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Twentieth Century Fox Presents:
X-Men: The Series
Gifted
A screenplay by James E. Michaels
Directed by Joss Whedon

Starring: Chris Carmack (The OC) as Scott Summers/Cyclops, Matthew Fox (Lost) as Logan/ Wolverine, Rhiana (Entourage) Ororo Monroe/ Storm, Dominic Monaghan(Lost) as Hank McCoy/ Beast, with Micha Barton (The OC) as Jean Grey, and Patrick Stewart(Star Trek: The Next Gen.) as Charles Xavier/ Professor X

Guest starring: Tricia Helfer as Mystique, William Mapother as General Anderson, and Christopher Lee as Magneto

(A black screen)

( an unseen man’s voice very strong and intelligent)

Prof. X: Strength, determination, defiance because there is nothing wrong with disliking the way the world is, and oh, there is the other requirement to be apart of my school.
(Quick flashes of children come in and out of focus: The first is a brown haired boy releasing red energy from his eyes, the second a young girl with white hair in Kenya summoning lightning behind her while levitating in a meditative Indian style stance, a boy with oversized hands, feet, and body structure being teased on a playground because he has bad dandruff which he scratches with his leg like a dog, and a girl running to her friend crying. A car speeds away. The girl looks up towards the camera and fiery energy erupts in her eyes)

(Xavier in the mansion study quarter)

Prof. X: You must be… Gifted.

(Enter scene with General Anderson and an unseen man in the shadows of the room in jail uniform, a chair handcuffed, and being interrogated by the General in an industrious room inside a FBI tank on the move)

General Anderson: Tell me what you did! Now!

(The unseen man replies with a strong almost maniacal voice): I’m sorry general I’m not at liberty to say. (He busts into laughter as the General gets more irritated)
General Anderson: What did you do to my family!

The unseen man: How is your wife and children General?

(The general pulls out a gun made up of a strange clear substance)

The unseen man: They screamed as they died General. It was delightful.

General Anderson: You sun of a B**CH! You sun of a *****! (He says hysterically as he yanks out a young girl with blonde hair with the gun to her head) We caught you with this girl. Is she one of your mutant posy?! I swear I’ll kill this innocent little angel if you don’t tell me now! (He says caressing her face sadistically)

(Laughter from the unseen man)

General Anderson: What are you laughin at?! (He begins to get more frantic) Mistake of nature! Tell me!

(Unseen man reveals himself to be a tall slender yet well built man with white/grayish hair): She’s not that innocent.

(The General suddenly feels skin stretching and morphing into another form.
He looks in a state of panic as it forms into a blue skinned ravened haired woman wearing black sexy leather on she quickly gives the man an uppercut he instantly is knocked out.)

The woman: Hello lover.

The man: Hello Mystique

(They walk out of the room with a great swagger)

(Enter scene where a man in Army garb runs to the unconscious General)

Man: General they escaped! They took out 3 of our tanks!

(General Anderson saying to self): I have nothing to live for…Why didn’t they just kill me? Why didn’t they just kill me? (He keeps repeating)

(In a secret base of operations of Erik Lenshur and his band of terrorist mutant clan)

Mystique: Magneto, why didn’t we kill him?

Magneto: Because my dear, it is more fun this way.

(Enter scene in a schoolish looking room with a bald man in a wheelchair and four other students in the room: One with glasses with red frames and brown hair looking like he is paying close attention, one with very beautiful green eyes, brown skin, and white hair looking rather upset, one with dark brown hair and a strong upper body hanging upside down with his feet from a bar on the sealing, and a fiery haired girl with a pen in her mouth fidgeting with it looking like she is trying to get the boy with glasses attention by being sexy but he doesn’t stop paying attention.)

Charles Xavier/Prof. X: That will be all for today class. Mrs. McTaggert will now give you your genetics lesson but before I you go is there anything you’d like to say about today’s lesson about Nikola Tesla?

Ororo Monroe/Storm: (She says with an African accent) Yes. I do Professor.

Prof.X: Yes?

Storm: If he was so smart why didn’t he sign off on his inventions patents? He died penniless because he was he didn’t sign a piece of paper that does not seem so smart to me.

Prof. X: That is unknown Ororo, what is known is that he did not care for personal items. His entire life was a discovery he wanted to harness the power of electricity which he thought was the key to life itself.

Strom: I can do that in my sleep. (She says jokingly)

Prof.X: Well, we can’t all be manipulators of the whether now can we? Now, if you will all excuse me I have someone in my office.

(The Professor leaves driving toward his office. When he gets there he sees a man with strange hair waiting for him)

Prof.X: Hello, Logan isn’t it?

(Enter scene with the student looking at a screen with a brunette woman teaching them about the genetic code with a thick scottish accent.)

Moira: Now the difference between me and your genetic code and mine is that…
(She’s interrupted by Ororo)

Storm: Mrs. McTaggert why do we have to be so secretive about or gifts?

Moira: You all know why. We don’t live in the most forgiving society. They may not undastand your uniqueness.

Storm: I think that’s stupid.

Scott Summers/Cyclops: If Moira and the Professor think that that’s for the best than I for one say who we to disagree?

Hank McCoy/ Beast: Oh yeah says the Teachers pet!

Cyclops: Talk about pets you overgrown Quasimodo!

(Scott and Hank get up like they are about to fight)

Jean Grey: THAT’S ENOUGH! (She says with her words ringing in their ears) Now sit! Both of you!

(They do so muttering to themselves then suddenly a the Professors voice comes from there mind)

Prof. X’s voice: My student there is someone I want you to meet. Report to the Danger room immediately.

(Enter scene them all in walking down a long hallway very industrious with X’s on the doors they push a button on one it opens and they walk through)

Cyclops: Whats going on Professor?

(They all look in amazement at the man standing next to the Proffesor)

Professor X: This is Logan he will be your new athletic instructor.

(Jean to Storm): Hottie alert much! (They let out a laugh and Scott looks uncomfortable)

Cyclops: I’m sorry Professor but I for one…

Wolverine: Look I ain’t tryin to be yalls babysitter I’m just tryin to give you skills to help you survive in the world we live in.

Cyclops: Whatever.

Professor X: You will listen to him Scott and you all know I would do it if I weren’t... Wheel-bound I suppose.

Cyclops: Fine.

(Professor leaves and a montage of the X-Men goes through with all of them giving Logan a lot of resistance except Jean which makes Cyclops very upset. Cyclops hits him with a low blast and says “Sorry. Slipped” They finnish they’re training and go to the changing room)

(Girls Locker Room)

Storm: You little hoe.

Jean: What?

Storm: I so saw you crushing on our teacher. What about Scott?

Jean: I can’t wait forever Ororo I mean God can he get anymore stuck-up but I- I don’t know

(Boys Locker Room)

Cyclops: I don’t know Hank I just can’t…

Beast: If you wait any longer your gonna mis out

(Close up on Cyclops face then fade out)

(Commercial BREAK)
 
I'm having an extremely hard time with your casting choices lol. Matthew Fox seems to tall and ahem...."Scrawny" to play Logan. And Mischa...but these are just opinions, continue
 
For those interested this is the rest of th episode

Storm: I still can’t believe you are hot for our teacher.

Jean: I am not!

Storm: You so are so girl.

Jean: Well he has things and yah know the thing and…the …. Thing.

Storm: You realize the none of the sense that made right?

(Looks at her with flushed cheeks)

Storm: You are so doing it.

Jean: So doing what Ororo?

Storm: That thing you do when you are so obviously trying to act like you don’t like someone when you really do.

Jean: I so am not.

Storm: You so are so. (Saying it pointedly as if she was over the matter)

Jean: This is ridiculous! I am not hot for teach….

(She is interrupted by Logan walking by the girls locker room and they both look fondly as he walks away)

Jean: … but he does have a nice butt.

(on TV the next morning)

Anchor (with images of Magnetos rampage through the city and the President speaking): Since the escape of terrorist mutant Erick Maxwell Lenshur ,or also referred to by other mutants as Magneto, the president issued a national “Watch for mutants“ bill. This bill along with many others is to create order in a mutant populated world. (Click Professor X turns off the TV abruptly)

(Enter scene with him and Jean grey in Cerebro a round room with a michine that helps him locate mutants)

Jean: Hey I was watching that.

Prof. X: That’s enough for know Jean.

Jean: Prof: Professor you’re wigging aren’t you?

Prof. X: No.

Jean: You are so in wig mode. Okay so that was a lame term but it’s still true. Spill. What does this this guy mean to you?

(He looks at her very seriously and begins)

Prof. X: He used to mean everything….
(FLASBACK: Enter younger versions of Prof. X and Magneto laughing in a medical room as they talk to a patient and men coming in and taking the patient in Nazi garb they have her captive until Prof. X and Magneto get there while voice over of Prof. X speaking)

Prof. X Voice over: I worked in a medical hospital for outreach group to holocaust survivors, I secretly using my abilities to help heal their mental states, I acquired an aid ,Erick Lensherr, who assisted me. We became close, he became like the brother I never had. Then Nazi upheavals broke into our small clinic to take five of our remaining patients. We save the ones we could revealing for the first time to each other, or anyone, our long hidden mutant abilities. But after we saved them Erik wasn’t through he lost his family during the holocaust, he tried to kill the man I STOPED HIM. I tried to help him deal with his pain but god, I’ve never seen such a change in a man.

Prof. X: After then he went on to form the terrorist group known as the Brotherhood. He has slane so many since that day. I will always think of him as my biggest failure.

Jean: It’s not your fault Professor. (He looks at her as if to dissagree) Really, he has control over his actions.

(She looks at him with empathy then suddenly an alarm sounds the computer picks up that a mutant is destroying the inner part of a chemical plant)

Cerebro(the computer): Disturbance at Coordinates Ravelo Drive....

Prof. X: (speaking over the computer) My god, call the other X-Men into the War Room.

(Scared and concerned by his serious tone)

Jean: What for Professor?

Prof. X: Do as I say! Now!

(Commercial again tell me what you think again)
 
(Time Lapse: All the X-Men are in the War Room, a room of which they discuss strategy)

Cyclops: Professor, easy… now can you explain to us everything calmly?

Prof. X: I’m not sure if that is possible Scott.

Jean Grey: Don’t worry, I got it Professor. (Jean turns to her compatriots) So I guess he knew this guy, a mutant guy, and he totally pulled a Darth Vader and turned on him. He was in the slammer but broke free. Am I getting this right so far Prof? (Prof. X who can’t help but looking bemused nods his head in reassurance. She goes on) Now P. X. thinks that he’s tryin tah make this big “ka-bam” (waves her hands ferociously) at the Power Plant.

Beast: In English that would mean?

Storm: (trying to elaborate what Jean meant) He is trying to destroy the power plant…(all look at her serious)

Cyclops Cont.: (realization)…and with it half of New York City.

Beast: (jokingly) Thanks Ororo.

Storm: (quips) What can I say? I’m the Jean translation expert.

Beast: (to Prof. X) (confused) But how do you know it is truly him, you said his helmet prevents him from being targeted by psoinic attack, or found psychically, if you don’t mind me asking, of course Professor?

Prof. X: Trust me Hank; I know it‘s him. (he investigates the room) Where is Logan?

(Logan walks in looking oddly suspicious)

Logan: (as if he heard Prof. X’s beckoning) Y-Yeah.

Prof. X: You will be in over-all command (Scott looks extremely uncomfortable and glares at Logan behind his large ruby quartz sunglasses, which are the only thing keeping him from staring directly at Logan eviscerating him completely with raw energy. He silently wishes he could release his force blast from his eyes and hit Logan with all he had. All unbeknownst to Logan at the other side of the room)

Jean Grey: This should be cool. (She says starring at Logan fawningly)

Logan: I don’t know professor… this isn’t what I signed up for. Besides I’m not much of a leader.

Jean Grey: Cummon it’ll be fun? (His scowl turns to bemusement)

Prof. X: Don’t be modest Logan. You come with great credentials of leading in combat from the Canadian Army. Now, all of you, suite up. (he says dismissing his self doubt as if he wouldn’t hear another word of it and leaves, with Cyclops on his tail )

(Enter scene in the hallway with Prof. X and Cyclops speaking)

Cyclops: What do you even know about this guy? I don’t understand… Why didn‘t you choose me to lead the team?

Prof. X: Oh Scott, Your not ready.

Cyclops: Your wrong. (He hit’s the wall on his left side with his right fist) Your wrong!

Prof. X: Scott… (he examines him quickly then squints his eyes in concentration) This isn’t just about leadership over the team. Your jealous of him aren‘t you?

Cyclops: I’m NOT---(Prof. X raises an eyebrow as if to say “Your not fooling anyone“) I hate when you do that.(he says in reference to him using his powers to scan threw his mind and emotions)

Prof. X: Well that is the consequence when have a conversation with a telepath. (They share a grin then Cyclops begins to walk away)

Cyclops: (serious) I just don’t trust him is all.. (Then he walks to the Locker Room where the rest of the X-Men are suiting up)

(Time Lapse: Men’s Changing Room: Cyclops, Beast, and Wolverine)

Cyclops: You know it’s only cause your old?

Wolverine: What?

Cyclops: That he let you lead the team. It’s because your old.

Wolverine: (correcting) Older. Wiser, is how I like to think of it.

Cyclops: Whatever.

Wolverine: You been ridden me since I got here. You have some kind of problem with me bub?

Cyclops: And if I do? (Beast steps in between both men who are obviously very heated)

Beast: We do not have time for this my compadres. (They ignore Beast and ready to fight)

Cyclops: Are you even a mutant? The only power you’ve showed so far is the ability to be a pain in my ass. (Just as he ends his sentence Logan balls his fist and raises it to Scotts eye level and suddenly three claws retract. Both Beast and Cyclops look at him in disbelief as within his other hand arise three more matching pair)

Beast: Oh dear.

(Logan flinches at Scott who slightly winces)

Wolverine: (Logan stops himself from impaling Scott as if a light bulb went off) Aw you’re not worth it. (he then walks away extremely angry)

Cyclops: That’s right walk away, you coward!

(Time Lapse: X-Jet hanger: all the X-Men)

Wolverine: So who’s supposed to be flyin this thing because I---

Cyclops: (sarcastically) Don’t worry “captain oh captain” I’ve been certified pilot since I was 12 years old.

Wolverine: (quips) So that was when? Last week?

Cyclops: How dare you-

Storm: My Goddess, shut up! You guys bicker like children…. (she begins walking up the stepladder to the Jet)

Storm Cont: And I’m driving! (They both follow her egregiously)

(Enter Shot of the X-Jet cutting threw the air)

(Enter Shot of the X-Jet descending form the heavens and landing in a field not far from a privacy chain linked fence that secures a building called “Worthington Power”)

(Enter scene of The X-Men running threw the power plant and stop. Magneto is there.)

Magneto: Hello my brothers. Now is the time to rise up from our human oppressors.

Cyclops: Yeah I don’t feel so oppressed. How bout you guys? (he says to his teammates as they shrug in as if to say “no not really”)

Cyclops: By the way Erick, Charles sends his regards.

Magneto: Really. Well I see he has children do his dirty work as of late.

Cyclops: (sarcastically) Well he’s crazy that way but then again yeah well he’s not the one trying to destroy millions of people. (to himself) Where the hell is Logan? (Logan jumps out from behind Magneto about to strike. Magneto, not even looking back, whips his hand out and put Logan in a form of suspended animation. Then throws him seemingly incapacitating him)

Magneto: hmm…

Cyclops: Flank him now!

Storm: Right.(fight scene each x-men fights Mags and is over powered. Cyclops is the only one who is having any luck shooting him several times with optic blasts, though it barley fazes him. Then suddenly he is knocked on the head by small generator that seemed to from nowhere have come loose. The broken generator creates sparks that become flames that are gaining intensity)

(Cut to Jean looking down seeing the flames are heading towards a nuclear reactor. She focuses then suddenly crystal -like energy surrounds the flames. The flames intensify and she focuses harder until it is to much for her. She reaches out to Storm’s and Beast’s minds, who are knocked out. They awake readying for battle.)

(Cut to Storms eyes turning milky white. Suddenly a dark gray, almost black, cloud hovers over the entire industrious plant.)

Beast: (to Storm) ( yelling) NO! It’s a chemical fire. It wont work.

Storm: You got a better idea?

Beast: Jean let down your force field.

Jean: (confused) What? No!

Beast: Trust me.
 
(Jean lets down her force field reluctantly, to say the least. Flames begin to violently dance through the chemical plant. Beast jumps to an enormous feat up over the flames and lands down near a fall-out shower, made in case of chemical fire. He then yanks off the nozzle and repositions it as s make-shift hose. It takes out the most of the flame except for the few putters of smoke and fire that where unreachable to him.)

Beast: My compatriots, I believe it is time for us to go.

Jean: Not without Scott.

(enter scene with Cyclops passed out next to a smiling Magneto hovering over him. Scott has his butt in the air as he sleeps. Mags looks disgusted then, using his power, throws a small metal ball at his head with low force. Cyclops begins to come to.)

Magneto: Scott…. Scott…

Cyclops: (wakes up and jumps into battle stance watching Magneto beckon for him) How do you know my name?

Magneto: You are always in control of your life, aren’t you? It is not surprising really, why you always have to be in control. Your childhood lacked so much of it, you know with your parents and brother all dieing the same day orphaning you at such a young age. You had no one.

Cyclops: Doctor Phil, thanks for the psycho analysis but I think we should just fight--

Magneto: (interrupting) What if I told you your brother wasn’t dead?

Cyclops: I’d say you’ve been hitting the Holliday nog a bit to much.

Magneto: He is alive Scott, and he is with me. You want to be with your brother? (Cyclops looks at him unable to hold back his glee, if his brother where truly alive) Then join me?

Cyclops: (considering) Even if I did believe you ,which I don’t. (he says as if to convince himself) Why help me?

Magneto: I see something in you. A drive to be a leader that Charles does not. ( He begins to levitate upward) Think about it my son. ( Then he burst a hole through the ceiling and is out of cameras sight)

(Just then Wolverine Jumps into the air just before Magneto is completely out of sight as if he is trying to grapple him with his claws. He falls down to be greeted by the rest of the X-Men.)

Wolverine: Must have scared him off. (Jean looks at him as if in a state of hero worship)

(enter scene: Next morning: Back at the mansion: Jean and Scott in the cafeteria Scott looks extremely distant.)

Jean Grey: (concerned) You alright? You’ve been more monosyllabic than usual.

Cyclops: (dismissively) I’m fine. (walks out leaving Jean with her words)

(enter scene with Professor in his study. Storm enters)

Prof. X: (Not turning away from the window he’s starring out of) Storm.
Storm: I hate it when you do that. (looks at him concerned) You alright?

Prof. X: I just can’t believe… I failed you all as a leader. If Logan hadn’t been there I- I…

Storm: You can’t win them all Professor. (She says putting her hand on his shoulder in consolation)

(enter scene with Magneto and Mystique talking at his secret headquarters)

Mystique: I don’t understand Erick, why didn’t you just kill them? You could have so easily.

Magneto: Because my dear…. It’s more fun this way.

(enter scene with Logan on a phone looking suspicious)

Wolverine: Everything is going to plan sir.

Voice on the other line: Splendid.

Wolverine: (looking down the hall at Jean and Storm talking to one another) I think “Red‘s” my way in.

(cut to black. End episode)
 
I'm having an extremely hard time with your casting choices lol. Matthew Fox seems to tall and ahem...."Scrawny" to play Logan. And Mischa...but these are just opinions, continue
I forgot to change the cast Jean is really played by Alexis Bledel and Beast is someone else so is Wolvie.
 
It seems a bit similar to ultimate xmen, I dont like the chacterisation of Magneto at all and your english needs a bit of work but theres enough there to hold my interest well done keep it up.
 
Here is a discription of my next episode!
A screencap of the upcomming episode Starring: Jensen Ackles (Supernatural) as Scott Summers/Cyclops, Milo Ventimiglia (Heroes) as Logan/ Wolverine, Rhiana (Entourage) as Ororo Monroe/ Storm, Josh Hartnett (30 Days of Night) as Hank McCoy/ Beast, with Alexis Bledel (Gilmore Girls) as Jean Grey, and Patrick Stewart (Star Trek: The Next Gen.) as Charles Xavier/ Professor X

Next three episodes

Take my breath away

Family: The X-Men, each individually, must learn who their real family is. Their birth parents and siblings or their aquired family, the X-Men.

Fire and Brimstone

Synopsis: The X-MEN go under cover to infaltrate an exclusive clube called "The Order." But Cyclops strange behavior and absence and Logan's questionable leadership be the end?

Features Alexis as Jean calling Scott who seems evasive and the rest in undercover garb. Beast and Storm are there also undercover.
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Here is a discription of my next episode!
A screencap of the upcomming episode Starring: Jensen Ackles (Supernatural) as Scott Summers/Cyclops, Milo Ventimiglia (Heroes) as Logan/ Wolverine, Rhiana (Entourage) as Ororo Monroe/ Storm, Josh Hartnett (30 Days of Night) as Hank McCoy/ Beast, with Alexis Bledel (Gilmore Girls) as Jean Grey, and Patrick Stewart (Star Trek: The Next Gen.) as Charles Xavier/ Professor X

Next two episodes

Family: The X-Men, each individually, must learn who their real family is. Their birth parents and siblings or their aquired family, the X-Men.

Fire and Brimstone

Synopsis: The X-MEN go under cover to infaltrate an exclusive clube called "The Order." But Cyclops strange behavior and absence and Logan's questionable leadership be the end?

Features Alexis as Jean calling Scott who seems evasive and the rest in undercover garb. Beast and Storm are there also undercover.
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please dont take this the wrong way, is english actually your first language???
 
By "English" what do you mean exactly? To Be honest I wrote this a long time ago and when I did write it I rushed (the first ep.). I have not started the second or third ep. so you will see a dramatic change in the way it is made. If you are talking about the dialoge it is done that way on purpose. I wanted some of the characters, especially Jean, to have a corky way of speaking (a la Joss Whedon). I didn't want to make the same old type of borring characters that everyone has seen before. If although you are reffering to the actual english of the script I don't know. Let me first say I'm not turning this into Fox. It is FAN MADE so for people to be so nitpicky is crazy!

So anyway to answer your question yes english is my first language. And BTW lol for that comment. Funny yeah... :applaud

If anyone doesn't like my writing you don't have to read it BTW. I don't care if you tell me how much you dislike it just as long as it isn't just to be rude.
 
Now are you.... the good one who tanked? The one who I was gonna write a Storm episode for or are you... something... elsewhere,... elusive? :dry:
 
^^^Not quite sure what you mean.

Anyway the next episode should be out by next Sunday if studying for midterms doesn't overwhelm me. :cwink:
 
Double posted again can a mod take it off please?
 
Twentieth Century Fox Presents:
X-Men: The Series
Take my breath away
A screenplay by James E. Michaels
Directed by Brian Singer

Starring: Chris Carmack (The OC) as Scott Summers/Cyclops, Steven Strait (Covenant) as Logan/ Wolverine, Rhiana (Entourage) Ororo Monroe/ Storm, Josh Hartnett (30 Days of Night) as Hank McCoy/ Beast, with Alexis Bledel (Gilmore Girls) as Jean Grey, and Patrick Stewart (Star Trek: The Next Gen.) as Charles Xavier/ Professor X

Guest Starring: Hayden Panettiere, Donna Goodhand, John Nelles, and Nicholas D'Agosto as Cody

[intro]

(A black screen.)

(An unseen man’s voice very strong and intelligent.)

Prof. X: Strength, determination, defiance because there is nothing wrong with disliking the way the world is, and oh, there is the other requirement to be apart of my school.

(Quick flashes of children come in and out of focus: The first is a brown haired boy releasing red energy from his eyes, the second a young girl with white hair in Kenya summoning lightning behind her while levitating in a meditative Indian style stance, a boy with oversized hands, feet, and body structure being teased on a playground because he has bad dandruff which he scratches with his leg like a dog, and a girl running to her friend crying. A car speeds away. The girl looks up towards the camera and fiery energy erupts in her eyes)

(Xavier in the mansion study quarter.)

Prof. X: You must be… gifted.

(A large X flashes in and out of focus.)

[End intro]

[TEASER]

(A teenage girl with long, obviously colored, platinum blonde hair that rivaled Storm’s in lightness, and a cheerleading yellow and green uniform, glides through the air as if she is flying through it. She lands in the arms another fellow teen, he being male with dark shoulder length brown hair, in a back yard of a southern looking home.)

Teen boy: (with southern accent) Light on our feet today are we?

Cheerleader: (also southern accent) I guess...

(Girl detaches from the boys embrace.)

Cheerleader cont.: Thanks for the help Cody I really appreciate it. It’s just that try-outs ar’ tomorra’ and...

Cody: You don’t have it explain it was no problem at all. In fact it was my pleasure. I know how hard you been trying… Getting yur hair colored, yur braces taking off, started wearin contacts, and ya started wearin different close….

(She starts to walk away)

Cody Cont.: (he says fawning over her like a puppy) Stay for a second.

(She gives him a look that suggests she needs to go in a hurry)

Cody cont.: So you aint got time for yo’ bes frend animor?

Cheerleader: I really gotta go. I’m sorray.

(She runs to the direction of the trailer park directly next door to Cody’s house.)

(Next day: School: Cheerleading Try-outs: “Cheerleader” is there with other girls. The captain of the cheerleading squad approaches the girls with a clipboard.)

Cheerleading Captain: (sweetly) In case you didn’t know I’m Regina the captain. (B-I-T-C-H-L-Y) And for all the people who didn’t know you can just go ahead and leave. That’s right biatches there’s the door!... (sweetly again) Let’s get this started. We will start with a standard pyramid configuration.

(Regina navigates through the crowd of girls and finds the cheerleader we have already met and gives her a look of disdainment. Then she turns to another cheerleader on the team already)

Regina: Who the hell is that?

(Motions to “Cheerleader1”)

Cheerleader2: (snottily) I’ve never seen her before in my life.

Regina: I've got an idea.

(Regina wispers in the cheerleader2's ear then gives a smile at her, which is returned to her by her humble servant, then walks back to the girls.)

Regina: You! You’ll be on the top.

Cheerleader1: Oh, Ah’ don’t know if that is such a good idea.

Regina: (with a wicked smile) Nonsense. You’ll do great!

(Time-lapse: Cheerleader1 is apprehensively being hoisted up by her fellow cheerleading hopefuls. She gets to the top surprisingly with no trouble and puts her hands out victoriously. Regina, obviously not liking this, with a laser pointer points it at the girl face.

Cheerleader1 tries as hard as she can to stay steady, to no avail. The girl falls with a big thud. The girls gather around her shocked. Suddenly Regina points at the girl and bursts into laughter all the other cheerleaders follow her lead, and then the cheerleading hopefuls sheepily follow theirs. Cheerleader1 gets up completely distraught and runs to a door marked “EXIT.”)

(Cody’s House: Cody’s room: Cody sits on his bed with a basketball throwing it up then catching it. Suddenly the door opens to reveal “Cheerleader1” with tears streaming down her face.)

(Time=lapse: Cody has his arm around her in consolation. She looks at him with pain in her eyes. He looks at her with love in his. They begin to Inch closer and closer together until their lips unite. They roll around on the bed with their eyes closed. Cody eyes suddenly snap open in a state of shock.)

CUT TO: SFXS: Cody’s energy being funneled into the girl through his mouth.

CUT TO: SFXS: Seeing his muscle decrease.

(Cheerleader opens her eyes seeing her friend limply fall down onto the bed, his body looks lifless. Cheerleader1 screams out at the top of her lungs to be heard by Cody’s parents. Cody’s parents break the door down, which is locked and find their boy looking half dead. They turn their attention to the melancholy Cheerleader who, like a mental patient, bangs her head against the wall speaking to herself incoherently, in shock.)

Cody’s Dad: What did ya do ta my boy?! What did ya do!

(He angrily advances to the girl geting in her face heated while Cody’s mom dials the ambulance unable to stop his tirade at the girl.)

Cheerleader1: Please don't come any closer... please I don't wanna..... hurt....you... please.

(Cheerleader instinctually throws a closed fist at the man hitting him into Cody’s bathroom about five feet away form where he had been. Cody’s mother drops the phone looking at the girl in disbelief.)

Cody’s Mom: Your one of them aint ya?

Cheerleader1: (with tears streaming down her face) I’m so sorry I’m so sorry
I’m so sorry I’m so sorry…..

(Cheerleader runs back to her trailer and grabs a bag of things. She walks out and looks across the street at Cody’s house and a tear falls from her eyes. She then starts to run down the dirt road with he bag in tow she rips down it faster then she had ever run in her life, unnaturally so in fact.)

[END TEASER]
 
(X-Mansion: Jean Grey’s Room: Even though the door is open, Logan still knocks on the door politely anyway.)

Logan/ Wolverine: Knock, knock.

Jean Grey: Hey, you can come in. May I also say that you get points for knocking?

Wolverine: That’s great because I wanted to ask you a question.

Jean: And that would be?

Wolverine: Would you go out with me Friday. Some movie with a guy named Matt Damon is playing,
you heard of him?

Jean: (sarcastically) NO, NEVER.

Wolverine: Well anyway he is in this movie and I wanted to know if you would like to go?

Jean: (She tries to act nonchalant) Oh well there are factors to take into consideration…

(Logan looks down sorrowfully)

Jean cont.: How’s six o’clock for you?

(Pan to: Scott Summers/Cyclops overhearing the conversation in the hallway. He walks to the door.)

Cyclops: Hey Jean. Could I talk to you for a minute?

Jean: Yeah, of course Scott.

(Logan begins to leave her room)

Wolverine: (under his breath to Jean) He didn’t knock.

Jean: Yeah I know.

Wolverine: I did.

(Logan and Scott share equal loathed looks at each other as Logan leaves. Scott shuts the door behind him.)

Cyclops: So I see you and Logan are getting along nicely.

Jean: That’s so none of your business.

Cyclops: Jean can you just do this one thing for me and tell me where he was born? What is his favorite
color? Hell what’s his last name?!

Jean: Hey you may be right Scott maybe I don’t know him all that well but at least he wants to know
about me! Not be self-centered but, I need someone who will give me some attention Scott.

Cyclops: I could have taken you out if you wanted?

(Jean begins to rub her temples in a circular motion furiously)

Jean: (angry) Yeah you’d say that now that Logan is taking me out. I got sick of waiting for you Scott and face it, you are jealous of him. And for God’s sake it is a movie not a marriage proposal that I’m accepting.

Cyclops: So what?

Jean: So stop going all Gossip Girl on me!

(He looks down with the same puppy dog eyes Logan had given her moments earlier when he had even came in and spoken to her)

Jean: (sympathetically) Look Scott I really care for you but sometimes some people are just not meant to be. Logan-Logan gives me… Ah… loyalty.

Cyclops: Are we talking about a dog or a man?

(She shots Scott a look bemusement mixed with embarrassment)

(Friday: Storm’s room: Jean and Storm are their. Storm is on her bed and Jean is rummaging through Storm’s clothes until she jumps out with a blue dress.)

Jean: How about this one?

Ororo Monroe/Storm: I still don’t understand why you can’t wear anything that I don’t know you own.

Jean: Because he will think I’m either a hooker or a nun with my selection. I defiantly might have multi-
personality disorder when it comes to my wardrobe.

Storm: At least you would have the whole Pretty Woman thing going for ya if you went for the hooker
route. He wouldn’t be a bad Richard Gere either.

Jean: Ro’ this is serious.

Storm; Fine! But choose the Green one it brings out your skin tone.

Jean: Thank you.

Storm: You’re welcome; now get the hell out of my room!

(Ororo throws a pillow at her and Jean looks shocked then starts to laugh and throws it back)

(Time-lapse: Bayville Matinee: Logan and Jean are there.)

Jean: (turning over to Logan) Good movie.

Wolverine: (brushingly) Yeah.

Jean: Yah know you aren’t that talkative tonight?

Wolverine: (turns to her as if he weren’t paying attention before) What, oh I’m sorry.

Jean: (joking) yeah it’s just weird I imagined us being …

Wolverine: What?

Jean: Closer?

(Wideshot of them with a chair in between them with buttered popcorn in it the chair.)

Wolverine: I’m sorry it’s just there is that little voice in my head that says that you are my student and I am the one of the creepy gym teachers off To catch a predator.

(Jean raises her brow in wonderment)

Wolverine cont.: There was a marathon on last night. There isn’t much to do at the mansion.

(Jean gets up and moves the popcorn where she was at. She moves to the place where the popcorn was.)

Jean: Well in my defense I don’t actually know how old you are.

(Meanwhile In the dark room very little can be seen so when a young woman, keeping to the shadows comes around to no one’s notices in the very back row. The girl, in all black, removes her thick gloves she has on and touches a man quickly; the man faints instantly. She then sits down beside him and takes out his wallet. She sniffs at only retrieving a credit card and twenty dollar bill.

(Wide shot of the young Goth girl. It is revealed to be the “Cheerleader” from the teaser. Only now her hair is dark blackish red with only two stripes of platinum blonde on either side of her face. Her hair now cut into a slick bob and make-up a lot heavier. She moves on to the next row where Logan and Jean sit. She puts out her hand as if she is about to touch Jean. )

Comercial break

Part two and three should be up soon son don't fret
 

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