Snake Eyes and Scarlett

[Computron2005]

Pencils, inks, and colors by me.

 

[ComicChick]

looks good.

i'm surprised no one has commented on this yet

 

[jrs2345]

Good job. I like the textures in the background. Snake Eyes looks cool and I like the various components on his outfit. I think you could have worked out his right leg and the foreshortening a little better though.

I like Scarlett 's pose, but I think you could re-work the face. The rendering could be tightened up a bit. I'm only guessing here but I imagine you might like Leinil Yu? I know he likes to render his female faces much more than others. It takes good knowledge of the face structure to pull that kind of rendering off.

Anyways, I like what you did and thanks for sharing it here. I hope you don't mind the critique either.

Take care,
Jeremy

 

[Kal_EL]

This IS really good! I think you place your extra details nicely.

 

[Computron2005]

Glad you guys liked it, and I always welcome crits so no worries. Feel free to air your views.

 

[Mee]

Scarlett's face looks a little funny, but it's still a cool piece. Nice work.

 

[Spider-Who?]

cool. i dig the color work. the only thing that i would feel should be addressed in future work and/or revisions is her left foot (our right). it should be pointing in the same/similar direction to which her hand is pointing. on paper the "flow" of a character is important and here, she looks unbalanced with an awkward position for her feet. but thats the only thing i'd suggest.

 

[Computron2005]

Yeah her face got fudged up in the rapid inking. I'll post the clean pencils sometime. Thanks for the c&c