This is my idea for a script for a teaser trailer for a sequel to "The Dark Knight". It's the only direction I can imagine at this point, and I would love to see it happen. What are your guys's thoughts?
Open on a shot of Gotham city, slowly flying over the city.
Gordon: Theyre really out for blood. I dont know how much longer I can hold them off.
Cut to a low angle shot of Batman crouching on the window of a parking garage, looking down beyond the camera, slowly zooming in.
Batman: I can survive. Ive lasted this long. Ill endure.
Quick cutaway to Batman being thrashed, we cant see whos doing the beating. Then cut back.
Gordon: Not anymore, Im afraid. Your copycats are everywhere, killing criminals left and right. We cant let that happen. The feds are bringing in someone new. Someone from out of town.
Batman: Ill be careful. Ill lay low. But I cannot stop.
Another quick cut to someone beating him up, throwing him out of a high window. Cut back.
Gordon: I dont think you understand what youre dealing with. Theyre bringing in him.
Another quick cut to the fight, Batman falling, we see a red cape fly by and Batman is gone.
Cut to Alfred nursing Bruces wounds.
Alfred: Youd better be a little more careful from now on, Mr. Wayne. I dont think even Batman can handle this much heat.
Bruce: He has to, Alfred. Gotham needs him to.
Alfred: Does Gotham need him? Or do you? Is this worth being a hero?
Bruce: Nothing is worth it Alfred. But then, nothing ever is.
Lucius Fox walks in and hands Bruce a letter, it has the bat symbol on it.
Fox: This was addressed to you, Mr. Wayne. Thought you might find it interesting.
Cut to Gordon being handed a letter. VO reads it.
VO: Im big, dark, strong, and obsessed with justice and bats. And Im going to explode in thirty minutes. What am I?
Bruce looks up from reading it, then parallel cut to Gordon looking up from reading it.
Gordon: What is this, a riddle?
Cut to Arkham Asylum, a wall blows up. We see Scarecrow emerge, followed by, in the shadows, the Joker, along with dozens of other criminals.
Cut to Batman yelling at someone on a rooftop.
Batman: So you fight billionaires and monsters. Do you know what real crime is? Not all heroes can save the world. Some have to settle for a city.
We see who he is talking to. A man in a red cape is facing the opposite direction. He turns around. Its Superman.
Superman: I know more than you might think .Bruce. And I know youre just as crazy as the criminals you put away.
Batman: I probably am, but Im no monster.
Superman: Yes .you are. A monster of justice, perhaps, but a monster.
Cut to crowds converged on a television set on a sidewalk. A question mark is on the television, with a VO speaking.
VO: Quick! Who is big, strong, mysterious, and a hero?
Crowd stares.
VO: Too late!
The television explodes.
Cut to Bruce talking to Fox in Foxs lab.
Bruce: Any suggestions on how to beat this guy?
Fox: Short of hiring your followers?
Bruce: Haha, I dont think even the Sons of the Batman could help me now.
Fox: What about this fellow who loves his riddles. Alfred tells me he knows who you are?
Bruce: He says hell lead the people to the truth about me.
Fox: Maybe that wouldnt be such a bad thing?
Bruce: Something about hiding the truth in riddles isnt right, to me.
Back to the conversation between Batman and Superman.
Batman: Not every hero can be as bright and optimistic as you! Some need to work from the shadows. Some need to make their enemies fear.
Superman: People wont look up to someone they fear.
Batman: I dont want anyone to look up to me. All I want is what Gotham needs.
Superman: And you think Gotham needs fear?
Batman: It needs safety.
Superman: Thats a fine line.
Cut to Gordon standing on a rooftop.
Gordon: I know youve been sent here to catch him. But theres a nut out there sending the citizens of this city on a wild goose chase for clues to his real identity. And we cant afford to let that out into the open. Im asking you both for help in stopping this.
Batman and Superman look at each other. They nod.
Superman: Im still going to have to take you in after this.
Batman: Well cross that bridge when we get there.
The two make eye contact, and share a slight grin, before the screen goes black and the title fades in over the bat symbol, with the smoky outline of the superman symbol shape around it.
The Dark Knight Returns
Open on a shot of Gotham city, slowly flying over the city.
Gordon: Theyre really out for blood. I dont know how much longer I can hold them off.
Cut to a low angle shot of Batman crouching on the window of a parking garage, looking down beyond the camera, slowly zooming in.
Batman: I can survive. Ive lasted this long. Ill endure.
Quick cutaway to Batman being thrashed, we cant see whos doing the beating. Then cut back.
Gordon: Not anymore, Im afraid. Your copycats are everywhere, killing criminals left and right. We cant let that happen. The feds are bringing in someone new. Someone from out of town.
Batman: Ill be careful. Ill lay low. But I cannot stop.
Another quick cut to someone beating him up, throwing him out of a high window. Cut back.
Gordon: I dont think you understand what youre dealing with. Theyre bringing in him.
Another quick cut to the fight, Batman falling, we see a red cape fly by and Batman is gone.
Cut to Alfred nursing Bruces wounds.
Alfred: Youd better be a little more careful from now on, Mr. Wayne. I dont think even Batman can handle this much heat.
Bruce: He has to, Alfred. Gotham needs him to.
Alfred: Does Gotham need him? Or do you? Is this worth being a hero?
Bruce: Nothing is worth it Alfred. But then, nothing ever is.
Lucius Fox walks in and hands Bruce a letter, it has the bat symbol on it.
Fox: This was addressed to you, Mr. Wayne. Thought you might find it interesting.
Cut to Gordon being handed a letter. VO reads it.
VO: Im big, dark, strong, and obsessed with justice and bats. And Im going to explode in thirty minutes. What am I?
Bruce looks up from reading it, then parallel cut to Gordon looking up from reading it.
Gordon: What is this, a riddle?
Cut to Arkham Asylum, a wall blows up. We see Scarecrow emerge, followed by, in the shadows, the Joker, along with dozens of other criminals.
Cut to Batman yelling at someone on a rooftop.
Batman: So you fight billionaires and monsters. Do you know what real crime is? Not all heroes can save the world. Some have to settle for a city.
We see who he is talking to. A man in a red cape is facing the opposite direction. He turns around. Its Superman.
Superman: I know more than you might think .Bruce. And I know youre just as crazy as the criminals you put away.
Batman: I probably am, but Im no monster.
Superman: Yes .you are. A monster of justice, perhaps, but a monster.
Cut to crowds converged on a television set on a sidewalk. A question mark is on the television, with a VO speaking.
VO: Quick! Who is big, strong, mysterious, and a hero?
Crowd stares.
VO: Too late!
The television explodes.
Cut to Bruce talking to Fox in Foxs lab.
Bruce: Any suggestions on how to beat this guy?
Fox: Short of hiring your followers?
Bruce: Haha, I dont think even the Sons of the Batman could help me now.
Fox: What about this fellow who loves his riddles. Alfred tells me he knows who you are?
Bruce: He says hell lead the people to the truth about me.
Fox: Maybe that wouldnt be such a bad thing?
Bruce: Something about hiding the truth in riddles isnt right, to me.
Back to the conversation between Batman and Superman.
Batman: Not every hero can be as bright and optimistic as you! Some need to work from the shadows. Some need to make their enemies fear.
Superman: People wont look up to someone they fear.
Batman: I dont want anyone to look up to me. All I want is what Gotham needs.
Superman: And you think Gotham needs fear?
Batman: It needs safety.
Superman: Thats a fine line.
Cut to Gordon standing on a rooftop.
Gordon: I know youve been sent here to catch him. But theres a nut out there sending the citizens of this city on a wild goose chase for clues to his real identity. And we cant afford to let that out into the open. Im asking you both for help in stopping this.
Batman and Superman look at each other. They nod.
Superman: Im still going to have to take you in after this.
Batman: Well cross that bridge when we get there.
The two make eye contact, and share a slight grin, before the screen goes black and the title fades in over the bat symbol, with the smoky outline of the superman symbol shape around it.
The Dark Knight Returns