DarkSovereignty
Ooga Chakka
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I started writngin a script for a posible ghost rider sequel, let me no wut u think, this it the opening scene:
Ghost Rider: dead or alive
Scene one
Queens, Long Island
Off the coast of the long island, a group of men meet in a warehouse. Out side the door a security guard lays dead, burn marks around his neck. Inside the warehouse a group of thirteen men wait impatiently throughout the dark, damp room. Then, out of the shadows comes a man with slick white hair, a black coat and cane.
Man: Im glad you could join me tonight, gentlemen.
At the corner of the room a tall man towering over all the other leaned against the wall. His entire body was layered with muscles, and his head was completely shaven except for a gray ponytail in the pack.
Tall man: Cut the crap, Mephistopheles, whyd you call us all here.
Terror struck into the eyes of all the other gatherers. Slowly, they turned and looked at the man with cane.
Mephistopheles: Just as impulsive as the last time we met, Skinner. Tell me, how is your mother? (He said with cruelty visible in his eyes)
Skinner: Mention my mother again and Ill tear you apart. You may be the lord down below, but up here your fair game.
Mephistopheles: Calm yourself skinner, I did not call you here to fight. I came up here because I have a mission for you, actually, for all of you (he waves his hand, addressing the entire group) You see, I have problem. There is a fugitive here in the mortal realm-
Skinner (cutting in): so theres someone out there whos too much Mephistopheles?
Mephistopheles: No, but I have some things to take care of down below.
Another man comes out of the shadow, a look of fear in his face: Excuse me, my lord, but who is the fugitive?
Mephistopheles: that is the question Ive been waiting for. I want to you to bring me the ghost rider.
Whispers of anticipation and fear spread out through the group.
Skinner: You expect us to go after the ghost rider? I heard about what he did to Blackheart and the hidden, No mark is worth what happened to them.
Mephistopheles: I beg to differ. Gentlemen, whoever can take down the ghost rider shall have the privilege of becoming my new liaison to the land of mortals. Who ever sends him to hell will become my new ghost rider.
Skinner: so the reward is to be your slave, is that what your saying?
Mephistopheles: I will request some loyalty and obedience if that is what you mean, but you must take the variables into consideration. My business focuses on affairs down in our world, but if you become the new ghost rider, you take his powers, and they
shall merge with yours, and you will be a god among these mortals. The mortal world will yours.
A look of interest came to Skinners face, as well as every other demon in the room.
Mephistopheles: I do not care how; I dont care when, though Id prefer you dont keep me waiting. I want Johnny Blaze, dead or alive. (title appears in fiery letters, song dead or alive playing in the back ground.
Ghost Rider: dead or alive
Scene one
Queens, Long Island
Off the coast of the long island, a group of men meet in a warehouse. Out side the door a security guard lays dead, burn marks around his neck. Inside the warehouse a group of thirteen men wait impatiently throughout the dark, damp room. Then, out of the shadows comes a man with slick white hair, a black coat and cane.
Man: Im glad you could join me tonight, gentlemen.
At the corner of the room a tall man towering over all the other leaned against the wall. His entire body was layered with muscles, and his head was completely shaven except for a gray ponytail in the pack.
Tall man: Cut the crap, Mephistopheles, whyd you call us all here.
Terror struck into the eyes of all the other gatherers. Slowly, they turned and looked at the man with cane.
Mephistopheles: Just as impulsive as the last time we met, Skinner. Tell me, how is your mother? (He said with cruelty visible in his eyes)
Skinner: Mention my mother again and Ill tear you apart. You may be the lord down below, but up here your fair game.
Mephistopheles: Calm yourself skinner, I did not call you here to fight. I came up here because I have a mission for you, actually, for all of you (he waves his hand, addressing the entire group) You see, I have problem. There is a fugitive here in the mortal realm-
Skinner (cutting in): so theres someone out there whos too much Mephistopheles?
Mephistopheles: No, but I have some things to take care of down below.
Another man comes out of the shadow, a look of fear in his face: Excuse me, my lord, but who is the fugitive?
Mephistopheles: that is the question Ive been waiting for. I want to you to bring me the ghost rider.
Whispers of anticipation and fear spread out through the group.
Skinner: You expect us to go after the ghost rider? I heard about what he did to Blackheart and the hidden, No mark is worth what happened to them.
Mephistopheles: I beg to differ. Gentlemen, whoever can take down the ghost rider shall have the privilege of becoming my new liaison to the land of mortals. Who ever sends him to hell will become my new ghost rider.
Skinner: so the reward is to be your slave, is that what your saying?
Mephistopheles: I will request some loyalty and obedience if that is what you mean, but you must take the variables into consideration. My business focuses on affairs down in our world, but if you become the new ghost rider, you take his powers, and they
shall merge with yours, and you will be a god among these mortals. The mortal world will yours.
A look of interest came to Skinners face, as well as every other demon in the room.
Mephistopheles: I do not care how; I dont care when, though Id prefer you dont keep me waiting. I want Johnny Blaze, dead or alive. (title appears in fiery letters, song dead or alive playing in the back ground.
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