'The Amazing Spider-Man' Screenplay by 'thejon93'

[thejon93]

Well, the full screenplay is now up for you all to read. I really do hope you enjoy it. Here you can warp to select parts on the screenplay:

PART 1
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 8
PART 9
PART 10
PART 11
PART 12
PART 13
PART 14
PART 15
PART 16
PART 17
PART 18
PART 19
PART 20
PART 21
PART 22
PART 23
PART 24
PART 25
PART 26

And, again, I hope you all enjoyed the screenplay. Please leave behind your comments, complaints, reviews, anything! I'd really appreciate it. Thank you.

 

[spiderfan08]

nice opening scene man! i dig it. a lot. ill keep checking back to read more. i want to know what comes of this bank scene.

 

[thejon93]

nice opening scene man! i dig it. a lot. ill keep checking back to read more. i want to know what comes of this bank scene.

Thanks, man. And trust me, you'll be quite surprised at what comes of this bank sequence. Even I was a bit surprised when writing it. But still, alike a lot of scenes in this screenplay, it's very open-ended. Let's just say that if I write a sequel for it (which I'm actually already planning), there may be another hero/villain introduced.

I'll close by saying that, I don't think anybody has ever considered these characters to be apart of anything having to do with the movies (be that, the current franchise).

Anyhow, thanks again for writing. I really, really do appreciate positive or negative feedback in any form. And, if you (or anyone) have anything to say or ask about the screenplay. Feel free.

 

[spiderfan08]

haha. classic spidey humor here. i love it. thats where i think the current franchise lacks imo. im loving this so far man. keep it up!

 

[thejon93]

haha. classic spidey humor here. i love it. thats where i think the current franchise lacks imo. im loving this so far man. keep it up!

Haha, thank again. I wish that I could post the whole screenplay up now, but I've still got a few more scenes to add in. And, so far, I'm really digging the length of it. I have a bunch of scenes and ideas I've written down in a notebook, and translating them to this screenplay... has just been really "writer friendly". I'm actually having a lot of fun writing this thing.

I'm pretty certain that I'll have the full screenplay up here in about a week (or even less). Today, I wrote in about 9 more pages and I've got 51 pages in total now. But still, a whole lot of free ideas and scenes left on the table.

Anyhow, I absolutely agree with you on the current 'Spider-Man' films. While I do enjoy watching them, I notice that the humour and the heart of the comics is what it lacks. While that's one thing I dislike about the films, I'm kinda glad that they stand on their own feet and they aren't just straight comic-book copy-cats.

However, with the new cartoon series (of course, 'The Spectacular Spider-Man')... I finally realized just how great a 'Spider-Man' film could be if it was more light-hearted (hell, even more kid-friendly). The show has it's moments of being serious, but it never overplays that. 'Spider-Man 2' was my least favourite film in the series because it kept playing with that factor, but it never really pays it off (for me).

In closing, I'm hoping that with this upcoming movie they'll give us more strong characters that can really set the mood to just... bringing a smile to your face. And honestly, that's what this current cartoon series is doing for me and it's the main factor to why I wanted to write this screenplay.

 

[spiderfan08]

yup. i agree with you. i love how the movies still convey spidey in their own way without totally just taking everything right out of the comics. but i would love to see more humor. to me, spidey is that smart ass kid that happens to have superpowers and could go head to head with you if necessary. haha. i loved the MTV show of spidey b/c of all the humor.

what you're doing with him is classic imo. keep it up man! cant wait to read more.

 

[thejon93]

yup. i agree with you. i love how the movies still convey spidey in their own way without totally just taking everything right out of the comics. but i would love to see more humor. to me, spidey is that smart ass kid that happens to have superpowers and could go head to head with you if necessary. haha. i loved the MTV show of spidey b/c of all the humor.

what you're doing with him is classic imo. keep it up man! cant wait to read more.

I fully agree with you on the 'MTV' series of 'Spider-Man'. I liked that show a whole hell of a lot, but it was a shame that they cancelled it so quickly during it's run. In my opinion, they should've ran a promotion for it with 'Spider-Man 2' [my bad, 'Spider-Man'; the first one, of course] so that more people would've been aware of it. But... oh well, I guess.

And, once again, thanks alot for the feedback. I'm currently working on the sequence following that particular scenario that I posted up previously. It's one thing that I didn't have in my notes, but something that I thought of throwing in at that moment to show Peter's scientific persona a little more. It's not "science heavy", but it's just a simple little scene that sums it all up for the audience that Peter is his own kind of genius.

 

[thejon93]

Anyhow, while writing the screenplay, I made a "custom soundtrack" for the screenplay itself. This is just a series of songs that I personally feel fit the screenplay. Hope you enjoy them. [Click Here To Listen.]​

 

[spiderfan08]

again..i must say. this is classic spidey. not every superhero is gonna answer his cell phone while doing his shenanigans. cant wait to read more

 

[thejon93]

again..i must say. this is classic spidey. not every superhero is gonna answer his cell phone while doing his shenanigans. cant wait to read more

Thanks, mate. Really appreciate having you keep up with this. And also, the screenplay is nearly finished up. Right at the moment, I'm just finishing up work on a fight scene that happens later-on in the story. After that, I'm going to touch up a few other scenes in the story and edit-out some noticeable mistakes, as well. After that, the screenplay should be finished and ready for posting. I'll post the chapters up on the opening post to this thread, as I get them up, so that they'll be easier to access and find. Then, I'll be posting up a poll to see what you all think. If it does well, I may even consider writing another... But, again, thank you for keeping up, 'spiderfan'. I really appreciate the support

 

[thejon93]

PART 1:

INT. BANK - DAY​

The bank was slightly crowded, with people all lining up at
the main counter.​

LUCY
(Calls)
DEBRA!​

LUCY called to DEBRA from behind the counter to the bank.
DEBRA, on the other hand, was quickly walking towards LUCY.​

DEBRA
Hey, MS. MARTIN. What do you need?​

LUCY
I need you to take up WHITNEY's
post for today, she called in
sick.​

DEBRA
But... am I being paid extra for
this?​

LUCY
We'll discuss this after your
shift, head on over there.​

LUCY walked away from DEBRA, as she pointed in the direction
of the closed section of the counter. DEBRA sighed.​

CUT TO: ​

Walking through the streets, towards the bank, was PETER. He
looked up at the street name and checked the slip of paper
in his hand.​

PETER
(To himself)
Is this the right street, PUNY
PETE? Or is it "PUNY PARKER"?​

PETER backs up into an alleyway for a moment, away from all
of the walking civilians.​

PETER
(To himself)
Bank, bank, bank, where are you
bank?​

PETER continued to look around, until he finally caught
sight of the building.​

PETER
(To himself)
There you are.​

CUT TO: ​

Standing in line, before PETER, was a MAN.​

MAN
Thank you, ma'am.​

DEBRA
You're welcome.​

The MAN walked out of PETER's way from the line. DEBRA
lowered her head down for a moment and sighed, where PETER
then stepped forward (slightly nervous).​

PETER
Ahh... Hi. I'd like to access my-​

PETER stopped himself in surprise, as DEBRA rose her head to
face PETER. They were both surprised to see one another.​

DEBRA
PETER?...​

PETER
DEBRA!​

DEBRA then leaned over the counter to PETER, as she then
gave him a hug.​

DEBRA
How's MIDTOWN treating you?​

PETER
Well...​

PETER quickly adjusts his collar, as DEBRA pulls herself
back behind the counter.​

PETER
(Continues)
It's good. EDDIE's still there,
HARRY and GWEN are around...
FLASH, of course...​

DEBRA
(Chuckles)
Of course.​

PETER
Yeah... So, how about-​

Suddenly, PETER was interrupted by a loud car crash outside.
Which suddenly sparked into the sound of multiple other car
crashes.​

DEBRA
Oh, my God...​

DEBRA suddenly places her hands over her mouth at the sight
of something outside the bank. PETER turns around to try and
catch sight of it, he was too late. Another car crash
thundered.​

DEBRA
(Screams)
PETER!​

DEBRA once again leans over the counter and wraps her arms
around PETER. PETER looks back at her.​

PETER
It's alright, it's fine... Just
take cover behind the counter and
I'll meet you around-​

DEBRA
(Screams in terror)
Watch out!​

DEBRA fearfully takes cover back to behind the counter,
where PETER turns around to notice a vehicle flying through
the front-entrance of the lobby.​

CUT TO: ​

Down to DEBRA, she continues to scream in fear of the
moment. However, she notices that the rest of the people
behind the counter are slowly rising to their feet. Doing
the same, DEBRA pulls herself up, using the counter as
support, to notice that the incoming vehicle was caught by a
large web.​

CUT TO: ​

Near the exterior of the bank, PETER looks through a window
of the bank to notice the stunned civilians inside.​

PETER
(To himself)
Well... that was a close call,
SPIDEY.​

And after that spoken, PETER slips on his SPIDER-MAN mask
(now revealing that he had the full suit on). Leaping high
up in-between the alleyway, he latches hold of the building
wall as he quickly scales up upon it.​

CUT TO: ​

Throughout the street there ran a giant, rolling wheel. The
man inside, JACKSON WEELE, laughed through the carnage he
was creating.​

JACKSON
(Yells)
Where is the ROCKET RACER now?​

SPIDER-MAN
Ahh... "ROCKET RACER"? I hope you
mean your friendly neighbourhood,
SPIDER-MAN.​

JACKSON turned the wheel around to face SPIDER-MAN, who was
hanging upside-down from a webline.​

JACKSON
(Mutters)
Not you...​

SPIDER-MAN
Yeah, well...​

SPIDER-MAN lowers himself down closer to JACKSON with his
webline.​

SPIDER-MAN
I get that sometimes.​

JACKSON
Really?​

Suddenly, two large mechanical arms popped out from the side
of the wheel. Where the right arm then swung at SPIDER-MAN,
only to have SPIDEY avoid it by leaping out of the way.
SPIDER-MAN laughed with his success, but only to be hit by
the left mechanical arm attached to the wheel, where the
impact sent SPIDER-MAN flying through a fourth floor window.​

SPIDER-MAN
(Gasps, to himself)
SPIDEY, how in the world do you
get yourself into these kind of
situations?​

With that, JACKSON suddenly appeared up along the building
wall, while the wheel he was inside, held him in place.
SPIDER-MAN leapt to his feet.​

SPIDER-MAN
(Surprised)
You can climb walls, too?!​

JACKSON
Yourself, and the rest of
MANHATTAN, will be dazzled and
amazed at the very sight of THE
BIG WHEEL.​

 

[thejon93]

PART 2:

Dual-machine guns then popped out of the wheel and begun to
open fire at SPIDER-MAN, who sparingly dodged all of the
shots fired, while the people inside the building screamed
in peril and took cover from the attack.​

Rolling out of the way of the fire, SPIDER-MAN then leaps
out of another window, where he then instantly shot a
webline along the wall above THE BIG WHEEL and swung himself
towards THE BIG WHEEL itself, where he then kicked it
amongst it's side, as it fell to the streets below, landing
steadily on a parked vehicle.​

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
I'd be so dead, about now, if I
owned that...​

THE BIG WHEEL rolled off of the crushed vehicle, as JACKSON
inside looked up at SPIDER-MAN casually.​

SPIDER-MAN
You're not angry?​

JACKSON
(Chuckles)
Villains should always keep a cool
head, SPIDER-MAN. Maybe you'll
quit talking one of these days and
understand that.​

SPIDER-MAN
Yeah. Well, I try.​

JACKSON
(Nods)
We shall see.​

Suddenly, with THE BIG WHEEL's mechanical arms, JACKSON
picks up the crushed vehicle.​

SPIDER-MAN
(Mutters;
surprised)
Holy-shootin' CRACKER JACKS...​

With that, THE BIG WHEEL then chucked the vehicle at
SPIDER-MAN, who dodged it, by rolling further up the wall.
The vehicle crashed hard into the building wall.​

While the vehicle remained stuck in-between the building
wall, SPIDER-MAN leapt back down to the street. THE BIG
WHEEL once again readied his dual-machine guns, only to have
SPIDER-MAN spin over to the side of THE BIG WHEEL [mid-air]
and shot a webline at it's side. SPIDER-MAN then tugged
himself in, towards THE BIG WHEEL, hitting it. The impact
caused THE BIG WHEEL to fall over to it's side, crushing one
of the mechanical arms.​

JACKSON
(Yells)
You dumb imbecile!​

SPIDER-MAN
Ahh... and you fouled me over
portraying yourself as a
cool-headed kind of guy. That's
harsh.​

SPIDER-MAN then spun a webline amongst JACKSON's face, as
SPIDER-MAN reached his arm into THE BIG WHEEL and pulled out
it's controls. JACKSON noticed this through his hearing of
it.​

JACKSON
(Scared)
What did you do?!​

SPIDER-MAN
Don't worry, my friend, I'll be
getting you out of this thing as
soon as-​

With his SPIDER-SENSE going off, SPIDER-MAN leapt out of the
way of an attack. The mechanical arm of THE BIG WHEEL swung
at him. SPIDER-MAN once again landed clung alongside the
building wall.​

SPIDER-MAN
(Yells)
Hey, that was a cheap shot!​

JACKSON
(Yells; confused)
What?!​

Suddenly, the mechanical arm smashed through the side of THE
BIG WHEEL, pulling out JACKSON, where the mechanical arm
then threw JACKSON down to the sidewalk.​

SPIDER-MAN
(Mutters to
himself)
Oh, I see.​

The mechanical arm then reached to the ground, where it
pulled THE BIG WHEEL back up to it's original stance.
SPIDER-MAN spun a webline at the lightpost above THE BIG
WHEEL and pulled it down, landing and crashing hard against
THE BIG WHEEL. THE BIG WHEEL appeared to be knocked out by
the collision, as the mechanical arm fell lifelessly down to
the ground.​

SPIDER-MAN
Is that it?...​

With that, the mechanical arm's fingers all twitched.​

SPIDER-MAN
(Sighs, mutters to
himself)
Bite your tongue, SPIDEY... Bite
it.​

An electrical spark suddenly went off inside THE BIG WHEEL,
where the mechanical arm then reached to the top of THE BIG
WHEEL and pulled the fallen lightpost away from it. Where
THE BIG WHEEL then suddenly threw the lightpost at SPIDEY,
only to have SPIDER-MAN avoid yet another attack with his
SPIDER-SENSE.​

SPIDER-MAN
Okay then, MR. WHEEL. You wanna
tango? Let's tango.​

THE BIG WHEEL rolled further along the road, where it then
begun to quickly head up the street. SPIDER-MAN leapt
quickly down to JACKSON on the ground.​

SPIDER-MAN
You're gonna stick around, right?​

JACKSON
(Panting)
Yeah...​

SPIDER-MAN
Goodie.​

SPIDER-MAN shot a webline high up at another building,
pulling himself to a height where he could begin to websling
in pursuit of THE BIG WHEEL. THE BIG WHEEL turned a corner,
as JACKSON watched, followed closely by SPIDER-MAN.​

JACKSON
(Under his breath)
Yeah right...​

JACKSON attempted to stand-up, but was prevented, only to
find his hand stuck to the sidewalk by a web. JACKSON
sighed, as he sat back down on the sidewalk. Crossing his
legs together.​

 

[thejon93]

PART 3:

CUT TO:


Crashing slightly into the EMPIRE STATE BUILDING, THE BIG
WHEEL backs up slightly as it begins to run up alongside the
building. SPIDER-MAN landed on the sidewalk, where he then
looked up at THE BIG WHEEL scaling up the building. A police
car skidded to a halt before SPIDER-MAN, CAPT. STACY stepped
out of the passenger's side.

CAPT. STACY
You going after it?


SPIDER-MAN looks higher up along the EMPIRE STATE BUILDING.

SPIDER-MAN
Let's try a very high drop-


SPIDER-MAN turns towards CAPT. STACY.

SPIDER-MAN
Get the people on the street out
of this area, but keep the people
already inside the building
inside. Get every vehicle off the
street. Puppies. Kittens. Pigeons.
Everything.


CAPT. STACY
Just try to keep the property
damages to a minimum, will you?


SPIDER-MAN
Mayor's on your back again?


CAPT. STACY nods.

SPIDER-MAN
(Nods)
I shall do my best then, CAPTAIN.


SPIDER-MAN spins a webline high up the building, quickly
reeling himself up to the height of the shot. Making it up
to the webline's hit, SPIDER-MAN then leaps free from it and
begins to sprint up the EMPIRE STATE BUILDING, in pursuit of
THE BIG WHEEL.

SPIDER-MAN
(Calls)
Come on, MR. WHEEL, I just wanna
talk to you!


SPIDER-MAN finally reaches THE BIG WHEEL's position, as he
continues to run alongside it at THE BIG WHEEL's speed.

SPIDER-MAN
Okay then, maybe not.


SPIDER-MAN then leaps from up-against the wall and flies
towards THE BIG WHEEL, only to be hit by THE BIG WHEEL's
mechanical arm as he's sent through a window.

THE BIG WHEEL continues to scale higher up the building,
where SPIDER-MAN then leaps out onto the ledge of the
window; clenching his head painfully from the collision.

SPIDER-MAN
(Mutters)
That's it.


SPIDER-MAN spins a webline up towards THE BIG WHEEL,
catching it, the spinning WHEEL tugs and drags SPIDER-MAN
along with it. Banging into the building wall, SPIDER-MAN
finally regains his stability, kicking repeatedly away from
the wall, as he pulls himself in closer towards THE BIG
WHEEL. Finally satisfied, SPIDER-MAN pulls himself to the
side and catapults himself towards THE BIG WHEEL where he
then kicks it loose away from the building wall.

SPIDER-MAN
(Laughing;
cheerfully)
It worked! It worked!... Oh,
wait... Now MR. WHEEL and I are
both falling.


SPIDER-MAN sarcastically screamed aloud while falling,
before he begun to laugh in victory again.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
Okay, SPIDEY. Calm down. Better
make sure this WHEEL crashes
safely.


SPIDER-MAN finally turns around to face THE BIG WHEEL, where
he then spins two weblines towards it, catching it, he used
the weblines to descend himself closer down to THE BIG
WHEEL.

SPIDER-MAN
Happy landings, MR. WHEEL. Hope my
web-shooters meet you in the
afterlife. Once again, happy
landings. And... well, I should
get going now. See ya in the
junkyard!


SPIDER-MAN delivers one final kick to THE BIG WHEEL, lunging
it down to the cleared road below. Finally crashing, it
exploded into a million pieces, creating a small crater for
itself, in the meantime. CAPT. STACY and a whole mob of
people slowly begun to crowd around the destroyed BIG WHEEL.
SPIDER-MAN then descended down beside CAPT. STACY from a
lightpost overhead.

SPIDER-MAN
Oddly enough, I kind of feel sad
for the poor thing.


SPIDER-MAN then suddenly lunged himself back up into the
air, as he begun to websling away.

SPIDER-MAN
(Yells back at
CAPT. STACY)
Be sure to tell the clean-up crew
that their friendly neighbourhood
superhero said "HI"!


CAPT. STACY laughed under his breath.

CAPT. STACY
(Under his breath)
Mayor's gonna have my head.

 

[thejon93]

PART 4:

INT. POLICE PRECINCT - DAY

The police officers in the precinct made the room clear,
where CAPT. STACY led JACKSON to the jail cells.

CUT TO:


GWEN walked in through the front-entrance of the precinct
and headed to the front counter. Just then, the secretary,
GLORY, noticed her. GLORY shot up to her feet and ran from
behind the counter at GWEN.

GLORY
(Screams; happy)
GWEN!


GLORY attempts to pick up GWEN, but stops herself.

GLORY
Oh, yeah... You aren't that
little, anymore.


GWEN
(Chuckles)
No, ma'am.


CAPT. STACY
Nice to see you back so soon,
GWEN.


GWEN turned around to see CAPT. STACY standing before her.

GWEN
Nice to see you too, DAD.


With that, GWEN and CAPT. STACY hugged one another. The
phone behind the counter rang, GLORY then rushed over to
pick it up.

GLORY
(Answers)
Hello?


A person on the other end talked, while GLORY listened.

GLORY
Okay, just a moment.


GLORY leaned over the counter and held the phone out to
CAPT. STACY; holding the speaker. He looked at her.

CAPT. STACY
The mayor?


GLORY nodded. CAPT. STACY sighed, as he then regretfully
took hold of the phone and held it beside his cheek.

CAPT. STACY
Hello there, MR. MAYOR-

 

[thejon93]

PART 5:

EXT. DAILY BUGLE - DAY

Vehicles echoed throughout the streets, reflecting off of
the buildings, as SPIDER-MAN sat amongst the edge of the
rooftop of the DAILY BUGLE, looking peacefully down to the
city streets below.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
Okay, SPIDEY. I know you're
worried about how you'll look
doing this, but you've been
anticipating this moment for your
entire life...


SPIDER-MAN stood up over the edge of the building. Taking a
deep breath in, he finally exhaled.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
Pose like a legend.


With that, SPIDER-MAN leapt off the edge of the building.
Falling down towards the street below, suddenly he cheered
aloud, as the camera webbed up to the lightpost begun to
take pictures repeatedly.

CUT TO:


ROBBIE held the shots that PETER had recently taken of
SPIDER-MAN. PETER kept his arms folded, as PETER's boss, J.
JONAH JAMESON, impatiently tapped his fingers amongst his
desk.

ROBBIE
(Examines the
photos)
These are quality, PETER.


PETER
(Cheers)
Yes!


JAMESON
(Curses)
No!


Walking inside the office, BETTY smiles and hands PETER his
cheque.

BETTY
(Whispers to PETER)
Good job, PETE.


JAMESON
(Calls)
BETTY!


BETTY
Yes, MR. JAMESON?


JAMESON
(Shouts)
Do you know what you just cost me?


BETTY
A penny's worth of paper, sir?...


JAMESON
(Shouts)
Exactly!-


JAMESON stopped himself from continuing, but only
momentarily. He then turned around to face ROBBIE.

JAMESON
(Shouts)
This is all your fault, ROBBIE! If
you wouldn't have said PARKER's
photos were any good, I would've
still had an extra fifty dollars!


JAMESON then spun away from ROBBIE and picked up the cigar
from his desk and stuck it between his teeth. Just then, a
reporter, NED LEEDS, came rushing into the office. Bumping
into PETER, that he doesn't seem to recall, he sets his
story on the front-desk. JAMESON almost instantly picked it
up to examine it.

JAMESON
(Reads; confused)
"THE BIG WHEEL"?... Who told you
to go with that name?!... And why
is there a headline on here?!


BETTY then appeared behind NED, gripping hold of his
shoulders.

BETTY
MR. JAMESON, you told him to name
the wheelman: "THE BIG WHEEL".


JAMESON
(Points at BETTY)
You're wrong.


BETTY smirked, as NED smiled with peering back at BETTY.
PETER then squeezed his way through BETTY and NED, who were
standing in the middle of the doorway.

ROBBIE
What do you want the new headline
to be then, JONAH?


JAMESON
(Remembered)
Oh, yeah...


JAMESON then pointed back at NED and BETTY, directing them
to leave his office. BETTY let NED loose, as she then closed
the door behind the two. The two then started up
conversation outside.

ROBBIE
Same headline?


JAMESON
Same headline.


JAMESON then pulled up a lighter from his open desk-drawer
and lit his cigar with it.

 

[thejon93]

PART 6:

INT. CONVENIENCE STORE - NIGHT

MONTANA opened the door to the freezer, he then crouched
down and looked for a product in the cold drinks section. He
couldn't find it.

MONTANA
(Calls)
Hey, man!


The STORE OWNER tried to look over the aisles at MONTANA but
couldn't see him, the STORE OWNER yawned, as he left from
behind the counter and walked over to where MONTANA was
crouched. Just then, THREE MEN walked into the store.

STORE OWNER
What is it?


MONTANA
(Looks up at STORE
OWNER)
You wouldn't happen to have beer
in this store here, would you?


STORE OWNER
No. We don't sell alcohol.


The STORE OWNER then turned away from MONTANA, as he walked
back over to the counter where the THREE MEN were lined-up.
He noticed on the counter that there were three pieces of
gum.

STORE OWNER
(Mutters)
Five cents each.


One of the THREE MEN then set fifteen cents on the counter,
as the THREE MEN were prepared to walk out. But, just before
they could, the STORE OWNER called back at them. Suddenly,
the THREE MEN took off out of the convenience store.

STORE OWNER
(Screams; enraged)
Hey!...


The STORE OWNER then picked up the phone, as MONTANA quickly
walked towards the open doorway. He stood by it, watching
the three running up the street. However, something above
head caught his attention.

CUT TO:


As the THREE MEN ran, suddenly, SPIDER-MAN came colliding
with the three of them, where they all then fell down to the
sidewalk. One of the men, DAN, screamed for the others to
go. They did so, where SPIDER-MAN tried to spin a webline
after them to catch them. Only to be attacked by DAN, who
swung his forearm at SPIDER-MAN's held out wrists, causing
the webbing to hit the sidewalk instead.

SPIDER-MAN
(Mutters; angerily)
Come on-


Kicking SPIDER-MAN in the kneecap now, was DAN, as he leapt
back up to his feet, where he then threw a flurry of punches
at SPIDER-MAN. SPIDER-MAN was stunned at how he could hardly
defend from DAN's quickened blows, where he then, in-return,
also kicked DAN's kneecap, causing DAN to fall down to the
sidewalk. SPIDER-MAN then shot back up to his feet, while
DAN tried his best to get up before SPIDER-MAN, but was too
late. Swinging another punch towards SPIDER-MAN, was DAN.

Only SPIDER-MAN, this time, was ready to dodge it. Spinning
a webline to DAN's shirt, SPIDER-MAN then tugs DAN in the
direction of a trash bin, which DAN crashes hard into. From
the collision, DAN was seemingly knocked out. SPIDER-MAN
stared cautiously down at DAN, before webbing him up to the
ground. With the sound of police sirens coming closer,
SPIDER-MAN leapt up towards a building wall in the alleyway,
finally appearing out of sight as the police sirens drew
closer.

CUT TO:


Back to MONTANA, he continues to stand in the doorway. The
STORE OWNER hears the police sirens then comes rushing out
of the store, as MONTANA continues to watch over DAN.


INT. PETER'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

Opening the window to his bedroom was PETER, as he crawled
through it and into his room. Tossing his backpack onto a
chair facing the wall, PETER then lazily fell down over his
bed; falling immediately to sleep.

CUT TO:


PETER was still asleep, as the early morning hit. With that,
AUNT MAY sat down on the mattress next to PETER. PETER then
yawned aloud.

PETER
School time, already?


AUNT MAY
Good morning to you too, PETER.


PETER just then opened his eyes to look up at AUNT MAY.

PETER
Good morning, AUNT MAY.


PETER closed his eyes again, and dozed back off to sleep.

AUNT MAY
(Whispers)
PETER...


PETER
...Yeah?...


AUNT MAY
Where in the world were you, last
night? I was waiting all night
downstairs for you to come in, and
I turn my back for one moment for
you to sneak in like a little
mouse.


PETER quickly shot up and out of bed, rubbing his eyes awake
with his palms.

PETER
(Pauses for a
moment)
I'm sorry, AUNT MAY.


AUNT MAY nods, where she then stands up from the bed and
pats PETER on the shoulder.

AUNT MAY
I know, PETER. However, why did
you have your halloween costume
out, last night?


PETER was about to speak, only to stop himself and think for
a moment.

PETER
...I beg your pardon?


AUNT MAY then pointed at the SPIDER-MAN costume hanging out
of PETER's backpack. PETER's eyes then opened up wide, as he
turned back from the costume to AUNT MAY.

PETER
(Freezes
momentarily)
Surprise! My halloween costume
again, this year.


PETER then hugged a confused AUNT MAY, as he walked out of
his room and headed to the washroom.

AUNT MAY
(Calls)
Ahh... PETER, you didn't go out to
buy another one, did you?


PETER
(Calls back)
Of course not!


PETER closed the washroom door. Once inside, he pulled his
shirt up to notice the bruises, from last night, in the
mirror.

PETER
(Sighs)
...Should've cracked a joke...

 

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PART 7:

INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY

Jogging steadily down the stairs, PETER then slowed himself
down at the last steps of the staircase, reaching over to
the wall, beside the railing, he patted a picture of him,
AUNT MAY and UNCLE BEN. He then crossed over into the living
room for a moment to check the television.

AUNT MAY
(Calls)
PETER?...


PETER
(Calls back)
I'm here, AUNT MAY.


AUNT MAY walked over to where she heard PETER. She then
turned towards the television PETER was watching, AUNT MAY
then grabbed PETER on the shoulder.

AUNT MAY
You can watch television after
breakfast.


PETER
(Remembers)
Sorry, AUNT MAY.


PETER walked into the kitchen and, to his surprise, caught
sight of a plate of pancakes with syrup and a glass of
orange juice beside it.

PETER
Sweet...


AUNT MAY crossed her arms, while looking curiously at PETER.
PETER grabbed hold of the syrup bottle, but paused to look
back over at AUNT MAY.

AUNT MAY
What have you been up to lately,
PETER?


PETER finally poured the syrup over his waffles, as he
looked back over at AUNT MAY.

PETER
(Thinks)
School. Pictures. Basically.


AUNT MAY
Is that it?


PETER then used the fork and knife to slice the waffles in
pieces, where he again turned to face AUNT MAY.

PETER
...Basically...


PETER finally grabbed a piece of the waffle with his fork
and ate it.

AUNT MAY
Fine then, PETER. But, how are the
waffles?


PETER went to pick up another piece with his fork.

PETER
So good.



EXT. BUS STOP - DAY

Sitting on the bench at the bus-stop, PETER checked his
watch, as he then looked up the street for the bus, it
wasn't there. PETER took in a deep breath, finally letting
it out.

GWEN
Is this seat taken?


PETER peers to his side to notice GWEN STACY.

PETER
(Chuckles)
GWEN!


PETER shot up to his feet and hugged GWEN, she then wrapped
her arms around him.

GWEN
(Smiles)
Good to see you again, PETE.


The two of them then released their hold of each other.

PETER
How was the vacation?


GWEN
With MOM? It was great. I was kind
of saddened that my DAD couldn't
come, but... you know what he
does.


PETER
Yeah. He's quite the busy man,
keeping the city of MANHATTAN
safe.


GWEN laughs.

GWEN
I think that he'd agree with me
that SPIDER-MAN is doing a better
job at just that.


PETER
(Shakes head)
Nah... He's just another
superhero, that's about it.


GWEN
(Smirks)
Really?


PETER
Really.


GWEN
Coming from the guy who takes his
pictures?


PETER pauses for a moment.

PETER
(Nods)
Good point there, MS. STACY.


GWEN
Thank you, MR. PARKER.

 

[thejon93]

PART 8:

INT. SCIENCE ROOM - DAY

A stack of permission slips sat amongst MR. EDGAR's desk, as
the class all lined-up to pick up the permission forms. MR.
EDGAR himself stood in-front of the blackboard, as the
students who picked up the permission slips left the
classroom. PETER, HARRY and GWEN were the last ones left to
pick up their permission slips, where the three of them
stood still for a moment to read over it.

HARRY
(Looks up at MR.
EDGAR)
Cool, MR. EDGAR, we're going to
NEW JERSEY?


MR. EDGAR
That's right, HARRY.


HARRY smiled, as he looked back down to the permission slip.
MR. EDGAR leaned over the counter, as he spoke with HARRY.

MR. EDGAR
You seem pretty excited, HARRY. Do
you have relatives living in
JERSEY?


HARRY
Yeah. My mother lives out there.


PETER
(Surprised)
Really?


GWEN
HARRY, you never told me that.


PETER
Me neither.


MR. EDGAR
(Interrupts)
Come on, fellas. You can't expect
everyone to tell you about
everything.


HARRY
Thanks, sir.


MR. EDGAR
No problem, HARRY.


CUT TO:


Both FLASH and KENNY stood in the doorway, peering over at
the three inside with MR. EDGAR.

FLASH
(Jokes)
Teacher's pets...


KENNY begins to chuckle, where RANDY then butted in-between
the two to get back into the classroom.

FLASH
(Calls to RANDY)
You could've said "excuse me",
RAND.


RANDY
(Mocks)
Well then, excuse me...


KENNY again chuckled. FLASH jokingly shoved KENNY aside.


INT. MAIN OFFICE - DAY

Inside the main office in the school, LIZ walked in with her
class' attendance folder in her arm. She handed it to the
SECRETARY.

SECRETARY
Thank you, MS. ALLAN.


LIZ
No problem, ma'am.


LIZ was about to leave, before she heard a young woman's
cry. LIZ turned around in it's direction, it was EDNA, one
of her classmates was crying. The teachers in the office all
gathered around her, mourning her.


INT. GYM - DAY

Running laps around the gym was the entire gym class, as
PETER, HARRY and EDDIE were apart of the crowd.

PETER
How's that job coming along,
EDDIE?


EDDIE
At ESU?


PETER
Yeah.


EDDIE
With DR. CONNORS?


PETER
Yes!


EDDIE
(Chuckles)
Okay, okay. It's turning out
great.


PETER
Is DR. CONNORS working on anything
in particular right now?


EDDIE quickly glances over at PETER.

EDDIE
What are you? A reporter,
freshman?


PETER
Hey! It's senior freshman to you,
EDDIE.


HARRY
(Gasps for breath)
Yeah, me... the same...


EDDIE
Geez, HARRY. You certainly are out
of shape.


HARRY
(Gasps for breath)
Shut... up, EDDIE...


EDDIE begun to chuckle along with PETER, as they kept up
with HARRY's running pace.


INT. MUSIC ROOM - DAY

With the MUSIC TEACHER out of the room, the music class
erupted into conversation. Behind GWEN, LIZ tapped her on
the shoulder. GWEN turned around to face her.

GWEN
Yeah?


LIZ
Did you hear about what happened
to EDNA's sister?


GWEN
I'm sorry. But, I don't listen to
gossip.


GWEN turned back around in her chair, as LIZ then spoke to
SALLY AVRIL beside her.

SALLY
(Whispers to LIZ)
Darn nerds, huh?


LIZ and SALLY both giggled for a moment, until LIZ noticed
EDNA at the back. She looked furiously at LIZ, seemingly
overhearing what she had said before.

 

[thejon93]

PART 9:

INT. GYM - DAY

In the gym, all of the students from PETER's gym class were
playing dodgeball. FLASH picked up a ball in the corner, he
was on the opposing side. Where PETER, HARRY and EDDIE were
on the same side. FLASH picked up another ball and tossed it
to KENNY, who was also on his side.

FLASH
(Calls)
MARCO!


FLASH and KENNY suddenly wiped the balls towards EDDIE and
PETER. EDDIE rolled out of the way from colliding with it,
where PETER then caught the ball with both his back, where
he then quickly chucked it back at FLASH, where it caught
him in the leg.

PETER
(Calls back to
FLASH)
POLO!


PETER, HARRY and EDDIE then focused in on KENNY, who picked
up another ball. There were four other balls on KENNY's side
and only one on PETER's. KENNY smiled.

KENNY
(Mutters)
Poundcakes...


PETER
I wouldn't be too sure about one,
KENNY.


KENNY then focused in on PETER. Aiming his arm high up in
the air, ready to throw. Only suddenly, he then wiped the
ball at EDDIE, who caught it and wiped it back at KENNY,
where it caught KENNY in the stomach. KENNY was barely moved
by the hit, as PETER's side then won the game. Where the
COACH, on the side, then blew his whistle.


INT. HARRY'S BEDROOM - DAY

HARRY yawned, as he then collapsed over his bed. Over on the
computer, PETER turned around towards HARRY.

PETER
(Mocked a woman's
voice)
How was your day, cupcake?


HARRY
(Spoke into his
pillow)
It was chaotic...


PETER
(Completes for
HARRY)
As usual.


PETER then spun back around to facing the computer. HARRY
then looked up from his bed at PETER.

HARRY
What's going on?


PETER
Well, I can't quite say "nothing",
because I'm pretty sure that
something has to be happening
online. But, for me, nothing.


PETER then logged himself out, as he spun around to facing
HARRY in the chair he sat on.

PETER
(Pauses for a
moment)
You're going on that field trip to
NEW JERSEY, in a couple weeks
time. Right?


HARRY
I'm hoping for that... I haven't
seen my mother ever since I was
five.


PETER
(Pauses
momentarily)
You think your father will allow
it?...


HARRY
(Sighs aloud)
...I can only hope...


PETER
(Gets up from seat)
Then I will pray with you, my son.


PETER then crouched down to his knees and grabbed hold of
HARRY's hands and begun to chant.

PETER
(Chants)
Umm... Umm... Umm... Umm... Please
God, give my good 'ol brother, MR.
HARRY OSBORN, here the power...
The power to convince his
father... In holy matrimony.


HARRY chuckled, as PETER then looked up at him.

PETER
(Mocked a woman's
voice)
Will you marry me, MR. OSBORN?


HARRY
(Chuckling, jokes)
Absolutely.


PETER then stood to his feet quickly, letting go of HARRY's
hands and wiping them in his pants.

PETER
(Mocked a woman's
voice)
Ugh... I, like... so, want a
divorce...


HARRY continues to chuck, while trying to get words out of
his mouth.

HARRY
(Chuckling)
Okay. You're divorced, you're
divorced.


PETER then begun to chuckle along through HARRY's laughter.

NORMAN
(Calls; downstairs)
HARRY!


PETER and HARRY then stopped laughing, where HARRY then
stood up from his bed and twisted the doorknob to open his
door.

HARRY
(Calls)
Yeah, DAD?...


NORMAN stood by the counter, examining the field trip form
on it.

NORMAN
You're going to NEW JERSEY,
huh?...


HARRY looked back at PETER, who looked over at HARRY. HARRY
turned back to facing down at his father.

HARRY
(Calls)
Yeah, it's for science. We're
visiting the museum over there for
the week.


NORMAN nodded, as he then walked away towards his office.

NORMAN
(Under his breath)
Say "HI" to your mother, for me...


NORMAN closes his office door behind him. HARRY then spun
around to face PETER.

HARRY
Do you think that's a "YES"?


PETER
I certainly hope so.

 

[thejon93]

PART 10:

INT. EMPIRE STATE UNIVERSITY LAB - DAY

DR. CONNORS and his wife, MARTHA, were sorting out the lab
area. Revealing his mechanical arm, DR. CONNORS reaches down
to the ground and picked up a vial cap. He looked through
the vials on the table to see if any were missing a cap.
None of them were. DR. CONNORS turned to MARTHA.

DR. CONNORS
(Calls)
Hey, MARTHA! Did you see a missing
vial anywhere?


MARTHA looked through the vials she had in her arm, then she
looked back up at DR. CONNORS.

MARTHA
(Calls back)
None missing here, CURT.


DR. CONNORS nodded, where he then set the vial cap back down
onto the desk. Just then, EDDIE came around the corner with
DR. CONNOR's son, BILLY, by his side.

BILLY
(Yells)
MOM! DAD!


BILLY ran after MARTHA, as MARTHA herself ran into a hug
from her son. She hugged him back.

MARTHA
How was school, honey?


BILLY
It was great. HENRY said I could
go over to his place and play a
game.


MARTHA
Really? And, what game is that?


BILLY
(Yells; happily)
"KILLER TURTLES"!


DR. CONNORS walked over to EDDIE, while the conversation
between BILLY and MARTHA continued.

DR. CONNORS
Thanks a lot for picking up BILLY,
EDDIE.


EDDIE
No problem, DR. CONNORS.


DR. CONNORS
You know, EDDIE, I wanted to leave
this topic free until your
graduation and all... But, would
you like to start up your position
here early?


EDDIE
Why so early?


DR. CONNORS
Well, of course, if you want to
start-up early. I'm just saying
that I need an assistant to help
me with my future projects... But,
most importantly, my current ones.


EDDIE
(Slurs)
Which are?...


DR. CONNORS
(Slurs back)
Find out if you take the job...


EDDIE laughs.

EDDIE
Alright, alright. I'll take it.



EXT. MANHATTAN - NIGHT

Leaping from a webline, SPIDER-MAN lands amongst a rooftop.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
City seems fine tonight, SPIDEY.


SPIDER-MAN sits down on the edge of the rooftop, where he
then pulls out his cell-phone and dials in a number.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
Might as well give good 'ol PETER
something to do for his
Saturday-afternoon, tomorrow.


SPIDER-MAN then places the phone up alongside his cheek.

CUT TO:


Inside her apartment, DEBRA's cell-phone rings. She glances
over at it while seated on the couch and reaches to pick it
up.

DEBRA
(Into the phone)
Hello?


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN
(Into the phone)
Hey, DEBRA.


CUT TO:


DEBRA
(Into the phone)
Hey, PETER. What are you up to?


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN
(Into the phone)
Oh... Well, nothing much.


CUT TO:


DEBRA
(Into the phone,
chuckles)
Oh, I see...


DEBRA then set the phone on her coffee table, while she put
it on speaker.

DEBRA
How's GWEN and the others doing?


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN
(Into the phone)
We're all great. We're all just...
having a ball, I guess you could
say.


CUT TO:


DEBRA
(Nods)
Yeah... I miss you guys.


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN
(Into the phone)
Well, that's part of the reason
why I called. I was wondering if
you wanted to go out for... I
don't know, a cup of coffee,
tomorrow?... Or something... I'm
sure university kids like coffee.


CUT TO:


DEBRA chuckles, as she reaches over to take a sip of coffee
from her cup on the coffee table. She then set it back down.

DEBRA
I suppose you're right about that.


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN
(Into the phone)
Of course, I am. So, what do you
say?


CUT TO:


DEBRA
Well, I'm free all day,
tomorrow.... So, you wanna come
over sometime in-between four and
five?


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN
(Into the phone)
You know, that's exactly what I
had in mind, MS. WHITMAN.


CUT TO:


DEBRA
Oh, really? Well, I guess great
minds think alike then...


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN
(Into the phone)
I guess, you could say so.

 

[thejon93]

PART 11:

INT. POLICE PRECINCT - NIGHT

Locked inside the police cells, JACKSON and DAN sat at both
ends of the room. Moments passed, JACKSON looked calmly
around the room. Where DAN didn't move at all. JACKSON
looked over at DAN.

JACKSON
What happened to you?


DAN didn't speak, as JACKSON himself then laughed a bit.
However, JACKSON stopped his laughing once a guard came onto
the sight. JACKSON noticed he was unlocking the cell door.
JACKSON then leapt to his feet, gleefully, as the officer's
partner came to stand guard.

OFFICER
Sit down, JACKSON.


JACKSON
Why?... I'm being released, right?


OFFICER
(Chuckles)
You? Not for about ten or fifteen
more years served in prison.
DANNY-BOY over here has finally
landed on "GO".


DAN then looked up at the OFFICER, who looked over at him.

OFFICER
(To DAN)
You're free to go.


DAN sits still for a moment, confused. Until finally, he
stands to his feet and walks towards the guards and the open
cell door.

CUT TO:


The street that DAN walked along was completely empty.
Nobody walking around. Just garbage, trees, houses. No
people. DAN was shivering, as he then placed his hands
inside the pockets on his sweater. Where suddenly, from
behind a tree, appeared MONTANA and OX now standing in the
middle of the sidewalk. DAN looked up at them, stopping in
his tracks.

MONTANA
Now listen, my friend. Don't go
running away from us like you did
from SPIDER-MAN over the theft of
a bag of potato chips... We're
here to help.


DAN
...I don't need anyone's charity-


DAN tried walking to the side of MONTANA and OX, but OX then
stopped DAN by placing his hand on DAN's shoulder. Only with
that, DAN begun to throw a flurry of punches at OX. OX
groaned in pain, as MONTANA came rushing over beside DAN.

MONTANA
(Yells)
Kid, listen to me!


DAN continued to throw punches at OX, where DAN then tried
to throw one at MONTANA. Only to have MONTANA duck out of
the way, as he pushed DAN up-against a tree. OX groaned with
the pain of the previous blows, as he then took a step
closer to the tree to hold DAN up-against it.

MONTANA
Listen to me here, FANCY DAN,
we're not here to hurt you...


MONTANA slowly stopped himself, as he then begun to hear
DAN's cries.

MONTANA
(Whispers)
...Let him go, OX.


OX
(Cautious)
What?


MONTANA
(Yells)
Let him go!


Finally, OX did so, where DAN then fell down to his knees
amongst the water-soaked patch of grass. MONTANA fell down
to his knees on the patch, as well, looking at the tears
rolling down DAN's face.

MONTANA
(Whispers to DAN)
...This is exactly what happened
to me, too, DAN.


DAN slowly begun to peer up at MONTANA.

MONTANA
(Continues)
No home... No money... No
friends... No family... Just
alone, all the time. Waiting for a
miracle... Only miracles never
happen to people like us. We
aren't spoonfed with miracles
daily like the majority of the
bastards we see around today.
Miracles... are something people
like us have to fight for... What
we have to fight for... And I want
you to be apart of this venture,
where we will get our one-true
chance at a miracle... A miracle
we'd deserve... If we fought for
it.


DAN has now looked completely up at MONTANA, who continues
to look down at him. Suddenly, MONTANA grabs DAN by both
arms and helps him to his feet.

MONTANA
(Whispers to DAN)
We've got an open-slot for someone
like you.


DAN continues to look, surprised and shocked, at MONTANA.


INT. CHAMELEON'S APARTMENT - DAY

MONTANA, OX and DAN walked into the room. DAN noticed
something in the corner of the room, the light from above
their heads reflected off of it.

CHAMELEON
May I ask, MONTANA?...


The voice came from the corner DAN was looking at, as the
reflection then moved. Finally, he could see the person as
he stood up from the chair in the corner.

MONTANA
Absolutely.


CHAMELEON
What's the name of this
loyal-looking person?...


MONTANA
I think that we can start off by
calling him FANCY DAN.


CHAMELEON
(Repeats MONTANA's
words)
"FANCY DAN"...


CHAMELEON, with that quote, spoke word-for-word identically
to MONTANA's words. Where, just then, the CHAMELEON opened
the fridge door. DAN was eager to catch a glimpse of the man
known as CHAMELEON, but barely caught one of him, as he
leaned into the fridge. Pulling out a water bottle,
CHAMELEON then begins to walk towards the three.

DAN looked down at the CHAMELEON's legs first, as the light
shined around there to begin with once he begun to step out
of the shadows. Finally fully out, DAN looks up at the
CHAMELEON's face. Only to see that his face was quite
regular. He was caucasian, bold, normal-looking to the very
eye.

CHAMELEON then held the water bottle before DAN's face, a
moment after, he finally opened it. Pulling the bottle away
from DAN's eyeline, CHAMELEON then smiled, showcasing his
crystal-white teeth to DAN.

CHAMELEON
(While smiling)
Satisfied now, sport? Had these
babies for the large majority of
my lively-hood.


CHAMELEON then took a drink of water. Setting it down on the
coffee table sitting before the couch, CHAMELEON then stood
back up to face DAN, eye-to-eye.

CHAMELEON
(Remembers)
...Oh! But that's not the only
thing.


Suddenly, CHAMELEON threw his hand up to his neckline and
begun to pull away skin. Only, it wasn't skin. It was a
mask. CHAMELEON pulled it off completely to reveal to DAN
his silver, mirror-like face.

CHAMELEON
And, you wanna know the truth?...


CHAMELEON took off both of his gloves. Calmly, he then
touched DAN's face with each tip of his finger, with this,
CHAMELEON moved his fingertips lightly around DAN's face.
Finally pulling his hands away, he again smiled at DAN, but
this time, leaning into his right ear.

CHAMELEON
(Whispers)
I love this face of mine.


CHAMELEON then pulls back away from DAN, slowly descending
back behind the shadows.

 

[thejon93]

PART 12:

INT. ENFORCER'S APARTMENT - DAY

MONTANA, OX and DAN stepped inside the apartment. OX made
his way to the washroom, closing the door behind him. DAN
looked around the apartment, it was basically empty. There
were a few sleeping bags scattered around the living room, a
coffee table, and that was it for the living room. DAN
looked into the kitchen. There were only a couple plastic
cups and paper plates on the counter.

MONTANA
(Notices DAN)
I told you we weren't jewelry
rich, FANCY.


DAN smiled, where he then peered back at MONTANA.

DAN
Is there at least any food in the
fridge?


MONTANA
There may be something in there.
But we're going out to eat, once
OX is finished with his buisness
in the washroom.


DAN nodded, as he then leaned up-against the wall. MONTANA
did the same on the opposite end.

DAN
What's the deal with that...
CHAMELEON-guy?


MONTANA
DMITRI? Consider him to be a
master of disguise.


DAN
But, how does he do it? How did he
make that face?


MONTANA
(Nods)
I wish I knew the answer to that,
kid. But, I don't... I don't think
anyone will ever know.


DAN nods, as well, scanning his eyes back around the
apartment's interior.

DAN
You haven't told me what this is
all about yet... I mean, in full,
I know we're going after
SPIDER-MAN. But-


MONTANA
(Interrupts)
Kid, that is the job... We're
getting paid in one, large
million-dollar number. Once we're
finished with this... Well, either
we stop doing crime. Or we
continue to make more. Get the
picture?


DAN
(Smirks, nods)
Sounds simple enough, right?...


MONTANA then slowly begun to smirk, as well. He then kicked
away from the wall and walked into the living room, DAN
followed him. MONTANA stopped at a closet and opened it up.
Inside, there were a variety of weapons. MONTANA stepped
aside.

MONTANA
Take your pick, kid.


DAN immediately peered over at the bo staff set up-against
the wall. He walked over towards the closet and picked it
up. MONTANA smiled.

MONTANA
I always preferred close-range
weapons. Guns to me always seemed
to be so... cheap. However, we've
got one special-kind of gun that
may come of some usage against
SPIDER-MAN, sometime.


DAN
Did you have to pay for it?


MONTANA
No. But, if it breaks. It's my
head on a silver platter.


OX finally stepped out of the washroom, as the toilet
flushed behind him. DAN and MONTANA peered over at him.

MONTANA
It's about time, you big lug.


MONTANA and DAN both chuckled, as OX walked over beside
them.

OX
I'm starving. Let's go.


MONTANA
I strongly agree with you, my
friend.


MONTANA turned around towards the closet, where he then
noticed DAN about to set down the bo staff. MONTANA grabbed
hold of DAN's hand that was holding the bo staff. DAN looked
up at him in confusion.

MONTANA
We're taking our weapons.


MONTANA grabbed hold of the lasso hanging from the clothes
hanger inside the closet, he set it on the belt buckle
in-front of his jeans.

DAN
...Why?...


MONTANA
(Smirks)
You'll see.


Letting go of DAN's hand, MONTANA reached back into the
closet and pulled down from the shelf a holster for the bo
staff. He tossed the strap around DAN's shoulder, where he
then took the bo staff from his hand and slid it into the
holster. Reaching, once again, into the closet, MONTANA
pulled down a jacket and handed it to DAN.

MONTANA
(Pauses
momentarily,
calls)
OX, you taking anything?


OX
(Calls from the
doorway)
No.


MONTANA
(Mutters)
Good, then. Less baggage.


MONTANA looks over to DAN for a moment, before walking over
to the doorway.


EXT. MANHATTAN - DAY

Web-slinging throughout the city, SPIDER-MAN throws himself
up off of a webline and screams aloud heroically as he sails
high into the air. SPIDER-MAN spreads out his arms like a
bird, as he then begins his descent back down in-between the
city's buildings.

CUT TO:


On the interior of a speeding vehicle were MONTANA, OX and
DAN. OX was driving. DAN was in the back. MONTANA was in the
passenger's seat. MONTANA pulled a weapon up from the
car-mat.

MONTANA
What did CHAMELEON's friend call
this, again?


OX was confused, as he looked back and forth between MONTANA
and the road.

OX
What?


MONTANA shook his head, where he then held the weapon up for
OX to examine.

OX
...The shock gun?


MONTANA gasped in-relief, as he then set the weapon down on
his lap. But suddenly, SPIDER-MAN flew across the windshield
while swinging from a webline. MONTANA jumped back in his
seat in fright from it.

OX
(Cautions)
He's on us.


MONTANA slowly turns to face OX.

MONTANA
(Confused,
surprised)
...You think I didn't see that?


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN leapt from his previously spun webline, and spun
another one, leading him into the direction of the speeding
vehicle. However, rolling down his window was MONTANA, who
then leaned out and pointed the shock gun at SPIDER-MAN.
MONTANA held the trigger for a moment, to charge it up,
before letting it go, where SPIDER-MAN was hit by surprise
by it's force; even through dodging it.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
Where do these guys get their
toys?


MONTANA again shot at SPIDER-MAN, only to have SPIDER-MAN
himself again dogde the blast as he then landed on the roof
of the vehicle.

Clenching his hands together, SPIDER-MAN swung his forearms
down at the roof and broke through it. But, as soon as he
did so, MONTANA blasted SPIDER-MAN with the shock gun, which
launched SPIDER-MAN off of the vehicle, as he landed in the
backseat of a BUISNESS MAN's convertible. The BUISNESS MAN
looked back at SPIDER-MAN.

BUISNESS MAN
You alright?


SPIDER-MAN sighed, as he then sat back up on the
convertible's backseat.

SPIDER-MAN
Yeah. I feel like my skull's on an
escalator. But, I'm good.


SPIDER-MAN goes to shoot a webline up at the lightpost above
his head, but suddenly, his web-shooter springs open,
tearing the wrist of his costume. SPIDER-MAN froze for a
moment, looking down at his broken web-shooter. He then
looked up at the BUISNESS MAN.

SPIDER-MAN
I'm not sure if I wanna-


SPIDER-MAN was cut off, where the web-shooter on his other
hand broke. And, alike the other, it tore his costume.
SPIDER-MAN once again sighed.

SPIDER-MAN
(Completed)
Try the other one.

 

[thejon93]

PART 13:

INT. PETER'S BEDROOM - DAY

PETER sat down at his desk. Looking over to the closed door,
PETER made sure he couldn't hear anything outside of it.
Nothing.

PETER then turned on his lamp, as it lit up the desk and the
broken web-shooters amongst it. PETER picked up a pair of
tweezers and begun to pull out the wiring from inside the
metal structure of the web-shooter.

Done with the wiring, PETER then pulled out the
web-cartridges to each web-shooter. He examined their fluid,
there was still enough left for another usage in the both of
them.

Pulling out a book from his shelf, PETER turned it around to
reveal it didn't have no pages in it. It was carrying inside
it SPIDER-MAN's web-cartridges. PETER set the two cartridges
inside the fake book, with the others, as he then put the
book back up in it's place of his bookshelf.

PETER
(Mutters)
Are you guys still good?


PETER picked up the two web-shooters to examine them. He
noticed that the metal was beginning to bend in certain
places. PETER set the web-shooters back down, where he then
rolled up one of the arms to his long-sleeved shirt and
checked his wrist. Certain places on his skin were blood-red
from the web-shooters. He then pulled his sleeve back down
and gasped, where he then looked back down to the
web-shooters.

PETER
(Mutters)
Well... I guess it's garbage day
for you, fellas.


PETER then tosses the two web-shooters in his garbage can.

Sitting there for a few moments, PETER thought to himself.
Quickly, he then looked back down to the two web-shooters,
as they sat on a pile of crumpled paper in PETER's garbage
bin. PETER sighed, where he then pulled them back out.

CUT TO:


PETER slid open his window. Placing the two broken
web-shooters on his cupboard for a moment, PETER crawls out
onto the ledge of his window to see if he could see the
garbage can. He could see the handle to it. PETER sighed, as
he then leaned back into his room.

Looking over to the neighbor's house, he checked to see if
the coast was clear. Nobody appeared to be there, as PETER
quickly crawled back out onto the window's ledge. This time,
he used the wall as support, as he leaned further away from
the window, he could see the garbage can.

PETER
(Whispers to
himself)
Goodie.


PETER then reaches back into his room and pulls from his
counter one of the web-shooters. Back in the same position
as before, PETER readied himself to toss the web-shooter
towards the garbage can. PETER counted to himself for a
moment, before throwing the web-shooter. It landed in the
garbage can.

PETER
(Mutters to
himself;
cheerfully)
Yes...


PETER then reaches back into his room and pulls out the last
web-shooter. But, through his current ego, PETER tossed it
towards the garbage can without precision like before, as
this time, it flew over the garbage can and landed in the
middle of the street.

PETER
(Whispers to
himself;
regretfully)
Duh...


CUT TO:


PETER walked down the staircase with his garbage bin held
within his arm. Coming downstairs, AUNT MAY caught him while
she was seated on the sofa.

AUNT MAY
PETER, what are you doing?


PETER stopped in his tracks and turned to face AUNT MAY.

PETER
...Recycling...


AUNT MAY didn't speak for a moment, as she looked up,
confused, at PETER.

AUNT MAY
...Garbage day was yesterday,
PETER...


PETER
(Rushed)
Yeah, but this is all paper in my
trash bin. So... I'll be back.


PETER quickly rushed out of the house, as he quickly marched
up the walkway. AUNT MAY then shot up from the sofa and
pulled over the curtain to catch PETER pick up the
web-shooter from in the middle of the street, as he then
threw it into the garbage can.

AUNT MAY
(Smiles)
Oh, sweetie.


AUNT MAY pulled the curtain back over, as she walked into
the kitchen.

CUT TO:


PETER pulled up the orange juice cartons from the recycling
bin, where he then dumped the crumpled paper into the
recycling bin and folded them down with his hands to make
them flat with the other pieces of paper. Placing the orange
juice cartons back over-top of the papers, firmly, PETER
then sets back off towards his house with his trash bin once
again in his arm.

PETER
(Mutters to
himself)
Stupid, PUNY PARKER, stupid. You
should've just used your
wall-crawling abilities. Oh, wait!
You can't crawl up and down walls
with your shoes on. Oh, yeah?
Well, maybe you didn't even have
your stinkin' shoes on to begin
with! Hey, well... PUNY PARKER at
your service.


PETER finally reached the front porch to his house, where he
then walked back in through the front-door. In the kitchen,
PETER heard the kettle whistling.

AUNT MAY
(To the kettle)
Oh, be quiet. You silly thing.


PETER smiled at AUNT MAY's remark, as he rubbed his socks
into the mat on the floor tiles. PETER then set his trash
bin down onto the floor and walked into the kitchen. There,
AUNT MAY had out two fancy-looking mugs. She poured the
boiled water into both of them. AUNT MAY then set the kettle
back onto the stove, where she then turned to PETER. She
walked towards him.

PETER
What's this?


AUNT MAY
Hot chocolate. For my grown-up
youngster, PETER PARKER.


AUNT MAY then hugged PETER, while she then gave him a kiss
on the cheek.

AUNT MAY
But first, wash your hands.


Stepping back into the kitchen, she checked to see if the
stove was turned off.

AUNT MAY
I don't want your dirty fingertips
to ruin any of my good mugs.


PETER smiled again.

PETER
(Whispers)
I know.

 

[thejon93]

PART 14:

INT. RESTAURANT - DAY

Seated at the table at the end of the restaurant, PETER and
DEBRA sat on opposing ends of each other.

DEBRA
This is nice, PETER. This place.


PETER
I know. UNCLE BEN and I used to
come here whenever we would eat
out. He'd always get the steak.
I'd always get something
different.


DEBRA
...Great memories.


PETER nodded, as the WAITRESS then arrived at their table.

WAITRESS
Are you two ready?


PETER
(Looks at DEBRA)
Ahh?...


DEBRA
(To the WAITRESS)
Absolutely. I'll have the black
bean flautas with a glass of milk,
please.


The WAITRESS then turned to PETER, who was looking down at
the menu.

PETER
Ahh... I'll have the...


PETER scanned his eyes through the menu, but finally closed
it.

PETER
(To the WAITRESS)
You know what. I'll just have a
fried egg sandwich, please... Oh!
With a glass of milk too, please.


PETER handed the WAITRESS his menu, as DEBRA handed her menu
to the WAITRESS, as well.

WAITRESS
I'll be back your orders soon.


DEBRA
(To the WAITRESS)
Thank you.


The WAITRESS nodded, as she walked off with the menus
towards the front-counter. DEBRA and PETER then turned to
face each other.

DEBRA
Thanks for having me here, PETE.


PETER
(Smiles)
And, you're welcome, MS. WHITMAN.


CUT TO:


MONTANA, OX and DAN stood before a food-stand on the street.

MONTANA
(To DAN and OX)
What are you guys having?


MONTANA waited a moment for an answer from either, as DAN
and OX looked over the menu on the stand.

MONTANA
(Turns towards DAN
and OX)
Hello...


OX
Hold on.


MONTANA then turned back to face the FOOD STAND OWNER inside
the food stand, itself.

MONTANA
Well, right off the bat, we're
going to be having the healthiest
drink available here. So, what do
you got?


FOOD STAND OWNER
We have pop, water, orange juice.
That's about it.


MONTANA
Okay, good. How much is the orange
juice?


FOOD STAND OWNER
$2.29.


MONTANA
(Pauses
momentarily)
For each, or all together?


FOOD STAND OWNER
Each.


MONTANA stops speaking for a moment, where he then turned
away from the FOOD STAND OWNER and looked around the street.
Finally, he found a convenience store. MONTANA turned back
to face the FOOD STAND OWNER.

MONTANA
I think I'll buy a carton,
instead. Excuse me.


MONTANA then reached into his pocket and pulled out a ten
dollar bill, which he handed to OX.

MONTANA
(Whispers to DAN
and OX)
Buy yourselves something. I'll be
back in a bit.


CUT TO:


Coming to the table with PETER and DEBRA's drinks was the
WAITRESS, as she set down their glasses of milk before them.

PETER
(To the WAITRESS)
Thank you.


DEBRA
(To the WAITRESS)
Thank you, indeed.


WAITRESS
I'll be back with your meals in
about five minutes.


PETER and DEBRA both nodded, where the WAITRESS again walked
off towards the front-counter. DEBRA took a sip of her milk,
while PETER did the same with his.

CUT TO:


MONTANA walked into the convenience store. Immediately, he
noticed the OWNER go into the back. MONTANA looked around
quickly, where suddenly, he shot towards the freezer and
pulled out a carton of orange juice. Rushing towards the
doorway, he grabbed a pack of paper cups, along the way.

CUT TO:


Sitting at a picnic table, MONTANA tore open the bag of
cups. Pulling out three cups, he then filled the three of
them with orange juice, while DAN and OX ate their
cheeseburgers.

OX
I can go back and get you a
burger, MONTANA.


MONTANA
No, thanks. I'll stick with my
orange juice.


MONTANA passed both DAN and OX their cups, where MONTANA
then looked around the area, cautiously. MONTANA then took a
drink of orange juice. Gulping down the whole drink from
inside the cup, MONTANA reached for the carton and poured in
more juice.

MONTANA
Tell me when you're all finished,
so we can get started.


DAN
(Whispers)
...You can't be serious, MONTANA.


MONTANA
I'm dead serious, kid. We're going
to call us a friendly
neighbourhood SPIDER-MAN, today...
And, we're gonna see if we're
really ready for this punk.


MONTANA took a drink. Finishing it, he set his cup back down
on the picnic table.

CUT TO:


PETER and DEBRA sat quietly at their table. Looking down at
their glasses, they both then glanced around the room. PETER
turned back to face DEBRA. She noticed, as she turned back
towards him.

PETER
We can't be out of a conversation
now-


PETER's SPIDER-SENSE went off, where suddenly, a vehicle
crashed through the side of the restaurant where PETER and
DEBRA were seated. They both leapt out of their seats
in-time before the vehicle collided with them. PETER heard a
whole crowd of people scream outside. There, PETER leapt
onto the ledge of the broken window ledge, holding a
"SPIDER-MAN" posture. DEBRA slowly stood up and looked at
PETER in confusion.

DEBRA
(Mutters;
surprised)
PETER?...


PETER then widened his eyes, in realization, where he then
turned around to face DEBRA. There, he clumsily fell down
onto the table, evading his "SPIDER-MAN" posture, as he
grunted in pain. DEBRA then ran over to help him.

DEBRA
You were down-right brave, back
there. It was... quite a surprise.


PETER then leaned up from the table, turning to face DEBRA.

PETER
Why, MS. WHITMAN, was that a
complement? From you?


DEBRA
(Smirks)
Don't push your luck, PETER.

 

[thejon93]

PART 15:

Kicking a CIVILIAN to the sidewalk was MONTANA, as he held
his lasso in his hand. MONTANA turned around to see OX
smashing his forearm against another passing CIVILIAN.
MONTANA then turned to face DAN, who was standing frozen in
his position.

MONTANA
(Yells at DAN)
What the hell are you waiting
for?!


DAN
(Yells back at
MONTANA)
I didn't join up with you to hurt
innocent civilians!


MONTANA was angered, as he pushed through the civilians
in-between him and DAN. Finally making it over to DAN,
MONTANA stood before him.

DAN
Don't ask me to do this,
MONTANA... I saved this for the
man who put me behind bars over a
damned bag of potato chips! These
people don't deserve my attacks.


Suddenly, behind DAN and MONTANA, SPIDER-MAN appeared,
kicking down OX's forearm before hitting another civilian.
DAN and MONTANA turned towards SPIDER-MAN, as MONTANA then
glanced back at DAN.

MONTANA
Are you going to be fighting this
man, then?


DAN stared down at MONTANA.

CUT TO:


Leaping high above from OX's punch was SPIDER-MAN, who swung
along a lightpost above.

SPIDER-MAN
So, tell me, big boy...


SPIDER-MAN swung back down at OX and kicked him across the
face.

SPIDER-MAN
You ever consider wrestling?
'Cause I think that would be a far
better occupation, for a guy like
you.


OX groaned in rage, as he then swung another punch at
SPIDER-MAN, who flipped backwards away from OX.

SPIDER-MAN
Can you not kick?


Suddenly, DAN then kicked SPIDER-MAN square in the head.
Stumbling away from DAN, SPIDER-MAN clenches his head
painfully.

SPIDER-MAN
(To DAN)
Okay, I certainly didn't mean you,
buddy.


MONTANA
How's about me, SPIDER-MAN?


SPIDER-MAN turned around towards the voice to have MONTANA's
lasso hit him straight across the chest. From the hit,
SPIDER-MAN flipped down to the sidewalk.

SPIDER-MAN
(Mutters to
himself, slowly
stands up)
I see. Three-on-one? Alright...
Okay, SPIDEY. Let's dance... But,
not literally.


From the side, DAN swings the bo staff towards SPIDER-MAN's
head, to where SPIDER-MAN avoided it by dropping down to the
ground. There, he kicked in DAN's kneecap with both his
heels. With DAN falling towards the ground, SPIDER-MAN then
rolled towards DAN and kicked him in the stomach, launching
him further up along the road.

SPIDER-MAN
(Remembers)
Say. Didn't I meet you fellas,
earlier on today?


SPIDER-SENSE ringing, SPIDER-MAN flipped towards the curve
on the sidewalk and reeled himself in time to avoid having
OX stomp on his head. Rolling to his feet, on the sidewalk,
SPIDER-MAN turned back around towards the ENFORCERS, where
he was suddenly hit in the stomach by DAN's bo staff.

SPIDER-MAN fell to his knees from the blow, as DAN continued
to swing his bo staff down at SPIDER-MAN. MONTANA and OX
rushed over towards the two, where SPIDER-MAN then kicked
himself off of the ground and begun to defend himself from
DAN's attacks with the bo staff.

The ENFORCERS then all circled around SPIDER-MAN. OX went to
throw a punch towards SPIDER-MAN, while he was defending
from DAN's bo staff, but missed, as SPIDER-MAN ducked before
OX and DAN's own attacks. SPIDER-MAN then launched himself
up and threw an uppercut straight at DAN.

SPIDER-MAN
Bet that one hurt.


Having DAN fallen to the ground, landing on his back,
SPIDER-MAN then leapt towards MONTANA, where, while in
mid-air, he avoided collision with MONTANA's lasso by
spinning away from it. SPIDER-MAN then landed beside MONTANA
and kicked him in the back of the head, where MONTANA then
stumbled towards OX.

While MONTANA stumbled towards OX, SPIDER-MAN then sprinted
towards MONTANA, where SPIDER-MAN kicked off of MONTANA's
back and kicked OX straight in the face, launching him
straight through a plate-glass window, leading back into the
restaurant where PETER and DEBRA were in.

Looking down at a fallen OX, for a moment, SPIDER-MAN was
hit by surprise by MONTANA, who swung his lasso hard towards
SPIDER-MAN's back, launching him into the restaurant where
OX had fallen. SPIDER-MAN landed beside a seemingly
unconscious OX.

SPIDER-MAN
(Turns towards OX)
Hey there, big boy.


SPIDER-MAN then slapped OX's cheek, where MONTANA then
stepped into the restaurant, after SPIDER-MAN.

MONTANA
What are you doing with my partner
there, SPIDER-MAN?


SPIDER-MAN
Oh, didn't you hear? He signed up
for one of my group therapy
classes, but he never showed up.
So, I'm bringing the lessons to
him and his best buddies.


MONTANA
(Nods)
How thoughtful.


With his SPIDER-SENSE going off again, SPIDER-MAN flipped
up from the floor and landed amongst a table behind him,
just in time to avoid collision with DAN's bo staff. DAN
groaned mildly, as he then swung towards SPIDER-MAN at the
table. Instead, DAN hit the utensils on the table, as
SPIDER-MAN clung onto the ceiling. MONTANA looked up at
SPIDER-MAN.

MONTANA
Now, what makes you think that we
can fight you from up there,
SPIDER-MAN?


SPIDER-MAN
I don't know. Why don't you toss
away your weapons, to make this a
fair fight?


MONTANA
Sounds too risky on my end,
SPIDER. But, I reckon my friend
here will give it a shot.


SPIDER-MAN was about to move out of the way, but was too
late, as DAN threw his bo staff straight at SPIDER-MAN,
hitting him in the back, SPIDER-MAN fell down from the
ceiling and landed with a thud to the floor. MONTANA and DAN
then marched to where SPIDER-MAN was, while MONTANA then
patted DAN on the shoulder.

MONTANA
Good one there, FANCY.


Rolling to his side, SPIDER-MAN caught sight of DAN's bo
staff underneath the table.

CUT TO:


DAN and MONTANA were about to turn the corner to where
SPIDER-MAN was, but suddenly, SPIDER-MAN swung the bo staff
right towards DAN's legs, as DAN then fell face-first to the
floor.

MONTANA then whiped his lasso towards SPIDER-MAN, but
missed, as SPIDER-MAN backflipped, avoiding it's pass. But
then, he ran backwards into someone's back, SPIDER-MAN
turned around, it was OX. OX then swung his arm out towards
SPIDER-MAN's head, hitting him with a clothesline, as
SPIDER-MAN landed from the collision hard on a table.

Almost flipping the table, as it tilted on it's side,
SPIDER-MAN then rolled off of the table, landing with a thud
to the floor, once again. MONTANA laughed, where he then
came up from behind OX.

MONTANA
Nice one, there, OX.


SPIDER-MAN
(Overhears)
OX, huh?


With his stomach to the floor, SPIDER-MAN then kicked up his
legs and launched the table, he fell on, towards OX, where
it then scattered into pieces, colliding with OX, as OX
again fell to the floor, seemingly unconscious. SPIDER-MAN
then rose to his feet, as MONTANA looked across at him.

MONTANA
You've got a lot of heart, kid. I
like that. But, you're making the
ENFORCERS look bad... And I, for
one, can't... have that.


With his SPIDER-SENSE going off, SPIDER-MAN was too late to
avoid DAN's attack with the bo staff behind him, as MONTANA
then wiped SPIDER-MAN with the lasso amongst the table he
had fallen onto.

MONTANA
Come on, now, MR. DAN. Let's save
ourselves some more playtime with
this bug, a little later on...


MONTANA then turned around to help OX to his feet. DAN then
looked over at SPIDER-MAN on the table, his eye twitched for
a moment, until he looked back over at MONTANA and OX, where
he then marched towards the two and helped MONTANA get OX
back up to his feet.

CUT TO:


Finally waking up from his unconsciousness was SPIDER-MAN,
as he supported himself back up with his arms. He looked
around, the ENFORCERS were nowhere in sight.

DEBRA
You alright, SPIDER-MAN?...


SPIDER-MAN turned towards DEBRA.

SPIDER-MAN
...Spectacular.


SPIDER-MAN then leapt off of the table, checking his costume
for rips or tears, he found the ones in his wrist-area from
earlier and a new cut across his chest.

SPIDER-MAN
(Sighs, mutters to
himself)
Looks like I've got myself a lot
of sewing to do, tonight.