'Venom II' - thejon93

[thejon93]

First Fan-Fic - 'Venom':
http://forums.superherohype.com/showthread.php?t=299159

Teaser Trailer:
0.00
Flash of the Daily Globe.
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Flash of Eddie sitting at his desk, typing.
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Eddie continues to type then all of a sudden, a pop-up came up. Eddie tried to get rid of it but it wouldn't go away, it was a video. All of a sudden it began to play: "Hello, Eddie..." - ???, Eddie looked at the monitor in awe and fear.
0.12
"I just thought I'd give you a little sample, of what's to come" - ???, the figure began to attack somebody, Eddie couldn't tell who it was as the camera was shaking all around.
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"Somebody's... after me... I don't know why, and I don't know what to do..." - Eddie
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"Then you call for back-up..." - Eddie's Boss, Max; Eddie looking at his closet.
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"And when you sense he's there..." - Max; Eddie opens his closet.
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"You strike" - Max; Eddie looks in awe at inside his closet.
0.24
Eddie sitting on the bus as it heads down the freeway, all of a sudden, a robotic stinger-like arm came blasting through Eddie's window.
0.27
Flash to Eddie standing up on the bus as it moves faster down the freeway in fear of the attacker.
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Flash to Eddie looking out the window to the driver who was wearing green googles, he turned towards Eddie and demonishly smiled.
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The bus continued speeding along the freeway, avoiding traffic.
0.33
Fade-to Eddie turning away from the closet with the symbiote suit on everywhere except his face.
0.37
Black-screen; "Marko..." - ???
0.39
Black-screen; "...polo" - Venom
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Black-screen; Venom screamed, a punch sound-effect came up.
0.43
The man came flying out from behind the shadows and hit the ground with a thud as he looked back into the shadows.
0.45
Fade-to black; Venom's eyes began to show-up on the screen.
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Flash to Venom's foot stepping out of the shadows.
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Flash to the man with the stinger on his back looking in awe as he was on the ground.
0.50
Venom finally completely stepped out of the shadows and screamed at the man(who you should relize is Scorpion by now).
0.53
'Venom II'
Total Running Time: 0.57min.

Theatrical Trailer:
0.00
Eddie sits down in the seat on the bus, Eddie looks out the window; "You're getting weaker, Edward" - Symbiote
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Eddie swings his backpack up against the side of the bed and sits at the edge, looking down at the floor.
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Eddie sitting on the edge of the building with the symbiote suit on everywhere except his face as he looks up at the night sky; "You'll always be weak..." - Symbiote
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Screen-black; "Without rage" - Symbiote; Flash to Venom stepping out of the shadows and screaming.
0.10
Flash to heli-view of the Daily Globe.
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Flash to inside the Daily Globe where many people were rotating around the office while doing their jobs.
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"Eddie Brock, pleased to meet you" - Max; Max stands up from his chair and shakes Eddie's hand.
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"Are you going to make me some great stories during your time here?" - Max
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"That's my only plan, sir" - Eddie
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Eddie looks across the room from his desk at Anne Weying who was smiling at him, Eddie smiled back; "What are your other plans, Edward?" - Symbiote
0.21
"What do you mean?" - Eddie
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Venom on the roof of a moving car, then jumps onto another; "Together, what are your plans with us?" - Symbiote
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Eddie quickly turns his head towards the camera.
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Flash to Venom ripping the hood off of a moving car and the roof flying away.
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Screen-black; Cut-to Venom standing on the edge of a building; "Do you know who I am, Eddie? Do you know why I'm doing this?" - Mac Gargan
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Cut to Eddie looking out the window on the bus, cut to Gargan with green googles over his eyes demonishly smiling from his car up at Eddie in the window.
0.33
Eddie with tears in his eyes, crouched up against the bathroom door in fear.
0.35
"I have to fight him" - Eddie
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Cut to Venom running down the building wall.
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Screen-black; "It's good that you only put the word "I" in that sentence, Edward. Considering you've replaced your rage with fear, and now, we have no use for you" - Symbiote
0.45
The symbiote crawls out of the open window, with Eddie watching behind.
0.47
"What?" - Eddie
0.48
"Nothing. You just look like you've had somekind of weight lifted of your shoulders" - Anne; Eddie smiles.
0.52
Cut to Eddie on the bus speeding away along the highway from Mac Gargan.
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Cut to Eddie crouched down with others on the bus.
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Cut to Eddie standing up and looking to the front of the bus.
0.55
Cut to Gargan speeding to the front of the bus.
0.56
"Hold on!" - Eddie; Eddie and the passengers crouch down as Gargan crashes his car right up against the bus.
0.59
'2012...'
1.01
Gargan's car flips right over on it's hood as he stands on the back of it and then leaps onto the bus.
1.03
Venom jumps at Gargan as he's pointing the stinger at him.
1.04
'Seperation is...'
1.06
Eddie looks into his closet.
1.08
'Anxiety'
1.10
Eddie places both his hands on the counters on each side of him as the symbiote begins to crawl up both of them and onto his hands.
1.12
"This is who I am..." - Eddie
1.13
Venom throws a symbiote tentacle at a thug's head and swings him down to the floor.
1.14
Venom launches his forearm towards Gargan's head.
1.15
Screen-black; "I will always be..." - Eddie; exit screen-black "Venom" - Eddie
1.18
Venom jumps from one staircase to another and as he catches the edge of the other staircase, he swings himself up to kick the thug shooting at him off of it.
1.20
Gargan laughs maniacally as he holds Venom's neck with both his hands as the stinger above his head is launched down towards Eddie.
1.22
"If I don't fight this man, who else will?" - Eddie; Venom spots Gargan outside the window and runs towards him then spears him as they fall down the building; "This is between me and him" - Eddie
1.31
"You wanna know why I'm doing this? Do you wanna know what you have cost me?!" - Gargan
1.34
Venom runs towards the camera then leaps into the air and throws a dropkick, launching a thug out of the window.
1.36
Eddie with the symbiote suit on everywhere except his face catches the stinger from Gargan before it hits him.
1.37
"You don't have to do this!" - Eddie
1.38
Gargan launches his stinger towards the camera.
1.39
Bus falls over to it's side, Eddie tries to help the other passengers from falling down to the side where it was on the road.
1.42
"Our every move decides, which one of us falls before the other" - Gargan
1.45
Venom screams at the sky as the symbiote from Eddie begins to form tentacles and he held both of his arms in the air.
1.48
'Venom II'
Total Running Time: 1.52min.

Synposis:
After the events of the first, Eddie finally arrives in NYC where he gets the job he's always wanted, and he finally feels free from his peers. After the symbiote recognizes that Eddie has lost all his rage, hate and anger. The symbiote leaves Eddie in search of a new host. Finally freed from the symbiote, Eddie continues with the life he should've always had without the symbiote, but, along the way, he discovers a figure hell-bent on the past is searching for Eddie. With no knowledge on why this man wants to kill him so badly, Eddie continues to avoid his attacks by the little hairs on the back of his neck. But as Eddie becomes even closer to getting killed by this mad-man, he accepts his life with the symbiote and once again becomes Venom to finally stop the man and put an end to his attacks.

*This Fic will begin very soon, for now, you can vote on how you thought of the first chapter of 'Venom', feel free to leave comments in the thread for that fic only if you wish to offer your opinions on it to keep this thread strictly for the parts of this fic, if you wish to comment on each part released, that would be great to hear your feedback. Thank you.

 

[thejon93]

'Venom II'
By: thejon93

PART 1:
Thugs run into a room as their boss comes in through the other and runs to his office. The thugs shut the doors behind them and grabbed a bar and put it in-between the handles to keep anyone from coming in.

"What's going on?" - Thug #1

Before Thug #2 could reply, all of a sudden something crashed up against the door causing a huge dent between both closed doors.

"I don't know, but we have to protect Matthews!-" - Thug #2

Another dent came up against both doors, this time, you could see outside with just a small crack.

The thugs stood silent, in-between the crack, they could see a black figure running backwards and then running towards the door in speed. The black figure finally crashed through the door as the thugs began to shoot at him.

Derreck Matthews peered up from beneath his desk and looked at the door while listening to all of the noise and gunfire.

Matthews began to walk towards the door, quietly. Once he reached the door, he pulled it open just a notch and he could see a symbiote tentacle grab one of his thugs heads and throwing him down to the floor.

With that, he shut the door, he then turned his back towards the door but then quickly spotted the cleaning lady and jogged towards her.

The only remaining thug outside the office, hid in the shadows, away from the black figure as it walked towards the door. The thug tried his best not to breath so heavily, but the black figure quickly turned his head towards the thug and the thug left the shadows and ran to the doors opposite the black figure, but all of a sudden, the black figure leapt at him and smashed him to the ground. The black figure stood with his back towards the doors he smashed through(as in you could only see his backside from the perspective of the camera).

Derreck Matthews chair faced outside the window as it looked like somebody was sitting in it. All of a sudden the black figure smashed through the door and quickly leapt towards the chair; it was Venom. As he leapt, the person in the chair quickly turned around it was the cleaning lady, Venom tried to stop himself but he hit the cleaning lady and she flew with the chair out the window.

Venom turned his attention to Matthews where he quickly ran out of the back door but Eddie inside the suit stopped Venom.

"No, we have to save the girl" - Eddie

Venom snarled then leapt out the window and began to run down the building, quickly after the cleaning lady. She was falling further away from the building wall as Venom ran along it. The bottom of the building was getting closer until Venom finally leapt towards the lady and saved her before she hit the ground. He lightly placed her on the ground, he looked at her, he didn't know whether she was alive or dead. Venom tried to run back up the building, but Eddie made it stumble as he stood frozen over the cleaning lady. He finally let the symbiote take control of him again as Venom ran back up the building.

Derreck Matthews ran up the staircase, followed by a small group of thugs. Right beside the staircase was another, and Venom appeared on it. Derreck stopped and looked at Venom as he snarled in anger at him.

"What do you want?!" - Matthews

"You have something that belongs to me!" - Venom

Derreck ran back up the stairs in fear as his thugs positioned themselves away from each other and pointed their guns at Venom. Venom spotted one right in-front of him and smirked at him, the thug flinched in fear as Venom then leapt off the staircase and towards theirs, he grabbed onto the edge of the staircase quickly, swung himself up and quickly kicked the thug off of the staircase. Venom looked back down towards the others and leapt towards them and kicked the one closest right off his feet as he flew down towards the other thug and they both fell down the staircase.

Matthews ran up to the roof and quickly walked towards the helicopter that was ready for takeoff, all of a sudden, Venom came through the same door as Matthews as stared at him in rage. Matthews looked back at him then quickly ran towards the helicopter, as he leapt inside, the helicopter took off as Venom leapt towards it and grabbed hold of the edge of the helicopter.

Matthews quickly shut the door of the helicopter, right before Venom could come in as he swung back down to the edge of the helicopter. Venom then twisted himself and around and swung himself back up to the door and kicked it with both his feet. Matthews jumped in fright as Venom kicked it again and again until underneath the door, there was an opening. He kicked it again and the opening grew larger. Matthews quickly pulled out a flare gun and pointed it at the opening where he could see Venom's feet kick up again and hit the door causing it to open up further. Finally, Venom kicked the door right open as it flew towards Matthews, it was caught behind it. Venom then threw himself into the helicopter as the pilot began to shoot at him, he rolled out of the way of the fire, until Venom quickly stood to his feet and leapt at the pilot. Venom looked back then all of a sudden, Matthews launched the flare at Venom as it blew up right in his face and the windshield of the helicopter shattered as Venom and the pilot rolled down the narrow hood, Venom swung a symbiote tentacle at the edge of the hood to save himself from falling as the pilot fell down below.

Matthews took control of the helicopter and angled it down towards a building below. Venom tried to swing himself back up onto the helicopter, but couldn't. He quickly threw his hand at the hood and let go of the tentacle holding him in place as he began to crawl up to the helicopter. He finally crawled back into the helicopter and looked up at Matthews who was holding onto the corner of the doorway, trying to stay away from Venom. Venom stood up and looked at Matthews but then turned back around towards the windshield where he again realized the helicopter was flying right towards a building. He pulled the helicopter up with the controls as it just slightly flew over the building. Matthews then leapt out of the helicopter and onto the rooftop. Venom looked back and realized this as he turned the helicopter towards Matthews who was running away from the helicopter on the roof. Venom grabbed the speaker phone.

"Derreck Matthews, where is she, either you tell me or you fall to your immediate death or simply get sliced to pieces by the blades of this helicopter. Or, I can just take care of you myself, you decide" - Venom

Matthews kept running away from the helicopter, but as he tried to stop himself from running over the edge of the roof, he fell off of it and began to fall below.

Venom stared in awe and quickly landed the helicopter and ran out of it to the edge of the roof, he could see he was already to late to save Matthews to get any information as he screamed to the sky in rage.

 

[Victarion]

Venom tried to stop himself but he hit the cleaning lady and she flew with the chair out the window.

Your style has really improved and I like it! Its more in novel form, which I prefer myself to script form since it allows us to get into the characters' heads. The first Venom was really good, I give it an 8 btw.

 

[thejon93]

Your style has really improved and I like it! Its more in novel form, which I prefer myself to script form since it allows us to get into the characters' heads. The first Venom was really good, I give it an 8 btw.

I prefer the novel style too, it gives the readers more of a sense of what's going on. I just see scripts as being really boring to read and only fit for the making of a movie. If I wrote in script-form like:

Venom turns around.

Venom punches thug.

Thug falls on ground.​

You know, that wouldn't be entertaining to read at all because really what it is, is for getting straight down to buisness with something, that's all. As for the cleaning lady... yeah, I got that little idea from the mini-series of 'Venom' comic-books. In it, Venom is after a corrupt buisness-man, Venom thinks he's sitting in the chair but then realizes it's the cleaning lady and kills her by mistake. I like to take little things like that from the comics for the fans of the comics themselves to discover. I really do think this one will surpass the first because I have much more thought, information, ideas, etc. to go with. While I was working on 'Venom', ideas for a sequel just kept flying into my head so I wrote them all down and tried to find a way to fit them together into the story. The way that I write my fics is I write them off by heart, I like doing this because it leaves myself able to obtain more and more ideas along the way. 'Venom II' will be a lot more action-packed, I consider it to be the 'Spider-Man 2' of this series and I'm happy with that in mind. And so, here's:

PART 2:
Venom landed on the balcony outside of Eddie's apartment and opened the screen-door and walked in. As Eddie walked to his desk, the symbiote moved away from Eddie's face as he picked up a letter and read it over carefully as he sat down in his chair by the desk and continued to read it, he then threw it down in anger and then threw his fist down at the desk and walked into the washroom.

Eddie turned on the tap in the washroom and took a handful of warm water and threw it at his face, he then looked at himself in the mirror for a moment then opened the mirror and behind was a medicine cupboard, Eddie grabbed a small bottle of pills and took out two and threw them into his mouth, as he put the bottle back in, he filled up a cup of water from the tap and drank it to wash down the pills. Eddie took a deep breath then shut the cupboard.

"We'll find her soon, Edward. Just relax... sit back and enjoy the silence as we attempt to find her again" - Symbiote

Eddie laid down on his bed.

"What if we don't find her?... What if she's already dead?..." - Eddie

"No, if they wanted her dead they would've killed her by now, besides, they must want something from you" - Symbiote

"Whatever it is, they can have it, I just want Alicia to be safe" - Eddie

Somebody knocked on Eddie's door, he quickly jumped off the bed and put on clothes over the symbiote suit, once he had the clothes on, he opened the door. It was his landlord, Terry.

"...hi, Terry..." - Eddie

"I need the rent, and I need it now" - Terry

"I'm sorry, I don't-" - Eddie

""I'm sorry", what?! Do you think I'm an idiot, whether or not you do, consider this, if you don't have my rent. You'll be on your ass, you'll be on the streets, you'll be a bum! A nobody! Get a job, Ed!" - Terry

"I'm sorry, Terry. But I don't think you realize that I already have a goddamn job!" - Eddie

"Then it certainly isn't paying off for you, is it?!" - Terry

"It is, Terry. I'm just waiting for my cheque, once I get it, you'll get paid, now goodnight!" - Eddie

Eddie tried to close the door but Terry stopped him from doing so by putting his foot at the edge of the doorway.

"This week, or you're out" - Terry

Terry pulled his foot out from the doorway and Eddie slammed the door. He turned away from the door and grabbed his hair in anger as he walked towards the desk, picked up the lamp and threw it at his wall. Eddie was then left in his room, in darkness, with nothing but the moonlight shining down through the crack of the curtains. Eddie looked up at it with teary eyes.

Eddie with the symbiote suit sat on-top of the building, and stared up at the moon in the sky, Eddie closed his eyes and took a deep breath as he blocked all of the noises from the streets out of his mind.

Eddie walked towards his boss's office inside the busy office floor of the Daily Globe, people kept bumping into him as he tried to get to the door which read: 'Maxwell Peterson - Editor in Cheif'. Eddie finally reached the door and tried to open it but it was locked. Eddie peered through the office window at side of the door and tried to signal Max but he was already coming to the door. Eddie felt the knob moving from the other side but the door wasn't opening. Eddie then tried to pull harder on the doorknob to get the door open as Max on the other side was pushing up against the door, Eddie peered back through the window and he saw Max move backwards, ready to charge at the door. Eddie grasped the doorknob with both hands as he positioned himself away from the door where it could hit him. Eddie then spotted Max charging at the door and once he reached within the right range of the door, Eddie pulled the door right open as the knobs on both sides fell off from the symbiote suit's power, the door then swung right at the face of one of the people in the office. She fell over and her papers flew all over the floor, Eddie walked over and knelt down.

"Are you alright... my God... I'm sorry about that" - Eddie

"That's alright, I'll be fine" - Woman

The woman grabbed her nose in pain as she quickly grabbed the papers and held them in her hands. She tried to get to her feet as Eddie helped her.

"Thanks" - Woman

"No problem, would you like me to take you to the washroom?" - Eddie

"...ahh, sure, if that'll make you feel better" - Woman

"Well actually, I was just looking for any excuse to get away from Max at this point, as he'll probably be bragging over the fact that he broke the door" - Eddie

The woman smiled.

"No doubt" - Woman

Eddie smirked at her.

Eddie and the woman walked down the hallway towards the women's washroom.

"Why haven't I seen you before?" - Woman

"Well... you and I were probably just lost in the crowd" - Eddie

"I guess so" - Woman

"Why does it have to be such a short distance to the washroom, I mean, this is such a nice, pleasant conversation that I might just forget to ask for your name" - Eddie

"Same thing for me" - Woman

Eddie and the woman didn't talk to each other until they finally reached the washroom and stopped together and looked at each other an both asked.

"So what's your name?" -Eddie & Woman

Eddie and the woman laughed.

"Ladies first" - Eddie

"Anne, Anne Weying" - Anne

"Eddie, Eddie Brock" - Eddie

"See you again?" - Anne

"Just as long as I don't get lost in the crowd, again" - Eddie

Eddie smiled as Anne smiled back and entered the washroom.​

 

[red hood 4]

Brilliant

 

[thejon93]

PART 3:
Eddie walks into his apartment building and checks the mail, he finds a letter and quickly opens it. It read: 'You'll get a call, in time'.

Eddie looked enraged at the sheet of paper and crunched it up in his hand and threw it at the wall.

"God dammit!" - Eddie

Eddie held his head in both of his hands and fell up against the wall with the mailboxes and began to slide to the floor.

"Get a hold of yourself, Edward" - Symbiote

"Oh, shut up! You know nothing about me, you know nothing about what's going on inside!" - Eddie

"Silence!" - Symbiote

Eddie jumped to his feet.

""Silence?!" God dammit, she's dead, if I don't find her!" - Eddie

Eddie kicked one of the mailboxes in the rows of other mailboxes and then fell back down to the floor after losing his balence.

""I?!" WE! We will find her!" - Symbiote

"Shut up, just shut up! She's all that matters to me! Without her, nothing else fits!" - Eddie

"Then why did you leave her?!" - Symbiote

Eddie was speechless as tears ran down his eyes.

"No answer found yet, huh... Edward?..." - Symbiote

"...for reasons you'll never understand... that's why I left her... that's why I left her..." - Eddie

A man came walking down the stairs in-front of Eddie and noticed him on the ground.

"Are you alright?" - Man

Eddie wiped the tears away with his hands.

"I'm... I'm fine..." - Eddie

The man rushed down the stairs and tried to help but Eddie stood up before he could help.

"Please, don't let me be a burden on your day" - Eddie

Eddie walked up the stairs, hanging his head in shame.

The man looked up at him as if he was worried about him then, just as he was about to turn out the door. He spotted the paper crunched-up into a ball which Eddie threw at the wall.

Eddie was about to open his apartment door but Terry came up behind him.

"Rent..." - Terry

Eddie took a deep breath and then turned around towards Terry.

"If you don't stop harrassing me, I'm gonna call the cops. So get off my back!" - Eddie

Eddie turned away from Terry and opened his door.

"How can I get off your back when you don't pay me? How can you call the police if you don't pay me? You think this world's for free? Look around you, it ain't. Bums on the street earn more money than you, you stupid idiot" - Terry

Eddie turned back around and charged at Terry and speared him to the ground.

Eddie began to throw punches at Terry but he kept blocking them and pushed Eddie off of him with his feet. Terry stood back up and punched Eddie in the face, Eddie fell to his knee as Terry began to punch him in the head repeatedly. Eddie screamed then quickly got up and threw a punch at Terry's jaw as he fell right back down along with Terry. Terry lied undeneath Eddie's arm as he reached over and wrapped his arm around Eddie's neck. Eddie tried to catch his breath as he tried to elbow Terry in the gut to get him off. He then began to wave all around but began to loose more breath. Eddie rolled over backwards over Terry, but as he still held on, Eddie pulled himself loose as he bent down for a second and coughed then looked back at Terry who was getting to his feet. Eddie then quickly ran towards Terry and kicked him in face as he was on his knee getting up, Terry was knocked out as blood began to run from his mouth.

Eddie again coughed but then looked up and saw the man from downstairs standing at the edge of the staircase, with the crunched up piece of paper in his hands. Eddie suddenly stopped breathing as he stared at the man.

"You better answer the call" - Man

Eddie couldn't answer but right at that moment, he heard the phone ring. He ran into the apartment and quickly answered it once it was at the end of the second ring.

"Hello?!" - Eddie

"Revenge is so sweet, ain't it? It tastes like sugarcubes which you rotate back and forth in your mouth, you should try it" - ???

"I've had enough of this bulls%^&, where is she?!" - Eddie

"Alive. And that's all you need to know" - ???

The man on the other end hung up the phone.

Eddie stood there frozen, with the earpiece to the phone in his ear. Eddie turned around to the man with the piece of paper as he stood in his doorway.

Eddie dropped the phone.

"What will you tell the police?" - Eddie

"The truth" - Man

Eddie was speechless but nodded his head.

"That this man was harassing you, started the fight with you and eventually got what was coming to him since the very beginning. I may also alter somethings, too" - Man

"Like what?" - Eddie

"I don't know who you are" - Man

"You never did... did you?" - Eddie

"Eddie Brock, you should really learn to close your mailbox, luckilly I had the luxury of doing that deed for you" - Man

Eddie smiled.

"Thank you" - Eddie

"You're welcome" - Man

Eddie walked out of the apartment and onto his balcony. He moved out of the way of the man's viewing as the symbiote began to crawl up from underneath Eddie's clothes and over him to form Venom.

Venom then began to climb up the building wall, the man looked back out onto the balcony but didn't realize that Eddie was right over him, Venom tried to stay quite while trying to find a place to hide from him as well. The man went back inside and Venom then quickly crawled up the wall.​

 

[red hood 4]

OHH the plot deepens how many sequels do you think you,ll make? will you make stories about other villains eg Electro?

Also in your universe does Peter/Spiderman exist? futre villain perhaps

 

[thejon93]

OHH the plot deepens how many sequels do you think you,ll make? will you make stories about other villains eg Electro?

Also in your universe does Peter/Spiderman exist? futre villain perhaps

Yes, the plot deepens majorly. I want this one to be much more intense, action-packed and dramatic. I want it to feel a lot different from other comic-book adaptions, mainly compared to 'Spider-Man 2', I want it to be simular but to also make it different.

Yes, there will be one more sequel after this to end the series. I don't know if I revealed this before but, I really want Carnage to be the villain simply because he's refered to as the main villain for Venom to face. For the next film I want it to spilt between the two at times. If there's to much material to work with for the third, I'll make a forth. Kasady(Carnage's alter ego), I can deal with as a character, I want to make him psychotic and manical in everyway. I consider Cletus to be The Joker of the Marvel universe, with the suit on, it just modifies that even further. Some say Carnage shoul be in 'Spider-Man 4', not for me, Carnage works better with Venom. If they ever release a film for Venom, Carnage should be the first to look at as the villain, but they shouldn't put him in too soon. If they plan on having sequels, then throw in Carnage because that's what the fans want and they want it to be perfect and not rushed as they limb over the film's release date.

Spider-Man/Peter Parker will not appear in this series, unless it's a reference to him from 'The Daily Globe', considering The Globe is 'The Daily Bugle's rival newspaper company, it would make more sense.

I hope this could answer all of your questions, red hood 4, if not... DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH TIME I SPENT TYPING THIS?! Just kidding, anyhow, here's:
PART 4:
It was raining over the bank machine as Eddie then quickly ran towards it. He shielded himself underneath the machine's shield as he inserted his card into the machine. Four options came up on screen and he chose to withdraw money. He looked as the screen then read that Eddie had "$17.60" in his account. Eddie tried to hide his sadness as he raised his fist just above his head as about to smash it against the screen of the machine. He couldn't bring himself to do it as he fell up against it, covering his head with his arm. Eddie looked back up as his eyes were red and pulled out his card from the machine, he couldn't it out so he pushed the "Cancel" button on the machine and then slipped as card out.

Eddie slid down along the machine with it against his back as he finally fell to the ground as he curled himself up by bending his knees into his chest and wrapping his arms around them.

Eddie then rose his head and stood up from the ground as he walked back out into the rain and ran back in the direction of his apartment.

Eddie; with the symbiote suit on everywhere except his face, snuck back into his old apartment and grabbed a napsack he found on the floor and began to fill it with all of his documents from work. He went into the kitchen and opened the fridge and pulled out a bottle of water as he leapt up onto the counter. He looked around the kitchen and then looked down to the floor, took a deep breath and then got off of the counter and began to pack up more things. Just when Eddie was aboutto leave the apartment the same way he came in, the phone rang. Eddie quickly turned back at it. The phone rang again as he still stood there watching it, it rang again and finally Eddie ran over to pick it up.

"Hello?" - Eddie

There was a pause between Eddie and the caller for about a moment as the voice finally picked up.

"Planning on sleeping underneath a bank machine tonight, Eddie?" - ???

Eddie was speechless.

"I heard you killed my boss, doesn't matter to me. I would've killed him later-on anyhow, too bad I hadn't sooner, would have been extra practise up 'til this" - ???

"What do you want?" - Eddie

"I know what you want. You want your pretty little girlfriend back so you can make sweet love again in the crow's nest, huh?" - ???

"Where is she, god dammit?! I'm through playin' around!" - Eddie

"You want her back, you'll have to continue to answer my calls. So I'd suggest that you don't get your phone number changed quite yet, if you want to see her again" - ???

"Tell me what you want me to do, and I'll do it. Just let her go!" - Eddie

"Ahh, but that's too easy, you see Eddie. You first have to start playing by the rules" - ???

Eddie continued to listen.

"Until the next call, bon voyage, Eddie Brock" - ???

"Wait, please!-" - Eddie

Eddie stopped his sentence and dropped the phone to the floor, Eddie looked down to the floor as he bent over and unplugged the phone and put it in his napsack, zipped it up and put it back on his back.

 

[red hood 4]

Mind games love it The Symbiote will leave Eddie for Mac i take it

 

[thejon93]

Mind games love it The Symbiote will leave Eddie for Mac i take it

We'll see, oh, we'll see. Here's:
PART 5:
Eddie Brock sits down at his desk in the Daily Globe and immediately begins to type out numerous amounts of stories for the company that he knows of off by heart. Once he had them all down, he logged off of the computer and left the desk and headed out the door but then bumped right into Anne Weying.

"Oh, I'm sorry..." - Anne

"No problem, happens more than usual every so often" - Eddie

Anne giggled.

"Yeah, I guess it's my fault, right?" - Anne

"Well..." - Eddie

Eddie helped Anne to her feet.

"It's a bit of both, I'd say" - Eddie

"Yeah, right as usual, Mr. Brock" - Anne

Eddie smirked.

"Indeed, I am, I guess. See each other later?" - Eddie

"You need to go somewhere?" - Anne

"It's that time of year again" - Eddie

Anne smiled.

"See you later, then?" - Anne

"See you later" - Eddie

Eddie and Anne smiled at each other as Eddie then left the office.

Eddie sat down on the bench on the bus-stop and turned his head in the direction his bus comes. A man dressed in raggy clothes walked up to Eddie.

"Change?" - Homeless Man

Eddie looked up at the man.

"Ahh... no, sorry" - Eddie

The homeless guy turned around, cursing under his breath. Eddie turned back in the direction where his bus was coming, he stood up and all of a sudden the homeless man grabbed him by his shirt.

"You lie to me?!" - Homeless Man

"No, sir. No" - Eddie

"You lie you rich bastard, you don't care about me, you only care about you" - Homeless Man

A man also standing on the bus-stop tried to seperate the homeless man from Eddie. The homeless man turned around and pulled out a knife and pointed it at the man.

"Do you wanna die?! Huh?! I will kill you, I will kill you all!" - Homeless Man

The bus passed by the bus-stop with Eddie still on it, threatened by the homeless man, he turned towards Eddie and pointed the knife at him.

"You don't need to do this, you have a life! If you do this, you will lose it, I promise you" - Eddie

"Is tht a threat?... Is that a threat?!" - Homeless Man

The homeless man walked closer to Eddie, holding the knife in-front of him as Eddie raised his hands and walked backwards away from him.

"I'm just like you, you're just like me! Why do this?!" - Eddie

"Because nobody cares, nobody cares! They all want me to die!" - Homeless Man

From behind, the man who tried to seperate the homeless man away from Eddie tackled him to the ground as two other people walking down on the sidewalk leapt onto the man, trying to pull the knife away from him as one of them did. A police office then came from around the corner of another building across the street, escorted by an elderly woman. Eddie stared down at the man as he screamed from below the three people keeping him from getting off the ground. The police officer came by and forced his hand in-between two of the people on-top of the man and put the handcuffs on both of his hands. The three people then got off of him as the police officer held onto him from behind. Eddie stared in awe as the man was being arrested. The homeless man then broke free from the officer's grasp and ran towards Eddie. Eddie caught hold of him by the shoulders.

"I'm sorry" - Eddie

The police officer then wrapped his arm around the homeless man's throat an threw him to the ground. Eddie wanted to tell the officer to go easy on him but he could get the words out as his eyes began to turn red, ready for tears to begin running down them. Eddie put his head down as he walked away in the opposite direction of the officer as he dragged the homeless man away.

Eddie lied on the rooftop at night in the symbiote suit, he had all of his stuff inside his napsack which was lying underneath his head as he used it like a pillow.

 

[red hood 4]

AHHHHHH oor Eddie he should spare himself the pain and embrace the power he knows he wants to cant fight it forever.

 

[thejon93]

PART 6:
Eddie; with the symbiote suit on everywhere except his face, opened his eyes and sat up from the rooftop soil as he held himself in place with his arms which sat behind him, holding him up in place. He pulled one of his hands up in-front on him to whip his eyes. Eddie stood up and walked over to the edge of the building and sat down right on the edge.

"Stop punishing yourself, Edward" - Symbiote

"I'm not punishing myself" - Eddie

"Then what are you doing?" - Symbiote

"...just going with the punches as everyone keeps swinging" - Eddie

"You feel the weight of the world on your shoulders, and you don't know what to do about it" - Symbiote

"It's her weight, that is even greater than the whole world" - Eddie

"Then we suggest you hook that phone up, before she faces an early demise" - Symbiote

Eddie's eyes widened as he ran over to his napsack and quickly pulled out the phone and it's jack. Eddie held it underneath his arm as he ran back towards the edge of the building. Once Eddie reached the edge, he leapt off of the building as the symbiote began to cover his face and then formed Venom. Venom swung a tentacle out towards a nearby building and swung up against the wall. Venom then kicked off the wall a bit and then pressed back up against the building and began to slide down it.

Venom landed on the balcony of his old apartment, he tried to open the screen door but it was locked so he broke right through it with his own body-weight. Venom looked over at the jack and quickly plugged the phone back in. He then reached underneath the carpet and placed the cord underneath so no one could see it when walking in. Venom walked outside through the screen door and put the phone on the balcony. He went back inside and unlocked the screen door, opened it and placed the phone cord at the edge of the screen door and shut the door behind it. Venom then locked the screen door again and stepped outside onto the balcony and sat next to the phone as he hid behind the wall, beside the screen door, so no one could see him as he then awaited the phone to ring.

Alicia was tied to a chair by rope with duct tape over her mouth as a man then walked into the room she was in which only consisted of a small light hanging above her head. The man stepped into the light and knelt down beside Alicia, he looked at her then ripped the tape off of her mouth. She cried in pain.

"Do you know who I am?" - ???

"...you told me already before" - Alicia

"Yeah, but you see, I like it when you say my name. It sends chills up my spine" - ???

"What makes you think I want to do something that will make you feel better about yourself?" - Alicia

The man leaned in closer to Alicia's ear when he whispered.

"Because I told you to" - ???

The man grabbed Alicia by the neck and smiled.

"What's my name?" - ???

"...Gargan..." - Alicia

"Full name?..." - Gargan

"...Mac Gargan..." - Alicia

Gargan let go of Alicia's neck and stood to his feet.

"That a girl, Alicia. Brock would be proud. In fact, I wish he was here. But first I have to wait for the perfect opportunity... first, I have to make him weak, I have to make him..." - Gargan

Gargan bent down again closer to Alicia.

"Scared" - Gargan

"What do you want with Eddie?" - Alicia

Gargan stood up and stared at Alicia.

""What do I want?"... What does he want?! What do you want?!" - Gargan

Gargan pulled on his hair as he began to get angry as he looked around the room for something. Gargan then looked at Alicia and hit her with the back of his hand across the face. He quickly bent down and pressed his face up against hers.

"Don't ever ask me nothing!" - Gargan

Gargan stood back up and headed for the door, he opened it but before he went out, he stopped right by the doorway.

"You know what..." - Gargan

Gargan turned around towards Alicia and smiled.

"You just gave me an idea" - Gargan

Alicia looked up at him as her head was down from when Gargan hit her.

"I'll be sure to use it to my advantage" - Gargan

Gargan left the room and closed the door and locked it behind him.

 

[thejon93]

AHHHHHH oor Eddie he should spare himself the pain and embrace the power he knows he wants to cant fight it forever.

Oh, I didn't even notice your comment as I just kept writing the chapter, dumb me
I think it's kinda hard for him to be spared of his pain as he has so many terrible things happening to him, he's constantly on the verge of losing himself to his pain and misery that he can barely even live his life. I want to really show this in the story to leave the future of these two characters open.

 

[red hood 4]

Mac is one the twisted loony The Symbiote is unerving he is just like " Eddie just let me look after you ,I just want to keep you safe and i will do it no matter who gets in the way". Brilliant work superb.


Will you do a alternative ending or deleted scenes.

 

[thejon93]

Mac is one the twisted loony The Symbiote is unerving he is just like " Eddie just let me look after you ,I just want to keep you safe and i will do it no matter who gets in the way". Brilliant work superb.


Will you do a alternative ending or deleted scenes.

Wait 'til you see Cletus Kasady in 'Venom III'(which, yes, is indeed confirmed). I'm currently working on his character's personality and I'm basing it very closely off of the 90s animated series, so if your a fan, you'll catch a few easter eggs based off of the show, but, I don't want to reveal too much yet on that. I believe that 'Venom III' might be ready to begin late July or early August(possibly late, basically put, it might begin in-between the months of July and August).

Maybe, deleted scenes is a possibility but alternate endings however can be tricky, but again, it's a possibility.

*Trailer 2(or 3, if you count the teaser) will premiere in a moment.

 

[thejon93]

Trailer 2:
0.00
Flash of the Daily Globe; "Were you in a fight?" - Max
0.02
Eddie sitting in the chair in-front of Max's desk with a cut on his forehead and scrapes across his face; "Let me just say, I'm always fighting" - Eddie
0.04
Flash to Venom sliding down the side of a building wall.
0.05
Flash to Venom lands on-top of a roof.
0.06
Cut to Venom running down along the builing after the cleaning lady.
0.08
Flash to Alicia tied up to a chair, the camera fades into Eddie viewing it from a computer screen. Mac Gargan comes into viewing.
0.11
"You want her back, you're going to have to give something up" - Gargan
0.13
"What?" - Eddie
0.14
"I think you know what" - Gargan
0.15
Cut to Eddie sitting on the edge of the rooftop with symbiote suit on everywhere except his face.
0.17
"With everyday that passes by you lose more and more hate, rage. Without it, we are nothing" - Symbiote
0.21
Cut to Eddie sitting on the bus going down the freeway, he looks underneath his shirt where the symbiote was not there.
0.23
Eddie looks out the window to his side and his eyes open wide as he sees Gargan driving beside him, he slowly turns his head towards Eddie and then smiles, flash to black; "Hold on!" - Eddie
0.30
Gargan crashes the car into the bus.
0.31
Gargan then moves his car further ahead of the bus. Eddie walks up to the front of the bus and looks out the window. Gargan then spins his car around and heads back towards the bus. Eddie spots Gargan climbing to his roof. Eddie turns around towards the passengers who were all at the back of the bus.
0.38
"Hang on to something!" - Eddie
0.39
Gargan's car crashes into the front of the bus and as it's rear end heads up into the air, Gargan leaps off of it and onto the top of the bus.
0.41
The bus runs over the car with it's two front wheels but then hits the car with it's back wheels behind and the bus flips up backwards and right when it's about to hit the road, flash to white and back to normal.
0.45
Flash to Gargan turning towards the camera with the Scorpion suit on.
0.46
Flash to Venom turning towards the camera.
0.47
Flash to the two charging towards each other.
0.48
"This is between him... and us, together we are one, together, we are Venom" - Eddie
0.53
The symbiote crawls out from underneath Eddie's clothes and overlaps them, forming Venom.
0.59
"And so it begins" - Gargan
1.00
"We believe it already has" - Eddie with the symbiote suit on, it then climbs up to his face and forms Venom's face
1.02
Venom dropkicks the thug off of the staircase.
1.03
'The Venom Saga...'
1.05
"You will die today, Brock!" - Gargan
1.06
Venom swings around barrier and kicks Gargan across the face.
1.08
'Continues'
1.10
Gargan runs up at Venom and swings the stinger at his feet which knocks Venom over.
1.12
Gargan runs towards Venom but Venom kicks his feet up to Gargan's gut and flips him right over him, cut to Venom spearing Gargan out of the window and they both falling down the side of the building, flash to black screen.
1.19
"Are you scared, Brock?" - Gargan
1.20
"I'm terrified" - Eddie
1.21
Venom leaps off of the staircase and catches the edge of the one on the other side, swings himself up and kicks the thug off of it, cut to black-screen.
1.24
"And I always will be" - Eddie
1.25
Venom and Gargan(with Scorpion suit on) falling down the side of the building, Venom then kicks Gargan further down and he pushes his stinger up against the wall which slows him down as Venom then prepares to punch him across the face, flash before Venom hits him.
1.30
'Venom II'
Total Running Time: 1.34min.

A short little trailer to give more of a sample of the action sequences and some of the story elements since Mac Gargan has now been introduced.

 

[thejon93]

PART 7:
It was quiet and stable in The Daily Globe as Eddie sat in the chair next to the door of his boss's office with a folder of the stories he wrote in his hands. He quickly looked up and the secretary was looking at him. Eddie immediately put his head down to try and make a gesture to the secretary to stop staring at him, Eddie pretended he had to scratch his back but instead looked into the glass frame with a newspaper inside titled: "Hero Flees NYC". Eddie spotted the secretary in the frame an she was still looking at him, Eddie turned his head back around and for a moment faced the ground but then he lifted his head directly at the secretary. Both stared eye-to-eye at each other, neither blinkly. After a few moments, Eddie blinked, the secretary began to laugh.

"Hey" - Eddie

The secretary looked up at Eddie again and immediately stopped laughing and put on the same serious face.

"Take a picture next time" - Eddie

The office door opened and a small group of men walked out, behind, Max was wishing them all farewell.

Eddie stood up to speak to Max. Max didn't notice him.

"Ahh... sir" - Eddie

Max quickly turned around towards Eddie and put his finger in-front of his mouth, signally to Eddie to be quiet.

Eddi nodded and sat back down, he looked back up and the secretary was looking enraged at him.

"When you bring the camera, I'll be sure to say cheese" - Eddie

Eddie turned his head towards the crowd and spotted Anne walking towards him. Eddie stood up from his seat, ready to greet her but Max then walked back into the room, grabbed Eddie and pushed him into the office. Max shut the door behind his and Eddie's entery into Max's office.

"How's it going, Eddie?" - Max

"Well-" - Eddie

"Sorry about ignoring you but those guys were from the board and everything has to be in tip-top shape" - Max

"Explains why this place was so quiet today" - Eddie

"Indeed. So, what do we have here?" - Max

Max refered to the folder in Eddie's hands, Eddie handed it to Max and he checked the stories over.

"Three entries in total, sir" - Eddie

"Please, "sir" is too formal" - Max

"Yes... Max" - Eddie

Max looked up at Eddie.

"You forget my name or something?" - Max

Max smiled.

"Trust me, my memory is running off of water and ham sandwiches these days" - Eddie

"Hmm, sounds like your livin' the life" - Max

"Surely and certainly, Max" - Eddie

"I'll be reviewing these later on, currently I have all of these documents to sign so, see you later then Mr. Brock" - Max

"Indeed so, sir" - Eddie

Eddie smirked as Max gave him a blank stare then smirked along with him as Eddie then left the office.

As Eddie left Max's office, he noticed the crowd had com back to their regular busy-like selves, through the crowd, Eddie tried to spot Anne as Anne on the other side tried as well. Eddie looked over at the secretary's desk and climbed on-top of it as on the other side, Anne did the same to another desk. They both smiled at each other as Eddie bent down and quickly wrote somethin down on a piece of paper in large print. He held it up in the air and it read: "Do you wanna go out for coffee?". Anne bent down an began writing as well. Eddie looked down at the secretary who was staring at him again, he looked back up and Anne's piece of paper read: "Yes". Eddie bent down again ad began to write, Eddie then put the secretary's pen back into her holder and quickly siled at her and then stood up on the desk again and held up the paper which read: "Meet you outside". Both Eddie and Anne jumped off of the desks and rushed downstairs to the bottom floor. Both made it to the bottom at the exact same time as they ran up towards each other, gasping for breath.

"Now, don't think of this "coffee" thing as a 'GTA'-type reference" - Eddie

Eddie and Anne began to laugh and then looked back up at each other and smiled.

"We do that a lot, don't we" - Anne

"Do what?" - Eddie

"You know, laugh and smile" - Anne

"What do you expect, we're both like Ronald McDonald. Except, without the makeup, and the shoes, and the nose, and the eye-shadow, and the clothes, and the strange creepiness he carries around with him, although you might count for the makeup as I know women usual spend half their day in the washroom" - Eddie

"Eddie!" - Anne

Anne nogged Eddie in the gut. He bent down.

"That... hurt..." - Eddie

"Uhh, I'm so sorry, Eddie Brock" - Anne

Eddie stood up straight.

"Last draw, you're paying for my medical bills" - Eddie

"What medical bills?" - Anne

Anne and Eddie walked on away from the Daily Globe.

 

[red hood 4]

Ohhhhhhhhhhh its getting better when will Eddie lose the Symbiote?

 

[thejon93]

Ohhhhhhhhhhh its getting better when will Eddie lose the Symbiote?

Later-on, I don't want to do it so soon because I want to create more of a build-up to that situation. Also, I'm sorry to the readers that I haven't been writing it's just that my computer keeps getting worse and worse than ever before because of pop-ups, and whatever. This doesn't only affect my computer but as well as my typing. Like, I literally have to take my time to make sure it actually spaces out or what-not. On Saturday, I was writing Part 8 and I got it down but my computer froze. I will try my very best to get rid of this so I can continue on with the fic over the summer.

 

[kingpin]

This defeinetly rocks! if venom ever manages to become a film series You should submit your ideas. Also out of interest will Toxin appear? There could be some interesting possibilities there.

 

[thejon93]

This defeinetly rocks! if venom ever manages to become a film series You should submit your ideas. Also out of interest will Toxin appear? There could be some interesting possibilities there.

Thanks, kingpin. I'd really like to see a 'Venom' movie and I'm not writing this script for my own pleasure but to show people that it's possible to get it done right. I'm not sure about Toxin appearing, maybe if I make a fourth because I don't like to clutter anything, because in the end it's just too damn hard to organize. I'll see what I can do later-on.

 

[thejon93]

PART 8:
Eddie looked odd at the cup of coffee. Anne looked up at him as she sipped from her cup.

"What's wrong?" - Anne

"When I asked you out for coffee, that was the only thing that came to mind..." - Eddie

"And?..." - Anne

"I hate coffee" - Eddie

"Oh, smooth move, Eddie" - Anne

"What? It's called quick thinking" - Eddie

Anne smiled and continued to sip her coffee.

Eddie looked at Anne's eyes as she was looking down at the table while she drank and then, Eddie begun to picture her as Alicia because she had the same colour eyes.

Eddie then noticed Anne looking up at him and he quickly turned away and drank down a big gulp of coffee. Eddie coughed as soon as he swallowed.

Anne slammed her cup down to the table in fright.

Eddie coughed again while grasping his neck in pain.

"Are you okay?" - Anne

"...how can you drink that crap?! It's horrible" - Eddie

Anne waved to the waiter to grab his attention.

"Check, please!" - Anne

Eddie waved after her.

"...yeah" - Eddie

Eddie again coughed.

Eddie sat back down at his desk in the Daily Globe and turned on his computer and began to type out a story, he thought to himself about how he should start it off and then was about to type when all of a sudden, his monitor shut off.

Eddie bent down underneath his desk to see if he had kicked out a plug or something, he found nothing. He came back up to the monitor and right before he pushed the button on the monitor to turn it on, it5 turned on, on it's own.

Eddie stared at the screen in confusion and was about to type when all of a sudden a video came up on screen. It had Mac Gargan in it, behind sat Alicia. Mac began to talk but the volume was turned down, Eddie quickly turned it up.

"Let me say that again, Eddie. I thought I'd be kind enough to give you a little sample of what lies about in your future, as well as her's" - Gargan
Mac turned around towards Alicia and smirked at her.

"So, first thing's first. Say goodbye to your pretty, little girlfriend" - Gargan

Eddie's eyes opened wide as Gargan turned around, the camera followed with him. Moving all over the place as it looked as if Gargan was harrassing Alicia with his Scorpion armour on, in the background, all Eddie heard were screams. People around the office began to gather around Eddie's desk, Eddie paid no attention to them. Finally the video cut off.

Eddie stared blankly at the screen.

"Eddie... what was that?" - Woman

Eddie tried to answer but couldn't as tears began to roll down his face. He stood up from his desk and walked calmly out of the room. Once Eddie was out of the room, he leaned up against the wall and tried to take a deep breath but then began to cry harder as he picked up a potted plant and threw it across the room. Anne came through the door outside with Eddie. Eddie quickly glared at her then quickly left downstairs before she could do anything.

 

[thejon93]

I quickly thought of something cool to go along with the script, so I put together this small soundtrack list, enjoy:
1. Disturbed - 'I'm Alive'
[YT]tJTTKCHu9EQ[/YT]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tJTTKCHu9EQ

2. Priestess - 'Lay Down'
[YT]xt9tr9-wHmY[/YT]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xt9tr9-wHmY

3. Drowning Pool - 'Enemy'
[YT]umLe2L-60mk[/YT]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umLe2L-60mk

 

[kingpin]

Thanks, kingpin. I'd really like to see a 'Venom' movie and I'm not writing this script for my own pleasure but to show people that it's possible to get it done right. I'm not sure about Toxin appearing, maybe if I make a fourth because I don't like to clutter anything, because in the end it's just too damn hard to organize. I'll see what I can do later-on.

good points. If you ever need any ideas on toxin ask me, I have a good idea for origin actually for carnage and toxin.

 

[thejon93]

Wow, it's been too damn long I tell you. Finally got back from that "not so wanted" vacation(loss of internet). But now it's time to continue with the script, here's Part 9:
PART 9:
Eddie ran down the back alley between two other buildings, he then ran up and leaned his head up against the wall covering it with his arms.

A homeless man looked from behind a trash bin over at Eddie, he walked over towards him carrying a can in his hand.

"He killed her... he killed her..." - Eddie

The homeless man leaned up against the wall beside Eddie and held up his can to Eddie.

"Change?" - Homeless Man

Eddie turned towards him.

The homeless man shook the can as it rattled from the small change inside.

"You want change?..." - Eddie

"Yeah" - Homeless Man

Eddie quickly grabbed the can and through it on the road.

Eddie turned back around towards the homeless man.

"Go get it" - Eddie

Eddie walked away from the homeless man further down the alley.

The homeless man stared in anger at Eddie and then picked up a metal pipe off of the ground. He quickly caught up with Eddie and before he could whack Eddie with the pipe, Eddie whacked the pipe out of his hand with an open palm, grabbed the man by his jacket and threw him right through a window of a lower-level apartment. Eddie breathed in rage and the symbiote began to crawl all over Eddie's body underneath his clothing. Eddie then suddenly stopped, as did the symbiote and Eddie ran off further down the alley.

Eddie walked around with a landlord in a small apartment building with even smaller rooms, the landlord opened the door to Eddie's room and inside was one room with a washroom in another one, it was simular to a motel; it had a small fridge, a bed, a cupboard, a shelf, and a small television.

"You buy?" - Landlord

Eddie pulled out his wallet and handed the landlord the money he had to pay to own the room.

Eddie closed the door behind the landlord and then took a deep breath as he then turned to the fridge to see if there was anything in it, there was a small bottle of water and baking soda. Eddie took the bottle of water then closed the fridge behind him. Eddie then sat on the edge of his bed as he began to drink the water.

Eddie then put the cap back on the bottle and put it back in the fridge. Eddie then fell flat onto his bed and tried to go to sleep but then realized there were no curtains, Eddie rotated to his side opposite of the window and then fell asleep.