Revenge of the Fallen Story, Themes, Characterizations and Character Development

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I'd like to have a discussion about the movie's story, themes, characterizations and character development. Both in terms of its successes and its failures.

Much has been made about the shallowness of certain Transformers source material in relation to the movies. There's been debate about how much story and character should have been in this movie. There are those who have said that it's ridiculous to expect much more story from a big action movie, and those who counter by saying they wanted a slightly better movie, one that didn't waste the potential of Transformers.

So what does that mean?

We've established that no one's realistically looking for a great story from a Transformers movie, just a good one, so what kind of story did people want? What story and plot elements, what kind of characterization of the robots and humans did people want to see so badly that REVENGE OF THE FALLEN was such a disappointment in that regard?

Can anyone provide some actual ideas for story character development in the context of these movies that are better than what we got?

Anyone have concrete ideas that would have made it better?
 
I´ll say that I didn´t like the movie, though i don´t consider myself a "hater"...

The main problem for me was the fact that there was not a "theme" in the movie. And a film without a theme is a film without a soul. I still don´t know what the story wanted to tell me.
Yes, there was a story, characters had to go from point A to point B... Though there was very little character development (no more than an episode of any tv show).

The first hour drags a lot... In part because of the humour... I think everyone could agree that it´s kind of silly even if you find it amusing... The fart jokes... I mean, really? The tone of the film, specially that first part, is very very wierd... Jumping from serious scenes to dumb jokes. Maybe i just don´t get what the franchise is all about... I don´t know...

And i really couldn´t care for the fights and the action scenes, since i really couldn´t figure out what was happening every time a couple of robots started to fight...
Really, i tried. It was pretty frustrating in that area.

And i think it´s always wrong to say that you shouldn´t look for a great story. You ALWAYS have to look for a great story. Why would you go to the movies, then? That´s not an excuse for the failiures of a poor script.

Giant robots, explosions and hot chicks can fit in a great story if you just care about making the story work.
So the problem for me is that they could´ve done a movie about an actual "theme"... about courage, about love, about war, about so many things... but they just made a movie about... Giant robots, explosions and hot chicks.

Anyway... That´s my opinion. But I´m glad some people were able to enjoy it.
Cheers for the thread, The Guard. I believe i disagree with you about the film but i really like how polite and respectful you always are. That´s something that these forums lack sometimes!
I just hope people doesn´t start fightin in here too. :)
 
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personally I think a script writer (like you, or myself) could come up with a lot of good solid things that exceed what is presented in this film

it's silly to not believe that

for example if the three veteran autobots stood their ground between devastator and the humans that Iron hide really doesn't care for but is a loyal friend and believes in Primes philosophy(ala xmen)
they almost die, Ironhide actually does, and optimus shows up at the end and passionately returns the favour in kind.

but the same could be done with any film(especially superman)

TF serves it's purpose which is simple and fun, the fact that it knows that is why it'll be topping the years other films that pretend to be more then they are.
 
I´ll say that I didn´t like the movie, though i don´t consider myself a "hater"...

The main problem for me was the fact that there was not a "theme" in the movie. And a film without a theme is a film without a soul. I still don´t know what the story wanted to tell me.
Yes, there was a story, characters had to go from point A to point B... Though there was very little character development (no more than an episode of any tv show).

The first hour drags a lot... In part because of the humour... I think everyone could agree that it´s kind of silly even if you find it amusing... The fart jokes... I mean, really? The tone of the film, specially that first part, is very very wierd... Jumping from serious scenes to dumb jokes. Maybe i just don´t get what the franchise is all about... I don´t know...

And i really couldn´t care for the fights and the action scenes, since i really couldn´t figure out what was happening every time a couple of robots started to fight...
Really, i tried. It was pretty frustrating in that area.

And i think it´s always wrong to say that you shouldn´t look for a great story. You ALWAYS have to look for a great story. Why would you go to the movies, then? That´s not an excuse for the failiures of a poor script.

Giant robots, explosions and hot chicks can fit in a great story if you just care about making the story work.
So the problem for me is that they could´ve done a movie about an actual "theme"... about courage, about love, about war, about so many things... but they just made a movie about... Giant robots, explosions and hot chicks.

Anyway... That´s my opinion. But I´m glad some people were able to enjoy it.
Cheers for the thread, The Guard. I believe i disagree with you about the film but i really like how polite and respectful you always are. That´s something that these forums lack sometimes!
I just hope people doesn´t start fightin in here too. :)

Yeah, that's pretty much how I felt about the first film. The Transformers were in a war with different alliances and agendas and each had their own distinct personality, there was a genuine sense of loss when one of their friends gave his life for a cause...giant robots are not, things like that can be relateable and make the characters alot more likeable and the film alot more moving.

But they didn't care about that, they cared about the so called "fun adventure" and approached the material with the idea of "well it's about big robots fighting so it has to be stupid" and crammed as many kiddly flick cliches, bad jokes, and redundant action scenes with big robots throwing each other around, blowing **** up, and flying past the screen so fast I can barely tell who's who as possible into a two-and-a-half hour period.
I think Revenge of the Fallen tries a bit harder, but it's still held down by all the bad jokes and hard to follow action scenes. Very little of the humor in these films is at all character driven, in fact it usually interrupts the story just for the sake of delivering a bad joke.
 
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It's Shallow, but I don't care much.

It's very Simple.

The Love Story especially.

SPOILER below!

Sam and Mikela are so in love, but Sam is afraid to say "I Love you" to her. They try to keep up a long-distance relationship via Webcam. Sam is a Faithful guy, but then a HOT college girl (Isabel Lucas) try to seduce him he knows she is VERY Hot, but can't because he Loves Mikela! One day, she comes to his room and try to have make out with him. Just at that time, Mikela enters the room and thought he is cheating on her, she told Sam it's over and storms out.

But the Hot girl turns out to be a Deception in disguse... during the chase, Sam and Mikela had some arguments, mainly the point that Sam never told her "He LOVES her" but in the long run they Terminated the Deception.

In the end of movie, Sam seem dead, then Mikela cried and told sam "I Love you"... After Sam had a vision he meet with the Primes, he opened his eyes and finally said "I Love You" to Mikela.



How CHEESY as Hell, but it WORKS in the most Sexy/nerd way!
 
It's Shallow, but I don't care much.

It's very Simple.

The Love Story especially.

SPOILER below!

Sam and Mikela are so in love, but Sam is afraid to say "I Love you" to her. They try to keep up a long-distance relationship via Webcam. Sam is a Faithful guy, but then a HOT college girl (Isabel Lucas) try to seduce him he knows she is VERY Hot, but can't because he Loves Mikela! One day, she comes to his room and try to have make out with him. Just at that time, Mikela enters the room and thought he is cheating on her, she told Sam it's over and storms out.

But the Hot girl turns out to be a Deception in disguse... during the chase, Sam and Mikela had some arguments, mainly the point that Sam never told her "He LOVES her" but in the long run they Terminated the Deception.

In the end of movie, Sam seem dead, then Mikela cried and told sam "I Love you"... After Sam had a vision he meet with the Primes, he opened his eyes and finally said "I Love You" to Mikela.



How CHEESY as Hell, but it WORKS in the most Sexy/nerd way!

Was I the only one who liked that part of the story line of the movie?

There were moments when I was like...aww...oh noes! Oh s***! Damn! Aww... so cute...

Um .... anyway...the best moment for me was when Mikaelah said I love you and was crying totally out of control when she thought Sam to be dead. I was moved by that scene when she was crying and all that. I got kinda teary-eyed.
 
What saved the movie for me was the story of Optimus. I know he's not in it a lot, but between him kicking so much ass this time, and Jetfire losing his mind over getting to meet a "Prime", I thought they a much better job of showing and telling us how important he is.

I also liked the love story as well.
 
I enjoyed Prime's story as well. I was worried he wasn't gonna return but he did! I love him in this one and also Bumblebee. They both stole the show! :heart:
 
I am going to touch on story,themes,and characterizations as to the point and brief as possible.


Themes:No sacrifice no victory,desperation,destiny.

Story:Beefy enough(imo),logical,simple.


Character development:Insufficient depending on who you want to get to know.


Characterization for Autobots who didn't have much screen time:Passive, loyal,brave,warrior,riskers,sympathetic,caring. These characteristics apply to the Arcee gang,Jolt,and Sideswipe. Yesh I am throwing some of this out there despite them not getting much screen time to prove some of my opinions regarding them.
 
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Story was crap, but I loved every character in this. And I loved how every actor played them. I cared for everyone, and felt that they worked.

But I liked the first movie's characters too.
 
I think for a good story, you need to put some thought into it, even it's a blockbuster. Star Trek, Iron Man, and Dark Knight clicked because they a soul in each film. A soul is something that I can't describe but it's the thing that makes a movie charming, engaging, and to me entertaining. In order to have some soul in a movie, you need a director who is invested into the project.
 
It is not that I don't believe things could be better executed, it's that every time people say "This or that should be better, they are vague about it.

Sure, I could come up with ideas. So could a lot of us. But being able to come up with ideas myself doesn't tell me what other people wanted to see, or what would have been reasonable to expect to see from such a film. That is what I am curious about. I'm frankly starting to question if people truly understand what they're talking about when they say "I wanted better characterization, more themes, and a better story".

I think the relevant themes are there, and have been there. In this movie, the themes were evolved and developed fairly well, considering. This movie even managed to touch on the theme of resources, tying it to theme of responsibility that was begun in the first movie, not only in dealing with the scarcity of them (Energon resources), but the responsibility the Transformers have in deciding whether to share certain resources with humanity (weapons and technology).

This story isn't remotely crap. I don't think the story in REVENGE OF THE FALLEN is brilliant, mind you. It's very point to point, in some ways your typical "globetrotting reveal" storyline, where a little more is discovered about the plot every so often until it makes sense, the threat is revealed, the stakes are set, etc. But it's not like no thought at all went into this storyline. It is not, given the subject matter and the possibilities...a particularly bad story. I do think certain elements of it are pretty compelling. And frankly, I think in a 2:30 film that was always going to have a lot of action in it, this was a decent story effort.

I also want to add...jokes aren't story. As such, a film with a lot of humor or jokes in it is not neccessarily a film without a story. If you pay attention, you'll see that the scenes with jokes in them also generally inform the story and move it forward.

I think to flesh out the relevant Transformer history elements much more, and you'd be looking at a frankly, pretty bloated film that instead of just getting to the point, harped on the point with even more exposition. Is there even an appropriate way to "show, don't tell" some of the things they need to get aross?

Cut the 20 minutes or so of "sheer nonsense" out of the movie and you're STILL looking at a long film that would have had to have a lot of screentime added to it in order to flesh out ideas like the Primes, the Transformers origins, or their personal relationships.

That said, three months was more than enough time to make a story, decent characters, etc. They chose to go this route with the time they had. The Writer's Strike shouldn't be used as an excuse for any weaknesses this movie has.

The main problem for me was the fact that there was not a "theme" in the movie. And a film without a theme is a film without a soul. I still don´t know what the story wanted to tell me.

I won't argue your point about character development, although I thought Sam had a decent amount. And I thought the themes were pretty obvious.

The weight of sacrifice, trust and loyalty, all around. Several of the characters in the movie inform these themes. Sam, Optimus Prime, Bumblebee, Megatron and Starscream, The Fallen, and Jetfire, even Mikaela and Simmons, to some extent.

I think movie could have had some more heart. More of a sense of loss when one falls, etc. That's one of the major things that bothers me about this franchise. The Transformers don't seem to have the attachment to their comrades that humans do. Maybe that's on purpose, but it's a missed element. And more (hella expensive) bonding between the Transformers is always nice to see.

But again...that's the execution of characterization.

The character development should be all about the robots, not the humans. The humans aren't really important, except maybe the army guys and government people that work with the Autobots. The cartoon and the comics are about the robot's struggle. Spike, his family, and his girlfriend really have no importance later on. They helped introduce the robots. The next movie should be about their war, their personal struggles, history, etc. Not that hard, Guard

Ok, so you want less humans and more Transformers. But that doesn't tell me anything about WHAT the character development should be.

Someone tell me what a really good Transformers story is. Not neccessarily how to execute it, but what elements does it have?

If it's not "Humans growing as people, Transformers dealing with elements of their past and history and future, and their friends and allies being threatened, and global battles with the Decepticons and humanity being threatened"...what the hell should it be about?

Someone pitch me a better storyline, or at least a good one.
 
i thought the theme of this movie was Sam's acceptance of his destiny. He was trying to be a normal guy and look at all the bad that happened and when he did accept it then things went well for the Autobots. Yes we still see that Sam went to school at the end but more importantly we see him standing next to the Autobot Leader at the end
 
Was I the only one who liked that part of the story line of the movie?

There were moments when I was like...aww...oh noes! Oh s***! Damn! Aww... so cute...

Um .... anyway...the best moment for me was when Mikaelah said I love you and was crying totally out of control when she thought Sam to be dead. I was moved by that scene when she was crying and all that. I got kinda teary-eyed.

I know I like it too, I said it's simple BUT works!

It's CLEARLY targeted at Teenagers, not adults with a more complex Love story!


Likewise, the whole movie IS Simple, but it WORKS!!!
 
The character development came in movie one and this movie was gr8band if u dnt like it how can u call yourself a transformers fan come on the only part i dnt like was megs being under the fallen but since it makes since ive cme to live w/ it bcuz if the fallen would have made him a prime then he would have surely killed the fallen after obtaining the power and
in the 3rd movie there will be o one over Lord Megs
 
i thought the theme of this movie was Sam's acceptance of his destiny. He was trying to be a normal guy and look at all the bad that happened and when he did accept it then things went well for the Autobots. Yes we still see that Sam went to school at the end but more importantly we see him standing next to the Autobot Leader at the end

It's Michael Bay after all, I don't think he honestly give a DAMN so I wouldn't count on that being the theme!
 
well I saw the movie and thats what I took from it. Maybe if you got off the hate Bay bandwagon you would have seen it
 
i think in a way it was about Sam giving hes life for an autobot(Prime). but it could be better showed.
 
I thought there should've been a small scene involving the Autobots discussing the aftermath of what happened to Optimus and carrying on with the mission at hand.

While the twins weren't too bad. I would've preferred it was Sideswipe and Arcee or Jolt with Bumblebee. This franchise is so reliant on Prime and Bumblebee that no one can get attached to any other characters. I agree with The Guard about needing to be more sense of loss when someone falls. They missed alot opportunities there.
 
I thought there should've been a small scene involving the Autobots discussing the aftermath of what happened to Optimus and carrying on with the mission at hand.

While the twins weren't too bad. I would've preferred it was Sideswipe and Arcee or Jolt with Bumblebee. This franchise is so reliant on Prime and Bumblebee that no one can get attached to any other characters. I agree with The Guard about needing to be more sense of loss when someone falls. They missed alot opportunities there.
like in the first movie when they got BB?
 

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