ShadowBoxing
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Alright this should give you the basic premise and where it is going....it is incomplete. This is the first 19 pages. Basically giving you some of the set up.
EXT. African Jungle
A man stands atop a tree looking through the site of a long barreled sniper rifle. He is wearing pants and boots. A button down shirt, white, is tucked into his kakis. He has a knife on his belt and a samurai sword strapped to his back.
The camera pans around him giving a view of his face. One eye is in the site. The other is covered with a white eyepatch which matches his shirt.
He is posed still. Silent and barely even breathing. He is strong, but older. He has a body of a man half his age.
INT. Site of Rifle
Through the rifle site there is a cheeta running towards his location. Just as it crossed perpendicular to his location
CRACK!
A shot hits the Cheeta right in the back leg. It stumbles.
EXT. African Jungle
The man jumps down from the tree and runs towards it dropping his rifle.
He runs towards the beast, who is stunned. It tries to run.
The man pounces atop the cat. It screams. The man draws his blade.
The cheeta is now below the camera as the knife draws away from its neck covered in blood.
EXT. Jungle Mansion.
The man is dragging the animal back up a walkway which sits out amongst a tropical paradise. Another man, dressed in a pressed suit, comes down the steps to meet him. He is about 20 years the hunters senior. He takes out a phone.
Slade sits silently, almost meditatively in the seat of the Helicopter. He looks slightly sullen. Wintergreen sits next to him. In the seat across sits an FBI agent.
EXT. Helicopter
The Helicopter touches down on a helipad atop a tall building (Hospital). The three men exit the Helicopter, the last being Slade.
The three men walks towards a doorway on the rooftop. Wintergreen holds the door as the other two enter.
INT. Hospital
The three men stand silently with a team of doctors and a police officer. The Police Officer is addressing Slade.
Slade enters. His son is in a tented bed with heart rate monitors. Slade is overcome with grief seeing his son so badly burned.
He sits down in the chair beside him, arms folded.
The room and noise goes silent. Slade is shaken, breathing heavy. Doctors rush in the room and attempt to recesetate him.
INT. Hospital Hallway
Slade stands with Wintergreen. The FBI agent walks by them.
After the FBI agent is gone Slade turns and looks at Wintergreen.
EXT. Jungle Mansion.
Again the exterior of the house is shown. The same Helicopter this time is sitting on a helipad in the back courtyard.
EXT. African Jungle
A man stands atop a tree looking through the site of a long barreled sniper rifle. He is wearing pants and boots. A button down shirt, white, is tucked into his kakis. He has a knife on his belt and a samurai sword strapped to his back.
The camera pans around him giving a view of his face. One eye is in the site. The other is covered with a white eyepatch which matches his shirt.
He is posed still. Silent and barely even breathing. He is strong, but older. He has a body of a man half his age.
INT. Site of Rifle
Through the rifle site there is a cheeta running towards his location. Just as it crossed perpendicular to his location
CRACK!
A shot hits the Cheeta right in the back leg. It stumbles.
EXT. African Jungle
The man jumps down from the tree and runs towards it dropping his rifle.
He runs towards the beast, who is stunned. It tries to run.
The man pounces atop the cat. It screams. The man draws his blade.
The cheeta is now below the camera as the knife draws away from its neck covered in blood.
EXT. Jungle Mansion.
The man is dragging the animal back up a walkway which sits out amongst a tropical paradise. Another man, dressed in a pressed suit, comes down the steps to meet him. He is about 20 years the hunters senior. He takes out a phone.
Hunter
(Cross)
(Cross)
Wintergreen, I am in the middle of something!
The hunter gives him a sharp look and begins to walk away.Wintergreen
Master Slade this is very important.
Slade is still walking away.Master Slade this is very important.
Wintergreen
Its your son sir
Slade stops and turns his head around, looking directly at the phone in Wintergreens hand.Its your son sir
Wintergeen
There has been an accident.
INT. Helicopter (over cityscape)There has been an accident.
Slade sits silently, almost meditatively in the seat of the Helicopter. He looks slightly sullen. Wintergreen sits next to him. In the seat across sits an FBI agent.
EXT. Helicopter
The Helicopter touches down on a helipad atop a tall building (Hospital). The three men exit the Helicopter, the last being Slade.
The three men walks towards a doorway on the rooftop. Wintergreen holds the door as the other two enter.
INT. Hospital
The three men stand silently with a team of doctors and a police officer. The Police Officer is addressing Slade.
Police Officer
He was involved in a raid. He had been acting privately as a vigilante for months. He provided us with information, told us where to meet him.
(Beat)
Some young Superhero must have heard to commotion. He came in, started going wild. Hit this tanker with a power beam. Boom. Your son was caught in the explosion.
Doctor #1
Your son received 3rd degree burns on 98% of his body. Its a miracle we could ID him this quickly.
Slade
(resigned tone)
Will he....
(beat)
Doctor #1
...Chances are slim....would you like to see him?
INT. Hospital room.He was involved in a raid. He had been acting privately as a vigilante for months. He provided us with information, told us where to meet him.
(Beat)
Some young Superhero must have heard to commotion. He came in, started going wild. Hit this tanker with a power beam. Boom. Your son was caught in the explosion.
Doctor #1
Your son received 3rd degree burns on 98% of his body. Its a miracle we could ID him this quickly.
Slade
(resigned tone)
Will he....
(beat)
Doctor #1
...Chances are slim....would you like to see him?
Slade enters. His son is in a tented bed with heart rate monitors. Slade is overcome with grief seeing his son so badly burned.
He sits down in the chair beside him, arms folded.
Slade
You know Grant, you always were my best student.
(beat)
Always were eager to learn...
(beat)
Hunting, tracking, weapons...you wanted to learn it all...
(tears swell up in his face)
And now look at you, they say you cant even hear me....you, you did not have to be just like me...I was already so proud of you.
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep. The heart rate monitor goes dead.You know Grant, you always were my best student.
(beat)
Always were eager to learn...
(beat)
Hunting, tracking, weapons...you wanted to learn it all...
(tears swell up in his face)
And now look at you, they say you cant even hear me....you, you did not have to be just like me...I was already so proud of you.
The room and noise goes silent. Slade is shaken, breathing heavy. Doctors rush in the room and attempt to recesetate him.
INT. Hospital Hallway
Slade stands with Wintergreen. The FBI agent walks by them.
FBI Agent
They got the metahuman who did this to your son.
Slade offers no response. The FBI agent bows his head slighting, looking back into his coffee cup and continues walking.They got the metahuman who did this to your son.
After the FBI agent is gone Slade turns and looks at Wintergreen.
Slade
The boy who did this to my son.
(Beat)
Have him killed.
Slade turns away from Wintergreen and walks down the hallway. Wintergreen follows.The boy who did this to my son.
(Beat)
Have him killed.
EXT. Jungle Mansion.
Again the exterior of the house is shown. The same Helicopter this time is sitting on a helipad in the back courtyard.