Take a look at this, tell me what you think.

[The-Dark-Knight]

Ok i've been working on this for a few days now, and would be really grateful if you guys would take a look at my Batman site. Before anyone Compares it to BOF the 2 sites are diffrent. Mine offers stuff that isn't on BOF and vise versa. i dont expect mine to be as big as BOF but the internet is a big place, if i picked up a small but dedicated following of Batman fans, that would be great. be really grateful if you guys would sign my message board or discussion board (as you people know what your talking about-most of the time ) once again thanks (and please be nice, its my first site) www.The-dark-knight-.piczo.com

 

[Dr. Fate]

Looks good.

 

[The Chairman]

Good work.

 

[I Am The Knight]

You've done a very good job considering it's your first site. (See, I'm being nice.)

 

[The-Dark-Knight]

You've done a very good job considering it's your first site. (See, I'm being nice.)

lol, thanks , and thanks for the kind words so far, but please sign my guest book or leave a message on the discussion board...again, Ta

 

[Lando81]

BOF owns you. Your site is a cheap rip of it. Its just pathetic.

 

[I Am The Knight]

BOF owns you. Your site is a cheap rip of it. Its just pathetic.

Hey, don't be mean to the guy, he put some effort and time into this site and it is in no way ''pathetic'' for a first timer. The BOF ownage comment was uncalled for also. I mean it's BOF for god's sake. That thing has a life of it's own.

 

[Two-Face]

Great site!

 

[Bat Attack]

BOF owns you. Your site is a cheap rip of it. Its just pathetic.

Wow, talk about being an arrogant *******. Cool site, btw.

 

[Kevin Roegele]

Ok i've been working on this for a few days now, and would be really grateful if you guys would take a look at my Batman site. Before anyone Compares it to BOF the 2 sites are diffrent. Mine offers stuff that isn't on BOF and vise versa. i dont expect mine to be as big as BOF but the internet is a big place, if i picked up a small but dedicated following of Batman fans, that would be great. be really grateful if you guys would sign my message board or discussion board (as you people know what your talking about-most of the time ) once again thanks (and please be nice, its my first site) www.The-dark-knight-.piczo.com

I like it. Don't take the following as criticism, because I like it enough to take the time to help you make it better.


I've added the correct punctuation and grammar to the opening paragraph for you.


Welcome to The-Dark-Knight-.piczo.com - the newest Batman movie site on the net. We aim to bring you the most up to date news on the forthcoming film, 'The Dark Knight'. While we're doing that, we'll be looking back at past Batman films, with new pages coming soon dedicated to mechandise and the 60's TV series. We hope this will be the place to be for all this and more. Please leave a message on the Discussion Board and say 'Hi' on the Guestbook. Thanks for visiting the site and supporting us. And dont forget to bookmark-!

Also, your link to music video should say, 'Batman movie music videos', not 'video's'.

On your news page, you have the headline, "Nolan Denies Some Batman Rumours' when you only need to say, 'Nolan Denies Batman Rumours'. When writing news, try not to use words like some and very.

I would also suggest having less images on the main page. This makes it take longer to load on some computers, and also gives the reader too many different things fighting for their attention. One big, solid, eye-catching logo is often more effective.

 

[Ceb-Man]

A very good site.

 

[The-Dark-Knight]

Thank's, i recently did some new stuff to it made it (hopefully) alot more proffesional.

 

[Lando81]

Hey i just want to Say sorry about my Comments before. I was a Class 1 @$$ and Im sorry.

 

[The-Dark-Knight]

Hey i just want to Say sorry about my Comments before. I was a Class 1 @$$ and Im sorry.

Thanks that means alot. you dont get many people on here doing stuff like that. you just made my day.

 

[Lando81]

No Prob. I will say this. Your Site needs work. But I could see it being better than BOF in a few years.

 

[The Shape]

Awww. Friends Forever!

 

[The Shredder]

Pretty cool site.

 

[bobbygk]

Pretty cool site.

Will you have a chatroom up one day or just message boards? It is real hard finding a Batman site with a chatroom for me anyway lol

 

[I Am The Knight]

Awww. Friends Forever!

Criticism turns into ''Luv''

LOL!!

 

[The-Dark-Knight]

Will you have a chatroom up one day or just message boards? It is real hard finding a Batman site with a chatroom for me anyway lol

yeah im working on one i hope to have it up soon, im working on an analysis of each of the batman films at the moment. Thanks for looking and thanks for your interest

 

[Kevin Roegele]

Batman-on-film is very enthusiastic but badly written and amateur in it's design.

These are the best two Batman movie sites on the web:

http://www.batmannews.de/

http://www.batmanmovieonline.com/

 

[The-Dark-Knight]

Yeah i really love that german one (least i think its German) shame it hasent got a translation. That for me is the best one on the net. (apart from mine of course LOL)

 

[House_of_El]

Looks really good dark-knight. Fantastic job!

 

[The-Dark-Knight]

Thanks for your comments, i do a little more to it every chance i get. i never aimed for it to be as big as BOF, but im sure theres room on the net for both.

 

[Catman]

Ok i've been working on this for a few days now, and would be really grateful if you guys would take a look at my Batman site. Before anyone Compares it to BOF the 2 sites are diffrent. Mine offers stuff that isn't on BOF and vise versa. i dont expect mine to be as big as BOF but the internet is a big place, if i picked up a small but dedicated following of Batman fans, that would be great. be really grateful if you guys would sign my message board or discussion board (as you people know what your talking about-most of the time ) once again thanks (and please be nice, its my first site) www.The-dark-knight-.piczo.com

The site is great!

http://www.batmanmovieonline.com/

That site is awesome! I've been going there for like 5 years now! But, the reason BOF is so great is because Jett has the connections. I've also been visiting BOF for about 5 years or more now. In the beginning it was just a regular site, but ever since Batman Begins the guy has amazing connections and WB seems to like him. Although the WB liking him part has affected the site a bit. I've noticed he's been more of a kiss ass lately.