SithXKosan's Arts: Feedback needed and appreicated!

[SithXKosan]

Captain Jaimaca need like a huge doobie in one hand, and he should be balancing a huge BONG on his finger!!!!

Hmmm.. There's an idea...

 

[SithXKosan]

Heres my drawing from two weeks ago.. I drew for a company called ICEWORM.. you can check them out at http://iceworm02.tripod.com/ It is a group of performers, I am part of the company myself.. My bio is on the website as well.. Iceworm is an ASL (american sign language) performers that does many different things.. we all in ICEWORM has a "character" name I drew four characters in a perspective of superheroes..

Iceman

Flash.. He is spelling his name in ASL.. it reads, "F..L..A..S..H"

 

[SithXKosan]

Heatwave

and last one.. Joker

 

[Silver Sable]

your Joker looks more like a Jester lol

 

[Odin's Fury]

and heatwave is...ahem...rather well endowed

 

[SithXKosan]

your Joker looks more like a Jester lol

Lol! Yeah... The company, ICEWORM, asked me to make him not to look too much like the DC to avoid the copyright conflict..

 

[SithXKosan]

and heatwave is...ahem...rather well endowed

Lol!! Lol!!!! One thing I do have to say in my defense.. He's black..

Actually with heatwave, I was experimenting with the ink.. And it made it appear larger than life..

 

[SithXKosan]

tonight, i just finished a sketch of batman.. hope you all like it..

 

[SithXKosan]

On saturday, I was cleaning my garage out with my brother, i found some of my old drawing which i thought was crazy because i thought i ve thrown them out.. and i was holding them again in my hands..

the first one was a picture of Deathblow which i did in High school in 1994..

the second one was also from around the same time and I wanted the character battling eachother since they both were almost exactly the same.. Lobo from DC and Blood wulf from Image (that character was created by Rob Liefeld)..

 

[SithXKosan]

Just now finished a picture of Punisher.. I was taking a break from studying for a exam.. hope you all like it and as usual, all my arts are open for feedbacks..
punisher

 

[ComicChick]

i like the perspective of the hand, like he's aiming at you

 

[SithXKosan]

i like the perspective of the hand, like he's aiming at you

Thanks! I've always loved the idea what a victim's perspective would be when they were gonna be killed by the punisher..

 

[SithXKosan]

Today I did a couple of pictures, Im gonna post one of them now.. I'll post the other one when im done inking them and coloring them..

I just thought of an idea of my sketch from watching Ultimate Avengers, Hulk vs. Cap. America.. Here's the picture I drew..

Please do give me your thoughts and feedbacks..

 

[ampersand]

I am distracted by the extraordinarily large packages on your recently drawn characters.

 

[Silver Sable]

Today I did a couple of pictures, Im gonna post one of them now.. I'll post the other one when im done inking them and coloring them..

I just thought of an idea of my sketch from watching Ultimate Avengers, Hulk vs. Cap. America.. Here's the picture I drew..

Please do give me your thoughts and feedbacks..

*Nods head*

 

[Zolland]

that one is reallt great, nice work x10!

 

[SithXKosan]

Thanks guys!! appreicate your positive feedbacks!! Ampersand, sorry about the extra large pictures theyre actually 8x11.. i dont know why but my scanner tends to make them too large.. Ill keep a reminder for myself to reduce it!!!

Again thanks guys for all your positive feedbacks!!

Heres a trail run for inking carnage.. i did couple of pictures of him today..

 

[Silver Sable]

You drew my man again! lol!

*right clicks and saves*

 

[SithXKosan]

LOL... Carnage is very cool to draw and very challenging.. I love all the challenges I could get!

 

[SithXKosan]

last night I drew a picture of Star Wars.. Ive had some struggles with making it dark since it was only in penical.. I do hope this shows well on the thread.. if you were curious what the words says on the bottom-- it says "The shroud of dark side has fallen."

I would love to hear feedbacks and critiques for this.. Thanks so much!!

 

[Aquaman]

SithXKosan, your stuff has some really good features. You are a great artist over-all, but I have to say I have some criticism.

Your characters, as stated before, seem made of dough. You give great detail, but that detail makes your characters seem old and somewhat, well, wrinkley. Almost as if they're melting. And some of your characters are a little too muscley. Like with the Punisher picture. He's got a whole lot of veins popping out on his left arm.

Though, I really love the anakin over the vader silhouette. And your Hulk vs Cap is really awesome.

 

[SithXKosan]

SithXKosan, your stuff has some really good features. You are a great artist over-all, but I have to say I have some criticism.

Your characters, as stated before, seem made of dough. You give great detail, but that detail makes your characters seem old and somewhat, well, wrinkley. Almost as if they're melting. And some of your characters are a little too muscley. Like with the Punisher picture. He's got a whole lot of veins popping out on his left arm.

Though, I really love the anakin over the vader silhouette. And your Hulk vs Cap is really awesome.

Aquaman, thanks for your critiques.. I appreicate your feedback, I'll keep them in mind...

I admit that I've been trying to develop my own style, thus the details comes in and such.. I'm trying to create such an enviroment where the character doesn't seem like melting (a challenge for me).. I do though want my characters to look like they're made of dough since it will appear 3-D instread of 2-D but then that's my perspective..

Again, I do appreicate your feedback , I'll attempt to improve the style.. After all there's no such thing as perfect drawing.. (Except for Da Vinci ) jk..

 

[Jack Bristow]

I agree w/ Aquaman; your art is top notch, except I think you get lost in the details . . . if this is how you feel stylistically, though . . . ride w/ it; your likenesses are very accurate, but I feel that some of the imagery gets lost in all the extra marks; if you toned down some of your linework, making other lines thinner than some, it would bring more depth to your pieces; right now the marks are actually making your rendering look more 2-dimensional . . . IMO

Keep it up, though!!

 

[Jack Bristow]

A lot of these drawing remind me of R. Crumb a bit, which is a compliment!!!!

 

[ToddIsDead]

Your artwork looks the best when less of the "lets put as many anitomically incorrect muscles as possible on this guy" technique is used. Afterall, you probably don't want to be the next Rob Liefeld.