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FIVE-MINUTE DAREDEVIL PART 3, THE "I HAVE ALLERGIES, SO I'M ABOUT TO SIT MY ASS DOWN ON THE COUCH, EAT PIZZA, AND WATCH TOMBSTONE" EDITION.
We pan up the side of a building (just like in Batman for Jack Palance's character) to see Kingpin. Some generic rap song about being a dirty dog (because he's a GANGSTA, you see) is playing and Kingpin is posed with his cane in between his legs, like no one ever stands in real-life unless they think it makes them look cool, when in reality they just look like tools.
KINGPIN: Bwahahahaha! Look at me! I'm really big, so I must be scary! Bwahaha!
WESLEY: Sir, your lieutenants are here to see you.
The lieutenants pile in, NATCHIOS (Elektra's father. IT ALL TIES TOGETHER!) is one of them.
NATCHIOS: Good news, sir. No one believes there could be one person responsible for all the major crimes in a city, even though there have been such real-life crime lords as Carlo Gambino, John Gotti and Boss Tweed.
KINGPIN: Good. It would take some kind of 'superhero' to bring us down. This hypothetical 'foe of evil' would have to be relentless and possibly red-garbed. But not in leather, otherwise he would look like an Xtreme version of the Kool-Aid Man.
DAREDEVIL: (busting through wall) OH YEAH!
NATCHIOS: Well, that was disconcerting. Listen, I was around for Year One in Falcone's day. I know not to stick in the rackets once you hear about some shadowy hero. I'm dropping out.
KINGPIN: Oh yes. You're going to drop out alright. MWAHAHAHAHAHA!
NATCHIOS: Was I supposed to fall to my doom or something?
KINGPIN: Oh, sorry, that's going to be Bullseye. Just like Joker in Batman. Now then. You wanted to get out of the evil business for no real reason.
NATCHIOS: I never said that. The WB made me a very good offer!
KINGPIN: Well. The press wants to know who's Kingpin, we'll give them a Kingpin. A DEAD Kingpin!
WESLEY: No! Don't commit suicide!
NATCHIOS: I'm still right here.
***
SPIDER-MAN: Wow, what a coincidence that Natchios is leaving just as his daughter falls in love with you.
DAREDEVIL: Yeah, anyway...
Suddenly, a giant racket comes from the outside of the church. JUGGERNAUT, his head twisted 180 degrees, flies through the door. A midget-sized, bean-shaped creature floats through the door.
PRIEST: Hey! It's Doop!
DOOP: sodjgnbo[fdash
SPIDER-MAN: Wow. I thought for sure Wolverine or Punisher would show up.
DOOP: asdgjbsfgcxxb
SPIDER-MAN: Well, if that's the case, I can see why they wouldn't be here!
DOOP: sagjbsfgujxcv
DAREDEVIL: What? He's just saying gibberish.
SPIDER-MAN: No he's not. He's speaking perfect English.
DOOP: sdfgoiuhfhoj
SPIDER-MAN: Of course. As comic book characters grow apart from their source, they hear less and less of Doop. Why, during the Clone Saga, I couldn't understand him either.
DOOP: sdfhgjbnxcbucvvv
SPIDER-MAN: You shouldn't say that about Quentin Black. His relationship with his mother is his own business.
DOOP: adguodvhdgjhusfgjcvjhndztju
SPIDER-MAN: My daughter? I don't have a daughter!
DOOP: ashfonbucvbjjjj!
SPIDER-MAN: Trouble? In the future?
DOOP: adgfuojbcxbjjjadg[ojojbbzxcbzsfdh
SPIDER-MAN: Good God! Sorry guys, I've gotta go back.
DAREDEVIL: Back? Back where?
DOOP: BaCK... tO tHe FUtuRe!
DAREDEVIL: Don't say it so loud. You'll wake the whole neighborhood.
ELEKTRA: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
Spider-Man and Doop run out. There's a bright flash and Spider-Man walks back in, followed by SPIDER-GIRL.
SPIDER-MAN: And THIS is Daddy's rival.
SPIDER-GIRL: Ah, the jackass.
SPIDER-MAN: Yes. As I remember, before I fought with Dr. Doom, met Captain Britain, and for a strange interlude fought side-by-side with Dormammu against the Brood, he was telling us about his movie.
SPIDER-GIRL: Daredevil? Ah yes, we studied it in Film Critique 101. We had to write an essay about all the pointless changes from the comic to the screen.
PRIEST: What'd you make?
SPIDER-GIRL: I pointed out how Daredevil doesn't kill and cross-referenced it with another essay about how Man Without Fear isn't canon. That got me an A!
SPIDER-MAN: That's my girl!
He gives Spider-Girl a hug.
DAREDEVIL: A loving daughter. Something I can never have.
PRIEST: Why not? You and Elektra seemed to be getting along great. In a few months or so, I'm sure you'd have a healthy relationship.
DAREDEVIL: Ha!
***
ELEKTRA: (Hey, there's Matt. I bet I can surprise him...) Sneak sneak sneak...
MATT: Hi Elektra.
ELEKTRA: WOW! Bza-frtzz-jop! Don't do that!
MATT: Wanna know how I did it?
ELEKTRA: Yes, actually.
MATT: I'll tell you if you go on a date with me.
ELEKTRA: O-tay!
"Raindrops keep falling on my head" plays as we get a montage of Matt and Elektra buying cotton candy, riding on a Merry-Go-Round, screaming on a roller-coaster, posing with a scantily-clad 'superheroine', getting matching tattoos, walking out of a screening of Platoon laughing, etc.
SPIDER-MAN: You know, I'm starting to worry that your soundtrack is going to date your movie.
DAREDEVIL: Shut up! You're talking over the barbershop quartet!
ELEKTRA: I had a great time at the carnival, Matt.
MATT: What carnival? That was Times Square!
ELEKTRA: Wow, Rudy really did clean it up! Too bad about the porno theaters. I'm not unable to indulge my fetish for rooftop sex.
MATT: That's funny, because there's something really cool on the top of the restored gym where I live.
ELEKTRA: All the gym socks you hung out to dry?
MATT: Besides that.
***
SPIDER-GIRL: So, anyway, the reason their relationship worked in the original comics was that it didn't profess to show every moment of their relationship. We could 'fill in the blanks'.
SPIDER-MAN: Just like Anakin and Padme in Attack Of The Clones.
SPIDER-GIRL: Exactly. But here, we're supposed to believe they're soulmates from what amounts to a one-night stand. It just happens too fast. He seems to be solely interested in her for her looks and she for his fighting prowess.
DAREDEVIL: There's a good explanation for that!
SPIDER-GIRL: Really?
DAREDEVIL: Yeah... she's Jennifer Garner
SPIDER-GIRL: By the way, how do mommies and daddies have babies?
SPIDER-MAN: Well, uh, I, err...
SPIDER-GIRL: Just kidding! Future You already told me!
SPIDER-MAN: Great, now I have something to dread.
SPIDER-GIRL: You already have Venom.
SPIDER-MAN: Who?
SPIDER-GIRL: Oh, nothing. Word to the wise: If you see the X-Men, Fantastic Four, Avengers, and Captain America all in the same place, run.
CAPTAIN AMERICA: Somebody call our name?
Captain America, Thor, and Iron Man walk in.
DAREDEVIL: You here to hear about my movie too?
IRON MAN: No, we're just here for the service.
CAPTAIN AMERICA: I can't get into moving pictures. I prefer a good book.
THOR: And the son of Odin doth misunderstand thy 'books'. His prowess lies in yonder papyrus scrolls!
DAREDEVIL: Right. Anyway, where was I?
***
Daredevil is swinging through the city, carrying Elektra in one arm.
DAREDEVIL: Can you read my mind?
THOR: That be Superman.
PRIEST: I thought you didn't know movies.
CAPTAIN: If some schmuck grabs his hammer and blabs about 'different power levels', you bet he wants to know about it.
THOR: Aye. The Lord of Asgard looks forward with vigor to thy 'rematch'.
DAREDEVIL: Anyhoo...
***
ELEKTRA: Looks like it's going to rain. We'd better go inside.
MATT: Wait. Don't.
ELEKTRA: What, you want the raindrops to give you a 'picture' of me? I thought you could already see, even though you're blind.
MATT: Actually, I just wanted to see you with a white T-shirt soaking wet.
ELEKTRA: I'm not wearing a white T-shirt.
MATT: Who's telling this story? I've never felt this way before. About anyone. Not even Karen Page. Or Heather Glenn. Or... sorry. Anyway, I love you, girl. I want tonight to be special.
WOMAN: Come see the violence inherent in the system! Help, help, I'm being repressed!
ELEKTRA: Aren't you going to save her?
MATT: I would, but SMOOCH!
They're suddenly having sex in Matt's bedroom.
SPIDER-GIRL: Groody!
DAREDEVIL: Is that a good thing?
The foreground blurs and we focus on the fireplace. Then track up to another blazing fireplace. Then sideways to the window, where it's raining heavily. Then back again to Matt and Elektra.
MATT: I swear, that's never happened to me before.
***
SPIDER-MAN: So, you just let some crime go unanswered? What the hell kind of superhero are you?
CAPTAIN AMERICA: He's right. Avengers By-Law 017-F, Paragraph-C, CLEARLY states that to be a superhero, each prospective superhero must abandon significant other to avert crime or other crisis.
DAREDEVIL: Yeah? Well, we did it. So there.
SPIDER-MAN: Fine. Move on.
DAREDEVIL: Okay...
DAREDEVIL: She gave me head.
SPIDER-MAN: Stop lying and get on with the story!
DAREDEVIL: Okay. In a wacky turn of events, it turns out that the woman was raped. And that the rapist was none other then Jose Quesada (and how do you like us 'honoring' someone by naming a rapist after him?), who I would kill for the selfsame crime.
SPIDER-MAN: But that makes no SENSE!
DAREDEVIL: Does it? Watch Big Fish and get back to me.
SPIDER-GIRL: Dad, your rival sucks.
SPIDER-MAN: Now, now. Don't say that until you've read something by Frank Miller. Or Brian Michael Bendis.
SPIDER-GIRL: I've read Sin City and Jinx and Daredevil STILL sucks.
SPIDER-MAN: I meant one of their works on Daredevil.
SPIDER-GIRL: Ah. By the way, what's a clitoris?
Spider-Man does a Rodney Dangerfield tug on his collar.
SPIDER-MAN: Humina humina humina...
DAREDEVIL: Hell if I know, kid.
DAREDEVIL: She swallowed.
SPIDER-MAN: STOP THAT!
We pan up the side of a building (just like in Batman for Jack Palance's character) to see Kingpin. Some generic rap song about being a dirty dog (because he's a GANGSTA, you see) is playing and Kingpin is posed with his cane in between his legs, like no one ever stands in real-life unless they think it makes them look cool, when in reality they just look like tools.
KINGPIN: Bwahahahaha! Look at me! I'm really big, so I must be scary! Bwahaha!
WESLEY: Sir, your lieutenants are here to see you.
The lieutenants pile in, NATCHIOS (Elektra's father. IT ALL TIES TOGETHER!) is one of them.
NATCHIOS: Good news, sir. No one believes there could be one person responsible for all the major crimes in a city, even though there have been such real-life crime lords as Carlo Gambino, John Gotti and Boss Tweed.
KINGPIN: Good. It would take some kind of 'superhero' to bring us down. This hypothetical 'foe of evil' would have to be relentless and possibly red-garbed. But not in leather, otherwise he would look like an Xtreme version of the Kool-Aid Man.
DAREDEVIL: (busting through wall) OH YEAH!
NATCHIOS: Well, that was disconcerting. Listen, I was around for Year One in Falcone's day. I know not to stick in the rackets once you hear about some shadowy hero. I'm dropping out.
KINGPIN: Oh yes. You're going to drop out alright. MWAHAHAHAHAHA!
NATCHIOS: Was I supposed to fall to my doom or something?
KINGPIN: Oh, sorry, that's going to be Bullseye. Just like Joker in Batman. Now then. You wanted to get out of the evil business for no real reason.
NATCHIOS: I never said that. The WB made me a very good offer!
KINGPIN: Well. The press wants to know who's Kingpin, we'll give them a Kingpin. A DEAD Kingpin!
WESLEY: No! Don't commit suicide!
NATCHIOS: I'm still right here.
***
SPIDER-MAN: Wow, what a coincidence that Natchios is leaving just as his daughter falls in love with you.
DAREDEVIL: Yeah, anyway...
Suddenly, a giant racket comes from the outside of the church. JUGGERNAUT, his head twisted 180 degrees, flies through the door. A midget-sized, bean-shaped creature floats through the door.
PRIEST: Hey! It's Doop!
DOOP: sodjgnbo[fdash
SPIDER-MAN: Wow. I thought for sure Wolverine or Punisher would show up.
DOOP: asdgjbsfgcxxb
SPIDER-MAN: Well, if that's the case, I can see why they wouldn't be here!
DOOP: sagjbsfgujxcv
DAREDEVIL: What? He's just saying gibberish.
SPIDER-MAN: No he's not. He's speaking perfect English.
DOOP: sdfgoiuhfhoj
SPIDER-MAN: Of course. As comic book characters grow apart from their source, they hear less and less of Doop. Why, during the Clone Saga, I couldn't understand him either.
DOOP: sdfhgjbnxcbucvvv
SPIDER-MAN: You shouldn't say that about Quentin Black. His relationship with his mother is his own business.
DOOP: adguodvhdgjhusfgjcvjhndztju
SPIDER-MAN: My daughter? I don't have a daughter!
DOOP: ashfonbucvbjjjj!
SPIDER-MAN: Trouble? In the future?
DOOP: adgfuojbcxbjjjadg[ojojbbzxcbzsfdh
SPIDER-MAN: Good God! Sorry guys, I've gotta go back.
DAREDEVIL: Back? Back where?
DOOP: BaCK... tO tHe FUtuRe!
DAREDEVIL: Don't say it so loud. You'll wake the whole neighborhood.
ELEKTRA: Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
Spider-Man and Doop run out. There's a bright flash and Spider-Man walks back in, followed by SPIDER-GIRL.
SPIDER-MAN: And THIS is Daddy's rival.
SPIDER-GIRL: Ah, the jackass.
SPIDER-MAN: Yes. As I remember, before I fought with Dr. Doom, met Captain Britain, and for a strange interlude fought side-by-side with Dormammu against the Brood, he was telling us about his movie.
SPIDER-GIRL: Daredevil? Ah yes, we studied it in Film Critique 101. We had to write an essay about all the pointless changes from the comic to the screen.
PRIEST: What'd you make?
SPIDER-GIRL: I pointed out how Daredevil doesn't kill and cross-referenced it with another essay about how Man Without Fear isn't canon. That got me an A!
SPIDER-MAN: That's my girl!
He gives Spider-Girl a hug.
DAREDEVIL: A loving daughter. Something I can never have.
PRIEST: Why not? You and Elektra seemed to be getting along great. In a few months or so, I'm sure you'd have a healthy relationship.
DAREDEVIL: Ha!
***
ELEKTRA: (Hey, there's Matt. I bet I can surprise him...) Sneak sneak sneak...
MATT: Hi Elektra.
ELEKTRA: WOW! Bza-frtzz-jop! Don't do that!
MATT: Wanna know how I did it?
ELEKTRA: Yes, actually.
MATT: I'll tell you if you go on a date with me.
ELEKTRA: O-tay!
"Raindrops keep falling on my head" plays as we get a montage of Matt and Elektra buying cotton candy, riding on a Merry-Go-Round, screaming on a roller-coaster, posing with a scantily-clad 'superheroine', getting matching tattoos, walking out of a screening of Platoon laughing, etc.
SPIDER-MAN: You know, I'm starting to worry that your soundtrack is going to date your movie.
DAREDEVIL: Shut up! You're talking over the barbershop quartet!
ELEKTRA: I had a great time at the carnival, Matt.
MATT: What carnival? That was Times Square!
ELEKTRA: Wow, Rudy really did clean it up! Too bad about the porno theaters. I'm not unable to indulge my fetish for rooftop sex.
MATT: That's funny, because there's something really cool on the top of the restored gym where I live.
ELEKTRA: All the gym socks you hung out to dry?
MATT: Besides that.
***
SPIDER-GIRL: So, anyway, the reason their relationship worked in the original comics was that it didn't profess to show every moment of their relationship. We could 'fill in the blanks'.
SPIDER-MAN: Just like Anakin and Padme in Attack Of The Clones.
SPIDER-GIRL: Exactly. But here, we're supposed to believe they're soulmates from what amounts to a one-night stand. It just happens too fast. He seems to be solely interested in her for her looks and she for his fighting prowess.
DAREDEVIL: There's a good explanation for that!
SPIDER-GIRL: Really?
DAREDEVIL: Yeah... she's Jennifer Garner
SPIDER-GIRL: By the way, how do mommies and daddies have babies?
SPIDER-MAN: Well, uh, I, err...
SPIDER-GIRL: Just kidding! Future You already told me!
SPIDER-MAN: Great, now I have something to dread.
SPIDER-GIRL: You already have Venom.
SPIDER-MAN: Who?
SPIDER-GIRL: Oh, nothing. Word to the wise: If you see the X-Men, Fantastic Four, Avengers, and Captain America all in the same place, run.
CAPTAIN AMERICA: Somebody call our name?
Captain America, Thor, and Iron Man walk in.
DAREDEVIL: You here to hear about my movie too?
IRON MAN: No, we're just here for the service.
CAPTAIN AMERICA: I can't get into moving pictures. I prefer a good book.
THOR: And the son of Odin doth misunderstand thy 'books'. His prowess lies in yonder papyrus scrolls!
DAREDEVIL: Right. Anyway, where was I?
***
Daredevil is swinging through the city, carrying Elektra in one arm.
DAREDEVIL: Can you read my mind?
THOR: That be Superman.
PRIEST: I thought you didn't know movies.
CAPTAIN: If some schmuck grabs his hammer and blabs about 'different power levels', you bet he wants to know about it.
THOR: Aye. The Lord of Asgard looks forward with vigor to thy 'rematch'.
DAREDEVIL: Anyhoo...
***
ELEKTRA: Looks like it's going to rain. We'd better go inside.
MATT: Wait. Don't.
ELEKTRA: What, you want the raindrops to give you a 'picture' of me? I thought you could already see, even though you're blind.
MATT: Actually, I just wanted to see you with a white T-shirt soaking wet.
ELEKTRA: I'm not wearing a white T-shirt.
MATT: Who's telling this story? I've never felt this way before. About anyone. Not even Karen Page. Or Heather Glenn. Or... sorry. Anyway, I love you, girl. I want tonight to be special.
WOMAN: Come see the violence inherent in the system! Help, help, I'm being repressed!
ELEKTRA: Aren't you going to save her?
MATT: I would, but SMOOCH!
They're suddenly having sex in Matt's bedroom.
SPIDER-GIRL: Groody!
DAREDEVIL: Is that a good thing?
The foreground blurs and we focus on the fireplace. Then track up to another blazing fireplace. Then sideways to the window, where it's raining heavily. Then back again to Matt and Elektra.
MATT: I swear, that's never happened to me before.
***
SPIDER-MAN: So, you just let some crime go unanswered? What the hell kind of superhero are you?
CAPTAIN AMERICA: He's right. Avengers By-Law 017-F, Paragraph-C, CLEARLY states that to be a superhero, each prospective superhero must abandon significant other to avert crime or other crisis.
DAREDEVIL: Yeah? Well, we did it. So there.
SPIDER-MAN: Fine. Move on.
DAREDEVIL: Okay...
DAREDEVIL: She gave me head.
SPIDER-MAN: Stop lying and get on with the story!
DAREDEVIL: Okay. In a wacky turn of events, it turns out that the woman was raped. And that the rapist was none other then Jose Quesada (and how do you like us 'honoring' someone by naming a rapist after him?), who I would kill for the selfsame crime.
SPIDER-MAN: But that makes no SENSE!
DAREDEVIL: Does it? Watch Big Fish and get back to me.
SPIDER-GIRL: Dad, your rival sucks.
SPIDER-MAN: Now, now. Don't say that until you've read something by Frank Miller. Or Brian Michael Bendis.
SPIDER-GIRL: I've read Sin City and Jinx and Daredevil STILL sucks.
SPIDER-MAN: I meant one of their works on Daredevil.
SPIDER-GIRL: Ah. By the way, what's a clitoris?
Spider-Man does a Rodney Dangerfield tug on his collar.
SPIDER-MAN: Humina humina humina...
DAREDEVIL: Hell if I know, kid.
DAREDEVIL: She swallowed.
SPIDER-MAN: STOP THAT!