Your idea of a JLA trailer?

Teaser

-"With Great Power" music starts
-WB Logo
-We Gotham City from the sky.
-Cuts to Metropolis
-We see a close up on Lex Corp building
-Cuts to five thieves wearing clown masks getting ready to attack the bank

Theif #1: Did you hear about Lex?

Theif #2: Yeah, some believe he is good, so believe he is bad.

Theif #3: What do you believe?

Theif #2: I believe...he's just crazy.

-Cuts to Batman on a rooftop looking down at Gotham
-Cuts to Superman floating above Metropolis looking down
-We see Wonder Woman getting ready to fight
-A huge meteor crashes down
-We see a green alien rising up
-Flash runs across from the screen and saves a kid from a bomb exploding
-Aquaman swimming extremly fast and jumps up from the ocean

Heroes

-Cuts to Hal finding the ring and wearing it.
-It starts to glow green
-Hawkman flys around Metropolis
-We see a close up on Martian Manhunter's face

Martian Manhunter: There is no mistake..the end of your world has come!

-We see Batman driving his Batmobile through fire
-Superman flying at super speed

Will

-Wonder woman fighting a robot
-Flash running as fast as he can and trying to catch someone from falling
-A robot exploding
-Green Lantern stoping a bridge from falling using his ring

Batman: We have to stop this!

Superman: Together we can!

Join Forces

-Sky turning red
-Superman using his heat vision
-Hawkman breaking through a wall

Superman: Together we are the Justic League!

JL Logo shows up
 
  • . Warner Brothers Logo.

    . Legendary Pictures Logo.

    . DC Comics Logo.
  • We hear " Requim of a Dream"
. Black Screen.

.ALONE
    • We see Superman raceing jet planes and beating them
    • We see The Bat-man jumping over some cars, fall off a rooftop and then opens some wings gliding over Gotham City getting in between a gang war/drug deal
    • We see Wonder Woman blocking some bullets with her bracelets
    • THERE ARE INCREDIBLE.
    • We see The Flash running across the water dodging gunshots and bombs
    • We see Green Lantern using his power ring to hold a bulding together from falling on inocent people
    • We see Aquaman using tricks he does in Smallville like waterballs and swimming at superspeed to fight some powerful supernatural seamonsters
    • TOGETHER
    • We see Martian Manhunter shapeshifting into many people and things and unsing his power vision before suprised and scared people while the JLA members are being watched by a black figure
    • We see Hawkman flying threw the fire, using a golden sheild
    • THEY ARE INVINCIBLE.
    • We hear the Justice League themesong
  • We see the Heroes reunited and do the famous walk they do in the jla pilot, the smallville episode justice and the JL themesong
  • We see the watchtower which looks like the Watchtower in The Batman and the one Martian Manhunter made in Smallville: Justice and Doom
  • BUT
  • Robots are attacking places all over the world like Metropolis, Gotham, Keystone City, Coast City, Themysceria, Atlantis
  • WHEN THE MASTERS OF EVIL
  • We see Lex at a public conference
  • We see Bizarro destroying a building while the Joker is looking at the camera laughing
  • We see Mr.Freeze is using a freeze gun on people
  • We See meeting room inside the superfreinds Hall of Doom which rise up from the swamp and inside from Left to right is Black Manta, Giganta, Toyman, Riddler, Bizarro, Scarecrow, Lex Luthor, Captain Cold or Mr.Freeze, Cheetah,, Solomon Grundy, Gorilla Grodd, Brainiac and Sinestro
  • GATHER TOGETHER
  • We see Lex Luthor and Brainiac and Grodd talking
  • We see Gorilla Grodd and Captian Cold fighting who's the better Flash villian while Toyman (mix of tm of superman doomsday and stas) is making dangerous toys
  • We see Bizarro look at the Riddiler(The Batman meets Superfreinds) and Scarecrow(BB and first version) fighting who is the better Batman villian which we see Black Manta with his mask off
  • THE FAITH OF THE WORLD
  • People running scared as cities are being destroyed
  • the police face Bizarro
  • The army tries to reach Brainiac in the flying Hall of Doom
  • several people tries to escape joker venom gas
  • We see a hospital full of dead children with Joker smiles before the hospital explode
  • We see Lexcorp robots and the Leauge of Shadows taking over Metropolis
  • REST IN THE HANDS
  • We see Lex looks angry and suprised
  • We see the Brainiac/Lexcorp Omacs are exploding
  • OF THE WORLD'S FINEST.
  • Bizarro throws a missile at Superman which explodes in his face before Superman falls down
  • We see a bloodied and bruised Batman effected by feargas being beaten with a baseball bat by the Joker in a vampire suit in a destroyed Gotham
  • Gorilla Grodd roars while beating The Flash while Captain Cold freezes The Flash whole body
  • Sinestro is using his yellow power ring(which is GL's weakness) against Green Lantern/Hal
  • Martian Manhunter suprises Lex who uses fire on MM
  • We see Hawkman, Green Arrow and Black Canary destroying robots
  • Wonder Woman and The Cheatah(Priscilla Rich) is having a magic sword fight and not onty The Cheetah is winning but she scrathes WW'S face and is about to kill her
  • Aquaman is using moves he used in Smallville, JL/JLU and Mercy Reef pilot against Black Manta using his technology and shoots him with posion darts
  • We see Superman have a fight with Brainiac who has Kryptonian powers, makes copies of himself, manipulate power electric energy with his body, telekinesis, and more of his powers in all form of media and Brainiac acts like how he acts in Superfreinds cartoons, STAS, Static Shock, JL/JLU and Smallville
  • Superman: THIS ENDS NOW!!
  • Brainiac: No, Kal-el....
  • We see exploxions and fear gas is covering the city while the Hall of Doom/Brainiac ship is hovering over this city
  • We see the Heroes are trapped in rooms holdin their weaknesses( Superman-red sun energy, Batman and GA- chains, Barry Allen/The Flash- alot of gravity holding his body in one place, GL/Hal Jordan in yellow, WW is hold by her magic rope, Martian Manhunter surrounded by fire, Aquaman is deprived of water seriously weaking him while there is more robots around the world and Gorilla Grodd puts on his mind reading helmet to find out everything about their life ala Justice
  • Brainiac: It has only begun.
  • fade to black
I hope you like it I obviasly based this on the superfreinds cartoon , silver age justice league comics, jl/jlu, Justice(the comic and smallville), and other forms of media. I going to show teaser later
 
I can't STAND the wordage on some of these trailers, despite the well chosen scenes. The above trailer, while well made, comes off as just a hodgepodge of uber scenes, devoid of anything engaging except for: OH! MY FAVORITE HERO!!! Most notably, it has no build. If that's the best JLA trailer Ever, then perhaps George Miller is optimal.

Anyone who takes the words "of Evil" seriously is in the 4th grade or lower.

A) Let the thing build. Start with something soft and simple ie:

Simply classical-like Party Music plays
DC Logo
Legendary Pix Logo
WB Logo
At a casual dinner party, reporter Clark Kent tries to interview Billionaire Bruce Wayne, who is attempting to speak with Greek Ambassador Diana of Themyscira. Their supposedly idle talk, obviously near the beginning of the film, foreshadows their association and the threat.

B) Focus on the threat FIRST, which gives everyone reason to care about such immense power coming together. Ie:

A space shuttle nearly crashes. (Omit the part where superman saves it from compeltely crashing from the trailer) out pops Despero as hundreds of people with glowing purple eyes surround Superman and the Flash chanting "Despero" in unison.

Narration by Diana: Despero's making a march across this entire planet. He will enslave you... or he will wipe you out. End of story.

Close up on Despero's mouthless face as he stalks across the desert, flanked by the tanks and jets and military of the world.

C) Continue the build up, make the reveal of the heroes and their alliance your "thing," since that what sells the movie, putting it earlier in the trailer is anticlimatic... like putting the best action sequence of X2 at the beginning or something.

Epic Music.

"People of Earth... this is Superman. I know you're scared. I know you think that this is the end... but it's not."

Show Superman flying speedly through the atmosphere or close to the waterline.

"Even now, you have help. Allies."

Show Batman handidly whooping up on some despero'd up thugs.

"They come from every corner of the earth."

Flash running on water while doing something additionaly cool.

"Every corner of the Universe."

Green Lantern holding back something ferocious. A tidal Wave perhaps. Perhaps the same one Flash was running from.

"And they're here to help. They're here for you."

Wonder Woman deflecting bullets from two guns into the legs of the shooters. While holding a child with one hand.

"United, there is nothing we cannot accomplish. The Enemy wants your mind. But he's not getting it..."

Superman, descending, lands hard, falling right in line, with GL and Batman on one flank and Wonder Woman and Flash on the other.

"... not without a fight."

Music climaxes, big explosion of power and energy and it coalesceses into the words "Justice Leage"
 
It is a teaser trailer, the poing being, to TEASE.

Here's my teaser:

"I never thought things would always be easy. But not like this."

Through the darkness, an enormous high up shot of a major metropolitan city. Through the sky, we float towards skyscrapers.

"This is bigger than me. More than I can handle"

We fly through the sky, and towards a specific tower, the tallest of the city.

"In time's like this, It is important to know, there are others who can help"

On the roof of the sky scraper, a figure touches down from the sky. He wears a long red cape with a yellow "S" on the back. Standing before him, on the roof, is Batman, Wonder Woman, The Flash, Green Lantern, Aquaman, and Martian Manhunter.

"We're ready"

The figure turns around, Superman, with the large red "S" on his chest smirks at the camera, his League standing behind him.

COMING SOON
 
It is a teaser trailer, the poing being, to TEASE.

Well said, although the thread does not state this, a teaser trailer could be cooler. The principles are slightly different.

Show the Logos, slow buildup music

Narrator: "They are the planet's best."

Show Superman opening his shirt to reveal chest symbol.

"The World's Brightest"

Show Bruce Wayne opening the chamber for his batman suit, focus on chest symbol.

"Earth's finest warriors."

Show Wonder Woman armor at the foot of the statue of Artemis. Focus on Chest symbol.

"When the world ends..."

Flash suit springing to full size from a compact compartment, focus on chest symbol.

"Can they stand together..."

Green Lantern's costume materializing on him. Focus on Chest symbol.

"And if they do... will lit be enough."

See Superman in a dark corridor, a large form looms over him in the dark, rearing back for a strike. Cut to an explosion. Cut to several quick images of our favorite heroes being battered and bruised. Cut back to Superman, broken on the floor and three glowing fiery eyes sinking back into the shadows.

Cue title: JUSTICE LEAGUE

Coming May whatever, 20-whatever.
 
Trailers written by fans aren't allways professional, don't ya Think?
 
This is from the JLA storyline called New World Order. Unfortunately I haven't read that story in years so it's missing details. I wanted the scene where Batman is surrounded four White Martians then lights a match that covers them all in a circle of fire depowering them. He proceeds to beat them all up off-panel.
Loved that scene. :(


WB logo.

At night a silver oval spaceship crashes to Earth in an enormous explosion. It moves to fast for the viewers to get a good look.

The side viewers can see from the distance has air pressure noises unhinge its door.

The metal opening gracefully lowers to the ground. Humanoid silhouettes that are to dark to identify step out in silence.


Close-up of Protex being interviewed at a press conference. He’s a handsome, Swedish looking man. His skin has a yellow tint that sparkles. He wears a yellow cape that is hed to his shoulders by an orange button under his neck.


Protex: We are the Hyperclan. Our world was destroyed millennia ago.


Cut to Superman staring at Lex Luthor who is holding kryptonite in his hand that’s shattered a few feet away with heat vision.


Protex voice-over: Earth is under constant threat ---

Lex falls to his knees in pain from the small explosion. He’s glaring back at the viewer in hatred.

Protex V.O: -- which your heroes have failed to end.

Batman in his Bat-Plane firing a missile at a flying A-Mortal. The alien easily catches it in his hands then casually throws it back as the Bat-Plane tries to ram him in the air.

Protex V.O.: We won’t let criminals hurt the innocent any longer.

The Hyperclan stand in a line shooting beams of energy from their eyes tied to crosses. The prisoners are vaporized on contact.

Protex V.O: j’onn backing away in shock from Protex morphing into a White Martian. Viewers can’t see Protex full transformation just glimpses with a gooey sound effect.

Protex V.O.: We will replace your well meaning but incompetent heroes.

J’onn: No! It can’t be!
The Flash (Wally West) and Zum, an alien with a white Mohawk, race through cities from all over the world in seconds. From Cina to Russia to India and more. Their presence causes monsterous wind gusts that knock paperstands contents into the air. Bystanders have no clue what’s going on.

Protex V.O: Order is what must be maintained. No Matter the cost.

Close-up of Flash and Zum exchanging blows at super-speed. Zum is laughing he’s having a blast. Wally West’s costume is ripped, breathing hard with a frightened look on his face.

Protex V.O.: There is no telling what the future will bring if we work together.

Wonder Woman grits her teeth, crossing her bracelets to deflect a powerful beam from Primaid’s eyes. The force gently pushes her away. She’s losing.

Protex V.O.: Co-operation is all we desire.

Green Lantern (Kyle Rayner) hovers over a desert screaming in rage while several green constructs ranging from samurai to knights to mecha swarm his opponent, Zenturion.

The alien throws his blue shield that ricochets between the images.

Kyle: Not as easy as you thought, huh?

Cut back to Protex smiling at the cameras. No malice to be seen.

Protex: What could go wrong?

Ends with the logo of the Justice league with the indicia underneath.


Here's some pictures of the group:

http://www.mykey3000.com/cosmicteams/cosmic/h.html

http://www.fortunecity.com/marina/victory/108/hyperclan.html
 
The screen is completely black. A heavy, base pounding, thumping sound permeate the theater. *Whomp…………………….Whomp* An astonish voice speaks, “Jesus…… Where is Superman?” *Whomp* A frighten female cries out, ”CLARK!”

The :super: symbol appears and grows on the screen. *Whomp* Sudden silence and a man voice frighteningly; yet soberingly, tells the tale. “Oh God….oh God…. he’s down, Superman’s down.” Another voice, “It’s too many of them” The sound of something flapping in a strong wind breaks the silence as a concern child speaks, the screen still in blackness, “Mommy… is Superman dead?”

Suddenly an orchestrated, gothic music play as quick scenes flashes across the screen.

:batty: symbol fill the screen, a shadowy silhouette of Batman is seen. ~ symbol fill the screen, a red blur streaks across the screen. :ww: symbol fill the screen, WonderWoman on her knees, looking upwards in angst. :kyle: symbol fill the screen, Jon Stewart standing in deep thought as he grasp a glowing ring. A symbol fill the screen, Aquaman laying on his back straining to keep what appears to some sort of pitch-forked weapon from penetrating his neck. MM symbol fill the screen, a dark silhouette of the back of an alien figure with a weapon or sort, in his hand.

Just as suddenly, the music stops. The sound of a breezy wind is heard, and we are treated to a battle scene, of a burning and decimated city's landscape, as the camera pans to a broken street sign with a rip & torn red cape caught on it…. and precipitously, blows off into the wind.

The screen goes black with the words,

Justice League ....fades

Summer 2015 ....fades


Than something quickly approach the screen and than goes blank.
 
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The screen is completely black. A heavy, base pounding, thumping sound permeate the theater. *Whomp…………………….Whomp* An astonish voice speaks, “Jesus…… Where is Superman?” *Whomp* A frighten female cries out, ”CLARK!”

The :super: symbol appears and grows on the screen. *Whomp* Sudden silence and a man voice frighteningly; yet soberingly, tells the tale. “Oh God….oh God…. he’s down, Superman’s down.” Another voice, “It’s too many of them” The sound of something flapping in a strong wind breaks the silence as a concern child speaks, the screen still in blackness, “Mommy… is Superman dead?”

Suddenly an orchestrated, gothic music play as quick scenes flashes across the screen.

:batty: symbol fill the screen, a shadowy silhouette of Batman is seen. ~ symbol fill the screen, a red blur streaks across the screen. :ww: symbol fill the screen, WonderWoman on her knees, looking upwards in angst. :gl: symbol fill the screen, Jon Stewart standing in deep thought as he grasp a glowing ring. A symbol fill the screen, Aquaman laying on his back straining to keep what appears to some sort of pitch-forked weapon from penetrating his neck. MM symbol fill the screen, a dark silhouette of the back of an alien figure with a weapon or sort, in his hand.

Just as suddenly, the music stops. The sound of a breezy wind is heard, and we are treated to a battle scene, of a burning and decimated city's landscape, as the camera pans to a broken street sign with a rip & torn red cape caught on it…. and precipitously, blows off into the wind.

The screen goes black with the words,

Justice League ....fades

Summer 2009 ....fades


Than something quickly approach the screen and than goes blank.
This is actually something similar I could see in a trailer for the movie. It puts emphasis on each individual superhero and displays them to the general public as one entity united. I like it.:up:
 
. Warner Brother logo.
. Village Roadshow Logo.
. DC Comics Logo.
. Fade to Black.
. A Slow music starts to play.
. The Superman symbol shows up in the screen.
. Quick shots of Krypton exploding, The Rocket arriving and the Kents finding.
. The Batman Symbol shows up.
. Quick shots of The Waynes walking, the thieve shooting and Bruce alone.
. The Wonder-woman Symbol shows up.
. Quick shots of Themyscera, Diana borning and leaving in the Invisible Jet.
. The Flash symbol shows up.]
. Quick shots of Barry Allen in the laboratory, being hit by lightning and waking up at China.
. The GL symbol shows up.
. Quick shots of John Stewart on war, finding the energetic ring and putting.
. The Aquaman symbol shows up.
. Quick shots of Atlantis, The Maine farol and the CaptaiN Tom Curry.
. The Martian Manhunter symbol shows up.
. Quick shots of J'onn comming to Earth, shape-shifting and acting as a detective.
. Fade to black.
. ''ON 2009''.
. Wee see the Watchtower.
. ''THEY UNITE.''
. ''Justice League''.
. ''Coming Soon''.
 

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