Kevin Roegele
Do you mind if I don't?
- Joined
- May 2, 2000
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Having Bernard tell Harry Peter didn't kill his dad seems completely wrong in terms of storytelling. The conflict in Harry is this; should he help his best friend to save Mary-Jane, despite thinking he killed his father, or should he leave him to die?
For Bernard to appear and short-circuit all the drama is wrong. Harry should resolve the situation himself.
Harry should either realise that he believes Peter, or appear at the climax reluctantly to help Spidey, thus giving the whole finale more drama; is harry going to help Spidey or help kill him? Could he turn on Spidey at any minute?
For Bernard to appear and short-circuit all the drama is wrong. Harry should resolve the situation himself.
Harry should either realise that he believes Peter, or appear at the climax reluctantly to help Spidey, thus giving the whole finale more drama; is harry going to help Spidey or help kill him? Could he turn on Spidey at any minute?