Superman: The Man Of Steel (My version--Movie Plot)

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The planet of Krypton falls into a slump.They discharge the robotic mind system of the planet Brainiac because of a conspiracy against Krypton.Zod has too been discharged from the planet based on the deciding vote of Jor-El. When Brainiac is released into space as a little probe it is picked up by a ship of clones known as the Black Zero Ops. They build Brainiac a powerful body to host himself in.They worship him as the leader of the army. But meanwhile Zod has been discharged as well. Brainiac and the Black Zero pick up Zod because he promises alot of inside information on Krypton. Zod supplies them with blue prints into the inner core and what could possibly be the plans for the ultimate destruction of Krypton. The Zero ship lands and the troops breach the planet in an all out war. Meanwhile Brainiac injects a mass amount of sudeum into the core of the planet. Causing a radiation reaction. With only one month to spare the planet begins to see it's demise. But not with out a fight. They eventually drive the black zero clones out of the planet. And that is when Jor-El comes up with the theory about how the planet will explode. Nobody believes him so he builds a ship for his son to escape on. Just a few hours before the planet seals it's fate Jor-El deploys Kal-El into space headed for a place known as Smallville Kansas...

About one year later Kal-El crash lands onto the planet of earth in smallville kansas. Just as Johnothon and Martha Kent are passing by. They discover the baby boy in the ship and they decide to keep him and name him Clark Kent. Years pass by and Clark grows into a teenager and he slowly develops his powers. This dosn't make things easy on him because of his friends Pete and Lana. He can't tell them about his powers. But soon after he discovers them his parents tell him the truth. They place in his hand a key that is suposed to guid him too they place where he can learn all about himself. Clark leaves Smallville on Graduation day in search to find himself.

Years pass by and we see little clips here and there of Clark on his journey. FInally we see a clip of him with a small beard growing and his hair is starting to get long. This is the sequence when he finds his Fortress Of Solitude in the icy mountaints. Then a few more years pass on when a tall dirty man with long black hair and a large black dirty beard shoes up in Smallville. It is Clark Kent...nobody reconizes him at first including his own familly. But when he come back he tells them about his destiny and what not. Martha sues him a nice blue suit with the famous Red and yellow S embelum on the chest. And the red cape...this was his sign of justice.
Clark moved to Metropolis and became a reporter at the Daily Planet under Perry White. Being assignment partners with Jimmy Olsen and Lois Lane. Clark exposes the mantle of his war against crime only known as Superman. He reveals it to Metropolis the city of tomorrow...

Mean while Zod and Brainiac have been conquering planets and becoming world rulers. They now set there sights on earth. They want to enslave the human population and make them there slaves. Starting with Metropolis...but one thing stands in there way...Superman The Man of Steel !


Please leave feed back about the plot...
Lantern:supes:

"Si vis pacem, para bellum. If you want peace, prepare for war."
The Punisher: War Journal--#56
 
Bump....please I need feed back before I start writing the script...I have been working on this for quite some time now and I just wanna get some responses on it....
 
Sounds awesome...my only problem is that there seems to be so much going on while also telling the origin story. Here is a thought, why not do the beginning as a flashback(krypton exploding, Clarks journey to fortress) and then switch to the present where they come back to earth. We already know the origin of Superman and have seen it before.

Just a thought. :)
 
That was my original plot for the film but I changed it too this because it actually made it longer so that way I would have to tell the tale in flash back sequences to explain it. And it was all good but I just didn't like the whole out come of it. But definatly thanks for the feed back...
 
Make it simpler when you have to write a scenario on the board, dude!
and your scenario is too 70's
 
okay.. I like it.. I'll help script it.. hell I'll even add in some more details.. its a nice plot.. you should do a death of superman arc.. with this being the first and then Doomsday being a creation of Brainiac and Luthor.
 

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