give critique to mrs richards

[Lady Stormcrow]

I bet I spelled the title of the thread wrong...

anyway, heres some drawings I did a couple of months back. they've just been lying in my sketchbook doing not much at all so I thought I'd post them here; after a lengthy absence.

theoden and eowyn in lotr. using ink.

the peter davidson from doctor who. This was hard because it looks like he has no eyebrows, but you couldnt see any on the picture I used.

the first doctor. This one looks a bit wonky somehow, but I cant put my finger on why.

 

[hojcat]

It all looks good to me.

The only thing I can see that might be 'wonky' on the last one is something that really isn't 'wonky', per se. The angle of his hat, his glasses and even his eyebrows give a slight impression of the left side of his face being larger than the right side. But I don't think this is a mistake or 'wonky' at all... just the perspective of the picture...

Some good stuff Mrs. Richards. Do you have anything that's colored to show?

 

[Lady Stormcrow]

It all looks good to me.

The only thing I can see that might be 'wonky' on the last one is something that really isn't 'wonky', per se. The angle of his hat, his glasses and even his eyebrows give a slight impression of the left side of his face being larger than the right side. But I don't think this is a mistake or 'wonky' at all... just the perspective of the picture...

Some good stuff Mrs. Richards. Do you have anything that's colored to show?

oh, yeah I see what you mean now!
Coloured? hmm, I dont think so. At least, not anything that isn't a painting, and I can't scan those because they're all too big! hehe, Ill see if I can find anything in the next couple of days though.

 

[-WildCard-]

very nice

 

[ampersand]

I'm loving the ink one, very stylish

 

[MadMaximus]

That Theoden and Eowyen ink piece is very passionate. Excellent in my opinion. The other two, which are also good, are very well rendered, but don't punch out at me like the first drawing does. I love the expression on the "wonky" one's face though, that tightened lip is really cool.

 

[MadMaximus]

sorry, double post, thought my computer was freezing.