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Welcome hypsters one and all. What you are about to be a part of is story driven by you, the reader. Been wanting to do this for a while, but decided to just post it now.
I have yet to decide how the story begins, but anything past my first post will depend upon your vote. Each chapter will end at a crossroad where one of several decisions can be made (about 2-3), and I will allow the allotted time between chapters serve as voting time. My goal is to post a new chapter once every week. Now, if I hit a busy week due to school, new chapters may take a tad longer. If that happens, I'll notify you guys, and apologize for it.
When will the story end? Who knows. I'll notify you guys when I decide to end the story. But, I plan at least 10 chapters. Could be more, though.
What do I need to begin? While the voting is interactive enough, I also would like to name the characters after hypsters. I will not be the main (though I will appear in the story). To start, I'd like 5 hypsters to volunteer their name to be a character. As more characters appear in the story, I will ask for more name volunteers. When you volunteer, I'd also like to get a personality profile of how you see your character. Now, I may not use your profile and do my own thing with your character to suit my story if need be, but I'll mostly try to follow the personality profile.
I would like to begin with chapter 1 this weekend. So, who's game?
Current Cast Members:
Rando
adhokk7
Spider-Man Luvr28
The-Dark-Knight
KenshinAtrain
Two-Face
BizarroAids
I Am The Knight
DRUMM3RBOY
Ziggyman
Logan's Lady
DX
Batsjoker43
SsM
The Ace of Knaves
* = needs to turn in questionairre.
Now Playing:
Chapter 13 The Rift
Unable to move, the group of time defenders led by Logans Lady are at the mercy of Randos telekinetic abilities. The rift is still open, but that is not going to last. Time is soon going to correct itself, and all of existance is going to be nothing but a memory. These thoughts pass through the mind of our heroes. Powerless to stop the inevitable. Adhokk7 has seen this moment, and only he knows what is about to come.
Rando keeps eying Spider-Man Luvr28. She can feel his stare. She feels sick to her stomach. However, she needs to try something.
Rando says Spider-Man Luvr28, calling for the henchmans attention. You
need to let us go.
Why? asks Rando. What in this world is worth saving?
What is worth destroying? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
Everything replies Rando. Spider-Man Luvr28 can see her attempts to appeal to this remorseless man are hopeless. She looks at the rift. It keeps getting smaller.
Youre such a coward says adhokk7. Rando turns around, with rage in his eyes.
Excuse me? says Rando.
Did I stutter? asks adhokk7.
What are you doing? DX asks adhokk7.
Calling it like it is says adhokk7.
Watch yourself there. You dont know who youre messing with says Rando.
I know exactly who I am messing with says adhokk7. You go around saying your crusading against the evils of man, when in reality all your doing is running. Things are tough, so you just want to destroy the whole thing and start over. Thats not manning up for what you have done. That is being a coward.
I could end you right now says Rando, pulling up a sword with his mind.
Youd only be proving me right, coward says adhokk7. Adhokk7 suddenly falls to the ground. He falls to his knees.
Ill show you a coward says Rando. Rando jets the sword at adhokk7. He grabs the sword by the handle in mid-air, and rolls toward Rando. Rando pushes adhokk7 backward, but the force of the push takes too much of Randos attention, freeing the others. They try to gather themselves. Rando looks back, and sends a telekinetic blast at them knocking them away. Adhokk7 jumps up and is about to stab Rando, when Rando swipes the blade while he is in mid-air, and stabs adhokk7 in the gut. Adhokk7s lunge allows Logans Lady to toss a sword at her side to The Ace of Knaves, whom throws it, stabbing Rando in the chest as he turns around. Rando dies almost instantly. Adhokk7 lies on the ground, barely alive. Logans Lady kneels, and pulls adhokk7 up.
Ive seen this moment in my dreams says adhokk7. He coughs up some
blood.
You did great adhokk7 says Logans Lady. Adhokk7 looks up with the last of his strength. Everyone is focused on him, but the rift is almost closed.
The rift is almost closed says adhokk7. Go!
Go, Ill stay here says Logans Lady. The others start to run toward the rift. It keeps getting smaller and smaller. Only Spider-Man Luvr28 is close enough to reach it. She reaches out her hand, and gets sucked in. Batsjoker43 arrives at the spot a split second later, but the rift is closed.
Its up to her now says SsM.
Were in good hands says adhokk7. He falls back, for the last time. Dead.
Elsewhere
Darkness is all around Spider-Man Luvr28. She has no idea where she is, nor how to find Spider-Fan and KenshinAtrain. But she must find them the only way she knows how. The way that got her this far in the journey. She must trust her instincts. She moves in all directions in seemingly no order. She feels like she is getting close though. She can sense Spider-Fans presence growing stronger.
I know youre here says Spider-Man Luvr28. I can feel you.
Why do you persist? asks Spider-Fan, whom Spider-Man Luvr28 cant see. You are far too weak to stop me.
You may be right says Spider-Man Luvr28. But unlike you, I have hope to guide me. You lost yours a long time ago. She continues to feel around the darkness.
Hope is overrated says Spider-Fans ominous voice. Hope doesnt mean results. Mankind has hoped for a better tomorrow all through history, only to see its soul get more and more corrupted. Something needs to be done.
Who assigned you judge? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
Humanity when we started messing with time replies Spider-Fan. Why cant you see the big picture?
I can see it just fine replies Spider-Man Luvr28. Why cant you. She suddenly grabs something that feels like an arm, and pulls. Spider-Fan is now seen right in front of Spider-Man Luvr28. KenshinAtrain is standing behind them.
KenshinAtrain yells Spider-Man Luvr28.
Spider-Man Luvr28? asks KenshinAtrain puzzled. Im glad youre here. Im saving time!
Spider-Fan is tricking you KenshinAtrain yells Spider-Man Luvr28. Spider-Fan slaps Spider-Man Luvr28 to the ground.
Dont listen to her KenshinAtrain says Spider-Fan. Shes trying to stop you.
But, she was chosen like me says KenshinAtrain.
A grave mistake by The-Dark-Knight, now please use the power you stored now!
Dont do it KenshinAtrain says Spider-Man Luvr28.
Shut up! says Spider-Fan, slapping Spider-Man Luvr28 back to the ground.
What are you doing? asks KenshinAtrain.
Trying to save time says Spider-Fan. Spider-Fan grabs Spider-Man Luvr28, and puts her in a chokehold. Do it or I kill her.
Shes right isnt she? asks KenshinAtrain. Youre trying to have me destroy time!
Just do it! says Spider-Fan.
NO! yells KenshinAtrain. He shoots a powerful bolt that nails Spider-Fan in the head. Spider-Man Luvr28 falls harmlessly to the ground. Spider-Fan jets backward. He gets to his knees and is about to create an illusion, when KenshinAtrain blasts him again. Spider-Fan rolls around barely conscious.
Youre making a mistake says Spider-Fan in a bit of daze.
No, you did says KeshinAtrain. He sends a powerful blast that doesnt stop at Spider-Fan. Spider-Fan screams in agony as he disappears into nothing.
Spider-Man Luvr28 gets and stand next to KenshinAtrain. She puts her hand
on his shoulder.
What do we do now? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
Im gonna fix this says KenshinAtrain.
How? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
By concentrating replies KenshinAtrain. Stand back. Spider-Man Luvr28 takes several steps back. KenshinAtrain begins to glow bright colors. Energy spews from his body, and the darkness begins to press forward. They see images of hunter-gatherers, Roman warriors, Crusaders, parachuters landing in Normandy, and this flash ends in darkness.
Epilogue
Spider-Man Luvr28 opens her eyes. She is now in her room. She looks around and sees the same text book she had been reading what seemed like weeks ago. Her roommate walks into the room.
Lets go says the roommate. Exam is in a few minuntes.
Spider-Man Luvr28 seems lost. Was all this just a dream?
Come on! yells the roommate. Spider-Man Luvr28 picks up her backpack and books. They walk out together.
Elsewhere
KenshinAtrain opens his eyes. He is now in his apartment, only it is morning now. Everything is the same as he left it. He wonders what is going on. Was he dreaming? The phone rings. He answers.
Hello? asks KenshinAtrain.
Where are you says the man on the phone. You were supposed to be here an hour ago. Were backed up!
Im sorry, I was just resting begins KenshinAtrain.
Stop resting and get down here now! yells the man. He hangs up the phone. KenshinAtrain hesitates to get up. Eventually he gets up for another day at his dead end job.
Elsewhere...
Logans Lady sits in the training room with DX, The Ace of Knaves, Batsjoker43, and SsM. The session is not going well and she is notably frustrated. She notices a man waiting in the shadows.
Take 10 guys says Logans Lady. The others scatter. Logans Lady goes to meet the man. It is The-Dark-Knight.
You chose wisely says Logans Lady.
All would have been lost without your guidance replies The-Dark-Knight. Thank you.
Poor adhokk7 says Logans Lady. He showed such courage.
He was a great man says The-Dark-Knight. We lost many great men.
We did, unfortunately says Logans Lady. At least time is safe.
For now replies The-Dark-Knight, ominously. He leaves Logans Lady on that note.
The End?
I have yet to decide how the story begins, but anything past my first post will depend upon your vote. Each chapter will end at a crossroad where one of several decisions can be made (about 2-3), and I will allow the allotted time between chapters serve as voting time. My goal is to post a new chapter once every week. Now, if I hit a busy week due to school, new chapters may take a tad longer. If that happens, I'll notify you guys, and apologize for it.
When will the story end? Who knows. I'll notify you guys when I decide to end the story. But, I plan at least 10 chapters. Could be more, though.
What do I need to begin? While the voting is interactive enough, I also would like to name the characters after hypsters. I will not be the main (though I will appear in the story). To start, I'd like 5 hypsters to volunteer their name to be a character. As more characters appear in the story, I will ask for more name volunteers. When you volunteer, I'd also like to get a personality profile of how you see your character. Now, I may not use your profile and do my own thing with your character to suit my story if need be, but I'll mostly try to follow the personality profile.
I would like to begin with chapter 1 this weekend. So, who's game?
Current Cast Members:
Rando
adhokk7
Spider-Man Luvr28
The-Dark-Knight
KenshinAtrain
Two-Face
BizarroAids
I Am The Knight
DRUMM3RBOY
Ziggyman
Logan's Lady
DX
Batsjoker43
SsM
The Ace of Knaves
* = needs to turn in questionairre.
Now Playing:
Chapter 13 The Rift
Unable to move, the group of time defenders led by Logans Lady are at the mercy of Randos telekinetic abilities. The rift is still open, but that is not going to last. Time is soon going to correct itself, and all of existance is going to be nothing but a memory. These thoughts pass through the mind of our heroes. Powerless to stop the inevitable. Adhokk7 has seen this moment, and only he knows what is about to come.
Rando keeps eying Spider-Man Luvr28. She can feel his stare. She feels sick to her stomach. However, she needs to try something.
Rando says Spider-Man Luvr28, calling for the henchmans attention. You
need to let us go.
Why? asks Rando. What in this world is worth saving?
What is worth destroying? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
Everything replies Rando. Spider-Man Luvr28 can see her attempts to appeal to this remorseless man are hopeless. She looks at the rift. It keeps getting smaller.
Youre such a coward says adhokk7. Rando turns around, with rage in his eyes.
Excuse me? says Rando.
Did I stutter? asks adhokk7.
What are you doing? DX asks adhokk7.
Calling it like it is says adhokk7.
Watch yourself there. You dont know who youre messing with says Rando.
I know exactly who I am messing with says adhokk7. You go around saying your crusading against the evils of man, when in reality all your doing is running. Things are tough, so you just want to destroy the whole thing and start over. Thats not manning up for what you have done. That is being a coward.
I could end you right now says Rando, pulling up a sword with his mind.
Youd only be proving me right, coward says adhokk7. Adhokk7 suddenly falls to the ground. He falls to his knees.
Ill show you a coward says Rando. Rando jets the sword at adhokk7. He grabs the sword by the handle in mid-air, and rolls toward Rando. Rando pushes adhokk7 backward, but the force of the push takes too much of Randos attention, freeing the others. They try to gather themselves. Rando looks back, and sends a telekinetic blast at them knocking them away. Adhokk7 jumps up and is about to stab Rando, when Rando swipes the blade while he is in mid-air, and stabs adhokk7 in the gut. Adhokk7s lunge allows Logans Lady to toss a sword at her side to The Ace of Knaves, whom throws it, stabbing Rando in the chest as he turns around. Rando dies almost instantly. Adhokk7 lies on the ground, barely alive. Logans Lady kneels, and pulls adhokk7 up.
Ive seen this moment in my dreams says adhokk7. He coughs up some
blood.
You did great adhokk7 says Logans Lady. Adhokk7 looks up with the last of his strength. Everyone is focused on him, but the rift is almost closed.
The rift is almost closed says adhokk7. Go!
Go, Ill stay here says Logans Lady. The others start to run toward the rift. It keeps getting smaller and smaller. Only Spider-Man Luvr28 is close enough to reach it. She reaches out her hand, and gets sucked in. Batsjoker43 arrives at the spot a split second later, but the rift is closed.
Its up to her now says SsM.
Were in good hands says adhokk7. He falls back, for the last time. Dead.
Elsewhere
Darkness is all around Spider-Man Luvr28. She has no idea where she is, nor how to find Spider-Fan and KenshinAtrain. But she must find them the only way she knows how. The way that got her this far in the journey. She must trust her instincts. She moves in all directions in seemingly no order. She feels like she is getting close though. She can sense Spider-Fans presence growing stronger.
I know youre here says Spider-Man Luvr28. I can feel you.
Why do you persist? asks Spider-Fan, whom Spider-Man Luvr28 cant see. You are far too weak to stop me.
You may be right says Spider-Man Luvr28. But unlike you, I have hope to guide me. You lost yours a long time ago. She continues to feel around the darkness.
Hope is overrated says Spider-Fans ominous voice. Hope doesnt mean results. Mankind has hoped for a better tomorrow all through history, only to see its soul get more and more corrupted. Something needs to be done.
Who assigned you judge? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
Humanity when we started messing with time replies Spider-Fan. Why cant you see the big picture?
I can see it just fine replies Spider-Man Luvr28. Why cant you. She suddenly grabs something that feels like an arm, and pulls. Spider-Fan is now seen right in front of Spider-Man Luvr28. KenshinAtrain is standing behind them.
KenshinAtrain yells Spider-Man Luvr28.
Spider-Man Luvr28? asks KenshinAtrain puzzled. Im glad youre here. Im saving time!
Spider-Fan is tricking you KenshinAtrain yells Spider-Man Luvr28. Spider-Fan slaps Spider-Man Luvr28 to the ground.
Dont listen to her KenshinAtrain says Spider-Fan. Shes trying to stop you.
But, she was chosen like me says KenshinAtrain.
A grave mistake by The-Dark-Knight, now please use the power you stored now!
Dont do it KenshinAtrain says Spider-Man Luvr28.
Shut up! says Spider-Fan, slapping Spider-Man Luvr28 back to the ground.
What are you doing? asks KenshinAtrain.
Trying to save time says Spider-Fan. Spider-Fan grabs Spider-Man Luvr28, and puts her in a chokehold. Do it or I kill her.
Shes right isnt she? asks KenshinAtrain. Youre trying to have me destroy time!
Just do it! says Spider-Fan.
NO! yells KenshinAtrain. He shoots a powerful bolt that nails Spider-Fan in the head. Spider-Man Luvr28 falls harmlessly to the ground. Spider-Fan jets backward. He gets to his knees and is about to create an illusion, when KenshinAtrain blasts him again. Spider-Fan rolls around barely conscious.
Youre making a mistake says Spider-Fan in a bit of daze.
No, you did says KeshinAtrain. He sends a powerful blast that doesnt stop at Spider-Fan. Spider-Fan screams in agony as he disappears into nothing.
Spider-Man Luvr28 gets and stand next to KenshinAtrain. She puts her hand
on his shoulder.
What do we do now? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
Im gonna fix this says KenshinAtrain.
How? asks Spider-Man Luvr28.
By concentrating replies KenshinAtrain. Stand back. Spider-Man Luvr28 takes several steps back. KenshinAtrain begins to glow bright colors. Energy spews from his body, and the darkness begins to press forward. They see images of hunter-gatherers, Roman warriors, Crusaders, parachuters landing in Normandy, and this flash ends in darkness.
Epilogue
Spider-Man Luvr28 opens her eyes. She is now in her room. She looks around and sees the same text book she had been reading what seemed like weeks ago. Her roommate walks into the room.
Lets go says the roommate. Exam is in a few minuntes.
Spider-Man Luvr28 seems lost. Was all this just a dream?
Come on! yells the roommate. Spider-Man Luvr28 picks up her backpack and books. They walk out together.
Elsewhere
KenshinAtrain opens his eyes. He is now in his apartment, only it is morning now. Everything is the same as he left it. He wonders what is going on. Was he dreaming? The phone rings. He answers.
Hello? asks KenshinAtrain.
Where are you says the man on the phone. You were supposed to be here an hour ago. Were backed up!
Im sorry, I was just resting begins KenshinAtrain.
Stop resting and get down here now! yells the man. He hangs up the phone. KenshinAtrain hesitates to get up. Eventually he gets up for another day at his dead end job.
Elsewhere...
Logans Lady sits in the training room with DX, The Ace of Knaves, Batsjoker43, and SsM. The session is not going well and she is notably frustrated. She notices a man waiting in the shadows.
Take 10 guys says Logans Lady. The others scatter. Logans Lady goes to meet the man. It is The-Dark-Knight.
You chose wisely says Logans Lady.
All would have been lost without your guidance replies The-Dark-Knight. Thank you.
Poor adhokk7 says Logans Lady. He showed such courage.
He was a great man says The-Dark-Knight. We lost many great men.
We did, unfortunately says Logans Lady. At least time is safe.
For now replies The-Dark-Knight, ominously. He leaves Logans Lady on that note.
The End?
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