's A New Hope. Film fades to credits.
Movie completely rewritten!!!!